高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)兄妹面對(duì)失物：誠實(shí)與欲望的較量1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadlefthercellphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.4續(xù)寫原文Marysawthecellphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeith,“Keith,thegirlleftbehindhercellphone.”Keithlookedatthecellphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedacellphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon’tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.”Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Then,hesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,“Iwanttotakethecellphone.”Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Sheonlystaredatherbrother,“Youcan’t!Whatiftheownercomestolookforit?”Aftermakingthedecision,Keithquicklygotthecellphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then,hetookMary’shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.5續(xù)寫原文Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhisroomdoorwithtrembling(顫抖的)hands.Insidehisroom,hetookoutthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Hehadhisowncellphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthecellphone.Whatwillyoutellourfatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthecellphone.”Keithsaidquickly,“Iwillsayafriendlentittome.”Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo.Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?”Then,Marysawahousephonenumberonthecoverofthecellphone.“Thisisthegirl’sphonenumber.Whydon’twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocomeandtakebackhercellphone,”shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.6段首句Paragraph1：Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Paragraph2：Marywasveryhappytohearthat.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了一天放學(xué)后，瑪麗和哥哥基思在咖啡館用餐，與一位年輕女士拼桌。女士離開時(shí)遺忘了手機(jī)，基思被這款最新款手機(jī)吸引，不顧瑪麗勸阻，將其偷走?；丶液?，瑪麗試圖說服基思?xì)w還手機(jī)，并發(fā)現(xiàn)了手機(jī)殼上失主的電話號(hào)碼?；茧m一開始堅(jiān)決拒絕，但內(nèi)心十分糾結(jié)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.那天晚上，基思在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)。他的腦海里不斷浮現(xiàn)出瑪麗失望的眼神，還有自己偷拿手機(jī)時(shí)緊張又興奮的模樣。他清楚自己的行為是不對(duì)的，可手機(jī)的誘惑實(shí)在太大。他一會(huì)兒想著擁有新手機(jī)的快樂，能和朋友們隨時(shí)聯(lián)系、玩游戲；一會(huì)兒又擔(dān)心失主焦急的樣子，害怕父母發(fā)現(xiàn)后對(duì)自己失望。這種糾結(jié)的情緒讓他難以入眠，被子被他翻來覆去地折騰。最終，在一番痛苦的掙扎后，他決定聽從瑪麗的建議。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Marywasveryhappytohearthat.瑪麗非常高興聽到這個(gè)決定。她看著基思，眼中滿是欣慰?；寄闷痣娫?，撥通了手機(jī)殼上的號(hào)碼。電話接通后，基思緊張地向?qū)Ψ秸f明了情況，失主在電話那頭激動(dòng)不已，連連道謝。第二天，失主來到他們家，拿到了失而復(fù)得的手機(jī)。她對(duì)兄妹倆的行為贊不絕口，還特意給他們買了小禮物表示感謝。這件事讓基思明白了，誠實(shí)遠(yuǎn)比一時(shí)的欲望更重要，他和瑪麗的關(guān)系也因此更加親密。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnight,Keithtossedandturnedinbedfromtimetotime.HismindwasconstantlyfilledwithMary'sdisappointedeyesandhisownnervousandexcitedlookwhenhestolethephone.Heknewclearlythathisbehaviorwaswrong,butthetemptationofthephonewastoostrong.Hethoughtaboutthejoyofhavinganewphone,beingabletocontactfriendsandplaygamesatanytime.Ontheotherhand,heworriedabouttheanxiouslookoftheownerandfearedthathisparentswouldbedisappointedinhim.Thistangledemotionmadeithardforhimtofallasleep,andhekepttossingthequilt.Finally,afterapainfulstruggle,hedecidedtofollowMary'sadvice.14范文呈現(xiàn)Marywasveryhappytohearthat.ShelookedatKeithwithgreatrelief.Keithpickedupthephoneanddialedthenumberonthephonecover.Whenthecallwasconnected,Keithnervouslyexplainedthesituationtotheotherside.Theownerwasextremelyexcitedonthephoneandthankedhimrepeatedly.Thenextday,theownercametotheirhouseandgotherlostphoneback.Shepraisedthesiblings'behaviorandboughtthemsmallgiftstoexpresshergratitude.ThisincidentmadeKeithunderstandthathonestyisfarmoreimportantthantemporarydesire,andhisrelationshipwithMarybecameevencloser.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnight,Keithfoundhimselfinastateofrestlessness,tossingandturningceaselesslyinhisbed.HismindwashauntedbyMary'sdisappointedgaze,avividreminderofhisill-fateddecision,andtheimageofhisownnervousyetexcitedcountenancewhenhesurreptitiouslypocketedthephone.Deepdown,hewasacutelyawarethathisactionsweremorallyreprehensible.However,theallureofthesleek,state-of-the-artdeviceprovedalmostirresistible.Heindulgedindaydreamsofthepleasuresthatowningsuchaphonewouldbring:seamlesscommunicationwithfriendsandendlesshoursofgaming.Conversely,hewasplaguedbythoughtsofthephone'srightfulowner,likelyinastateofdistress,andtheprospectofhisparents'disappointmentshouldtheydiscoverhismisdeed.Thisinternalconflictragedon,renderingsleepelusiveashefidgetedwithhisquilt.Eventually,afteraprotractedandagonizingstruggle,hesummonedthecouragetoyieldtoMary'scounsel.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Mary'sfacelitupwithjoyuponhearingKeith'sdecision.Hereyes,brimmingwithrelief,methisashereachedforthephone.Withaslightlytremblinghand,Keithdialedthenumberemblazonedonthephonecover.Asthecallconnected,hisvoicequiveredwithnervousnessasherecountedtheeventstotheownerontheotherend.Theowner'selationwaspalpable,hergratitudepouringforthinastream