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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Experienceoftrainingretiredracingdogsledmyhusband,Steveandmetobelievewecouldhandleanything.Butwewerewrong.WhenweadoptedRay,adogwithahurtthatmadehimstopracing,thingsgottough.Heretiredduetotheinjuryandquicklywenttotheadoptionagency.Rayhadnootherplacetogo.Behindhissweetfacehidadarkanddamagedsoulandanaggressive(好斗的)nature.Desperatetofindhimahomeandnotdeliverhimtothefarm,theadoptionagencyrushedhimtoourdoorwhenweofferedtoadopt.Ourexperiencewithdogsandahomewithoutotheranimalsmadeusperfectcandidates,andwewerehisbestshot.Rayjumpedaroundourhouse.Hetriedtounderstandtheenormousworldhenowlivedin,astrangeonecomparedtothequartershehadknownforsolong.Adjustmentwouldtaketime,buthisinexperience,andapparentlyoursaswell,madecoexistenceinteresting.Patienceandtrainingwithanynewpetareimportant,butwithRay,theywerevital.Hedidn’tlistentous,nomatterhownicewewere.Hedidn’tunderstandhewasapetwithaname.Hedidnotrespondtocommands,love,encouragement,orfood.Hehadnoideawhatweexpectedofhim.Likeacreaturefromanotherplanet,hehadnoconceptoflifeinourworld.Raygotreallyscaredandwouldgetangrywhenweleft.Inamadnesshescratched(抓,撓)atwindowsanddoorswheneverweleftthehouse.Concernedforhissafetyandtheconditionofourhome,welockedhiminabigwoodenbox.Butheresistedandtriedtoescape.Thestressweencounteredfloodedus.注意:(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Butthenextmorning,Raysuddenlyseemedtounderstandus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________收養Ray的故事續寫續寫要點第一段:著重描繪“我們”決定放棄時的復雜情緒與具體行動。內心滿是無奈、沮喪和對之前努力付諸東流的不甘,給收養機構打電話時聲音中帶著疲憊與失落。收養機構工作人員會進行勸說,強調Ray的艱難處境,讓“我們”陷入沉思,內心開始動搖,既想擺脫當前困境,又不忍心放棄Ray。第二段:詳細刻畫Ray轉變后的行為表現以及“我們”的反應。Ray積極回應指令,主動與“我們”互動,比如聽從“坐下”“過來”等簡單命令,還會親昵地蹭“我們”的腿。“我們”從最初的驚訝、不敢置信,到逐漸露出欣慰的笑容,之后與Ray進行更多互動,一起玩耍、訓練,感受到之前從未有過的溫暖與親密,深刻體會到堅持帶來的美好結果。情感線一開始,“我們”在收養Ray的過程中遭遇諸多挫折,如Ray的不配合、破壞行為等,內心充滿焦慮、疲憊和挫敗感,直至產生放棄的念頭,此時情感處于低谷。當收養機構提醒Ray的艱難處境時,“我們”內心開始糾結,有掙扎也有一絲不忍。而Ray突然轉變后,“我們”從震驚轉為驚喜,進而感到無比欣慰和幸福,對Ray的感情也從無奈的接納轉變為深深的喜愛與珍惜,情感實現了從低谷到高峰的巨大轉變。故事線“我們”收養受傷退役的賽犬Ray后,面對它的種種問題,八周后決定放棄并聯系收養機構。收養機構工作人員勸說“我們”,講述Ray可能面臨的糟糕處境,“我們”內心開始動搖。第二天早晨,Ray突然像變了一只狗,開始聽從指令,展現出友好互動的一面。“我們”對Ray的轉變感到驚訝和欣喜,與它進行更多互動,如一起玩接球游戲等。隨著時間推移,Ray不斷進步,與“我們”的關系越來越親密,家里充滿溫馨。“我們”回顧這段經歷,感慨堅持的意義,更加珍惜與Ray的相伴時光。主旨升華句ThisexperiencewithRaytaughtusthatpatienceandperseverancecanworkwonders,eveninthemostchallengingsituations,andthateverybeingdeservesachancetobeunderstoodandloved.(與Ray的這段經歷教會我們,耐心和堅持能創造奇跡,即便在最具挑戰性的情況下,而且每個生命都值得被理解和愛。)ThroughtheprocessofadoptingRay,werealizedthatsometimes,themostdifficultjourneyscanleadtothemostbeautifuldestinations,andthatgivingupshouldneverbethefirstchoice.(通過收養Ray的過程,我們意識到,有時最艱難的旅程能通向最美的終點,而且放棄永遠不應是首選。)Ray'stransformationnotonlychangedourperceptionofhimbutalsomadeusunderstandthatloveandpatiencehavethepowertobreakdowneventhethickestwallsoffearandresistance.(Ray的轉變不僅改變了我們對它的看法,還讓我們明白,愛和耐心有力量打破最堅固的恐懼與抵觸之墻。)OurstorywithRayservesasareminderthateverypet,nomatterhowtroubledtheymayseematfirst,hasthepotentialtobecomeabelovedmemberofthefamilyifwearewillingtoinvesttimeandeffort.(我們和Ray的故事提醒我們,每只寵物,無論起初看起來多么棘手,只要我們愿意投入時間和精力,都有潛力成為家庭中備受喜愛的一員。)Fromthevergeofgivinguptoexperiencingthejoyofachangedpet,welearnedthattrueloveisaboutacceptanceandperseverance,andthatitcanbringunexpectedrewardsinthemostunexpectedways.(從瀕臨放棄到體驗一只改變的寵物帶來的喜悅,我們學到,真愛意味著接納和堅持,而且它能以最意想不到的方式帶來意外的回報。)寫作示范示范一EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.Thecontinuouschaoshebroughtwaswearingusdown.Wecalledtheadoptionagency,ourvoicesheavywithdespair.ThestaffontheotherendlistenedempatheticallyandthentoldusaboutRay'stragicpast.Theysaidhehadbeenthroughsomuchbeforecomingtous,andsendinghimbackmightmeanhe'dhavenochanceatahappylife.Wehungup,feelingconflicted.Thatnight,wesatinthelivingroom,lookingatRay,whowaslyinginacorner,hiseyesseeminglyfilledwithahintofsadness.Butthenextmorning,Raysuddenlyseemedtounderstandus.Whenwecalledhisname,heimmediatelyperkeduphisearsandtrottedover.Weaskedhimtosit,andtoourastonishment,heobeyedrightaway.Stevethrewatoy,andRayhappilyrantofetchit,wagginghistailvigorously.Wewereoverjoyed.Itwasasifamagicaltransformationhadoccurredovernight.Fromthatmomenton,Raybecamemoreandmoreobedient.Henolongerdestroyedthingswhenweleft.Ourpatiencefinallypaidoff,andwerealizedthatsometimes,alittlemoreperseverancecanleadtoaworldofdifference.示范二EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.Theconstantscratchingonthedoorsandwindows,hisunresponsivenesstoourcommands,hadleftusexhausted.Aswedialedtheadoptionagency'snumber,ourheartsachedwithdisappointment.ThepersononthelineexplainedthatRayhadbeenthroughseveralharshtrainingsessionsduringhisracingdays,whichmighthavecausedhisaggressiveandunrulybehavior.Theypleadedwithustogivehimonemorechance.Afterthecall,wesatinsilence,lookingatRay,whowascoweringinacorner.Butthenextmorning,Raysuddenlyseemedtounderstandus.Whenweenteredtheroom,hecameuptousandgentlynuzzledourhands.Wedecidedtogivehimasimplecommand,andamazingly,hefollowedit.Wespentthedayplayingwithhim,andhewaslikeadifferentdog.Hewasattentive,happy,andeagertoplease.Wecouldn'tbelievethechange.Thisexperiencetaughtusthateverypethasitsownpaceofadaptation,andwithloveandpatience,eventhemostchallengingonescanbecomeapreciouspartofourlives.參考答案EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.Rayhadconsumedourattentionallalong,showingnoimprovement.Werealizedwehadonlyonechoice:ReturningRaytotheadoptionagency.Iknelt

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