一?原文Allenwasplayinginhisroom.Heheardafamiliarchirpingandrustlingfromthecageinthebedroomcorner.ItwashisbelovedBlueFinch,namedMary.Theboyhadcaredforthebirdsincehewassix,agiftfromhismotherforgraduatingfromkindergartenandenteringprimaryschool.Now,at12yearsold,Allenhadjustrecentlycelebratedhisprimaryschoolgraduationandwasabouttotakeanotherstepinhislifejourneytowardjuniorhighschool.Forthepastsixyears,Marywashisconstantcompanionandclosestfriend.Ashegrewup,Allenfounditdifficulttomakefriendsorbeclosetoothers.Havinghadtomovearoundmanytimesandtransferschoolsduetohisfather'sworkinthemilitary,Allenneverfeltlikehetrulybelongedinanyoneplace.Healwaysknewitwouldn'tbelongbeforehewouldhavetomoveyetagain.Thestressandpressureofaconstantlymobilelifealsoledtostrainandpressureathome,leadingtoloudargumentsandfightsbetweenhismotherandfatherwhichhecouldhearfrombehindcloseddoors.But,throughoutallofthis.Allen'sclosestfriendandcompanion-thetruesourceofstabilityinhislife-wasMary,hisfinch.ButMarywasmorethanjustasimple,calmpet:wheneverAllenfeltsad,thebirdwouldalwaysbesingingandchirping,almostasifshesensedhowhefeltandwantedtolifthisspirits.AndwhenAllenfedthebird,Maryalwaysmovedacrossherbranchtorestagainsthisfinger,neverfailingtobringasmiletoAllen'sface.Yet,onesummerdayafterAllenhadcomehomeafterawalkattheparkhefoundthewindowofhisbedroomopenandthedoorofMary'scageopen-thebirdwasgone.Suddenly,Allenrealizedthathemusthaveleftthecageopenaftercleaningitandforgotaboutthewindowbeingopenonsuchahotday.Upset,Allenfelldowntothefloorsobbing.Paragraph1:Uponhearingthenoise,AHcn'smotherrushedupstairsandaskedwhathadhappened.Paragraph2:Filledwithanticipation,AllenandhismotherwentoutsidetolookforMary.二、審題思考(1)看到鳥失蹤了以后，小男孩的感情是什么樣的?難過+自責(2)什么會讓小男孩和他媽媽flewwithanticipation?他倆制定了計劃，對于去哪找，怎么找有具體的方法(3)怎么找鳥?叫鳥的名字，模仿鳥的叫聲(4)去哪找鳥？在哪找到的?去了他們常去散步的所有地方。最后在公園發(fā)現(xiàn)了鳥。三、微情節(jié)設計Paragraph1:Uponhearingthenoise,Allen'smotherrushedupstairsandaskedwhathadhappened。)Allen說明情況,難過+自責(2)Mom知道鳥對Allen的意義，安慰他(3)在媽媽的幫助下，Allen列出了鳥可能會去的地方，制定了尋找的路線圖Paragraph2:Filledwithanticipation,AllenandhismotherwentoutsidetolookforMary.⑴各種方法找，到處找，幾乎要絕望(2)最后來到了公園，找到了⑶鳥看到Allen的反應(4)一起回家三、下水文短語.臉上滿是…感情。感情iswrittenonone*sface.holdback.忍住(眼淚)哽咽著說saidinachokedvoice.安慰的輕拍肩膀areassuringpatonhisshoulder.形成一個牢不可破的紐帶formanunbreakablebondlocate.確定的位置locate.想出,提出一個可行的計劃comeupwithafeasibleplan.常去的地方hangout.大聲呼喚callout鳥叫(v+n)chirp.尋找....的蹤跡searchforthetraceof...在一個乂一個地方inoneplaceafteranother.處于.....?的邊緣ontheedgeofdisheartened.沮喪的gloomy,depressed.去過無數(shù)次havebeentomiltipletimes.當他們的目光相遇時Astheirglancesmet.(鳥)發(fā)出尖叫l(wèi)etoutahigh-pitchedsqueak.伸出他窩成杯狀的手extendhiscuppedhand.(鳥)棲息perch23.夕陽的余暉中(glown.微光)theglowofthesettingsun五、連詞成篇ParagraphkUponhearingthenoise,Allen'smotherrushedupstairsandaskedwhathadhappened.(1)臉上滿是失望和內疚，他咬著嘴唇，試圖忍住眼淚。Withdisappointmentandconsciencewrittenonhisface,hebithislips,tryingtoholdbacktears(2)“瑪麗走了?！卑瑐愔钢蜷_的鳥籠門和臥室窗戶哽咽著說?！癕aryhasgonc/'AIlcnsaidinachokedvoice,pointingtotheopencagedoorandbedroomwindow(3)“別擔心，親愛的，“媽媽安慰地拍了拍他的肩膀，溫柔地說，“瑪麗一直是你忠實的伴侶和最親密的朋友。你們之間形成的牢固紐帶是牢不可破的。我們一定會找至IJ她的。Don'lworry,honey^^Momsaidinagentlevoicewithareassuringpatonhisshoulder"Maryhasbeenyourconstantcompanionandclosestfriend.Thestrongbondformedbetweenyouisunbreakable.Wcwilldefinitelylocateher.(4)他們一起想出了一個可行的計劃列出了他們經常去的地方Together,theycameupwithafeasibleplanwheretheirusualhangoutswerelisted.Paragraph2:Filledwithanticipation,AllenandhismotherwentoutsidetolookforMary(1)“瑪麗，瑪麗''他們叫著她的名字，甚至模仿瑪麗的叫聲，信慮不安。Mary,Mary”Theycalledouthername,evenimiatingMary'schirps,anxiousanduneasy(2)他們在一個又一個地方尋找瑪麗的蹤跡，但都沒有找到，他們正處于放棄的邊緣，越來越沮喪。HavingsearchedforthetraceofMaryinoneplaceafteranotherinvain,theywereontheedgeofgivingup,increasingIdisheartened他們來至U了艾倫和瑪麗在他沮喪時去過無數(shù)次的公園。(3)最終,Eventually,theycametotheparkthatAllenandMaryhadbeentomiltipletimeswhenhewasgloomyanddepressed.(4)他們正從一棵橡樹下經過，這時瑪麗的叫聲從上面?zhèn)鱽?。TheywerepassingunderanoaktreewhenMary'schirpingcamefromabove(5)當他們的目光相遇時。這個小生物發(fā)出了一吉尖叫Astheirglancesmet.thelittlecreatureletoutahigh-pitchedsqueak(6)艾倫剛伸出他那窩成杯狀的手，她就落在了他的掌心上ScarcelyhadAllenextendedhiscuppedhandwhensheperchedinhispalm⑺他們開心地回到家，沐浴在夕陽的余暉中Overjoyed,theyreturnedhome,bathedintheglowofthesettingsun六、最終自測Paragraph1:Uponhearingthenoise,Allen'smotherrushedupstairsandaskedwhathadhappened.(1)臉上滿是失望和內疚，他咬著嘴唇，試圖忍住眼淚。(2)“瑪麗走了。”艾倫指著打開的鳥籠門和臥室窗戶，哽咽著說。(3)“別擔心，親愛的，”媽媽安慰地拍了拍他的肩膀，溫柔地說，“瑪麗一直是你忠實的伴侶和最親密的朋友。你們之間形成的牢固紐帶是牢不可破的。我們一定會找到她的。(4)他們一起想出了一個可行的計劃，列出了他們經常去的地方。Paragraph2:Fillcdwithanticipat