1、優(yōu)選文檔優(yōu)選文檔PAGEPAGE4優(yōu)選文檔PAGE雅思小作文筆錄整理雅思圖表作文的實(shí)質(zhì):比較比較(比較結(jié)構(gòu)句型趨勢(shì)描述(上升,下降上升的動(dòng)詞:increase,rise,surge,enlarge,swell,soar,enhance,climb,jump,augment,goup下降的動(dòng)詞:decrease,descend,decline,drop,shrink,wvdiminish/vw,dwindle,taper形容動(dòng)詞的副詞:considerably,sharply,remarkably,dramatically,greatly,drastically,extremely,steadi

2、ly,substantially,continually,continuously,moderately,respectively,generally,slightly,mainly,strikingly例子文章:Stockpriceshavebeenextremelyvolatile.Theyclimbedsteadilyinthe1950sreachedapeakin1966,andthenfluctuatedupanddownuntil1973,whentheyfellsharply.Stockpriceshadrecoveredsubstantiallybytheearly1980sw

3、henamajorstockmarketboomagain,sendingtoDowJonesIndustryAverage(DJIAtoapeakof2722onAugust25,1987.Aftera17%declineoverthenextmonthandahalf,thestockmarketexperiencedtheworstoneday-dropinitsentirehistoryon“BlackMonday”,October19,1987,whentheDJIAfellbymorethan500points,a22%decline.句型的變化:1.主體做主語+increaseB

4、etween1940and1985theproportionoftheelderlypeopleincreasedremarkablyfromabout17%inSwedenand9%intheUSAto13%and15%respectively.2.年代做主語+saw+increaseTheperiodfrom1940to1985sawagenerallysteadyincreaseintheproportionof3.地點(diǎn)做主+experienced+increaseBoththeUSAandSwedenexperiencedanalarming/moderatelysurge/incre

5、aseintheproportionof寫作首段是命的改寫主體段描述大的特色或大的概括(關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)支持關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)即起點(diǎn)點(diǎn)坐,最大最小,偶會(huì)用交點(diǎn)坐,部分特色拐點(diǎn)坐。得分注意點(diǎn):1.句子的接和句子構(gòu)的化2.分和比構(gòu)的使用3.從句的使用4.整篇文章千萬不能主推理解析,否扣分首段是信息段,不能夠照抄命,只能改寫命,概括主要的研究?jī)?nèi)容,研究象,和地點(diǎn)。若是是兩個(gè),必分開來寫,句型常用while.shows,illustrate(五P52,四P100四P54Forexample:(首段Thethreelinesinthecharteachshowthechangesintheproportionoftheeld

6、erlypeopletothepopulationoftheUSA,SwedenandJapanfrom1940tilltoday.Alsothechartgivespredicteddateforthetrends.(主體段Since1940,theproportionintheUSAhasbeenslightlyhigherthanthatinSwedenatanygiventime,whilethatinJapanwasalwaysthesmallest.Specially,thefiguresforthethreecountriesin1940were9%,7%,5%respectiv

7、ely.ThechangesintheproportionintheUSAandSwedenarefeaturedmainlybysteadyincreasealthoughsince1980theUSAexperiencedsomewhatdeclines.Bycontrast,Japandidnotseeincreasesubstantially,sendingittoapeakof5%in2007,thesameasin1940.Accordingtothepredictionsince2000,theupwardtrendswillhavebeenobviousinthethreeco

8、untries,butinJapanwillsoaratthefastestspeed.Till/By2040thefigurewillhavereached27%,comparedwith25%intheUSAand23%inSweden.另一篇文章,主要顯現(xiàn)最值的表達(dá)InthetermofthelengthoftheUndergroundRailwaySystem(URS,thatinLondonranksfirstamongthesixinthatitreaches394km,almost36timeslongerthanthatinKyoto,theshortest.Thesecond

9、longestisinParis(199km.Focusingontheopendate,weseethatonceagainLondonURSwasstrikinglyearlierthanallothercounterparts.Putitaccurately,LondonopenedtheURSasearlyasin1863,37yearsearlierthanthatinParis.Bycontrast,theyoungestisLAwhodidnotstarttorunURSuntil2001.說明文重視語言的流暢,簡(jiǎn)潔。在圖表作文中,不追求詞采的華麗,只追求表達(dá)的清楚。注意點(diǎn):1.

10、沒有必要寫出每條信息,要鑒識(shí)要點(diǎn)特色段落劃分要合理(得分點(diǎn)連結(jié)和過渡詞很重要一整篇文章的例子:劍五P75Tobelocatedinthetowncentre,S2isinthetowncentre,anon-trafficzone.Asresult,itisonlyaccessiblebytherailwaywhereasthemainroadsareunavailable.Moreover,itishemmedoutthehouses,meaningitsconvenientforthedwellerstodosomeshopping.Inaddition,itisclosertotheso

11、uthindustrybutfarawayfromthenorth.UnlikeS2,S1willbesetinthecountryside,whereboththerailwayandmainroadsareready.Butthe44000peoplefromBransdonandCrandsonfinditnoteasytoreachS1,althoughitisconnectedbytherailwaywithCrandson.Furthermore,thissiteisfarawayfromthetwoindustryareas.However,itisconvenientforthosewholiveinHindo.Tosumup,thetwositesa