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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Oneafternoon,EmmaandIwerewalkinghomefromschool,chattingaboutourday.Emma,withhercuriouseyesshining,askedmeaboutmyfriendshipwithLucy.Withoutthinking,Isaid,“IonlyhungoutwithLucybecauseshewantedmeto,butIdidn’treallywanttobefriendswithher.Shewaskindofboring.”Unluckily,Ididn’tknowLucywasnearby.WhenIlookedup,shewasrightthere,havingheardeverything.Herfaceturnedpale,andhereyesgotbigwithsurprise.Shedidn’tsayanythingandranoff.EmmaandIjuststoodthere,feelingbad.IknewIshouldgoafterLucyandsaysorry,butIwastooshockedtomove.Emma’sfaceturnedredtoo.Wewalkedhomewithouttalking,anditfeltlikeourstepsweregettingheavierThenextdayswerehard.IfeltreallybadaboutwhatIsaidandwantedtofixthingswithLucy.Ineededtosaysorry.ButwhatshouldIsay?EventhoughIdidn’tmeanto,IhurtLucy’sfeelings.EverytimeIsawheratschool,Ilookedawayquickly.Then,somethinginterestinghappenedinourspeakingclass.OnTuesday,Ms.Juliasaidwewoulddopre-classspeeches.Shehadwrittenourtopicsonsmallpiecesofpaperandputtheminabox.Wehadtopickonewithoutknowingwhatitwas.Iwasabitnervous.WhenIreachedintothebox,Ipulledoutapaperthatsaid,“Tellyourmostembarrassingmoment.”Myheartwasbeatingfast.ItfeltlikeIwasgivenachancetomakethingsrightIspentthenextfewdayspracticingmyspeech,tryingtofindtherightwordstoapologizetoLucy.IwantedtobesincereandshowherIwassorry.Whenthedayofthespeechcame,Iwasstillnervous,butIknewitwasimportanttofacemymistake.Istoodinfrontoftheclass,tookadeepbreath,andbegantosharemystory,hopingitwouldhelpmeandLucymoveforward.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Icalmedmyselfdownandwalkedtothestage.________________________________________________________________________________Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________關于友誼道歉故事的續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點第一段:著重描述“我”在演講臺上的緊張與決心,詳細闡述道歉的具體話語,以及演講過程中對Lucy和同學們反應的觀察。第二段:聚焦演講結束后,Lucy的回應以及兩人互動。展現(xiàn)關系緩和,可提及后續(xù)相處細節(jié),點明從此次經(jīng)歷中獲得的成長感悟。情感線(150字)故事開篇,“我”因失言傷害Lucy,內(nèi)心充滿愧疚與不安,不敢面對她。演講時,“我”帶著緊張與真誠的歉意,鼓起勇氣袒露心聲。Lucy從最初的震驚、傷心,到聽到道歉時的意外與動容。演講結束,兩人關系緩和,“我”如釋重負,此后兩人友誼更加深厚,“我”也收獲了成長與對友誼的珍視。故事線(6條)“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)演講題目是“最尷尬時刻”,意識到可借此向Lucy道歉。“我”精心準備演講,反復斟酌道歉用詞。演講時,“我”緊張開場,真誠講述傷害Lucy的經(jīng)過并誠懇道歉。Lucy專注傾聽,眼神復雜,有驚訝也有觸動。演講結束,Lucy主動找“我”回應道歉。此后“我”和Lucy關系改善,友誼升溫,“我”汲取教訓成長。主旨升華句(英文)Truefriendshipnotonlywithstandsmistakesbutalsodeepensthroughsincereapologiesandmutualunderstanding.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatadmittingone'sfaultsisthefirststeptowardsmendingbrokenrelationshipsandgrowingasaperson.Inthejourneyoffriendship,thecouragetofaceourwrongdoingscanturnacrisisintoanopportunityforstrongerbonds.Itisinmomentsofrectifyingourhurtfulactionsthatwetrulylearnthevalueofcherishingthoseweholddear.Throughthisincident,Irealizedthateveryfriendshipisapreciousgift,anditrequirescarefulnurturingandthehumilitytomakeamends.寫作示范一KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Itookatremblingsteptowardsthestage.Myhandswereclammy,andmyvoicequiveredatfirst."MymostembarrassingandregretfulmomentwaswhenIbetrayedmyfriendLucy'strust.Inamomentofthoughtlessness,Isaidcruelwordsabouther.Iwaswrong,andI'vebeenhauntedbymyactionseversince.Lucy,youareanamazingfriend,fullofwarmthandkindness.Iamtrulysorryforcausingyoupain."AsIspoke,IstoleglancesatLucy.Hereyesglistened,andshebitherlip.Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.Aftermyspeech,Lucywalkeduptomewithasoftsmile."Yourapologymeansalot,"shesaid."Iknowyoudidn'tmeanthosewords."Fromthatdayon,webecameinseparable.Welaughedtogether,criedtogether,andbuiltafriendshipthatwasstrongerthanever.Thisexperiencetaughtmethattruefriendsforgive,andeveryrelationshipisworthfightingfor.寫作示范二KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Isteadiedmynervesandwalkedontothestage.Itookadeepbreathandbegan,"MymostembarrassingmomentwaswhenIletmyemotionsgetthebetterofmeandsaidsomethingextremelyhurtfultoLucy.Icalledherboring,whichcouldn'tbefurtherfromthetruth.Sheiscreative,caring,andalwaysthereforme.Iwasashamedofmyself.Lucy,Iamsosorryformythoughtlesswords."Duringmyspeech,InoticedLucy'sexpressionchangefromshocktoahintofrelief.Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.OnceIfinished,Lucyapproachedme."Iacceptyourapology,"shesaid,hervoicegentle.Ourfriendshipwasrekindled,andwemadeapromisetoalwayscommunicateopenly.Thisincidentnotonlymendedourrelationshipbutalsotaughtmethepowerofapologyandtheimportanceofbeingmindfulofothers'feelingsineveryfriendship.參考答案KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Icalmedmyselfdownandwalkedtothestage.Istartedspeaking,eventhoughmyvoicewasalittleshaky.ItalkedabouthowI’dactedwithoutthinkingandhowsorryIwasforhurtingsomeone.WhenIfinishedmyspeech,Iwassweating,andIwasn’tsurewhattheotherswoulddo.Buttheyclappedformyhonesty.Mrs.JuliaevensaidIwasbraveforsayingsorryinfrontofeveryone.IwentbacktomyseatandsawLucylookingatmewithtearsinhereyes.Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.LucyandIdidn’ttalkaboutwhathadhappened,butwestartedtotalkandlaughtogetheragain,a
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