寫作

---基于結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語言的視角

寫作11.培養(yǎng)應(yīng)用文寫作邏輯思維。2.熟悉應(yīng)用文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)。3.牢記應(yīng)用文語言表達(dá)特點(diǎn)。4.精選寫作題材與范文分析。1.培養(yǎng)應(yīng)用文寫作邏輯思維。20102應(yīng)用文的評(píng)分原則、細(xì)節(jié)和樣文賞析從結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容、語言的視角應(yīng)對(duì)應(yīng)用文寫作03如何改進(jìn)你的應(yīng)用文寫作0102應(yīng)用文的評(píng)分原則、細(xì)節(jié)和樣文賞析從結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容、語言的3假定你是李華，計(jì)劃組織一次郊游，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.參加者；2.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；3.活動(dòng)：登山、野餐等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80字左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。邀請(qǐng)信2017年6月浙江省高考應(yīng)用文假定你是李華，計(jì)劃組織一次郊游，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Chris寫4一.應(yīng)用文的總評(píng)分原則與細(xì)節(jié)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)男形慕Y(jié)構(gòu):第一部分應(yīng)為問候語和寫信目的第二部分mainbody活動(dòng)內(nèi)容第三部分表達(dá)對(duì)方應(yīng)邀的愿望完整的內(nèi)容、豐富的語言和句式詞數(shù)少于60或多于100,扣2分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)遺漏，或篡改要點(diǎn)，降一檔標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)大面積不規(guī)范,扣1-2分書寫較差,影響交際,可將分?jǐn)?shù)降一檔格式不對(duì),扣一分（一）總評(píng)分原則應(yīng)用文的總分為15分,這一次的均分去零分卷后為9.1。（二）具體評(píng)分細(xì)節(jié)一.應(yīng)用文的總評(píng)分原則與細(xì)節(jié)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)男形慕Y(jié)構(gòu):（一）總評(píng)分原5一.應(yīng)用文的樣文賞析DearChris,

[I'mLiHuaandI'mwritingtoextendmyearnestinvitationforyourparticipationintheoutingorganizedbyme.]Aimingtogainabetteracquaintancewithexoticculture,Ihaveinvited

teenagersIknowallovertheworldtogetactivelyinvolvedin

thisevent.

Forthesakeofconvenience,theoutingfallsinHongKongat9a.m,onJuly6th.Brimfulofintriguingactivitieslikeclimbingandhavingapicnic,thisouting

isboundtobeahugesuccess.Aresponseatyourearliestconveniencewillbehighlyappreciated!

Yours,

LiHua

14分行文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰;適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)使內(nèi)容完整；語言表達(dá)能力強(qiáng);詞匯和句式豐富;完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的開頭段：自我介紹+寫信目的適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)添加：活動(dòng)的目的、意義（第二句）中間段：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容（語言表達(dá)地道、詞匯豐富、有理有據(jù)、行文流暢）結(jié)尾段：表達(dá)愿望（恰當(dāng)使用應(yīng)用文套話）一.應(yīng)用文的樣文賞析DearChris,14分行文結(jié)6一.應(yīng)用文的樣文賞析DearChris,I'mLiHua.Iintendtoorganizeatrip.I'llinvitemyfriendswhoyou'llgetonwellwith.WewillgotoHuangshannest

Wednesdaywherewecanvisit

beautifulnaturalviews.Ofcourse,theactivitieswhich

arefantastic.Forexample,climbingthemountainandhavingapicnic.Atthesametime,we'lltakephotosinordertomemoryourtrip.Ibelieveifyoujoinus,you’lllovetheviewsfromthebottomofyourheart.I'mlookingforwardtotravelingwithyou!

Yours,LiHua

行文結(jié)構(gòu)比較完整，若寫信目的自成一段可使文章結(jié)構(gòu)一目了然；覆蓋了主要內(nèi)容;有些語言方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解;整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的;8分一.應(yīng)用文的樣文賞析行文結(jié)構(gòu)比較完整，若寫信目的自成一段可71.應(yīng)用文的分類2.應(yīng)用文的特點(diǎn)3.應(yīng)用文寫作中存在的問題4.解決的策略及實(shí)踐二、應(yīng)用文寫作

---基于結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語言的視角

二、應(yīng)用文寫作

8失物招領(lǐng)尋物啟事倡議書請(qǐng)假條告知函發(fā)言稿（演講稿、

致辭等）通知（書面、口頭）報(bào)道……（一）、應(yīng)用文的分類（Classification）投訴信感謝信邀請(qǐng)信道歉信求助信求職信建議信推薦信申請(qǐng)信祝賀信詢問信失物招領(lǐng)（一）、應(yīng)用文的分類（Classificatio9（二）、應(yīng)用文的特點(diǎn)Clearinstructure（結(jié)構(gòu)清晰）Substantialincontent（內(nèi)容充實(shí)）Appropriateinlanguage（語言得體）（二）、應(yīng)用文的特點(diǎn)Clearinstructure10（三）、應(yīng)用文寫作中存在的問題1.卷面不潔2.文體不辨3.格式不妥4.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂5.讀者不明6.要點(diǎn)不全7.過度添加8.語法錯(cuò)誤9.套語連篇10.觀點(diǎn)缺乏（三）、應(yīng)用文寫作中存在的問題1.卷面不潔6.要點(diǎn)不全11內(nèi)容完整性格式規(guī)范性語言得體性應(yīng)用文內(nèi)容完整性格式規(guī)范性語言得體性應(yīng)用文12問題分析卷面不潔2.文體不辨3.格式不妥4.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂5.要點(diǎn)不全6.過度添加7.觀點(diǎn)缺乏8.語法錯(cuò)誤9.套語連篇10.觀點(diǎn)缺乏結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容語言問題分析卷面不潔5.要點(diǎn)不全結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容語言13例1：

假定你是李明。你校邀請(qǐng)了英國伯明翰大學(xué)的ElliotSmith教授來做關(guān)于莎士比亞生平的講座。請(qǐng)你作為主持人向參加講座的同學(xué)用英語介紹講座情況。內(nèi)容包括：

1.講座的教授和講座的內(nèi)容；

2.講座后有自由交流時(shí)間；

3.對(duì)教授的講座表示歡迎。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：伯明翰大學(xué)：theUniversityofBirmingham主持稿例1：假定你是李明。你校邀請(qǐng)了英國伯明翰大學(xué)14例2：

假設(shè)你是淘寶店“Beauty&theBeast”的店主張林，因?yàn)榻o客戶李華發(fā)錯(cuò)了兩件襯衫的尺碼和顏色，特向李華書面道歉，愿意提供換貨服務(wù)，并且打八折優(yōu)惠以彌補(bǔ)過失。內(nèi)容包括：

1.自我介紹；

2.誠懇道歉并說明原因；

3.愿意提供免郵費(fèi)服務(wù)和八折優(yōu)惠；

4.如果對(duì)方不同意換貨，退貨也可以。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。道歉信例2：假設(shè)你是淘寶店“Beauty&t151.卷面不潔，字跡不清1.卷面不潔，字跡不清16高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作-課件17高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作-課件18解決對(duì)策：每天一練，日見效果閱卷時(shí)的視覺疲勞,速度快，如卷面的不美觀，書寫差，有時(shí)對(duì)作文成績的影響不是1-2分，而是5-6分，所以要把書寫放到第一點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)。解決對(duì)策：每天一練，日見效果19高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作-課件20行文結(jié)構(gòu)2.文體不辨3.格式不妥4.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂行文結(jié)構(gòu)2.文體不辨212.文體不辨2.文體不辨22稱呼署名3.格式不妥稱呼署名3.格式不妥23高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作-課件244.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂無分段4.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂無分段25解決對(duì)策：仔細(xì)審題，明確格式分分段落，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰投訴信感謝信邀請(qǐng)信道歉信求助信求職信建議信推薦信申請(qǐng)信祝賀信詢問信請(qǐng)假條告知函倡議書書信、郵件、假條等DearXXX,(稱呼)

Yours,(落款)

XXX

解決對(duì)策：仔細(xì)審題，明確格式投訴信書信、郵件、假條等26失物招領(lǐng)(標(biāo)題)

Found

(署名)尋物啟事(標(biāo)題)

Lost(署名)書面通知(標(biāo)題)

Notice

(署名)出通知單位/個(gè)人口頭通知Ladiesandgentlemen,/Boysandgirls/……,mayIhaveyourattentionplease?

發(fā)言稿(演講稿\致辭)Ladiesandgentlemen,/Fellowstudents/Boysandgirls/……Thanksforyourlistening.

報(bào)道(標(biāo)題)征文（標(biāo)題）ContributionWanted失物招領(lǐng)(標(biāo)題)Found27書信的結(jié)構(gòu)開頭段：

（自我介紹）背景介紹+寫信目的

IamLiHua,aseventeen-year-oldstudent(from…seniorschool).Ihavelearned/beeninformedthat…

NowIamwritingtoapplyfortheposition/expressmygratitude…中間段：

具體問題（主題句）+具體分析（拓展句）

TherearefourmainreasonsthatIamqualifiedforthejob.Firstly,…Besides,…What’smore,…Additionally,…Herearesomedetailsfortheactivity.I’dlikeyoutoknowhowmuchyour…meanttome.Ireallyfinditextremelyhardtodo…Hopefullyyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Ihavebeenlookingforwardtodoing…However,…IbelieveifyouwereI,youwouldmakethesamechoice.Isincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.結(jié)尾段：客套話

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanwritemebackassoonaspossible.Iwouldfeelgreatlyhonoredifyou…(求職信)(邀請(qǐng)信)(感謝信)(求助信)(建議信)(道歉信)書信的結(jié)構(gòu)開頭段：（自我介紹）背景介紹+寫信目的中間段：28內(nèi)容完整5.要點(diǎn)不全6.過度添加7.觀點(diǎn)缺乏內(nèi)容完整5.要點(diǎn)不全295.要點(diǎn)不全內(nèi)容包括：

1.自我介紹；

2.誠懇道歉并說明原因；

3.愿意提供免郵費(fèi)服務(wù)和八折優(yōu)惠；

4.如果對(duì)方不同意換貨，退貨也可以。5.要點(diǎn)不全內(nèi)容包括：306.過度添加Wewillgatheratourschoolgatebefore8.am,whichislocatedonChongShiRoad.Pleasegettoourschoolgatebefore8:00am,whichmaybeprettyearlyforbothteachersandstudentsatweekend.YoumaytakeacamerawithyoubecauseI’mprettysurethattheawesomeviewonthetopofthemountainwilldeeplyimpressyouandyouwillhaveastrongdesiretorecordit.6.過度添加Wewillgatheratours31學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)最近經(jīng)常有學(xué)生違反學(xué)校規(guī)定，通過美團(tuán)、餓了么等手機(jī)APP訂購?fù)赓u。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)擬一份書面通知。重申禁令陳述禁令原因呼吁同學(xué)樣自覺遵守學(xué)校規(guī)定beharmfultohealthbreaktheschoolrules7.千篇一律，缺少獨(dú)到觀點(diǎn)學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)最近經(jīng)常有學(xué)生違反學(xué)校規(guī)定，通過美團(tuán)、餓了么等手機(jī)A32解決對(duì)策：相互探討，相互借鑒；

仔細(xì)思索，考慮全面；觀點(diǎn)深刻，見解獨(dú)特；解決對(duì)策：相互探討，相互借鑒；33陳述禁令原因-----觀點(diǎn)收集：1.點(diǎn)外賣需要手機(jī)，將手機(jī)帶到學(xué)校來不僅會(huì)分散我們的學(xué)習(xí)注意力，還會(huì)造成其他的負(fù)面影響。Toordertakeout,youmusttakemobilephonesintocampus,whichwilldistractourattentionfromstudy,andexertothernegativeimpactonstudents.2.外賣的食品安全不能得到保障，而學(xué)校食品都是經(jīng)過權(quán)威部門檢測(cè)，可以放心食用。Thesafetyoftakeoutcan’tbeguaranteed,whilethefoodprovidedbyourschoolcanteensarehealthytoeat,becauseitisinspectedbyauthorities.3.點(diǎn)外賣不僅浪費(fèi)時(shí)間還浪費(fèi)金錢，因?yàn)閷W(xué)校的飯菜價(jià)格合理，口味多樣，品種豐富。It’sawasteoftimeandmoneytoordertakeoutbecauseschoolcanteensprovidefoodwhichisrichintastesandvariety.

陳述禁令原因-----觀點(diǎn)收集：344.外賣往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很難降解，會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境造成污染。Takeoutisusuallykeptinplasticcontainers,whichishardtobreakdownanddoesharmtotheenvironment.送外賣的人員隨意進(jìn)出校園,會(huì)給校園管理增加困難,對(duì)學(xué)生的安全也是一種潛在的危險(xiǎn).Thefactthatthedeliverymenoftakeoutenterourcampusatwilladdstothedifficultyofourschoolmanagement.Besides,itisapotentialdangertothesafetyofstudents.4.外賣往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很難降解，會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境造成污染35Notice

Recently,somestudentshaveorderedfastfoodonAPPssuchasMeituan,Eleme.TheirbehaviorshaveviolatedtheschoolrulessoI’mheretorestatetherestrictionthatorderingtakeoutisbanned.

Deliciousasfastfoodis,studentswilllosetheirbalanceofdietsiftheytakelong-termtakeout.Moreover,thesourceoffoodcan’tbeguaranteedsinceproducersaddharmfulsubstancestothefoodforhigherprofit.What’smore,somethievesmaypassthemselvesoffasthedeliverymanwhichisathreattostudents’possessionsandsafetyoncampus.Inaword,thebanisbeneficialtoallofyousoIappealtoeveryoneobeyitautomatically.

students’union----陳汪怡

36語言豐富得體地道8.語法錯(cuò)誤9.套語連篇10.不得體不地道語言豐富得體地道8.語法錯(cuò)誤378.語法錯(cuò)誤（母語干擾）twoT-shirtsinwrongsizeandcolorProfessorTuwillcometoourschoolandgiveusalecture,whichiswelcomedbyShaoxingNo.1HiddleSchool’steachersandstudents.時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用；主謂不一致；詞性混用；從句使用中缺乏語法結(jié)構(gòu)；……8.語法錯(cuò)誤（母語干擾）twoT-shirtsinw389.套語連篇Wewillappreciateitifyouareabletojoinusandtakepartinthisconsequentialactivity.First,pleasegettotheschoolgateat8:00am.Afterthatwewillsetouttogetherbybus.Intheend,wewillcomebackat5:00pm.Lastbutnottheleast,youcanbringacameratorecordthehappymoment.Withahistoryof80years,ourschool,whereyouareinnow,isequippedwiththreebuildings.9.套語連篇Wewillappreciateiti39解決對(duì)策：夯實(shí)語言基礎(chǔ)，多實(shí)踐多積累，仔細(xì)研讀范文。解決對(duì)策：夯實(shí)語言基礎(chǔ)，40假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知第十二屆國際未來商業(yè)領(lǐng)袖峰會(huì)（InternetFutureBusinessLeaderSummit）將在上海舉行，并歡迎中學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)你寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。寫作要點(diǎn)：自我介紹（包括英語能力）。參加意圖（增加商業(yè)知識(shí)、提高領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力、加強(qiáng)交流）。希望獲準(zhǔn)。申請(qǐng)信假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知第十二屆國際未來商業(yè)領(lǐng)袖峰會(huì)（I41背景介紹+寫信目的Ireadaboutyourannouncementofthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitpostedontheInternet.Ilearnaboutthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitadvertisedonline./Igettoknow….Iamwritingtoapplyforparticipationinit./Iamwritingtoexpressmydesiretoparticipateinit.2.自我介紹（著重描寫自身優(yōu)勢(shì):英語很棒、交流技能很強(qiáng)、對(duì)商業(yè)很感興趣、有參加此類活動(dòng)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)……）haveagoodcommandofEnglish,speakEnglishfluently,beskilledincommunication,haveexperienceinattendingsuchsummits,beenthusiasticaboutfinancialactivities背景介紹+寫信目的423.申請(qǐng)參加的意圖即活動(dòng)意義（增長商業(yè)知識(shí)、提高領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力、加強(qiáng)交流、積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)、拓寬視野、把中國推向世界、讓世界更加了解中國、搭建中國與世界溝通的橋梁）enrichmybusinessknowledge,myleadershipcanbegreatlyboosted,theactivitycanpromotetheexchangeofviews,accumulateexperience,buildupfriendshipwithpeersofthesameinterestfromallovertheworld，exposeChinatotheworld,enabletheworldtohaveabetterunderstandingofChina4.結(jié)束語（祝愿或希望）Idesirethatmyapplicationcanmeetyourapproval.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.3.申請(qǐng)參加的意圖即活動(dòng)意義（增長商業(yè)知識(shí)、提高領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力、加43DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Ireadaboutyourannouncementofthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitpostedontheInternet.I’mwritingtoapplyforanopportunitytojoininit.

Ithinkmyqualificationscanmeetyourrequirements.TwoyearsofEnglishlearningenablesmetocommunicatefluentlyinEnglish.Inturn,throughthesummit,Icandeepenmyunderstandingofbusiness,improvemyleadershipandcommunicatewithstudentsfromothercountriesaswell.Idohopetobeadmittedtoyoursummit.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Regards,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,44開頭段的好句：Iamwritingtomakeasincererequestforanopportunitytoparticipateinit.Iamwritingtoexpressmygreatdesireforadmissiontoit.Iamwritingtoapplyforaccesstoit./admissiontoit.Ihappenedtoknowthatthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitwouldbeheldinShanghai,whichappealstomeagreatdeal.中間段的好句：EconomyorbusinesshaskeptmespellboundsinceIwasachild.---陶沂希IamdedicatedtolearningEnglishfromchildhoodtokeeppacewithtimes.Sothere’snoproblemformetocommunicatewithnativespeakers.–錢俊珺開頭段的好句：45ItcanbewellprovedbytheprizesIhavegotinthevariousEnglishCompetitionsthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.—方寒ItisnouseshowingoffhowIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,butIdohavenotroublecommunicatinginEnglish.---張豪Remarkablescoresonpapersneversatisfyme.Iholdtheviewthatonlyface-to-facecommunicationcanpromoteslanguageskills.Thatpartlyaccountsformyrequest.---何志臻Withoutdoubt,ifIcouldbeadmittedtothissummit,itwouldbringmesomebenefits.----沈紀(jì)年ItwillbeaperfectplatformwhereIcanenrichmybusinessknowledge,strengthenmyleadershipaswellaspromotemutualunderstandingandcommunication.–鐘澤宇I(lǐng)tcanbewellprovedbythep46AsanEnglishcluborganizer,IhavebeenengagingmyselfinEnglishlearningheartandsoul.Inreturn,IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish.Attendingthesummitwillsurelygetmewellequippedwithbetterleadership.---魯家泊結(jié)尾段的好句：Ibetmyqualificationwillmeetyourrequirements.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.--王詩引Iwillbeobligedtoyouifyouoffermeapreciousopportunitytoattendthesummit.---夏俊豪IwillbemorethangladifIamblessedwiththisopportunity.—桂宇凡AsanEnglishcluborganizer,47三、如何改進(jìn)你的應(yīng)用文寫作Tip1:詞塊的積累Tip2:英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉Tip3:應(yīng)用文可以模板化的一些東西專題教學(xué)---掌握技巧三、如何改進(jìn)你的應(yīng)用文寫作Tip1:詞塊的積累48詞塊的積累(Adv;Adj)

Adv:relyheavilyon;quarrelbitterly；highlysuccessful;reluctantly;

deliberately；beamplyrewarded；equallypleased;Adj:a

rewardingcause;particularlyappealing;amazing;a

remarkableachievement;enjoytremendouspopularity;promptaction;animpressivereminder;(marvelous;distinguished;splendid;decisive;incredible/inevitible;)詞塊的積累(Adv;Adj)Adv:49詞塊的積累(Verb)enablesbtodosth;ensureone'ssuccess;enrichone'sschoollife;encounternumerouschanllenges;enhanceefficiency;refreshone'sspirit/sb;relieveguilt/anxiety/stress;removeobjections/doubt;relaxoneself;restoreone'sconfidence;reassuresb;recallmemories；reveal;replace;containmyfeelings;concealthefact;詞塊的積累(Verb)enablesbtodosth50Noun體貼consideration;

同情sympathy寬恕forgiveness;

慷慨generosity;感激gratitude;

好客hospitality;忠誠loyalty;

分享sharing；容忍tolerance；理解understanding;見解

insight；志向

ambition;執(zhí)著,信奉commitment;勤奮devotion;diligence；毅力

perseverance；persistence熱情passion=enthusiasm=zeal;智慧wisdom;創(chuàng)造creativity;合作cooperation;

新奇的事物

noveltyNoun體貼consideration;51詞塊的積累(詞組)1、提高improve/enhance/promote/2、努力struggle/strive/sparenoefforts/3、得到gain/acquire/obtain/4、提供，給offer/present/grant/provide/supply5、表達(dá)convey/extendone'sgratitudeto...6、實(shí)現(xiàn)achieve/realize/fulfill/attain7、記得bear..inmind/neverfade8、有利于contributeto/makefor/9、影響beaffected/influenced/beimpactedby10、應(yīng)該；besupposedto

期待beexpectedto；一定beboundto

；保證beguaranteedto11、忙于；從事beoccupied/beinvolved/engagedin...12、喚起對(duì)...意識(shí)arouse/evoke/

one'sawarenessof...13、吸引注意力attract/draw/captureone'sattentioncatchone’seye詞塊的積累(詞組)1、提高improve/enhanc52詞塊的積累(詞組)“目的”的表達(dá)式1.inorderto/soasto2.forthepurposeof3.withtheaimof4.inthehopeof5.beaimedat/aimtodo6.bedesignedtodo7.beintendedforsth/sb8.betailoredtosb詞塊的積累(詞組)“目的”的表達(dá)式53詞塊的積累(詞組)“活動(dòng)意義”的表達(dá)式1.enrichafter-classlife2.broadenone’shorizon3.getacquaintancewith4.shortenthedistancebetween…5.haveabetterunderstandingofprofoundculture6.buildupfriendship/confidence7.betteroneself8.promotemutualinteraction9.arouse/provokeone’senthusiasm/interest/passion……詞塊的積累(詞組)“活動(dòng)意義”的表達(dá)式54一、巧用名詞寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)英國朋友Chris參加extendmyearnestinvitationforyourparticipation

早期學(xué)習(xí)英語對(duì)學(xué)生以后的成績提高有幫助。EarlyexposuretoEnglishwillhelpchildrenimprovetheiracademicperformance.e.g.Yourpresenceandblessingswillbehighly/greatlyappreciated.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉一、巧用名詞英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉55二、形容詞作狀語活動(dòng)：登山、野餐等Brimfulofintriguingactivities,like...areboundtobeahugesuccess.（2017浙江高考）保證補(bǔ)交作業(yè)（2106嘉興）Guiltyaboutit,IassurethatIwillaccomplishmyassignmentcarefullyandhanditinassoonaspossible.E.g.Theoldgoatrolled,dead.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉二、形容詞作狀語英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉56三、定語從句(which非限制性定語)teenagersIknow;你設(shè)計(jì)的閱覽室和你留下的英語原著thereadingroomyouelaboratelydesignedandtheEnlgishnovelbooksyouleft未能完成英語老師Mr.Chen布置的作業(yè)而道歉(2016嘉興）Iammorethanapologeticforfailingtoaccomplishthehomeworkyouhaveassigned.說明原因(2016嘉興）Iwasinhospitalwithacontinuousfever,whichthuspreventedmefrombeingengagedinanyacademicactivity.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉三、定語從句(which非限制性定語)英語常用句子的熟悉57四、非謂語theoutingorganizedbymeAimingtogain

....為了豐富學(xué)生的校園生活和激發(fā)學(xué)生寫作的熱情(2106年紹興市適應(yīng)性考試）Toenrichstudents’schoollifeandactivate

theirenthusiasmforwriting,原創(chuàng)篇幅500字的英語小說，反映學(xué)生現(xiàn)實(shí)生活A(yù)llcontestantsarerequiredtocreatea500-wordEnglishstory,

reflectingstudents’truelife.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉四、非謂語英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉58五、It作形式主語或形式賓語句型保證補(bǔ)交作業(yè)ItismypromisethatIamboundtofinishitintime.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldgrantmeanothertwodaysforthetask能跟你在一起是我們的榮幸。Therefore,itisourhonortobeaccompaniedwithyou.六、虛擬Without/Butforyourgenerousandtimelyhelp,Iwouldn'thavemadesuchprogress.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉五、It作形式主語或形式賓語句型英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉59七、with+賓語+非謂語(狀語）或者獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Withthefestivalapproaching,矛盾解決，我們的友誼得到加強(qiáng)。Conflictssolved/Withconflictssolved,ourfriendshipstrengthened.Thecohesionoftheclasswasenhanced,everyone’spotentialmotivateda