1、Jennys Necklace目錄01表達積累02原文分析03續寫擴展04續寫賞析01表達積累02原文分析Jennys NecklaceJenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the pr

2、ice, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her.原文分析她完全被打敗女孩非常喜歡這個塑料珍珠項鏈。Her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home, we should make up a list of house

3、work that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.原文分析列出媽媽給女孩買了項鏈。Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jen

4、ny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there,

5、 an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, thats okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”原文分析高興地

6、Jenny愣住了父親索要項鏈，jenny 舍不得，貢獻了doll。A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her fathers eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can

7、 have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She is my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, thats okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”原文分析父親再次索要項鏈，jenny 還是舍不得，貢獻了toy horse。想要躲避父親的眼睛Paragraph 1

8、：Several days later, when Jennys father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed._Paragraph 2 ：Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box._原文分析根據下面的推斷， 本段應該是Jenny內心的各種掙扎，最后還是上交了項鏈。表明上一段落jenny應該是把項鏈給了父親。父親拽出來一個藍色的盒子， 應該是送給Jenny的禮

9、物。03續寫擴展Paragraph 1Paragraph 1 ：Several days later, when Jennys father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.When listening to the storyJennys inner activityWhen the story came to an endJenny offer the necklaceParagraph 2Paragraph 2 ：Holding the plastic pearl his

10、daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.A present in the boxWhat is the present ?A real pearl necklaceJenny was wild with joy句子潤色聽故事的時候，珍妮心不在焉，雙手緊握著項鏈。When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, and held the necklace tightly and firmly in her hand. When listening to the

11、 story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly.absent-mindedhold the necklace tightly and firmlyWith復合結構替換句子潤色故事結束時，出乎意料的是，珍妮把她心愛的項鏈送給了父親，她的手指不自覺的顫抖著。When the story came to an end, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, and her fingers trem

12、bled automatically.When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. tremble automaticallyUnexpectedlyTo ones surpriseContrary to expectationsWith復合結構替換句子潤色沒人知道項鏈對她意味著什么。No one knew what the necklace meant to her.

13、 meant to句子潤色她輕聲對父親說：“爸爸，你知道我愛你勝過愛項鏈。”She whispered softly and gently to her father, “Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.”She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.”more than Whisper softly and gently句型結構的多變句子潤色然后，項鏈堅定地滑到她父親的手中。

14、Then, the necklace slid into her fathers hands determinedly. slide into句子潤色令珍妮驚訝的是，一條漂亮的真珍珠項鏈靜靜地放在盒子里，這讓她心跳加速。句With a beautiful real pearl necklace laying peacefully in the box, she was so surprised that her heart beat faster. So surprisedthatMuch to ones amazement /surprise With a beautiful real pe

15、arl necklace laying peacefully in the box, so surprised was she that her heart beat faster. 句式替換：so 提到句首后面要半倒裝（be/助/情放到主語前面）。句子潤色令珍妮驚訝的是，一條漂亮的真珍珠項鏈靜靜地放在盒子里，這讓她心跳加速。句Much to Jennys amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, and that set her heart racing. So surprisedthatMuc

16、h to ones amazement /surprise Much to Jennys amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. 句式替換：非限制性定語從句句子潤色珍妮愣住了，一種激動的表情扭曲著她的臉。froze thereJenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. a thrilled expression句子潤色珍妮還沒來得及說什么，她父親就在她臉上輕輕地吻了

17、一下，把她摟在懷里。Before Jenny was able to say something， her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and held her in his arms. brush a warm kiss on her faceBefore Jenny was able to say something， her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. her father brushed a warm kiss on her

18、 face, gathering her into his arms. 句子潤色珍妮手里拿著真的項鏈，抬起嘴唇，淚水開始模糊她的視線。Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.tears beginning to blur her vision.genuine necklaceWith tears streaming down her face, she. 淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來Tears filling her eyes, she她熱淚

19、盈眶04續寫賞析續寫賞析Several days later, when Jennys father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently,