高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習愛心傳遞：善舉循環(huán)的溫暖故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhatGoesAroundComesAroundOnedayamansawanoldladyonthesideoftheroad.Noticingshemightneedhelp,hepulledup,gotoutandfoundthatshehadaflattire(癟胎).Theladywasworried.Noonehadstoppedtohelpforthelasthourorso.Hecouldseethatshewassoafraid,standingoutthereinthecold.Hesaid,"I'mheretohelpyou,ma'am.Whydon'tyouwaitinthecarwhereit'swarm?Bytheway,IamBryanAnderson."Ashewaschanginghertire,sherolleddownthewindowandbegantotalktohim.Shetoldhimthatshewasonlyjustpassingthrough.Shecouldn'tthankhimenoughforcomingtoheraid.4續(xù)寫原文Whentheworkwasfinished,theladyaskedhowmuchsheowedhim,wilingtoacceptanyamount.Bryanneverthoughttwiceaboutbeingpaid.Hetoldherthatifshereallywantedtopayhimback,thenexttimeshesawsomeonewhoneededhelp,shecouldgivethatpersontheassistanceheorsheneeded,andBryanadded,"Andthinkofme."Hewaiteduntilshestartedhercaranddroveoff.Ithadbeenacoldanddepressingday,buthefeltgoodasheheadedforhome,disappearingintothedarkness.5續(xù)寫原文Afewmilesdowntheroadtheladywentintoasmallcafé.Thewaitresscameoverandbroughtacleantoweltowipeherwethair.Shestillhadasweetsmileeventhoughshementionedthatherhusbanddiedandshehadtomakealivingbyherself.Theladynoticedthewaitresswasnearlyeightmonthspregnant,butsheneverletherconditionchangeherpositiveattitude.Theoldladywonderedhowsomeonewhohadsolittlecouldbesocaringtoastranger.ThensherememberedBryananddecidedtodosomething.6段首句Paragraph1：Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.Paragraph2：Thewaitresspostedthetouchingstoryonline,accompaniedbywords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9一天，布萊恩?安德森在路上看到一位車胎癟了的老婦人，主動幫忙更換輪胎且分文未取，只希望她能將幫助他人的善舉傳遞下去。老婦人離開后走進一家小咖啡館，看到懷有身孕卻獨自謀生且笑容甜美的女服務員朱迪，想起布萊恩的話，決定施以援手。故事圍繞著這份愛心的接力展開，展現(xiàn)人與人之間善良互助的美好。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.老婦人吃完飯后，朱迪前來結(jié)賬。老婦人看到朱迪胸前的名牌，知道了她的名字。她從錢包里拿出一張百元大鈔遞給朱迪。朱迪接過錢，轉(zhuǎn)身去柜臺找零。就在這時，老婦人起身，輕手輕腳地離開了咖啡館。她在餐桌上的餐巾紙下壓了一張紙條，上面寫著：“你無需感謝我。曾經(jīng)也有人像我?guī)椭阋粯訋椭^我。如果你真的想回報我，就別讓這份愛的傳遞終止。”朱迪找零回來，發(fā)現(xiàn)老婦人已經(jīng)不見，看到紙條的那一刻，她的內(nèi)心被深深觸動，眼眶瞬間濕潤，淚水在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thewaitresspostedthetouchingstoryonline,accompaniedbywords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"朱迪被老婦人的善舉深深感動，她決定把這個溫暖的故事分享出去。她在社交媒體上發(fā)布了這個故事，并配上文字：“謝謝你！善良的女士！”沒想到，這個故事迅速在網(wǎng)絡上傳播開來，如同一顆愛心的種子，在無數(shù)人心中生根發(fā)芽。許多網(wǎng)友看到后，紛紛被這份善良和愛心所打動，有的人在評論區(qū)分享自己被幫助的經(jīng)歷，有的人表示以后也要像故事中的人一樣，主動去幫助他人。這份愛心在網(wǎng)絡的助力下，傳遞得更遠更廣，讓更多人感受到人性的美好。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.Theladysawthenametagonthewaitress,whichread"Judy".Shetookouta$100billfromherwalletandhandedittoJudy.Judyreceivedthemoneyandturnedaroundtogetthechangeatthecounter.Atthatmoment,theladygotupandquietlyleftthecafé.Sheleftanoteunderthenapkinonthetable.Itsaid,"Youdon'towemeanything.Somebodyoncehelpedmeout,justlikeI'mhelpingyou.Ifyoureallywanttopaymeback,don'tletthischainofloveend."WhenJudycamebackwiththechangeandfoundtheladyhadgone,shewasdeeplytouchedwhenshesawthenote.Hereyeswerefilledwithtears.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thewaitresswassomovedbythekindactoftheladythatshedecidedtosharethiswarmstory.Shepostedthestoryonsocialmedia,accompaniedbythewords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"Surprisingly,thestoryspreadrapidlyontheInternet.Itwaslikeaseedoflove,takingrootandsproutingintheheartsofcountlesspeople.Manynetizensweretouchedbythiskindnessandlove.Somesharedtheirownexperiencesofbeinghelpedinthecommentssection,andsomesaidtheywouldtaketheinitiativetohelpothersjustlikethepeopleinthestory.WiththehelpoftheInternet,thislovewaspassedonfurtherandwider,makingmorepeoplefeelthebeautyofhumannature.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.Spottingthenametagreading"Judy"onthewaitress,theladyretrieveda$100billfromherwalletandextendedittowardsJudy.Judytookthemoneyandpivotedtofetchthechangeatthecounter.Seizingthismoment,theladyroseandslippedoutofthecaféunnoticed.Underthenapkinonthetable,sheleftanotethatread,"Youdon'towemeathing.Someoneoncelentmeahand,justasI'mdoingforyou.Shouldyoutrulywishtorepayme,ensurethischainofloveremainsunbroken."Uponreturningwiththechangetofindtheladygone,Judy'seyeswelledupwithtearsassheperusedthenote,herheartdeeplystirred.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Sodeeplymovedwasthewaitressbythelady'sbenevolentactthatsheresolvedtosharethisheartwarmingstory.Sheposteditonsocialmedia,accompaniedbythewords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"Astonishingly,thestorywentviralontheInternet,likeaseedoflovetakingrootandflourishingintheheartsofcountlessindividuals.Manynetizens,touchedbythisdisplayofkindnessandlove,sharedtheirownexperiencesofbeingassistedinthecommentsection,whileotherspledgedtoproactivelyhelpothers