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FriendsAfriendinneedisafriendindeed.Friendshipmultipliesjoysanddividesgriefs(悲傷).Truefriendshiplastsforever.

RobertandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.Oneday,RobertandHenryweregoinghomefromschool,when,onturningacorner,Robertcriedout,“Afight!Let’sgoandsee!”“No,”saidHenry.“Let’sgoquietlyhomeandnotmeddlewith(插手)thisquarrel.Wehavenothingtodowithitandmaygetintotrouble.AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“You!Acoward！”saidRobert,andoffheran.Henrywentstraighthome.Intheafternoon,Henrywenttoschoolasusual.ButRoberthadtoldalltheboysthatHenrywasacoward,andtheylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhimtogether.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRobertforhisrudebehavior,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtogotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Robertdidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadsomeotherboyswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadalotoffun.Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andgotoutofhisdepth.Hestruggled,andscreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould,buttheydidnoteventrytohelphim.Q1:What'sthegenreofthepassage?Narration(記敘文)B.Exposition(說明文)C.Argumentation(議論文)whowhenwherewhatwhyhow5w+1hAnalyzethegivenpassageQ2:Inwhatorderisthethepassagedeveloped?A.Time.B.Space.

RobertandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.Oneday,RobertandHenryweregoinghomefromschool,when,onturningacorner,Robertcriedout,“Afight!Let’sgoandsee!”“No,”saidHenry.“Let’sgoquietlyhomeandnotmeddlewith(插手)thisquarrel.Wehavenothingtodowithitandmaygetintotrouble.AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“You!Acoward！”saidRobert,andoffheran.Henrywentstraighthome.Intheafternoon,Henrywenttoschoolasusual.ButRoberthadtoldalltheboysthatHenrywasacoward,andtheylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhimtogether.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRobertforhisrudebehavior,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtogotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Robertdidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadsomeotherboyswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadalotoffun.Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andgotoutofhisdepth.Hestruggled,andscreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould,buttheydidnoteventrytohelphim.Mainidea:

RobertandHenrywerefriendsandalwaysplayedandwenthometogether.Oneday,onturningacorner,RobertwenttoseeafightbutHenrydidn’t.Intheafternoon,Robertandalltheboyscalledhimacowardanddidn'tplaywithHenry.Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwiththeotherboysinariverandgotoutofhisdepth.Theboysgotoutoftheriverasfastastheycould,buttheydidn’ttrytohelpRobert…Q3:What’sthethemeofthepassage?A.Honesty.B.Friendship.C.Courage.D.Confidence

RobertandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.Oneday,RobertandHenryweregoinghomefromschool,when,onturningacorner,Robertcriedout,“Afight!Let’sgoandsee!”“No,”saidHenry.“Let’sgoquietlyhomeandnotmeddlewith(插手)thisquarrel.Wehavenothingtodowithitandmaygetintotrouble.AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“You!Acoward！”saidRobert,andoffheran.Henrywentstraighthome.Intheafternoon,Henrywenttoschoolasusual.ButRoberthadtoldalltheboysthatHenrywasacoward,andtheylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhimtogether.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRobertforhisrudebehavior,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtogotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Robertdidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadsomeotherboyswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadalotoffun.Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andgotoutofhisdepth.Hestruggled,andscreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould,buttheydidnoteventrytohelphim.Ending?Development2?Development1BeginningClimax?storymountainhappyangry,sadscared,helpless???emotionmountain情節邏輯是基點情感主線是亮點Robertwasfastsinking.Thus,Robert’slifewassaved.HowwasRobertsaved？Paragraph1Paragraph.2.3.Predictthedevelopment1.HowdidRobertfeel?2.HowdidHenryreact?3.HowwasRobertsaved?1.HowdidRobertfeel?2.Whatdidhedothen?3.WhatdidHenrydo?4.Whathappenintheend?Robertwasfastsinking.Thus,Robert’slifewassaved.Paragraph1Paragraph2Predictthedevelopment

structure(1)Robertwasterrifiedandhopeless.①使用介詞短語

Hewasinthedepthofterroranddespair.②使用被動句

Hisheart____________terroranddespair.③使用無靈主語:

_____________________________hisheart.Asenseofterroranddespairfilledwasfilledwith一種恐懼感和絕望感充盈了他的內心。

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language(2)Henrywasworried.Hejumped.①使用狀語從句

______heheardthescreams,hebecame___worried____hejumpedintotheriveratonce.②使用非謂語動詞，添加環境描寫___________thescreams,hejumpedintothe_________________river_____________________.③使用倒裝句_____________hadheheardthescreams________hejumpedintotheriver.④添加動作描寫:聽到叫聲，他跑到河邊，脫掉衣服，跳進河里，游向...Hearingthescreams,heimmediately_____________________,____________________,_______________t