應用文練習寫作訓練：發帖-消防演習假定你是李華，上周你參加了學校組織的消防安全演習，請你在校英文論壇發表一篇帖子，分享此次經歷，內容包括：1.

活動過程；2.

個人感悟。【注意】1.

詞數80左右；2.

可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：消防安全演習firesafetydrill這一類演習/演練類的文章，可以等同為“活動內容”不一樣的活動文章，主要側重還是要在演習/演練的過程描寫，因為此類話題范圍比較小，所以積累這篇消防安全演習以及去年浙江金華二模的急救演練基本上就ok本篇文章雖然是帖子，但是其實就是報道類。第一段：帖子開頭=報道開頭（引出活動）Lastweek,Ihadtheopportunitytoparticipateinafiresafetydrillorganizedbyourschool,

which

provedtobe

aneye-openingand

educational

experienceforme.【最美結構，細節補充】【大眾句式】Lastweekwitnessedmyparticipationin....

第二段：活動過程+個人感悟（也可以放P3）#

過程部分也有兩種寫法：①用我們之前講過的活動類活動套句：講座+演習；②純演習的過程，這個寫法更突出細節描寫的能力。

【寫法2】演習以一聲突如其來的火警開始，標志著演練的開始。隨后，我們被指示迅速而有序地疏散大樓，使用指定的逃生路線。最重要的是要盡量貼近地面行動，以避免吸入煙霧。Thedrillbeganwithanunexpectedfirealarm,signalingthestartoftheexercise.Weweretheninstructedtoevacuatethebuildingquicklyandorderly,usingthedesignatedescaperoutes.Themostimportantpartwastostaylowtothegroundtoavoidinhalingthesmoke.

【寫法1】演習以一場關于消防安全重要性和火災期間應遵循的正確程序的信息性講座開始。接著我們將分組，每個小組被指派了特定任務，如疏散大樓、滅火或提供急救。Thedrillcommencedwithaninformativelectureontheimportanceoffiresafetyandtheproperprocedurestofollowduringafire.Wewerethendividedintogroups,eachofwhichwasassignedaspecifictasksuchasevacuatingthebuilding,extinguishingafire,oradministeringfirstaid.

第三段：個人感悟（注意“個人”）【暗連接】Personally,//Onapersonallevel,Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofbeingpreparedandawareofpotentialdangersandalsoemphasizedthesignificanceofteamworkandcalmnessduringemergencies.throughthisexperience,Irealizedthatfiresafetyisnotjustaboutknowingwhattododuringafire,butalsoabouttakingpreventivemeasurestoavoidone.【24屆江西萍鄉二模】你校最近開展了一次消防演練活動。請你為校英文報寫一份主題為“FocusonFireSafety,CherishLife”的新聞報道，內容包括：1.活動目的；2.

活動過程和感受。【注意】1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；2.參考詞匯：滅火器

fireextinguishers;

消防栓

firehydrants【不錯范文】Inordertoenhancethefiresafety

awareness

andemergencyresponse

capabilities

ofthestudents,

afiredrillthemed

“FocusonFireSafety,CherishLife”

wassuccessfullyconducted

inourschool.Initially,professionalfirefighterswereinvitedtodeliveron-siteexplanations

and

demonstratethecorrectusage

offireextinguishersandfirehydrants.Then,duringthedrill,themomentthealarmsounded,allstudentscoveredtheirmouthsandnoseswithwettowelsbentdownlow,andpromptlyevacuatedtoasafeareainanorderlymanneraccordingtothepredeterminedescaperoute.Throughthisfiredrill,notonlydidweacquireessential

fireprevention

knowledgeandskills

butourfiresafety

awarenesswasfurtherstrengthened.假定你是某國際學校的學生會主席李華，你校即將組織急救演練，請你用英文寫一則通知，內容包括：1.

時間、地點及參與人員；2.

具體內容；3.

注意事項。注意：1.

寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。【下水作文】AnnouncementforMedicalEmergencyDrillInordertopreparestudentsforanyunforeseenmedicalemergenciesthatmayoccurinourdailylives,amedicalemergencydrillwillkickoffnextMondayafternooninthehall.AllGradeOnestudentsarerequiredtoattend.Duringthedrill,variousmedicalemergencyscenarioswillbesimulated,includingheartattacksandinjuries.Inaddition,studentsmaygetthehangofbasicfirstaidskillslikeCPR,stitchingwoundsandbandaging,whichwillequipthemwithessentiallife-savingtechniques.Thesafetyofeveryoneinvolvedisofgreatsignificance.Pleaseremaincalmandfocusedthroughouttheexerciseandfollowtheinstructionsprovidedbythedesignatedpersonnel.TheStudentUnion【參考范文】AnnouncementforMedicalEmergencyDrillAimedatpreparingstudentsformedicalemergenciesthatmayarise,amedicalemergencydrillisscheduledtobeconductedontheschoolplaygroundthisFridayfrom3p.m.to4p.m.Allstudentsandstaffmembersarerequiredtoparticipate.Duringthedrill,amedicalemergencysituationwillbesimulated,wheretheparticipantswillacteitherasfirstaidersorvictims.Thefocuswillbeonprovidingbasicfirstaidforvictimsbeforeemergencyservicesarrive,suchasCPRandHeimlichmaneuver,whichcanmeanthedifferencebetweenlifeanddeath.Pleasenotethatalltheparticipantsmustfollowtheinstructionsoftheemergencypersonnel.Thankyouforyourcooperation.你校英文報將增設主題為“講好中國故事”的欄目，你是欄目負責人李華，請你給外教Kate寫郵件咨詢她對欄目的建議。內容包括：1.介紹設想；2.咨詢建議。【注意】1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請按照如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。比較常規的題目套了新的說法而已。話題還是文化類，要點1：介紹設想→欄目介紹（目的啊內容啊皆可，這不是很常見么）；要點2：咨詢建議（既然你問外教建議，所以一定是跟跨文化有關，所以可以咨詢什么話題的故事外國學生會跟興趣或者如何尋找好的資源網站，或者語言翻譯上的一些求助。總體來說比較簡單，但是站在學生的角度，限時的情況下，客觀題的摧殘下，還是有點小難度，所以朋友們淡定。）第一段：（自我介紹）+背景+寫信目的#自我介紹（題干信息利用）I'mLiHua,inchargeofthenewlyestablishedcolumn"TellingChineseStories"inourschool'sEnglishnewspaper.#寫信目的I'mreachingouttoyouforsomeadviceandinsightstomakethiscolumnexceptional.第二段：介紹設想+咨詢建議#介紹設想≈欄目介紹（內容/目的等等）--用上SSS的介紹套句介【欄目內容】Thenewcolumnisdedicatedtoexploringawidearrayofaspectsof+細節細節1：Chineseculture,history,andcurrentevents.細節2：Chinesetraditionalfestivals,historicalfigures,literatureandarts,technologicalinnovations【目的】我們設想這個欄目不僅是向讀者介紹中國的橋梁，還能夠促進對中國傳統文化和當代生活的更深入理解和欣賞。WeenvisionitasabridgethatnotonlyeducatesourreadersaboutChinabutalsofostersadeeperunderstandingandappreciationforthecountry'sheritageandcontemporarylife.#咨詢建議：句式+內容(注意暗連接不一樣主干主語也要不一樣！)【V1】Asanexpertincross-culturalcommunication,couldyouofferussomesuggestions....?【V2】Tomakeitengagingandeducational,weareseekingyoursuggestions....【具體建議內容2選1或者都選】△1...如何選擇和呈現能夠引起我們廣泛讀者共鳴的故事。....onhowtoselectandpresentstoriesthatwillresonatewithourdiver