PAGE1PAGE2進階練15圖表作文（滿分范文）專練（解析版）學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________一、圖表作文1．（2022秋·上海·高三上海市向明中學?？茧A段練習）GuidedWritingDirections:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120–150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是中華中學學生姚平，最近參加了一項研究性學習調研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調研你校學生及其父母，結果發現雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數據如圖所示）。根據圖表寫一份報告，在報告中，你必須：1.描述調研數據；2.分析可能導致這一結果的原因?！敬鸢浮縍ecently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．Withoutthegenuineencouragementfromparentsandthereversalofexam-orientededucationalmethods，akidwouldneverendupwithapositivegrown-up．【分析】這是一篇說明文。要求考生根據圖表寫一份報告【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：說明文時態：根據提示，時態主要為一般現在時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.描述調研數據；2.分析可能導致這一結果的原因。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）madeasurvey，beproudof,heldthesameopinion,figureout,beneveraccustomedto,developastrongsenseof,emphasizethevalueof,endupwith第三步：連詞成句1.Recently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．2.Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．3.Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．4.Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．5.First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．6.Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結構順序：First,Second連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，【點睛】[高分句型1]Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．which引導的非限制性定語從句。[高分句型2]Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．現在分詞作狀語。2．（2022春·上海·高三上海市洋涇中學?？茧A段練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.隨著電腦普及率的提高，老師、家長和學生對手寫字的重視程度降低了。下圖是一項調查顯示中學生不想改善字跡的理由。請說明該現象并發表自己的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofcomputers,teachers,studentsandtheirparentsarepayinglessandlessattentiontohandwriting.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about85.8percentofmiddleschoolstudentsthinkthattheirhandwritingispoor.Yetforvariousreasons,manystudentsdon’twanttoimprovetheirhandwriting.51.5percentofthestudentsthinkthattheycanjustuseacomputer,sothereisnoneedtowastetimeimprovingtheirhandwriting,and32.2percentbelievethattheyaresobusywiththestudythattheydonothavetimetopractice.10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.Therefore,inmyopinion,moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonthisaspectinthefuture.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文。要求考生說明該調查顯示的中學生不想改善字跡的理由的這種現象并發表自己的看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累調查：survey→research各種各樣的：various→allkindsof提高：improve→enhance認為：think→consider2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.拓展句：Beautifulandneatcalligraphyisgoodforstudents,whichisespeciallyformiddleschoolstudents.【點睛】【高分句型1】10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.（運用了as引導的非限制性定語從句）3．（2022·上?！ど虾Ｊ械诙袑W?？寄M預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.目前,網絡語言（InternetSlang）在青少年中極為盛行，你校學生會在同學中就對網絡語言的看法進行了調查，調查結果見下面餅狀圖（piechart）。請根據圖中信息，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹同學們的看法，并表達你自己的觀點。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.Theresultsareasfollows.Somestudentsareinfavorofitwhilesomeareopposed.35%studentsfeelitactiveandfashionabletosayInternetSlang.And33%studentsthinkitisfullofhumorandwisdom.QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.While7%studentsviewitasasimplething.TheythinkInternetSlangwasn'tusedbymostpeopleandifitisusedtoooften,itwillcausemisunderstanding.AsfarasIamconcerned,InternetSlangisadouble-edgedsword.Ifweuseitinaproperway,ouronlinecommunicationwillbemorecolorful.【分析】本篇書面表達屬于議論文，要求考生就網絡語言在同學中極為盛行的現象的調查結果進行闡述，并表達自己的觀點。【詳解】1.詞匯積累越來越多：moreandmore→increasing支持：support→infavorof認為：think→holdtheopinionthat我認為：Ithink→AsfarasIamconcerned2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.Theresultsareasfollows.拓展句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey,whoseresultsareasfollows.【點睛】[高分句型1]WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.(with的復合結構)[高分句型2]QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.(同位語從句)4．（2022·上海靜安·統考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.當今社會，短視頻已成為高中生獲取信息的渠道之一，日前，某網站對某地高中生使用短視頻的現狀作了調查，結果如下:獲取短視頻內容的類型受訪者平均使用時間占比（該內容瀏覽時間/總瀏覽時間）輔助學習類48%娛樂休閑類31%生活技能類12%其他9%請簡單描述該圖表，并結合自身或他人情況，談談你的看法。（文中不得出現考生姓名，學校等真實信息）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asurveyconductedbyawebsiteisaimedatfiguringoutthesituationabouthighschoolstudents’useofshortvideosasachannelforgaininginformation.Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.And9%isspentonrandomcontents.AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.Thus,itisnowonderthatalargeproportionoftheirtimeisspentonshortvideos.Iamsurethatthistrendwillcontinueandlastforever.【導語】本文是一篇圖表類型作文。要求考生表格展示的內容去描述某地高中使用短視頻的現狀?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累旨在：beaimedat→beintendedtodo與……相關：relatedto→withregardto除此以外：inaddition→additionally提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.拓展句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosthatarerelevanttosomeimportantlifeskills.【點睛】【高分句型1】Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.（運用了as引導的非限制定語從句以及that引導的限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.（運用了強調句型以及makeit+形容詞+forsb.todosth.的結構）5．（2022·上海嘉定·高三專題練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.某校對中學生課余活動進行了調查，結果如圖所示。請根據圖表1提供的信息描述學生每天的課余活動，并針對圖表2中任何一個數據所反映的情況談談你的觀點。生詞：圖表chart_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.I’vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.InChart2Ifindthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren’soff-schooltime.Undersuchcircumstances,thestudentssimplycannotspareenoughtimeforfunthings,thuslosingtheprimetimetocultivatetheirsports,culturalandspiritualhobbies,nottosayanythingoftheirartisticdevelopment.Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.【導語】本文是圖表作文。要求考生對中學生課余活動進行的調查結果談談個人的觀點?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累據顯示：Asisshown→Itisshownthat令人擔心的：worrying→worrisome占據：takeup→occupy有趣的：fun→interesting2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.拓展句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforthefactthattherewillbelessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities【點睛】【高分句型1】AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.（由as引導的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】I’vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.（由that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型3】InChart2,Ifindthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren’soff-schooltime.（由that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型4】Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?（由When引導的時間狀語從句）6．（2022·上海嘉定·統考一模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是光明中學的學生張華。你們學校擬開設勞動課程，現給出如下方案，學校委托學生會征詢大家的意見。內容高一：電器使用和維護高二：植物種植與養護高三：物品整理和收納時間每學期最后兩周，每周2整天地點理科實驗專用教室給學生會寫一封郵件，內容須包括：1)你認為該方案中存在的問題；2)你的建議和理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearStudents’Union,I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbodyandlearningmorelifeskills.However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthesenior1students,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollifequickly.Furthermore,asfarasthetimegiventhelaborcourseisconcerned,itisnotenoughatall.Inordertopaymoreattentiontothelaborcourse,studentsshouldbeofferedmoretimetoexperiencemoreactivitiesrelatedtothelaborcourse.I’mdeeplyconvincedthataslongasyoutakemyadviceintoaccount,thislaborcoursewillbeinterestingandrewarding.Yourssincerely,ZhangHua【導語】本篇書面表達是一篇應用文。要求考生給學校學生會寫一封郵件，就學校擬開設勞動課程的方案提出問題，并給出建議和理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累提出：putforward→comeupwith方案：schedule→plan此外：furthermore→what’smore考慮：take…intoaccount→take…intoconsideration2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.拓展句：I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcoursewhichisplannedbyyou.【點睛】【高分句型1】Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbody,learningmorelifeskills.（運用了it作形式主語，不定式短語作真正主語）【高分句型2】However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthesenior1,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollife.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句，because引導的原因狀語從句以及sothat引導的目的狀語從句）7．（2023·上?！ど虾Ｊ薪ㄆ街袑W?？既＃〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.最近明啟中學對教師是否會被人工智能取代這一話題開展了調查，調查結果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學生李華，請就此話題談談你的看法，寫一篇150-180的作文，文章內容需涵蓋：1.簡要描述圖表；2.你認為教師是否會被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificialintelligence,while56%saidno.Personallyspeaking,teacherswon’tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducatingpeople,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers’labor,andcannotreplacetheroleofteachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyarefarfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobsthatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文，最近明啟中學對教師是否會被人工智能取代這一話題開展了調查，調查結果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學生李華，請就此話題談談你的看法，寫一篇150-180的作文，文章內容需涵蓋：1.簡要描述圖表；2.你認為教師是否會被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累取代：replace→supersede擁有：possess→takepossessionof重要的：important→significant也就是說：thatistosay=inotherwords2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.【點睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.(運用了because引導的原因狀語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.(運用了現在分詞作狀語)8．（2023·上?！つM預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.國際經合組織（OECD）對600,000名青少年就生活中最令他們擔憂的事情進行了調查，結果如下圖。請聯系自身實際，談談最讓令你擔憂的事情及原因?！敬鸢浮縏heORGANISATIONforEconomicCo-operationandDevelopment(OECD)asked600,000teenagerswhatworriedthemmostabouttheirlives.Itturnsoutthatfortypercentofthestudentsintheiracademicassignmentsfeelpressure;thirtypercentofthestudentsontheirrelationshipwiththeirparentsfeelalittlenervous;twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.Theremainingfivepercentofthestudentsfeelanxiousandconcernedaboutotherthings.AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.Itmakesmefeelanxiousandconfusedandsometimeshelpless.Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.Toimprovetheirpsychologicalquality,Ithinkwestudentsshouldbebetterimproved.Ithinkweshouldgetmorehelpfromparentsandteachers.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文。要求考生針對國際經合組織（OECD）對600,000名青少年就生活中最令他們擔憂的事情進行調查的結果，聯系自身實際，談談最讓令你擔憂的事情及原因?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累壓力：pressure→stress擔心：beconcernedabout→beworriedabout就我而言：asfarasIamconcerned→personallyspeaking無助的：helpless→unassisted2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.拓展句：ItismaybebecauseofafailureinanexamthatIwillbeinabadmood.【點睛】【高分句型1】twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.（運用了非謂語動詞中的現在分詞作伴隨狀語。）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.（運用了連詞that引導的限制性定語從句。）9．（2021秋·上海·高三華師大二附中?？茧A段練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的餅狀圖顯示了某校對學生學業成績評價的新體制，圖表所示的五個方面構成了一個學生的學業成績。假如你是該校學生，請你以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”為題用英語寫一篇短文，內容包括：1.簡要描述圖中信息；2.談談你對這一新舉措的看法并說明原因。圖表說明：①testresults②notes③homework④classperformances⑤teamwork____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool

Inordertohelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitiesinallfields,ourschoolnowhasaskedtheteacherstomakesomechangesinthegradingsystem.Thischartshowshowitworks.

Students’testresults,whichusedtobetheonlywaytoevaluateastudentinschool,makeuponly30%ofhisfinalscore.Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.

I’mallforthenewgradingsystem,whichevaluatesstudentsinallfields.Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevelopourabilitiesaswellaspotentialonthewaytoadulthoodandtrulymakepreparationsforourfuturelife.【分析】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文，要求考生以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”為題寫一篇短文，內容包括：簡要描述圖表信息以及談談對這一新舉措的看法并說明原因?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累評估：evaluate→assess考慮：takeintoaccount→consider重要的：important→ofimportance擅長：begoodat→dowellin2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.拓展句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant,whichmeansifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.【點睛】[高分句型1]Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.(運用了how引導的主語從句和ofwhich引導的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevel