SectionAGrammarfocus3a—3cLead-inSuppose(假設(shè)):

YouwentonatriplastSunday.

Pleaseanswerthefollowingquestions.Wheredidyougo?Whodidyougowith?Howdidyougothere?Howwastheweatherthere?Whatdidyoudothere?6.Whatdoyouthinkofyourtrip?……Learningaims:1.Beabletousethewritingstrateges.(能夠運用一些寫作策略)2.Beabletodescribeyourtripwiththerighttense.

(能夠運用正確的時態(tài)描述你的一次旅行)3.Toenjoythefunoflife.

（學(xué)會享受生活的樂趣）

Mytrip

wenttothezoorodeahorseatedeliciousfoodWritingPreparation（寫作準備）visitedthemuseumsawsomeanimalstooksomephotos去散步去購物去釣魚擠牛奶騎馬騎自行車喂雞和某人談話拍照給某人買禮物做游戲去爬山goforawalkgoshoppinggofishingmilkacowrideahorserideabikefeedchickenstalkwithsb.takephotosbuysomegiftsforsbplaygamesclimbthemountains/gotothemountainswentmilkedrodefedtalkedtookboughtplayedclimbedLastSunday,itwas________(晴朗的)．Iwenttovisitmyuncle.Heisa_______(農(nóng)民).Helivesinthe__________(農(nóng)村)farawayfromhere.SoItookthe_____(快的)rain.WhenIgotthere,myuncle______me_____(帶領(lǐng)……參觀)the_____(農(nóng)場).It'sverybig.Ihelpedhimto_____(擠奶)thecowsandIalso_____(喂養(yǎng))thechickens.__________(所有事物)was__________(使人興奮的).Intheafternoon,I____________(去釣魚)alongtheriver.Ididn'tgetbackuntil(直到)itgotsunnyfarmercountrysidefastshowedaroundfarmmilkfedEverythingexcitingWritingPreparation（寫作準備）wentfishing_____(黑暗的).Ididn'tgetanyfish.________(幸運的是),Igota____(禮物)frommy_____(可愛的)cousin._______(總的說來),itwasan__________(極好的)day.darkLuckilygiftlovelyAllinallexcellentAtrip.…placepeopletimefoodweatheractivities寫作策略一：列要點feelingWritingProcess（寫作過程）LastSunday,itwassunny.Iwenttovisitmyuncle.Heisafarmer.Helivesinthecountrysidefarawayfromhere.SoItookthefasttrain.WhenIgotthere,myuncleshowedaroundmethefarm.It'sverybig.IhelpedhimtomilkthecowsandIalsofedthechickens.Everythingwasexciting.Intheafternoon,Iwentfishingalongtheriver.Ididn'tgetbackuntilitgotdark.Ididn'tgetanyfish.Luckily,Igotagiftfrommylovelycousin.

Allinall,itwasanexcellentday.Readforitsstructure:（分）+（總）Tripisalwayshappy.Mylasttripwashappyandinteresting.Lastweekend,Ihadatripwithmyclassmates.wenttoafarm;sawquitealotofcowsandchickens;talkwithfarmer;pickstrawberries….Itwasagreatday.Ireallyhadsomuchfun.thebeginningtheendingmiddlepartHowdidLucytalkabouthistrip?想一想（總）（分）（總）總體概括1.Mylasttripwas__________(真的不錯).Itwasmyfirsttimetosee_________(如此多的)animals.2.Ihada(an)____________________(不錯的/令人興奮的/極好的)tripandIdidmanythings.3.MylasttripwasgreatandI_________(過得很開心).4._________(在我眼里),it’sexciting______________(去旅行).I’msoluckytohavesuchatrip.Iwillneverforgetmylasttrip.寫作策略二：寫好開頭reallygreatsomanygreat/exciting/excellent

hadsomuchfunInmyeyes

togoonatrip5.Ireally_____________________(過得開)onmylasttrip.I’dliketogotothefarmwithmyparentsnexttime.6.Iwastired,butI_____________(覺得開心)

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7.Itwasauseful/meaningfultriptoremember,andI______________________(學(xué)到許多關(guān)于務(wù)農(nóng)的東西).8.Ienjoyedmylasttrip_____itwasreallyexciting.9.Ilikethetripverymuch_____Iwanttogothereagain.10.Itwasexcitingtolearnhowtomakeamodelrobot,___Ireallylikedmytriptothemuseum.hadagoodtime/hadfunfelt/washappylearnedalotaboutfarming寫作策略三：寫好結(jié)尾總結(jié)全文becauseandsobeginningmiddlepartending敘事：1.詳略得當(dāng)2.使用連詞（總）（分）（總）Atrip總體概括,并點題總結(jié)全文，再點題SummaryLet'swrite

回憶一下自己曾經(jīng)去過的一次美好的旅行，并寫一篇短文記錄下來。當(dāng)時天氣怎么樣？和誰一起去的?在旅行中你做了哪些有趣的事？請以Mylasttrip為題寫一篇短文。WritingAssessment:（寫作評價）Groupwork:（組內(nèi)互評）要點:齊全不齊全(差要點_)-1~-2分/個*沒有開頭或結(jié)尾-1~-2分2.語法：正確錯誤（句子結(jié)構(gòu)）-1分/個3.拼寫：正確錯誤（少-0.5多-2）4.書寫：規(guī)范不規(guī)范（大小寫-0.5~-1；標(biāo)點符號-0.5~-1；字跡