課時把關練PartVWriting妙筆生花讀后續寫閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。StevewasthemostamazingpersoninallofMinneapolis，andhewasmycousin.Bytheageof19，StevewasastarbaseballplayerattheUniversityofMinnesota.Iwantedtobeexactlylikehim.SowhenSteveaskedmetogowithhimonaspringfishingtripinnorthernMinnesota，Iwasexcited!Afterplanningthetrip，wegatheredclothesandsupplies，andbeganourgreatadventure.WereachedtheSuperiorNationalForestinnorthernMinnesotabyearlyevening.Onourwaytothecampsite，Stevepointedtoasmallhousefarawayinoneofthemountains，sayingthatitwastherangerstation（護林站）wheretheforesterworked.Finally，afteralongwalk，wereachedthecampsiteandsetupcampasthesunwassetting.Steveknewallthetricksofanexperiencedwildernesscamper.Afterwegatheredenoughwoodfromtheforest，hestartedthecampfireusingonlystoneandsteel—nomatches.Forsupperwefeastedonfreeze-driedbeef，wildriceandpeasoup.Iategreedilyafterallthatwork.Tiredenough，weclimbedintooursleepingbagsearlyandtalkedaboutourplansforfishingthenextday.Wewerestilltalkingquietlywhenasuddennorthwindpickedup；thetemperaturedroppedanditbegantosnow.Stevefoundawaytoincreasethetemperatureinsidethetent.Hedraggedalog（原木）fromtheforesttotheoppositesideofthecampfire.Thenhewrappedaluminumfoil（鋁箔）aroundthelog.Theheatfromthefirereflectedoffthefoilandintothetent.Soonimagesoflakefishwerefillingmydreams.Thesnowhadstopped，butsometimelaterapowerfulwindmusthavekickeduptheflamesofourdyingfire.IwasabruptlyawakenedbySteve.Ourtentwasonfire.Frightened，Iranoutofthetentimmediately.Thetentcollapsed（倒塌）withSteveinside.Withoutanythoughtofendangeringmyself，Ireachedintotheburningtentandpulledhimtotheicylake.Fortunately，wewerenotseriouslyhurt.注意：續寫詞數應為150左右。Later，aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm，weconsideredourdifficultsituation. 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___________________________________________________________步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點很關鍵前文概要第一段：我的堂兄史蒂夫是我的偶像。他讓我和他一起去釣魚旅行時，我很興奮！第二段：傍晚，我們到達了一個國家森林。在去營地的路上，我們看到了護林員工作的護林站。第三段：我們在日落時搭起帳篷，生火吃飯。第四段：晚上氣溫下降，開始下雪。史蒂夫把鋁箔包在原木上使帳篷更加暖和。第五段：大風把我們快要熄滅的火吹旺了，點燃了我們的帳篷。幸運的是，我們沒有受重傷。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節①續寫第一段所給首句為“Later，aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm，weconsideredourdifficultsituation.”。本段緊密銜接原文內容，因為帳篷在大火中化為灰燼，包括衣服、手機以及其他所需物品，加之營地遠離公路，面對這樣的困境，即使史蒂夫也不知道該怎么辦。②續寫第二段所給首句為“Suddenly，weheardanoiseintheforest.”。本句提示有個關鍵詞Suddenly，由此可推知在極大的困境中，事情有了新的轉變……步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續寫詞匯，生動描述情節話題激活詞匯情感：unsureanxiouslywereabletoafriendandequal動作：getoutofheardlistenedappearedhadspotteddroveustocontinues環境：inthedeepoftheforestfarawayfromthehighwayinthemiddleofnowhereinthecoldairthedarkness句式翻譯1.我們的營地位于森林深處，遠離公路。（主系表）______________________________________________________________________________________2.我們身處茫茫荒野中。（主系表）______________________________________________________________________________________3.我們只穿著內衣，我們的日用品和手機都化為了灰燼。（并列句和被動結構）______________________________________________________________________________________4.我們唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的野外。（定語從句和不定式作表語）______________________________________________________________________________________5.我們想知道怎么才能走出森林。（主謂賓）______________________________________________________________________________________6.我們焦急地聽著，凝視著黑暗處。（并列謂語）______________________________________________________________________________________7.一位護林員發現了火光，前來檢查。（并列句）______________________________________________________________________________________8.護林員開車送我們到護林站。（主謂賓）______________________________________________________________________________________9.我們有了衣服，也可以給父母打電話了。（被動語態）______________________________________________________________________________________10.正是在這次旅行中，史蒂夫開始把我當作一個平等的朋友，而不是堂弟。（強調句）______________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創造性表達——潤色注重細節，句式再造升級1.把句2和句3合并為一個簡單句______________________________________________________________________________________2.把句4和句5合并______________________________________________________________________________________3.把句7變為含有非謂語動詞的簡單句______________________________________________________________________________________4.把句8和句9變為含有非限制性定語從句的復合句______________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，結構緊湊，邏輯銜接Later，aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm，weconsideredourdifficultsituation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly，weheardanoiseintheforest.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課時把關練PartVWriting參考答案步驟三句式翻譯1.Ourcampsitewasinthedeepoftheforest，reallyfarawayfromthehighway.2.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere.3.Weworeonlyunderwear，andoursuppliesandcellphoneshadbeenburntintoashes.4.Theonlythingwecoulddowas（to）sitinthecoldair.5.Wewonderedhowtogetoutoftheforest.6.Anxiouslywelistenedandstaredintothedarkness.7.Aforesterhadspottedthelightfromthefireandhecametohaveacheck.8.Theforesterdroveustotherangerstation.9.Weweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.10.ItwasonthistripthatStevebegantotreatmemorelikeafriendandequal，ratherthanayoungercousin.步驟四1.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere，wearingonlyunderwear，withoursuppliesburntintoashesandourcellphonesincluded.2.Theonlythingwasjustforustositinthecoldairandwonderhowtogetoutoftheforest.3.Aforesterhadspottedthelightfromthefire，comingtohaveacheck.4.Theforesterdroveustotherangerstation，whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.步驟五Later，aswestoodbythebur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