第四檔：（15—13分）

語言流暢，語句通順，合乎邏輯。

適當使用連詞成份。

完全達成了預期寫作目標。

第三檔：（12—10分）

語法結構或詞匯應用基本準確。

使用簡單連詞成份。

達成了預期寫作目標。

第二檔：（9—6分）遺漏一些信息點。

有些語法結構或詞匯方面錯誤，但不影響了解。

使用簡單連接成份。

基本達成了預期寫作目標。

第一檔：（5—1分）

描述不清楚，內容不連貫。語法結構或詞匯錯誤影響了對寫作內容了解。較少使用連接成份。不能清楚表示寫作目標。假設你是張林，即將初中畢業，你美國筆友Bob來信問詢你暑假計劃,現在請你寫一封回信，告訴他你將在爺爺奶奶家度過這個假期。

注意：

1.

最少寫出你將要做三件事。

2.

回信最少不少于80詞，信開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

3.

所給英語詞匯僅供參考。

參考詞匯：summer;

grandparents;

relax

oneself;

housework;

visit;

old

friends

and

relativesHi,

Bob,

The

summer

vacation

is

coming

soon..

After

a

tiring

school

year,

I’m

gong

to

relax

myself.

I

will

spend

my

vacation

with

my

grandparents.

I

will

stay

with

them

for

about

three

weeks.

Of

course,

I

am

going

to

help

them

do

some

housework.

Perhaps

we

will

take

some

short

trips.

Besides,

I

am

going

to

visit

some

of

my

friends

and

relatives.

I

think

we

will

have

a

happy

time

together.

What’s

more,

I

will

be

a

senior

student

in

a

new

term,

so

I

am

going

to

make

some

preparations.

How

will

you

spend

your

holiday?

Best

wishes.

Yours,

Zhang

Lin假設你是趙銘．你班來自美國交流學生Robert患病住院已經有三周．請你用英文給他發一封電子郵件．主要內容包含：問詢病情；

介紹班級近期活動或學習情況；表示祝福。

注意：

1．詞數80一100詞左右；

2．能夠適當增加細節．以使行文連貫；

3．信格式已給出，不計入總詞數。DearRobert,It’sthreeweekssinceyouwereill.Howareyoufeelingnow?Weallmissyouverymuch.Recentlywehavehadmanyactivities.Wetookpartinthesportsmeetinginourschoolandwonthefirstprize.Thematcheswereexcitingandtough.Butwetriedourbestandgotthegoodresult.Whatapity!Youdidn’twatchthem.Ihopeyou’llgetwellsoonandcomebackearlier.We’rebusypreparingforthesingingcompetitionnow.Wepracticeasongeverydayinordertosingbest.Remembertohaveagoodrestanddon’tworryaboutyourlessons.I’llhelpyouwiththem.Bestwishes.

Yours,ZhaoMing假設你是周浩，你遺失了你英國籍摯友Frank借給你一本書，請依照以下提醒用英語給他寫一封信表示道歉，包含以下內容：1.怎么遺失；2.對該書評價；3.怎樣補救；4.你教訓。注意：1.詞數80—100詞左右；2.信開頭和結尾已替你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearFrank，

IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookyouweresokindtolendmelastweek.IlikethehookverymuchandIreaditeverydayandplantofinishitnextmonth.LastnightwhenIcametomyroom,itwasn’tfoundanywhere.Iwillgetanewbookforyou.

Oldbooksarelikeoldfriends.Oncetheyarelost，theycanneverbereplaced.Ifeelsorryforlosingthebook.Iwassocarelesswithmythings.Thisisawarningtometobemorecarefulinthefuture.Bestwishes.

Yourstruly,

ZhouMao良好生活與學習習慣對我們成長是非常主要。請從以下習慣中選擇一個你以前做得不夠好，但現在已具備好習慣，談一談你養成這個習慣過程及收益。

要求：1）不使用真實校名、人名等相關信息；2）內容完整，書寫整齊；3）80詞左右；

4）文章開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。My

good

habitMy

good

habit

is

early

to

bed

and

early

to

rise．Two

years

ago,

when

I

was

a

Grade

7

student,

I

liked

reading

books

in

bed．Every

day

after

I

finished

my

homework,

I

lay

in

bed

until

24:00

o’clock．The

next

day

I

couldn’t

get

up

on

time.I

used

to

be

late

for

school,and

I

felt

tired

in

class．It

was

too

bad．With

the

help

of

my

teacher

and

my

parents,

I

gave

up

the

bad

since

then,

I

go

to

bed

early

and

get

up

early.I

never

go

to

school

late

again．As

a

result,

I’m

much

stronger

and

doing

better

in

school

now．假如你是某中學學生會主席王東,為了配合環境保護教育主題活動,請依照下面所給提醒,用英語寫一封倡議書，內容包含：

1.

環境保護方法和美化城市方法（各2條）；

2.

你希望。

注意：

1.

注意文章整體連貫；

2.

文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；

3.

80詞左右。

Dear

friends,

In

order

to

make

the

environment

more

beautiful,

we

should

Dear

friends,

In

order

to

make

the

environment

more

beautiful,

we

should

do

what

we

can

to

protect

it.

First,

we

should

plant

more

trees

and

flowers

to

make

our

city

more

beautiful.

Also,

always

remember

not

to

throw

rubbish

or

pour

waste

water

everywhere.

As

we

all

know,

water

is

becoming

less

and

less.

So

it?s

quite

necessary

to

save

water.

For

example,

turn

the

tap

off

after

washing.

Last,

but

not

the

least,

we?d

better

ride

a

bike

or

walk

when

going

out

instead

of

driving

a

car.

In

my

opinion,

if

everyone

tries

his

best

to

protect

the

environment,

our

city

will

become

nicer

and

cleaner!

Thank

you.

Wang

Dong

初中生活中，你有些什么改變？你是怎樣改變？請以“HowI

have

changed”為題寫一篇英語小短文，描述你發生改變，寫作內容包含：興趣興趣、行為習慣、學習習慣等方面。

要求：1.用英語寫一篇短文，80詞左右。

2.任選兩方面內容。

3.語言流暢書寫規范，卷面整齊。

4.文中不得使用你真實姓名校名。HowI

have

changedHow

time

flies,

Three

years

has

quickly

passed,

and

I

have

changed

a

lot

during

these

days.

On

one

hand,

I

wasn't

good

at

learning

English

at

first,

When

my

English

teacher

learned

about

that,

she

taught

me

how

to

memorize

new

words,

and

to

read

at

many

passages

is

as

possible,

soon

I

made

great

progress

and

became

interested

in

English.

On

the

other

hand,

I

was

too

weak

to

do

my

exercise,

but

with

the

help

of

the

teachers

and

classmates,

I

do

exercise

whenever

I

am

free,

and

now

I

can

run

very

fast

and

I

’am

also

good

at

playing

basketball

like

other

boys.Thanks

to

the

middle

school

life,I

have

changed

so

much!Thanks

to

the

teachers

and

classmates,

I

have

learned

so

much!Never

will

I

forget

the

valuable

middle

school

life!

必背范文選篇感想/學習篇(一)為了交流學習經驗，提升學習效率，《中學生英語輔導報》舉行了一次以Howtobeagoodlearner?為題征文比賽活動，請寫一篇80詞左右短文談談你看法。【Howtobeagoodlearner?】Asagoodlearner,weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysoflearning.Weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclassandalwayslistencarefullyinclass.It’sgoodtostudyingroupsandhelpeachother.Weshoulddomorereadinginourfreetime.Ifwehavesomeproblems,we’dbetteraskothersforhelp.Asastudent,workinghardisimportant,butdon’tforgettodosportsandkeephealthy.Ithinkalltheseabovewillbehelpfultous.(二)親愛同學，你初中學習生活馬上就要結束了，請你以“MyEnglishStudy”為題，談一下三年以來學習英語心得體會。要求：1.關鍵點包含你在英語學習中所碰到困難、處理方法以及學習感悟;2.詞數80左右。【MyEnglishStudy】Howtimeflies!Mythree-yearmiddleschoollifewillbeoversoon.Lookingback,IhavemanymemoriesofmyEnglishstudy.WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.Iwasnotabletounderstandtheteacherinclass,andIcouldn’tmasterthewordsandphrases.ForatimeIwantedtogiveitup.Later,withthehelpoftheteacherandmyclassmates,Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass,keptonreadingEnglisheverydayandspokeasmuchaspossible.StepbystepImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Inaword,onlywhenyoudevelopinterestinstudyingEnglishcanyoulearnitwell.情感/生活篇(一)父親節馬上就要到了，不過有些同學不知道送什么禮品給父親。請依照下面提醒進行適當擴展，并向同學們提出一些提議。80詞左右，開頭和結尾以給出(不計入總詞數)。提醒：1.假如有足夠零花錢，能夠為父親買一些使用單不貴東西，如領帶等；2.還能夠為父親做些力所能及事情(dosomethingthatyoucando)，如為父親準備一杯茶等他下班后飲用等。【Father’sDay】Father’sDayiscomingandyoumustbethinkingofgivingapresenttoyourfather.Differentpeoplelikedifferentkindsofgifts.Ifyouhaveenoughpocketmoney,youcanbuyausefulbutnotexpensivething,likeatie.Ithinkyourfatherwilllikeit.Butifyoudon’thaveenoughpocketmoney,youcandosomethingthatyoucando,forexample,youcanprepareacupoftea.Whenyourfathercomesbackfromwork,hecandrinkit.Nomatterwhatyoudo,themostimportantthingistomakeyourfatherhappyonFather’sDay.Don’tyouthinkso?(二)今天是母親節。假定你是李華，請給你美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談談你將怎樣與母親一起度過這個尤其日子。關鍵點以下：1.表述你與母親間情感；2.為母親制作一張卡片；3.幫助母親做點事；4.陪母親散步等。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發揮；3.郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearJohn,It’sMother’sDaytoday.It’saspecialday,isn’tit?Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtoshowourlovetoourmothersonthisspecialday.MymotherandIaregoodfriends.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,sheisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.TodayIwillmakeabeautifulcardforher,withmythanksandbestwishesonit.ThenIwillhelpherwashthecarthisafternoonandcookherfavouritefoodintheevening.Besides,I’lltakeawalkwithherafterdinnerandthenplaychesswithher,forshelikesitverymuch.I’msureshe’llbeveryhappy.What’syourplanforMother’sDay?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua(三)某英文報社正就青少年與父母關系這一話題開展題為Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents征文活動。請你依照以下關鍵點，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。關鍵點：1.父母規矩太多，過于強調學習成績，不了解自己等問題；2.你對這些問題看法；3.你與父母保持良好關系做法。【Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents】Inmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpresure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhardandlistentothem.Italkwiththemasfriends,andalwaystellthemmytroubles.Ialsohelpthemdosomehousework.寫人/記事篇(一)假設Linda是你好朋友，你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學回來，你們很高興見到彼此。請依照提醒，簡明介紹Linda改變。提醒：1.外貌：以前個子矮，短發;現在個子高多了，長發。2.興趣：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天;現在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。3.性格：以前外向;現在有些內向。要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，適當發揮；2.層次清楚，語言流暢；詞左右。【Mybestfriend】Lindaismybestfriend.Shehaschangedolotinthepasttwoyears.Sheusedtobeshortandhaveshorthair.However,nowsheismuchtallerthanbefore.Shehaslonghair.Sheusedtolikeplayingping-pong,watchingTVandchattingwithfriends.Butshelikesplayingthepiano,readingbooksandtakingawalknow.Sheusedtobeoutgoing.Nowsheisalittlequite.Ithinkpeoplesurechangeastimegoesby.Eventhoughshehaschangedalot,wewillbethebestfriendsallthetime.(二)背景設定：最近，康敏加拿大朋友Michael給他發來電子郵件，想了解康明故鄉改變。假如你是康敏，請依照以下提醒，給Miachael回一封電子郵件。過去生活條件差，道路狹窄，車輛少，住不好，吃不飽，聯絡不便......現在生活條件優越，道路寬，車輛多，住得舒適，手機普及......要求：1.圍繞以上內容進行合理表述；2.所表述內容必須包含表中全部方面；3.詞數80詞左右，開頭語以給出(不計入詞數)。參考詞匯：livingconditions,narrow,becrowdedinto,communications(通訊)，telegram,thanksto,rapidly,mobilephone,policyDearMichael,Youwanttoknowthechangesaboutmyhometown.Youknow,greatchangeshavetakenplacesince60yearsago.Inthepast,thelivingconditionswereverypoor.Therewerenotmanybusesorcars,andtheroadswerenarrow.Usually,abigfamilywascrowedintoasmall,darkhouse.Mostfamiliescouldn’tgetenoughfood.Thecommunicationsweresimpleandslow.Peoplekeptintouchwiththeirfriendsandrelativesfarawaymainlybyletterortelegram.Thankstothegovernment,ourhometownhasdevelopedrapidlyinrecentyears.Thelivingconditionsaremuchbetterandmorecomfortable.Theroadsarewide.Somepeoplehavetheirowncars.Mostofthepeoplehavelivedinbignewhouses.Quiteafewadultshavemobilephones.Becauseofmanygoodpolicies,Ithinkourliveswillbecomebetterandbetter.SincerelyKangMin(三)假如你是李華，今年上初三了，現在生活和以前大不一樣了。請你依照本身情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己改變。詞數：60-80。【Mylife】IamLiHua.IaminGradeNinethisyear.Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewweeks.Iusedtogetupatseveninthemorning.ButnowIgetupatsixandreadEnglishforhalfanhoureverymorning.IusedtowatchTVandgotobedat9:30intheevening.ButnowIhavetokeepdoinghomeworkuntil11:00intheevening.Iusedtoplaytennisinmyfreetime.ButnowIhavetospendallmyfreetimestudying.Ireallymissmyolddays.風俗/禮儀篇(一)請依照提醒以“TheSpringFestival”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞英語短文。提醒：1.春節是中國最主要節日；2.人們大多回家過年，家庭組員團聚；3.家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、造訪親朋摯友(friendsandrelatives)；4.孩子們喜歡春節。【TheSpringFestival】TheSpringFestivalcomesinwinter.ItisthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalinChina.Peopleusuallygohometospendthefestivalwiththeirfamily.Theyhaveabigfamilyget-together.TheChinesepeoplehavebigmealsandwatchTVduringtheSpringFestival.Theyalsovisittheirfriendsandrelatives.ChildrenliketheSpringFestivalverymuchbecausetheyneedn’tgotoschoolandtheyhavealotoftimetoplay.(二)假如你是郭佳，你美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信，說她想給自己漢語老師送一份禮品來表示自己感激之情，不過她不知道中國送禮習俗，所以請你給她一些提議。請依照下面提醒，用英語寫一封回信給她。提醒：1.要依照個人喜好選擇禮品；2.禮品包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙(wrappingpaper)；3.不要送鐘、鞋或者梨。要求：1.語意通順，條理清楚；詞左右。(信格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)DearLinda,Iamgladtogiveyouadviceonthecustomsofgivinggiftsinmycountry.Firstly,IthinkyouneedtofindoutwhatyourChineseteacherlikes.Choosingthegiftthatyourteacherisinterestedinisagoodidea.Secondly,don’tpackthegiftwithblackorwhitewrappingpaper,becauseblackandwhitearen’tconsideredtobeluckycolors.Thirdly,don’tbuyyourteacheraclock,apairofshoes,orsomepearsbecausethesehavebadmeaningsinChinesewhengivingagift.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,GuoJia(三)剛到中國來學習很快John應漢語老師邀請去他家里做客，所以John向Bob請教相關禮儀。假設你是Bob,請你給John回一封電子郵件，告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右，開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。DearJohn,IknowthatyouwillvisityourChineseteacher’shome.Ifyoudothefollowing,Idon’tthinkyouwillfeeluncomfortable.First,youshouldarrivealittleearlier.Beinglateisimpolite.Second,it’salsogoodtobringagiftsuchassomeflowersorfruit.Third,youwillprobablyusechopstickstohavedinner.Remembernottostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.You’dbettersaythatthefoodisdeliciouswhileyouareeating.Finally,afterdinner,showingthanksisalsonecessary.Andyouarenotsupposedtostaylongafterdinner.Goodluck!Yours,Bob社會/網絡篇(一)伴隨網絡發展，人們消費觀念轉變，購物方式也在悄然地發生改變。“網購”成為一個時尚，越來越多學生也正加入到網購群體中。請你依照以下表格提醒，寫一篇網上購物文章。優點1.足不出戶;節約時間;防止擁擠、勞累。2.價格通常比較廉價。3.可供選擇范圍廣，品種多。缺點1.只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身。2.輕易購置大量不太需要東西，造成浪費。注意：1.所表述內容必須包含表格中全部方面；詞左右，開頭文章已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：網購shoppingonline;防止做某事avoiddoingsth;商品goods;造成cause【Shoppingonline】WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline.Ithasbecomeafashioninourdailylife.Someofusstudentsalsojointhegroup.Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.Justbyaclickofthemouse,youcanbuywhatyou’reinterestedinwithoutgoingoutdoors.Youcanavoidgettingtiredandbeingtrappedinthecrowdedpeopleandcarsandsavetime.Whenshoppingonline,youcanchoosefrommorevarietiesofgoods,whosepricesaregenerallylower.Everycoinhastwosides.Itsdisadvantagesareobvious,too.Ontheonehand,it’sveryeasyforyoutobuygoodsdifferentfromthepicturesyouseeontheInternert.Ontheotherhand,shoppingonlinemaycausepeopletobuygoodsthatarenotbadlyneeded.That’sawasteofmoney.Allinall,Iloveshoppingonline.(二)現在很多中學生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你依照下面調查結果，寫一篇80詞左右短文。【Popsongs】Nowadaysmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentslikepopsongs.Afewofthemlikequietmusicbecausetheythinkquietmusicmakesthemfeelcomfortable.Manyofthestudentslikemusicianswhocanwritetheirownlyrics.Why?Theythinkit’scooltoexpresstheirownfeelings.Mostofthestudentslikemusicthattheycandanceto.Theythinkthemusicisfullofenergy.Whentheyaretiredorbored,theycandancetothemusic.健康/生活篇(一)健康對我們來說非常主要，我們能夠用很多方法來保持身體健康。請依照下面表格提醒，以“GoodWaystoKeepHealthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個方面說明怎樣保持健康。短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數，可適當發揮。【GoodWaystoKeepHealthy】Itisveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushealthy?First,weneedtohavehealthyeatinghabits,wecaneatalotofvegetablesandfreshfruit,butwe’dbettereatlessmeat.Differentkindsoffoodarenecessary,it’salsoimportanttoeatabalanceddiet.Then,playingsportseverydaycanalsohelpuskeepfit.Wecantakewalksafterdinner,wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus,afterschoolwecanspendhoursplayingbasketballorsoccerwithourfriends.Weshouldtrytodomoreexerciseeveryday.Happinessisanotherwaytokeephealthy.Whenwearelonelyorunhappy,trytomakefriends.Itisagoodwaytokeepushappy.Ifyousmileoften,youalsofeelhappy.So,behappytobehealthy.(二)健康一直是人們關注問題，我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為主題主題班會，請依照以下內容談談你看法。1.保持健康主要性；2.保持健康方法：多吃水果蔬菜；天天鍛煉一小時；;早睡早起；勤洗手；3.自己看法(最少一條)。注意：1.文中不能出現校名和自己姓名;2.內容可適當擴展。3.字數60-80詞;4.文章開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。【Keephealthy】Boysandgirls,Itisveryimportantforusstudentstokeephealthy.Therearemanywaystobehealthy.We’dbettereatmorefruitsandvegetables.Takeexerciseforatleastonehoureveryday.Weneedenoughsleepandrestsoitisimportanttogotobedearlyandgetupearly.Besides,weshouldwashourhandsasoftenaspossible.Inmyopinion,wemustn'tdrinkwineorsmoke.Theyarebadforourhealth.(三)最近，各方面調查表明：青少年體質不停下降。請你以“Howtokeephealthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右短文，說說你看法和提議。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。主要內容包含：1.體質下降原因。如：eattoomuchjunkfood,havetoomuchhomework...2.合理健康提議。如：shoulddomoreexercise,eatabalanceddiet(飲食平衡),enoughsleep【Howtokeephealthy】Nowadaysstudents’physicalfitnessisdecliningyearbyyear.Ithinktherearesomereasons.Studentshavetoomuchhomeworktodo,sotheyhavelittletimetohavesports.Somest