G8(A)Unit6OurNewYear’sresolutionsWriting2021/5/91Topic(主題):plans（計劃）Unit6I’mgoingtostudycomputerscienceLearninggoals(學習目標):1.掌握以人物思想、情緒、行為為線索的記敘文的寫作方法2.能用begoingto/planto/expectto/tryone’sbesttodo/cometrue/inaword談論未來的生活計劃與愿望

2021/5/92Task2MyNewYear’sresolutionsNewyeariscoming.Herearemyresolutionsforthenewyear.

First,I’mgoingtolearnsinging,soIamgoingtotakesinginglessons.Then,I’mgoingtodomoresportsandeatmorehealthierfoodbecauseIexpecttokeepfit.Next,Iwanttoimprovemyrelationshipwithmyfamily,soI’mgoingtotalkwiththemmoreoften.Finally,I

plantoimprovemyteachingskills,soIamgoingtolearnmorefromothers.Inaword,Ihopemynewyear’sresolutionswillcometrue.2021/5/931.審題——想一想，填一填。審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時態：_______________________審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時態：_______________________第一人稱一般將來時記敘文2021/5/94OutlineBeginning

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Differentkindsofresolutions—Hopeandexpectation—AboutNewYearOutline文章結構2021/5/95Resolutionsaboutself-improvementimprovingphysicalhealthimprovingrelationshipwithfamilyandfriendsdoingbetteratschool/jobHow?

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What?2021/5/96Task4Discussingroup,andwriteresolutionsunderthefollowingheading.1.Resolutionsforself-improvement:____2.Resolutionsforimprovingphysicalhealth:_________3.Resolutionsforimprovingrelationshipwithfamily/friends:__________4.Resolutionsfordoingbetteratschool:_____________2021/5/97Task4Writing

在新年來臨之際，為了提高和完善自我，制定新年計劃是有意義的。請你以“OurNewYear’sresolutions”為題，寫一篇80左右的短文來介紹你一家的新年決心。

1.內容合理，符合實際，可適當發揮

2.語句順暢，行文連貫

3.不能出現真實姓名2021/5/981.審題——想一想，填一填。審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時態：_______________________審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時態：_______________________第一人稱一般將來時記敘文2021/5/99OutlineBeginning

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Iamgoingto/planto…..WhatHowWhy—Hopeandexpectation—AboutNewYear2.Outline文章結構……2021/5/910Whilewriting

3.寫一寫:寫初稿2021/5/9114.查一查:請根據以下提示，檢查并修改自己的文章。1.篇章方面：布局是否完整？邏輯是否合理？要點是否齊全/豐富？2.句子方面：主謂是否一致？時態語態是否正確？連詞使用是否正確？句式是否多樣化化？是否用到好詞好句？3.詞語方面：代詞的主格，賓格等形式是否正確？動詞搭配/形式是否正確？名詞單復數是否正確？4.細節方面：單詞拼寫、標點符號、大小寫是是正確？2021/5/912請和同伴交換習作，依據以上提示和下列評價表，相互欣賞與修改習作，然后給對方的習作打分。

修改習作時可使用這些符號：優美句子～；漏詞∧；錯處：○；刪除／；語法錯誤G；

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2021/5/913項目標準自我評價同伴評價教師評價結構（3分）段落合理（2分）銜接自然（1分）內容（8分）你和家人的新年計劃（2分）制定相應計劃的目的（2分）如何實施計劃（2分）拓展合理（2分）語言（3分）詞匯豐富（1分）句法正確，語言優美（2分）卷面（1分）書寫工整2021/5/914ShowTime2021/5/915Hello，everyone.HereareourplansforthecomingNewYear.Atfirst,I'mgoingtostudyhardertogetbettergrades.I'mgoingtohelpmymumdohouseworkbecauseIwanttoimprovemyrelationshipswithmyfamily.Then,mysisterexpectstokeephealthy，sosheisgoingtoeathealthierfoodanddomoreexercise.myparentshavetheirNew

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resolutions,too.Myfatherlikesplayingtheguitar，soheisgoingtotakeguitarlessonseveryweekend.Asformymum,sheisgoingtodomorereadingtoknowwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.Allinall,wewilltryourbesttomakeourNewYear'sresolutionscometrue.本文緊扣題目要求，開門見山，從家庭不同成員的新年計劃入手。用了Atfirst,then,also,asfor,Allinall等詞連接上下文。計劃制定合理，闡述清晰，邏輯分明，首尾呼應。表達了他們制定相應計劃的目的，并說明了將如何實施計劃，內容充實，句式豐富。2021/5/9