Unit7It’sraining!單元話題滿分范文必背1．寫一篇以“TheWeatherinMyHometown”為題的短文，介紹你家鄉(xiāng)的天氣。注意：1.書寫工整，語句通順，連貫。2.字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheWeatherinMyHometownHello,everyone!I’mfromNanchang.Doyouknowwhattheweatherislikehere?Letmetellyou!Inspring,theweatherchangesalot.Sometimesit’swarm,andsometimesit’scold.Insummer,it’shot.ButIlikehotweatherbecauseIlikeswimming.Autumnisverynice.Itisnottoohotortoocold.Iusuallygoclimbinginsuchweather.Inwinter,it’scoldandsometimesitissnowy.Ioftenmakesnowmenwithmyfriendswhenitsnows.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“TheWeatherinMyHometown”為題，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的天氣。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可以從四季不同的天氣來描述，介紹四季的不同以及自己的偏愛并說明原因。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。2．在夏季，你的家鄉(xiāng)天氣怎么樣？人們?cè)谶@樣的天氣里都在做什么？請(qǐng)寫一篇介紹你們家鄉(xiāng)天氣的短文。注意事項(xiàng)：(1)80詞左右。(2)意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。(3)請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:It’ssummernow.Theweatherinmyhometownisveryhotandrainy.Soitisverywet.Peoplearewearingsunglassesandcoolclothes.Inthepark,myclassmatesandIarehavingagoodtime.Somegirlsaresinginganddancing.Someboysareplayingsoccer.IamswimminginariverandmybestfriendTomistakingphotos.Alittleboyiseatinganicecream.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中介紹家鄉(xiāng)的天氣，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“介紹家鄉(xiāng)天氣”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“夏季家鄉(xiāng)天氣怎么樣和人們?cè)谶@樣的天氣里都在做什么”兩個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveagoodtime玩得開心②takephotos拍照[高分句型]IamswimminginariverandmybestfriendTomistakingphotos.（and連接并列句）3．假如你是李明，是學(xué)校的播音員，你每天為學(xué)校播報(bào)天氣信息，下面表格列出了三天的天氣，請(qǐng)為大家播報(bào)。星期FridaySaturdaySunday天氣建議多云，天氣涼爽，適合課后進(jìn)行室外活動(dòng)（如打籃球）雨天，可以在家做家庭作業(yè)，幫父母做家務(wù)，和爺爺下象棋天氣晴朗，適合和家人去公園游玩參考詞匯：cloudy,cool,playbasketball,rainy,stay,dohousework,playchess,sunny,park要求：1.詞數(shù):60詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.必須包括表格內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.語句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)正確；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。Goodmorning,boysandgirls!I’mLiMing.NowI’dliketotellyoutheweatheronFriday,SaturdayandSunday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyouforyourlistening!【答案】例文Goodmorning,boysandgirls!I’mLiMing.NowI’dliketotellyoutheweatheronFriday,SaturdayandSunday.It’scloudyonFriday.Soit’scool.It’sagoodtimetoplaybasketballafterclass.ButonSaturday,it’sarainyday.Youcanstayathometodoyourhomework.Andyoucanhelpyourparentstodohousework.Thenyoucanplaychesswithyourgrandfather.OnSunday,it’sasunnyday.Youcangototheparkwithyourfamily.That’sall.Thankyouforyourlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容為大家播報(bào)天氣情況；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，采用第二人稱口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：引起同學(xué)注意，播報(bào)天氣；第二段：具體闡述星期五到星期日的天氣狀況以及相關(guān)的建議；第三段：總結(jié)全文，感謝收聽。4．假如你是李華，你在美國的筆友Peter來信，詢問你廣州四季的天氣情況，以及哪個(gè)季節(jié)最適合來廣州旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示給他回一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)提示：1.冬季稍寒但時(shí)間短；2.春季的廣州潮濕多雨，可以看到各種花；3.夏季稍稍炎熱，陽光充足，偶爾會(huì)有臺(tái)風(fēng)；4.秋季涼爽干燥，總是有好天氣，旅游最舒服；5.廣州很漂亮，期待很快能在廣州見到他。注意：1.參考詞匯：臺(tái)風(fēng)(typhoon)；2.詞數(shù)：70詞左右(郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。DearPeter,I’msogladtoreceiveyourletter.Youknow,GuangzhouisinthesouthofChina._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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Bestwishestoyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,I’msogladtoreceiveyourletter.Youknow,GuangzhouisinthesouthofChina.TherearefourseasonsinGuangzhou—spring,summer,autumnandwinter.Winterisalittlecoldbutit’sveryshort.Guangzhouiswetandrainyinspring.Youcanseeallkindsofflowerswhenyoucome.Summerisalittlehotandsunny,butsometimestherearetyphoons.Autumniscoolanddry,andthereisalwaysgoodweather.It’sthemostcomfortabletimeforyoutotravel.Guangzhouisbeautiful.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinGuangzhousoon.Bestwishestoyou!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給中文提示，給美國的筆友Peter回一封郵件，介紹廣州的天氣情況以及哪個(gè)季節(jié)最適合來廣州旅游。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹廣州的冬季和春季天氣情況；第二步，介紹廣州的夏季和秋季天氣情況；第三步，最后表達(dá)對(duì)Peter到來的期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①alittle有點(diǎn)②allkindsof各種各樣的③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①TherearefourseasonsinGuangzhou（therebe句型的使用）②It’sthemostcomfortabletimeforyoutotravel.（動(dòng)詞不定式作定語）5．假如你是北京一所中學(xué)的學(xué)生李明，你的美國網(wǎng)友Gina給你寫了一封電子郵件，詢問你北京一年里的天氣狀況。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)電子郵件。要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，意思連貫；2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)不少于60，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearGina,Thanksforyoure-mail.YouaskmetheweatherinBeijing.Soletmetellyouabouttheweatherhere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatabouttheweatherinyourhometown?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiMing【答案】參考范文DearGina,Thanksforyoure-mail.YouaskmetheweatherinBeijing.Soletmetellyouabouttheweatherhere.InBeijing,therearefourdifferentseasonsinayear.SpringinBeijingiswarm.Butit’snotlong.Insummerit’shot,anditoftenrains.Weusuallygoswimminginthepool.Inautumn,theweatherisverydryandcool.Inwinter,it’scoldandsnowy.Peoplehereareinterestedinskiingandskating.ButIlikeplayinginthesnowandmakingsnowmen.Ithasalotoffun!Whatabouttheweatherinyourhometown?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于電子郵件作文寫作，寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭。內(nèi)容主要是介紹北京一年的天氣狀況，即春夏秋冬四個(gè)季節(jié)的主要特色。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在介紹一年的天氣時(shí)，應(yīng)該按照季節(jié)的順序春、夏、秋、冬的主要特色來介紹，可以適當(dāng)?shù)慕榻B這個(gè)季節(jié)的一些活動(dòng)，使文章更豐滿。6．假如你是李敏，你的美國筆友Danny告訴你，他很喜歡中國，想了解中國的四季情況以及人們?cè)诓煌竟?jié)喜歡從事的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給Danny寫一封信，介紹有關(guān)情況。提示：1.季節(jié)和月份；2.不同季節(jié)的天氣狀況；3.人們?cè)诓煌竟?jié)喜歡從事的活動(dòng)。要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.詞數(shù)：不少于60詞。DearDanny,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMin【答案】例文DearDanny,TherearefourseasonsinayearinChina.Theyarespring,summer,autumnandwinter.March,AprilandMayarespringmonths.It’swarmandwindy.Wecanflykitesinspring.June,JulyandAugustaresummermonths.Theweatherisveryhot.Weliketoswimintheriver.September,OctoberandNovemberareautumnmonths.Theweatheriscoolandcloudy.Weliketopickapplesonthefarm.December,JanuaryandFebruaryarewintermonths.It’scoldandsnowy.Weliketoplayinthesnow.HowistheweatherinCanada?Whatdoyouliketodo?Canyouwritetomesoon?Yours,LiMin【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。要求向筆友Danny介紹中國的四季情況以及人們?cè)诓煌竟?jié)喜歡從事的活動(dòng)。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要分別介紹中國的四季和相應(yīng)的月份，介紹不同季節(jié)的天氣狀況以及人們?cè)诓煌竟?jié)喜歡從事的活動(dòng)。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。7．假設(shè)你是簡(Jane)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給薩姆(Sam)寫一封回信介紹你的假期(holiday)。內(nèi)容提示：1．有關(guān)假期的地點(diǎn)、天氣和交通方式等；2．你的感受。寫作要求：1．詞數(shù)60左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．信息內(nèi)容完整，語句連貫。DearSam,Thanksforyourletter.Lastholiday,I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jane【答案】例文：DearSam,Thanksforyourletter.Lastholiday,Iwenttoabeachwithmyfamily.Itwasanexcellentvacation.Iwenttherebytrainandmytraintripwasrelaxing.Thebeachwasverybeautiful.Itwashotandrainythosedays.Ididn’tliketheweather.Luckily,peopletherewereveryfriendlyandthefoodwasdelicious.Itastedshrimpsandcrabs.Ihopetogothereagain.Yours,Jane【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述自己的假期，具體介紹地點(diǎn)、天氣情況、交通方式、假期具體的經(jīng)歷及自己的感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述自己的假期經(jīng)歷，要敘述完整，條理清晰。8．假定你是李明，你的筆友Bill打算暑假來看望你，他來信問及你所在城市的情況，請(qǐng)你按要求用英語給他寫一封回信。

要求：（1）介紹你所在城市夏天的天氣情況；（2）邀請(qǐng)他住你家，介紹你家的家規(guī)；（3）說說暑假你們能夠干些什么。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)60左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。DearBill,

I’mhappyyouwillcometomycity._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【答案】DearBill,

I’mhappyyouwillcometomycity.Youareverywelcometovisitmyhouse.MyfamilyisatypicaltraditionalChinesefamily.Therearesomerulesinmyhouse,forexample,Ihavetogotobedbeforeteno’clock.

Don’tfightwithothers,getalongwiththemandsoon.Now,letmetellyoutheweatherhere.Usually,thesummerhereisfromJunetoSeptember.Itisveryhotinsummerhere,butintheearlymorningit’scool.Sowecangosightseeingaroundinthecityinthemorningandtasteavarietyofdeliciousfood.Intheafternoon,werelaxinthehouseorgoswimminginthepool.Atnight,wecanwatchTVorplaycomputergamestogether.Ihopeyoucanenjoythesummerhere.Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。作為李明，你的筆友Bill打算暑假來你的城市看望你，要求你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示內(nèi)容，用英語給他寫一封回信，介紹你所在城市的一些情況；注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一、第三人稱來展開寫作，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。9．你的筆友Bill打算在暑假期間來看望你，并來信問及你所在城市的天氣情況。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，介紹一下你們城市夏天的天氣情況。要求：內(nèi)容合理，語句通順；70詞左右；信的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearBill,I’mhappyyouwillcometoBeijing.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________