1、作文講評(píng)Revision:1. 概況：age, sex, birth, family background was/ were born in/into (a poor family) on As a child of years old, he He spent his childhood in live a happy/hard life 例句：他1997年7月16日出生于湖南岳陽(yáng)。 He was born in Yueyang Hunan Province on July 16 1997. 出生于貧困的農(nóng)民家庭，她接受很少教育。 Born of a poor famers family,

2、 she received little education.愛(ài)好非常喜歡I like very much對(duì)感興趣He is interested in對(duì)失去興趣He loses interest in對(duì)極度喜歡He is crazy about對(duì)厭倦He is tired of憎恨hate喜歡enjoy/love/be fond of 我非常喜歡打足球。Eg: I like playing football very much. 我對(duì)語(yǔ)文感興趣。Eg: I am interested in Chinese. 自我介紹寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)寫(xiě)作步驟審題寫(xiě)提綱初稿終稿審題來(lái)到了新的學(xué)校，面對(duì)新的同學(xué)。為了讓大

3、家盡快相互了解，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇自我介紹。文中必須包括姓名、年齡、學(xué)校、愛(ài)好、和家庭等等。 主題：自我介紹： Self-introduction 內(nèi)容：5項(xiàng)文體：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主字?jǐn)?shù)：60-120 主題內(nèi)容文體時(shí)態(tài)字?jǐn)?shù)錯(cuò)句再現(xiàn) I come form Wuyi Primary School。I am a pupil.I think school is boring.My hobby is swim.I like sing. My hobby is playing basketball and swimming.My mom like cooking. My hobbies are play

4、ing basketball, playing ping-pong, and playing computer games.(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤）（用詞不當(dāng)）（語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤）（標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤）錯(cuò)句再現(xiàn) My names 張三.They are 3 people in my family.There are 3 peoples in my family.There are 3 people in my family, my father, my mother and me.There are 3 people in my family. They are my father、my mother、and I.I ha

5、ve 3 people in my family.I age 12 years old.Im 12-year-old.Im 12-year-olds.好句欣賞 Im good at math. When you have a math question, you can ask me. I have a lot of hobbies, such as reading, playing tennis, swimming, and so on. My hobby is swimming. I think it is not only interesting, but also exciting.

6、Introduction: myselfThis is meHi！My name is LianXin. I am 14. Im studying in Yuying Middle School. My hobby is swimming. I think it is not only interesting, but also exciting. I have a big family. There are 5 people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and I. I love them very much.I wi

7、ll study hard. And I want to make more friends.This is me. What about you?如何寫(xiě)好英語(yǔ)作文呢?一.寫(xiě)好句子 1、句子要正確。 2、句子要平行。 3、句子要連貫。 4、句子要有邏輯性。 5、句子要避免過(guò)多重復(fù)。 6、句子要避免頭重腳輕。 7、句子要避免漢式英語(yǔ)。二.寫(xiě)好段落三.用好過(guò)渡詞四.寫(xiě)好開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾 一.寫(xiě)好句子 1.句子要正確：1).Do you know where is the Peoples Park ?2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.Many visit

8、ors enjoy the dish. There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.Do you know where the Peoples Park is?2.句子要平行 In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps.In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.3.句子要連貫 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street

9、. Turn right.After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. 4.句子要有邏輯性 Im very interested in computer and won first prize last year.I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.5.句子要避免過(guò)多重復(fù). You will continue to w

10、alk. Youll see a hill. You will go around the hill. Youll get to a lake.After walking for a while, youll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There youll see a lake.6.句子要避免頭重腳輕Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects.The main subjects are Ch

11、inese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.7.句子要避免漢式英語(yǔ)My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music.In my spare time, Im fond of swimming,In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skatingIn my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating二.寫(xiě)好段落 二.寫(xiě)好段落 段

12、落本身又是一篇小短文,包括主題句、支持句和結(jié)尾句。主題句是全文的第一句:Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. 結(jié)尾句是全文最后一句:A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.三.過(guò)渡詞1. and, in addition, first, second, third 2. before, after, when, later, immediately3. beyond, beside, behind, below, inside4. but, still, however, even, though5. because, so, therefore, thus, otherwise6. so that, indeed, above all, for exa