專題23八下期末書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練書面表達(dá)之環(huán)境保護(hù)、文明禮儀（一）為共創(chuàng)文明城市，我校將舉行以CivilizedCity為主題的演講比賽。請結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)∶個(gè)人修養(yǎng)1.對人友善，禮貌待人；2.……公共禮儀1.保持干凈整潔，不亂扔垃圾；2.不在公共場所大聲喧嘩，在圖書館、閱覽室保持安靜；3.……綠色生活1.節(jié)能減排，垃圾分類；2.……注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。CivilizedCityDearclassmates,Ourcityisnowmakingitsefforttobeacivilizedcity.Ithinkwecandosomethingforit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sstartfromourselves.Tryourbesttomakeourhometownmorebeautifulandcivilized.Thankyou!【答案】CivilizedCityDearclassmates,Ourcityisnowmakingitsefforttobeacivilizedcity.Ithinkwecandosomethingforit.Asastudent,weshouldbekindtoothersandoftenhelppeople.Forexample,wecangiveourseatstopeopleinneedonthebusandbepolitetoothers.Weshouldcareaboutourclassmatesandofferhelpifnecessary.Inpublic,weshouldn’tlittereverywhereandshouldkeepitclean.Itisnotpolitetospeakloudlyinpublicplaces,andweshouldkeepquietinlibraries,readingroomsandotherplaceslikethat.Moreover,weshouldobeythetrafficrulesadalwaysqueueforourturn.Tomakeourcitymorebeautiful,weshouldhaveagreenlife.Itisimportanttosaveenergyandreducewaste.Weshouldalsoseparatethewasteandtryourbesttorecyclethem.Let’sstartfromourselves.Tryourbesttomakeourhometownmorebeautifulandcivilized.Thankyou!【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“CivilizedCity”為題，根據(jù)題干中所給的要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：闡述做法應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，多以第一人稱為主，注意連詞的使用，使文章過渡自然。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰，邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。（二）“踐行文明禮儀，保護(hù)自然環(huán)境”是學(xué)校志愿者活動(dòng)的主要目的。學(xué)校英語雜志社以“我是一名志愿者”為題開展征文活動(dòng)。假如你是LiHua，請根據(jù)下面的信息用英語寫一篇短文投稿，要點(diǎn)如下：1.文明禮儀方面：在圖書館……；在公交車上……2.環(huán)保意識方面：過綠色生活……3.學(xué)習(xí)生活方面：多閱讀……；參加慈善活動(dòng)……注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語句連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名等信息。IamavolunteerHi,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Iamavolunteerofourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,let’smakegooduseofvolunteerwork.【答案】IamavolunteerHi,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Iamavolunteerofourschool.Letmetellyousomethingaboutyourvolunteerwork.Themainpurposeofourworkistohelpstudentslearnmoreaboutmannersandprotecttheenvironment.Sinceit’snevertoolatetodosomethingmeaningful,wetakepartinalotofvolunteeringactivities.Forexample,wegivetalksonwhatweshouldandshouldn’tdointhelibrary.Weshouldofferourseatsonthebus.Wealsoencouragestudentstoplantmoretreesandreducepollutionfortheenvironment.Weshouldreadmoretobroadenourhorizons.Wewillalsoparticipateincharityactivities.Throughourhardwork,mostofthestudentshavegotgoodmannersandourschoolhasbeeagreenone.Inshort,let’smakegooduseofvolunteerwork.【解析】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)提示材料圍繞“我是一名志愿者”寫一篇短文。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的信息以及志愿工作的目的。第二步，分別從文明禮儀，環(huán)保意識以及學(xué)習(xí)生活方面進(jìn)行介紹。第三步，總結(jié)概括。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加②inshort總之③makegooduseof充分利用[高分句型]①Themainpurposeofourworkistohelpstudentslearnmoreaboutmannersandprotecttheenvironment（動(dòng)詞不定式作表語）②Sinceit’snevertoolatetodosomethingmeaningful,wetakepartinalotofvolunteeringactivities（since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）（三）“宿遷是我家，文明靠大家”，作為中學(xué)生，應(yīng)積極參與文明建設(shè)（civilizedcity）的建設(shè)。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇90詞左右的短文。1.尊敬老師，對人禮貌2.樂于助人，友善待人3.閱讀經(jīng)典，提升自我4.遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅燈5.保護(hù)環(huán)境，垃圾分類，植樹種花6.……（自擬一點(diǎn)）參考詞匯：classics經(jīng)典作品HowtomakeSuqianacivilizedcitySuqianisnowtryingtobeeacivilizedcity.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Suqianisnowtryingtobeeacivilizedcity.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?Wemustrespectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.Weshouldalsohelpthoseintroubleandbefriendlytothepeoplearoundus.Weshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyclassicsandhelpimproveourselves.Besides,wemustobeytrafficrules.Wemustn’tgoacrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightsarered.What’smore,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Forexample,weshouldseparatewasteintodifferentgroups.Andweshouldplantmoretreesandflowers.Don’twalkonthegrass.Suqianisourhometown.Let’stryourbesttomakeitacivilizedcity.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文倡議書的寫作。寫作時(shí)承接題干所給開頭引出倡議目的；接著要按照題干要求列舉倡議內(nèi)容；最后結(jié)尾發(fā)出呼吁。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主來行文；倡議書書寫主要內(nèi)容為提建議，因此可用表建議的句型，例如Weshould…，Itissuggestedthat…，itwouldbebetterif…等。另外倡議的內(nèi)容通常不止一個(gè)，因此可用inaddition，besides，what’smore等詞來列舉內(nèi)容，可以使文章邏輯清晰，層層遞進(jìn)。（四）社會(huì)不斷在發(fā)展進(jìn)步，成績好已經(jīng)不再是衡量一個(gè)好學(xué)生的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。某校英文校刊正在開展“走進(jìn)新時(shí)代，爭當(dāng)合格中學(xué)生”的大討論，請寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀阌X得除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識之外，我們還應(yīng)該做些什么？提示如下：平時(shí)學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己,學(xué)習(xí)努力，善良，樂于分享；有好的閱讀習(xí)慣，閱讀為我們打開全新世界；環(huán)保綠色生活......(自由發(fā)揮12句)；懂餐桌禮儀，舉止文明......(自由發(fā)揮12句)。空余時(shí)間關(guān)注殘疾人，給他們向公眾展示能力的機(jī)會(huì)；欣賞大自然的美，理解保護(hù)大自然人人有責(zé)。總結(jié)……(12句)要求：1.注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。3.不要逐字翻譯，詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,tolearnwellisnottheonlythingastudentshoulddo.Tobeaqualified(合格的)middleschoolstudent,Ithinkwehavealotofthingstodo.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,tolearnwellisnottheonlythingastudentshoulddo.Tobeaqualified(合格的)middleschoolstudent,Ithinkwehavealotofthingstodo.First,weusuallylearntolookafterourselves.Weshouldworkhardandwearegenerousandeasytosharethingswithothers.Second,weshouldhavegoodreadinghabitstoimproveourselves.Italsoopenupanewworldtous.Third,weliveagreenlife.Wemustnotdroplittercarelessly.Wehadbettergotoschoolonfootorbybicycle.Fourth,weshouldlearnaboutgoodtablemannersandbehavepolitely.Weshouldwaitforeveryonetofinishbeforeyouleavethetable.Weshouldqueue,wemustnotpushinbeforeothers.Moreover,inoursparetime,weshouldcareaboutthedisabledandgivethemachancetoshowtheirabilitiestothepublic.Also,weshouldgoouttoenjoythebeautyofnature.It’sourdutytoprotectnature.Inaword,ifwefollowtheadvice,wewillmakeabigdifferencetoourselves.\Themoreweact,thebetterwewillimprove.（五）現(xiàn)在我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重。作為一個(gè)中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個(gè)“低碳生活”的中學(xué)生。請以“MyLowcarbonLife”為題，寫一篇100字左右的短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。內(nèi)容包括：1.環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重，比如水污染和空氣污染，我們能看到森林被砍伐，垃圾隨地亂扔等。2.你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的？如：每天步行上學(xué)、離開教室及時(shí)關(guān)燈和電扇、充分利用紙張、節(jié)約用水等。3.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。【答案】MylowcarbonlifeTheenvironmentalpollutionisworseandworsetoday.Manytreesarecutdown,andwaterandairarepolluted.AsastudentItrytohavealowcarbonlifetosaveenergyandreducepollution.Firstly,Ioftenwalktoschool.Itcanreduceairpollution.Secondly,Ialwaysturnoffthelightsandfanswhenleavingtheclassroom.Thirdly,Ialwaysmakefulluseofpaperandotherschoolthingsandneverwastewater.Iwishmorestudentstojoinmeandmaketheearthmoreandmorebeautiful.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，描述自己的“低碳生活”。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Theenvironmentalpollutionis……，Itryto……，Itcan……，Iwish……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重，接下來介紹我從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”，最后號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。此處cutdown,trytodosth,turnoff,makefulluseof,makesth+adj.等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。書面表達(dá)之諺語（一）《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》以"Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep"（千里之行始于足下）為題向中學(xué)生征集優(yōu)秀作品，請你用英文完成一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你對諺語的理解；（2）你生活中的一個(gè)事例（如：運(yùn)動(dòng)，樂器，家務(wù)，學(xué)習(xí)等）；（3）你的感悟。注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；（2）內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。AjourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestepHaveyouheardofthesaying"ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep"？Itmeansthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AjourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestepHaveyouheardofthesaying"ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep"？Itmeansthatstartingagoodlifeistheresultofthebeginning.（對諺語的理解）Lastsummerholiday，Iwantedtolearnhowtoswim.Iaskedmyfathertoteachme.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst，Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltunfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.【高分句型一】ThenIbegantoswim，butIcouldn'tswimforwardatall.Itmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove，howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.SlowlyIcouldmovealittle.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.Ifeltquitehappy.（經(jīng)歷是什么）Fromthisexperience，Ihavelearnedalot.Thefirststepisalwaysthehardest.Butifyoudoitinaproperwayandnevergiveup，youwillmakeit.【高分句型二】（學(xué)到了什么）書面表達(dá)之志愿者和慈善活動(dòng)（一）2022年8月江蘇省運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在泰州舉行，不少同學(xué)想加入到省運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者的隊(duì)伍中來。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席王濤，請以“Whatmakesagoodvolunteer”為題，從必備品格、關(guān)鍵能力和相關(guān)知識等方面寫一篇演講稿，闡述成為優(yōu)秀志愿者的條件。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所要求的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。WhatmakesagoodvolunteerHello,everyone!MynameisWangTao.JiangsuProvincialGamesareing.Manystudentswanttobevolunteers.Whatmakesagoodvolunteer?Ithinkweshouldhavenecessaryqualities,keyabilitiesandsomerelated(相關(guān)的)knowledge.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,anyhelpwouldmeanalot.Beingagoodvolunteernotonlygetstohelpothersbutalsoimprovesourselves.Thankyouforlistening!【答案】WhatmakesagoodvolunteerHello,everyone!MynameisWangTao.JiangsuProvincialGamesareing.Manystudentswanttobevolunteers.Whatmakesagoodvolunteer?Ithinkweshouldhavenecessaryqualities,keyabilitiesandsomerelated(相關(guān)的)knowledge.Aboveall,weshouldhavesomenecessaryqualities.First,it’simportantforvolunteerstobekindandfriendly.Second,weneedtobepatientenoughtodoourworkonetoone.Third,weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpothersatanytime.Fourth,asavolunteer,wecan’tbetoocarefultoavoidmakingmistakes.Also,weneedtobegoodatsomekeyabilities,suchasteamwork,municationandorganizingabilities.Asvolunteers,weshouldlearnhowtoworkwithteammembers.We’dbetterknowhowtomunicatewithdifferentpeople.Andweshouldbewellorganizedandsolveproblemswiselybecausewemayfacesomedifficultsituation.What’smore,it’snecessaryforvolunteerstolearnsomerelatedknowledge,likegoodmanners,municationskills,firstaidknowledgeandknowledgeofsavingenergyandprotectingtheenvironment.Inaword,anyhelpwouldmeanalot.Beingagoodvolunteernotonlygetstohelpothersbutalsoimprovesourselves.Thankyouforlistening!【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Whatmakesagoodvolunteer”為題寫一篇演講稿，并從必備品格、關(guān)鍵能力和相關(guān)知識等方面闡述成為優(yōu)秀志愿者的條件。寫作時(shí)，要包括所列列舉的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作主要以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。在寫作時(shí)，要適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，闡述成為優(yōu)秀志愿者的必備品格、關(guān)鍵能力和相關(guān)知識。句子符合英文表達(dá)習(xí)慣，以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句，同時(shí)注意上下文意的銜接，是文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。（二）你是陽光中學(xué)八年級學(xué)生。上周六，你們班在校園里組織了一次愛心義賣活動(dòng)，并將錢款捐給了“希望工程”（ProjectHope）。請你根據(jù)下表信息給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，簡要介紹本次活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀愕捏w會(huì)。WhatyoudidWhatyou’velearned●handoutleaflets●sellthingslike…●…●donatethemoney●municatewithothers●…注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。報(bào)道已給出的部分（見答題卡）不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.報(bào)道需包括上表所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.報(bào)道中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastSaturday,ourclasshadacharitysaleinourschoolforProjectHope.Beforethesale,wehandedoutleafletstomakepeopleknowoursale.Thenwebegantoselldifferentthingslikefoodandtoys.Someweretakenfromourhome,otherswerehandmade.Itwassomuchfun!Ourmonitorevensangasongtoattractmorepeopletobuythem.Wewereveryhappytoseethatallthethingsweresoldoutinashorttime!Then,wegaveawaythemoneytohelpchildreninpoorareas.Ithinkitwasameaningfulexperience.Makingthingshelpsdevelopourlifeskills.Meanwhile,wecanlearnhowtomunicatewithotherswell.Lastbutnotleast,helpingpeoplemakesushappy.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹學(xué)校的愛心義賣活動(dòng)的情況，同時(shí)談一下自己的體會(huì)。具體的內(nèi)容要包含所給的提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段介紹學(xué)校的愛心義賣活動(dòng)的情況；第二段談一下自己的體會(huì)。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。（三）學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站將開展題為“Volunteersaroundus”的征文活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇英語短文投稿。提示：1.Whathavethevolunteersdone?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthem?注意事項(xiàng)：（1）詞數(shù)：90詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；（3）文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。VolunteersaroundusTherearealotofvolunteersaroundus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】VolunteersaroundusTherearealotofvolunteersaroundus.Theydoalotofmeaningfulthingsforusandaskfornothinginreturn.Forexample,somehighschoolandcollegestudentsspendtheirfreetimeasvolunteersinhospital,orphanageorhomesfortheaged.Theyreadbookstothepeopleintheseplaces,ortheyjustvisitthemandlistentotheirproblemstocheerthemup.Beingavolunteernotonlyhelpsothers,butalsoenrichesourlifeexperiences.Ithinkthepersonwhoiswillingtobeavolunteermustbeakindperson,becausetheyarereadytohelpothersanddon’texpectanyrewards.【解析】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，要求我們以“Volunteersaroundus”為題寫一篇英語短文。寫作內(nèi)容包括：我們身邊志愿者通常都做了什么事情，以及是怎樣看待他們的。寫作前可以提前列舉可能會(huì)用到的單詞、短語或句子；寫作時(shí)要符合英語的表達(dá)方式；寫作后注意檢查。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：作文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱為第三人稱，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的三單形式。例文采取三段式的寫作手法：第一段點(diǎn)明寫作的對象；第二段詳細(xì)地介紹志愿者通常會(huì)做什么；第三段寫對身邊志愿者的看法。（四）假如你是學(xué)校的小記者，日前對學(xué)校“最美志愿者”Amy進(jìn)行了采訪。請根據(jù)以下采訪記錄，用英語寫一篇稿件，向讀者介紹她的情況。興趣愛好1.讀書。每天約花一小時(shí)閱讀。2.旅游。去過中國西部地區(qū)。感人事跡1.貧困學(xué)生患重病，為其集資做手術(shù)。2.發(fā)現(xiàn)女童輟學(xué)，聯(lián)系政府幫助其復(fù)學(xué)。未來計(jì)劃1.今年暑假:宣傳環(huán)境保護(hù)，因?yàn)椤?原因自擬)。2.以后有機(jī)會(huì)時(shí):……(內(nèi)容自擬)注意:1.詞數(shù)90詞左右。短文開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。AmywaspresentedtheMostBeautifulYoungVolunteerinourschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AmywaspresentedtheMostBeautifulYoungVolunteerinourschool.Shelikesreading.Shespendsaboutonehourreadingeveryday.Andshelikestravelling.Too.Shehasvisitedmanyplacesinthewestofourcountry.Whenaboyfromapoorfamilygotaseriousdisease.Amyorganizedseveralactivitiestoraisemoneyforhim.Withhersupport,theboywascuredaftertheoperation.Lastyear,shefoundagirlhadtoleaveschool,shewrotetothelocalgovernmentandhelpedthegirlreturntoschool.Thissummer,shedecidestotellpeopletoprotecttheenvironmentbecauseshefindstheenvironmentischangingfortheworse.Ifpossible,shemaytakepartinsomecharitiestoworkformorepeople.Shethinksitwillbemeaningful.【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)以介紹“最美志愿者”為主題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，闡述“最美志愿者”Amy的興趣愛好、感人事跡和未來計(jì)劃。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)等，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中了spend…doing…，thewestofourcountry,Withhersupport，help...do...,decidetodo,takepartin等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、原因狀語從句、條件狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。書面表達(dá)之自我變化和成長的介紹（一）社會(huì)不斷在發(fā)展進(jìn)步，成績好已經(jīng)不再是衡量一個(gè)好學(xué)生的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。某校正在開展“走進(jìn)新時(shí)代，爭當(dāng)合格中學(xué)生”的大討論，以“Weact，weimprove”為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀阌X得除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識之外，我們還應(yīng)該做些什么？提示如下：平時(shí)1.學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己,高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)工作，謙虛，易于合作；2.有好的閱讀習(xí)慣，提高自己；3.注意保護(hù)環(huán)境，不亂丟垃圾，步行或騎自行車上學(xué)；4.懂餐桌禮儀，舉止文明......(自由發(fā)揮12句)空余時(shí)間1.關(guān)注殘疾人，給他們向公眾展示技能的機(jī)會(huì)；2.欣賞大自然的美，理解保護(hù)大自然的重要性。總結(jié)(12句)要求：1.注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。3.不要逐字翻譯，詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,tolearnwellisnottheonlythingastudentshoulddo.Tobeaqualified(合格的)middleschoolstudent,Ithinkwehavealotofthingstodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,tolearnwellisnottheonlythingastudentshoulddo.Tobeaqualified(合格的)middleschoolstudent,Ithinkwehavealotofthingstodo.First,weusuallylearntolookafterourselves.Weshouldworktohighstandardsandwearemodestandeasytoworkwith.Second,weshouldhavegoodreadinghabitstoimproveourselves.Third,weshouldpayattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Wemustnotdroplittercarelessly.Wehadbettergotoschoolonfootorbybicycle.Fourth,weshouldlearnaboutgoodtablemannersandbehavepolitely.Weshouldwaitforeveryonetofinishbeforeyouleavethetable.Weshouldqueue,wemustnotpushinbeforeothers.Moreover,inoursparetime,weshouldcareaboutthedisabledandgivethemachancetoshowtheirskillstothepublic.Also,weshouldgoouttoenjoythebeautyofnatureinordertounderstandtheimportanceofprotectingnature.Inaword,ifwefollowtheadvice,wewillmakeabigdifferencetoourselves.\Themoreweact,thebetterwewillimprove.【