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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。EverySunday,June,asix-year-oldgirl,tiedhersportsshoesandwalkedtoGrandpa’shouse.Grandpalivedaroundtheblock(街區),andJunewasallowedtowalktherebyherself.Grandpaoftentoldherstories.Theyalsoateicecreamtogetherwhiletheytalked.SundaywasJune’sfavoriteday.ThisSunday,Junegotdressed.Sheputononesportsshoe,butshecouldnotfindtheothershoe.“Mommy,where’smyshoe?”“I’msureit’sinyourroom.Lookcarefullyuntilyoufindit.Youcan’tgountilyouhavebothshoeson,”June’smothersaid.Junesatonherbedandlookedaround.Herroomwasquitemessy.Therewereclothesonthefloorandpapersonthedesk.Shewasn’tsurewheretostart.ThenJunerememberedastoryGrandpatoldher.Whenhewaslittle,helostacointhatheplannedtousetobuyhismotheracandy.Hewalkedbackovereveryplacehehadbeentothatdayuntilhefoundit.Hehadtogoinordersohewouldn’tmissanything.Junestoodup.“I’llstartinthecornerandgoaroundtheroominorder,”shethought.“ThatwayIwon’tmissanything.”注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Junebeganinthecornerwhereherdeskwas.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JunequicklyputonhershoeandranoutofthedoortoGrandpa’shouse.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:六歲的June每周日都會去爺爺家,爺爺會給她講故事,他們還會一起吃冰淇淋,周日是她最喜歡的日子。這周日她準備去爺爺家時找不到另一只運動鞋,媽媽讓她找到鞋才能去。June想起爺爺講過的小時候找硬幣的故事,決定像爺爺那樣有順序地在房間里尋找。伏筆及回應:伏筆:房間很凌亂,衣服在地上,紙張在桌上。回應:在尋找過程中,June可能會在這些雜亂物品中發現鞋子。伏筆:爺爺講的找硬幣故事,要按順序找以免遺漏。回應:June效仿爺爺,從角落開始按順序找鞋。伏筆:June每周日都去爺爺家,很期待和爺爺相處。回應:找到鞋后迅速跑去爺爺家,體現她對去爺爺家的急切渴望。伏筆:媽媽要求June找到兩只鞋才能出門。回應:找到鞋后才能開啟去爺爺家的行程。伏筆:爺爺常給June講故事并一起吃冰淇淋。回應:續寫中可能會提及在爺爺家繼續享受這樣的美好時光,進一步突出祖孫情。續寫要點:情感線:從開始找鞋時的焦急,到找到鞋后的欣喜與期待。故事線:在房間角落及周圍仔細尋找鞋子,最終找到鞋子跑去爺爺家,到爺爺家后與爺爺分享找鞋經歷并繼續享受溫馨時光。主旨升華句:“Thebondbetweengrandparentsandgrandchildrenislikeawarmsunshinethatcanalwaysbrightenupachild'sheart.”(祖孫之間的紐帶就像溫暖的陽光,總能照亮孩子的心靈。)“Intheprocessofsearching,Junenotonlyfoundhershoebutalsolearnedthevalueofperseveranceandthesweetnessoffamilylove.”(在尋找過程中,June不僅找到了她的鞋,還領悟到了堅持的價值和家庭愛的甜蜜。)“Thesimplethingssharedwithgrandparents,likestoriesandtreats,aretheprecioustreasuresinachild'slife.”(與祖父母分享的簡單事物,如故事和美食,是孩子生活中的珍貴財富。)“June'seagernesstoreachGrandpa'shouseshowsthattheloveandcarefromfamilyisthemostdesiredthinginachild'sworld.”(June渴望到達爺爺家表明家庭的愛與關懷是孩子世界中最渴望的東西。)“Throughthissmallincident,theimportanceoffamilytraditionsandtheconnectionbetweengenerationsaredeeplyengraved.”(通過這件小事,家庭傳統的重要性和代際聯系被深深銘記。)寫作示范一:Junebeganinthecornerwhereherdeskwas.Shecarefullymovedthepapersaside,hopingtoseehershoe.Nothing.Shethenlookedunderthedesk.Therewereafewtoysandsomedust,butstillnoshoe.Shemovedontotheareanearhercloset.Sheopenedtheclosetdoorandrummagedthroughtheclothesonthefloor.Justasshewasabouttogiveup,shesawasmallcorneroftheshoestickingoutfromunderapileofsweaters.Shepulleditoutwithabigsmile.JunequicklyputonhershoeandranoutofthedoortoGrandpa’shouse.Whenshearrived,sherushedintoGrandpa’sarmsandtoldhimthewholestoryofhowshefoundtheshoe.Grandpalaughedandsaid,“Youareaclevergirl.JustlikeIfoundmycoin,youfoundyourshoebybeingpatientandmethodical.”Thentheysatdown,andGrandpastartedanewstorywhiletheyatetheiricecream.Junefeltsohappyandcontent,realizingthatthetimewithGrandpawasalwayssoprecious.寫作示范二:Junebeganinthecornerwhereherdeskwas.Shecheckedeverynookandcranny.Shegotdownonherkneesandpeeredunderthebed.Therewereafewoldshoes,butnottheoneshewaslookingfor.Shestoodupandwalkedaroundthebed.Suddenly,shenoticedastrangebulgeunderthebedspread.Shelifteditupandtherewashermissingshoe.Shecheeredwithdelight.JunequicklyputonhershoeandranoutofthedoortoGrandpa’shouse.AssheenteredGrandpa’shouse,shewasstillexcited.ShetoldGrandpahowshehadfollowedhisadviceandfoundtheshoe.Grandpapattedherheadandsaid,“Goodgirl.Yousee,whenwefaceproblems,ifwestaycalmandorganized,wecansolvethem.”Theyspenttherestofthedaychattingandlaughing,andJuneknewthatthesemomentswithGrandpawerethehighlightsofherweek,andthelovebetweenthemwouldalwaysbetheretowarmherheart.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Junebeganinthecornerwhereherdeskwas.Hershoewasnotinthepileofpapersonthedesk,soshelookedunderherdesk.Insteadoffindinghershoe,shefoundherlostclassphoto.Next,Junewalkedalongthewall.Noshoe.Sheturnedalongthenextwall.Therewerelotsofclothes,butnoshoe.AlongthethirdwallwasJune'sbed.Shelookedunderherbed.Thereshefoundsomethingbehindadust-coveredbook.Shepulledthebooktowardher,andreachedasfarasshecouldtocatchi
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