讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)寫(xiě)作試題呈現(xiàn)：Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥(niǎo)),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.

SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmy

cupped

hand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.I

removedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,she

madenoattemptto

fly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreature

lookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquickly

outofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriends

walkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.范文1：Afewweekslater,I

wentback

tothefarm.

Asmycarnearedit,

mythoughtsdrifted

backtothemoment

when

Ihadrescuedthe

tinypoorcreature

-

the

hummingbirdfromthespider'sweb.

Icouldn’thelphurryingbacktothedesertedhousewhereitaccidentallyflewinandwastrapped,helplessanddesperate.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leaving

thehouse,I

couldn'thelpbutwonder

how

it

was

gettingon

now.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewhere,

strugglingtosurvive?ThesequestionsweighedheavilyonmymindasI

unwillingly

mademywayto

mycar.

Iwasaboutto

leavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

A

flashofmovementcaughtmy

attention.

ItmustbeHER!

Iturned

around

toseethe

same

hummingbirdhoveringintheair,itstiny

wingsbeating

rapidlyasitsurveyedthescene.Itseemedalmostasifthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspoken

gratitude.Icouldn'thelpbutfeela

surge

of

reliefand

aweatthesightofthis

soundandgrateful

creature,andIknewthatIwouldalways

cherish

the

memories

wesharedasIclimbedinto

my

caranddroveaway.范文2：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Mycarpulledintothetrackleadingtothemilkinghouseandbrakedinfrontofthewindow,whichapparentlyhadbeenfixed.WhenIwasenjoyingtherefreshingscentofgrassalongtheblueberry-linedpath,myfriendcamealongandwesharedaboutthebusyfleetingdays.Thenhementionedthatthehummingbirdpaidregularvisitstothefarm,whichwouldhoveraroundforalongtimebeforeflyingaway.

“Shewouldcometoday,Isuppose.”addedthehostinamockingandexpectantvoice.Anticipationinstantlytriggered,IwaitedforherappearanceasIhaddinner,chatted,andtookawalk,butshedidn’tcome.Myheartseemedto

behollowedout,andIthoughttomyselfjokingly,“AmIwaitingforahummingbird?”Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Thereshewasbesidemycar!Withgreatecstasy,Imovedcloser.Uponseeingmeapproaching,shetookwing,circledaroundmeforawhile,thendiveddownandlandedonmyhand.Justlikebefore,thistinycreaturelookedstraightintomyeyesandchantedacheeringsongasiftocelebrateour“reunion”.Perhapsshehadbeenwaitinghereforsuchalongtimejustto“reunite”withme!SowasI!Immersedinthemerryget-together,Icouldn’thelpticklinghercutelittleheadandcuppedhertomyheart.Withatabonthephone,thehostfrozethiscozymomentforme,whichwouldalwaysremindmeofthismiracleencounterandthatwecanliveinharmonywithdifferentspeciesaslongasweshowsomesympathyandrespect.范文3：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.范文4：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.WhenIhappenedtopassthemilkinghouse,Idecidedtocheckoutthewindowthere.Tomyrelief,thebrokenwindowhadalreadybeenfixed.Yet,thesightofthesceneimmediatelyremindedmeofthehummingbird.Wherewasthehummingbird?Wassheingoodshape?Hopingshewouldn’tgetherselfintoanotherstickysituationanymore!Thoughtslikethesejustkeptfloodinginonme.Tobehonest,Iwassoeagertomeetheragain,eventhoughIknew

itwaslikeamissionimpossibletofindsuchatinyhummingbirdinsuchabigworld.Withamixtureofreliefanddisillusionment,Ipacedmywaytowardsmycarfordeparture.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

She

swooped

downtomyeyelevel,hoveringrealclosetome,gazingatmewithhersparklingeyes.ThensheemittedasqueakysoundasifshehadrealizedthatitwasIwhohadrescuedherfromthestickyspider-webs.Hey!Littlehummer,it’syou!”SoexhilaratedwasIthatIcouldn’thelpexclaiming.Watchingherflappingwingsrapidlyandmakingthehummingsound,

Icouldn’thelpbutreachoutmyhand,

unexpectedly,thistime,shestoppedhoveringbutperchedonmycuppedhand,

withnocautionatall.Myheartlurched,thenasurgeofwarmcurrentfloodedintomyheart.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,Istartedtobelieve

therereallyexistedaspiritualbondbetweenwehumanbeingsandotheranimalsintheworld.范文5：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Aftergreetingmyoldfriendandchattingwithhimforminutes,Ibegan

togoforawalkonthefarm.Ihangedalonealongtheblackberry-linedpath,breathingthefreshairandremarkablesceneryalongside.Suddenly,Isawtheoldmilkinghouseagain.Despitethe

weatheredwalls,anewshiningglasswindowcaughtmyattention,remindingmeofthehummingbirdthathadbeensaved.Ireflectedonthecreaturehoveringinfrontofmeandnotwillingtoflyoff.HowIwishedtoseeheragain!Butsearchingforawhile,itturnedouttobeinvain.Disappointed,Ithoughtofsayinggoodbyetomyfriend.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Flyingupanddown,shehoveredandswirled.

Icouldn'thelplaughingandcalledhergently.Withuncontrollableexcitement,Iwatchedherslowlylandingonmypalm.Shelookedagaindirectlyintomyeyesandletoutsomesqueakycalls.ThoughIcouldn’tunderstandwhatshemeant,Icouldtellfromhervoicethatshewasalsohappytoseemeagain.Ifedhersomefoodandgazedatheruntilshevanishedfrommysight,reluctantbutsatisfied.SunlightdroppeddownthroughthecarwindowasIdrovebackhome.Bathedinthesun,IthoughtwhatamiraculousfriendshipIhadowned.范文6：Afewweekslater,Iwentback

tothefarm.

AfewweekshadpassedsinceIhadstumbleduponthehummingbird,trappedandhelplessintheabandonedhouse.AsIreturnedtothefarm,mythoughts

were

flooded

withmemoriesof

thatday-thewaythebirdhadlookedatmewithsuchgratitude,itstinybodytremblinginmyhandsasIcarefullyfreeditfromthespider'sweb.Icouldn't

shake

thefeelingthatthehummingbirdandIhadformedsomekindofbond,andIwas

drivenby

asenseofcuriosityasIapproachedthehouse,wonderingifthelittlebirdwasstillaroundandifithadmanagedtofindanew

andsecure

home.

Iwas

about

toleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Hearing

afaintbuzzingsound,

I

instantly

turnedtoseethe

familiar

hummingbirdhovering

gracefully

intheair.

Itseemed

asif

the

bird

wastryingto

capture

myattention,itsbeadyeyes

settlingonmine.Ifeltasenseofaweand

pride

washing

overme.Miraculously,

Icouldfeel

its

gratitude

tome

forsavingitslife.

HowcouldI

believethatthislittlecreaturehadrememberedmeandsoughtmeoutto

bit

farewell?

Itwasatrulyheartwarmingmomentandonethat

wouldnevervanish.范文7：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Strollinguptheblueberry-linedpathtowardthefarm,Icouldnothelpbutrecallthehummingbirdincidentofmylastvisit.Didshemakeitsafelybacktohernest?WouldIbeblessedenoughtohaveanothermagicalencounterwithher?Intentionallyornot,Ipassedthemilking-house,whereIfoundthebrokenwindowperfectlyrepaired.Itwasarelieftoknowthatnootherpoorcreaturewouldbetrappedinside.Duringthecookout,Iaskedmyhostsifthehummingbirdhadreturned.Theyshruggedtheirshoulders,leavingmealittledisappointed.Withthesettingofthesun,myexplorationsonthefarmweredrawingtoaclose.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

ThemomentIopenedthecardoor,Iheardafamiliarsqueakingcall.Itwasthehummingbirdhoveringbeforeme!Amazed

beyondwords,Iremainedtongue-tiedforagoodwhile.Meantimethedearlittlebirdkepthovering,movingnearerandnearer,untilshewaswithinafewinchesofmyface.Gracefullybuzzing,shelookedmestraightintheeyeagain,asiftryingtoconveysomething.Aftercirclingaroundme,thebeautifulhummingbirddisappearedintothesunset.MyfriendsandIweredumbfounded,unabletoexplainwhathadhappened.Butonething

wasforsure-thislittlebirdmadealastingimpressiononmethatwillwarmmyheartforyearstocomeandremindmethatevenasmallactofkindnesscanmakeahugediffer