讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)講義讀后續(xù)寫：閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Itwasanearlywintermorning.Joanwassleepingsoundlywhenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sherolledoverandglancedattheclockonthewall—itwasalreadynineo'clock.Everyweekendmorning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy,sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidn'texpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,“Goodmorning,myDear!”Recognizingthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.Joan'sfatherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.Borninanot-richfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsthroughouttheacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.“Goodmorning,Dad,what'sup?"Joansaidinaneasytone."\havebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmother'sbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinoneandhalfanhour.Doremembertotakethecake.”Hearingherfather'swords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMum'sbirthday!Shetookaglanceatthedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadn'tbeenmopped（拖地）forafewdays-Therewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.Shecalculated（估計，預(yù)測）theyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.Thinkingofthis,shefeltfullofexcitement."Well,Dad,nowI'mgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise\"JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMike'sroomtosharehimherBigCleaningplan.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。TheBigCleaningplanbegan.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein.”語言積累：.翻身，翻滾（拓展）rollover.睡得很沉sleeplikealog.拿起話筒pickupthereceiver.全優(yōu)A學(xué)生straight-Astudents.學(xué)校的驕傲和學(xué)生的羨慕對象theprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.用輕松的語調(diào)inaneasytone.把…堆積起來pile...up堆滿…bepiledwith...參考范文：TheBigCleaningplanbegan.Joancollectedtheclothesfromsofaandthenputtheminthewaterofabasin.Afterpouringinsomewashingliquids,shebegantowashthembyhand.Realizingtheclotheswerecleanenough,Joangentlysqueezedwateroutandhungthemtodry.Meanwhile,Mikewasbusymoppingthefloorbackandforthwithallhisstrength,reallyawareofwhathardworkhisMumhadathome!Theyhadjustfinishedthecleaningwhentheexpressbovcametothedoor.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein."Happybirthday,Mum!",theygreetedinachorus.Confusedandsurprised,Mumstoodfrozen.WhenMumrealizedwhathadhappened,awormcurrentroseinherheart.Staringatthecleanfloorandthewashedclothes,shecouldhardlycontainherexcitementandhuggedthemtightly,"ItisthebestbirthdaygiftIhaveeverhad!",Mumsaidemotionally.JustthenJoantookouthersmartphoneandtookahappyvideonamedMum'sBirthdayandsentittoDad.下水作文：TheBigCleaningplanbegan.Tasksdivided,thetwoimmediatelygotdowntobusiness.Joancollectedallthedirtyclothespiledonthesofa,putthemintothesink,andleftthemsoakedinthewaterforawhile.Onebyone,shecleanedeverypiececarefullytomakesurethattheywerecleanenough,squeezedthewateroutandhungthemuptodry.Meanwhile,LittleMiketookgreatpainstocleaneveryinchofthefloor,makingthefloorthoroughlyclean.Hopingthattheycouldfinishbeforemotherreturned,theydidthecleaningwithalltheirstrengthandenergy,whichmadethemextremelyexhausted.Despitethis,lookingatthedifferencetheyhadmade,theysmiled,imagininghowmotherwouldreacttoallthis.Andattheverymoment,thecakefatherhadorderedonlinearrived.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein."Happybirthday,mum!”twovoicescamefrombehindthedoorandthenextmomenttwosmallfigurescamerunningintoherarms.Unpreparedandalittleconfused,motherstoodthere,frozen.Anotherlookathertwokids,thecleanedfloorandthewashedclothes,motherfinallyrealizedwhathadhappened,hereyeswatering.HoldingJoanandMiketightlyinherarms,motherfeltherheartfilledwithwarmth.Whenshewasshownthebirthdaycake,whichwasespeciallymeantforher,andwastoldthatitwasfather'sbirthdaygiftandwishes,shefeltshewastheluckiestpersonintheworld.Bathedinthemerrybirthdayatmosphereandherkids'bestwishes,shepickedupthephoneandcalledherhusband,whoassuredthemthathewouldreturnattheendofyear.類似素材鞏固練：AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.參考范文Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared."Dad,sorry,itwassuchamess."Jeffmurmured,loweringhisheadinshame“Notimetomakemumabreakfastnow."Jennacriedwithregretandguiltoverwhelmingherlikeendlesstides.Pattingthemgentlyontheirshoulders,fathersaidinawarmvoice,“Darling,it'slovethatcounts.Let'sdothisagaintogether!,zTotheirrelief,withtheguida