1、主題訓(xùn)練1人物薈萃【名師點(diǎn)撥】人物主題訓(xùn)練列為主題之榜首，可見它的重要性。在這個(gè)主題訓(xùn)練中，學(xué)生可以向各行各業(yè)中的成 功人士和周圍的熟悉人物學(xué)習(xí)，并撰寫有關(guān)小作文。很明顯，榜樣力量、人物奮斗等話題題都可以從此 主題的訓(xùn)練中得到啟示。【主題詞匯】Appearance: good-looking, pretty, beautiful, lovely, medium height/ build, of average height（中等身材）， well-built, overweight, slim, middle-aged, very fit, a fair complexion （皮膚白皙）,

2、long wavy black hair, wear glasses, always smileCharacter: brave, confident, honest, patient, easy-going（隨木口的）,outgoing（外向的）,energetic （精力充沛 的），forgetful （健忘的），generous （慷慨的）,talented （有天賦的）,hard-working, helpful, selfless （無私 的）,punctual（守時(shí)的），humorous（幽默的），optimistic, reasonable （講理的），good-tempered

3、 脾氣女子的）,get rid of bad hobbits, straightforward （坦率的）,considerate 體貼的）,insist on（堅(jiān)持不懈）【常用句型】Mr Green is a reporter 職業(yè)）who.She is a strong-willed person. She never gives up on anything.He is a little shy. He goes red when the teacher asks him a question.My mum has a hot temper. I dropped a cup this m

4、orning and she exploded at me.She is a very merry girl. Her cheeks are always rosy and she skips more than she walks.When he fails,he will insist on practising again and again and get ready for another match.I like my English teacher because whenever students ask her questions, shes always ready to

5、help them. 【模擬試題】The person I admire most is.Who is the person you ad mire most?（What does he/she look like?）Why do you admire him/her?What can you learn from him/her?【要點(diǎn)分析】.這是一篇記敘（一件事）與描寫（人的外貌和性格特征）相結(jié)合的文章。.記敘一件事用一般過去時(shí)-而描寫一個(gè)人用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。.記敘一件事避免報(bào)流水賬-可選用典型事例。.結(jié)尾要扣題，可適當(dāng)用從句或排比句。.與這篇文章通用的題目有 ：The person I ap

6、preciate/love/respect most is. 與這篇文章相反的題目有: The person I hate/dislike most is. (tell lies, waste money)【寫作思路】寫出你最軟佩的人I admire. most.I like a bunch of singers. All of them are excellent. But the person called Eminem is the one I admire most.指述他/地的外貌、品格及作為(成統(tǒng) /成就 )He is very brave and is a man of iron

7、.He is famous not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball.Mum,it is a word full of love.When I have some trouble with something,she helps me. When I want to give up,she encourages me. She always shows me her love and patience.She teaches me a lot of things about ho

8、w to be a brave man.She is very kind. Whenever someone is absent from school because of illness, she will go to his house to help him with the missed lessons.I think he is a confident and brave man, and he has broken the record of the 110-metre hurdle race, He is a hero in the whole Asia.He spent al

9、most all his time making our life better.No matter how serious mistake I made,he always forgave me.He always shows great respect to his parents,strong love to his wife and enough care to me.She always helps others who are in trouble.He is not only good at studies but also honest and always ready to

10、help others.He is also fond of English and takes active part in English activities.He is an elderly man but has a lot of energy.I usually tell him my secrets and he always gives me good advice.He is a legend in American rap history indeed.Once I was affected by what he did.I think she is patient and

11、 helpful.She is good-tempered and well-mannered.When he worked as a clerk,he didnt lose his burning desire.However,it is surprising that he didnt play basketball well at first and he was even shy.He never gives up and al ways works hard and tries his best to lead his team to success.When I get confu

12、sed,she gives me helpful suggestions and points out the way for me.His ambition was to be a famous singer but his family was too poor to pay for his study.Shes little educated. But in my eyes, she is absolutely a glamorous woman.談?wù)勀愕母惺蹷ecause of her,I know how to overcome difficulties.I admire him b

13、ecause he is the one who gives me the best things and loves me from the beginning of my life.She will be with me forever.She is a superwoman in my heart.I should try my best to study and work so that my dream can come true.Thats why I admire him/her most.He has set a good example to me.From him,I kn

14、ow what the sayingNo pains,no gains” means.Only through persistence can he realize his dream.I learn that life needs strong will and hard work.Unless you work hard , you will miss the success.Although my father becomes older and older- he is still the person who I admire most.He is not only a father

15、 but also a friend.14.I admire him not only for his perfect songs, but also for.No matter what happens, if you are ambitious and hard-working, you will succeed sooner or later.She taught me a lot about life and future.Thats what I learn from her.I can learn to be patient and determined from him.Ive

16、learnt that success isnt easy to get, but if you are ambitious, you will succeed sooner or later.She always gives me a lot of ideas on how to make my own life better.Great people are remembered not because they were handsome or beautiful, but because they did not give up when their lives were diffic

17、ult.Hard work, not good luck is the reason why he could become world-famous.When I feel sad, her/ his story always makes me feel better.That is why I admire her. I would like to follow her example, and serve as a nurse or a doctor in the future.【范文評講】原文稿I have met many people who are really worth ad

18、miring in my life. But perhaps the most admirable person I ever knew is my English teacher who taught me in my teens.What frequently brings back memories of my English teacher is his special qualities. First of all, I was attracted by his lively wits. In those days, I remember we students always Loo

19、k forward to his classes with great eagerness because his lectures were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs. Secondly, the respect he showed for us impressed me deeply. As he treated us like friends rather than students, we all liked to talk with him. Finally, my E

20、nglish teacher gave us the greatest gift that a teacher can offer-an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English, but also aroused our interest in exploring something. In conclusion, my mid-school English teacher is the person I

21、admire most, and I will remember him forever.【點(diǎn)評與評分】在這篇文章中，作者筆法熟練，全文流暢。其次，文章詞匯豐富，層次分明，闡述的理由充分透徹。按中考作文20分計(jì)算，屬于第一檔的文章，可得17分以上。需改進(jìn)之處：1.全文較長，建議分段更為清晰，并適當(dāng)作刪減。n those days.,表示過去已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情，動詞應(yīng)用過去式。修改稿I have met many people who are really worth admiring in my life. But perhaps the most admirable person l ever

22、knew is my English teacher who taught me in my teens. What frequently brings back memories of my English teacher is his special qualities.First of all, I was attracted by his lively wits. In those days, I rememberedwe students alwayslooked forward to his classes with great eagerness because his lect

23、ures were humorously delivered. Secondly, the respect he showed for us impressed me deeply. As he treated us like friends rather than students, we all liked to talk with him. Finally, my English teacher gave us the greatest gift-an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an apprec

24、iation of the beauty and perfection of English- but also aroused our interest in exploring something.In conclusion, my mid-school English teacher is the person I admire most, and I will remember him forever.【范文選登】There are many people in my life. Among them, I admire my mother most. She is good-look

25、ing and of average height. She is a well-built woman as well. She has big eyes and short black hair. She is good-tempered and considerate. Last year. I met some difficulties in my study and 1 couldnt solve them. I really wanted to give up at that time. But my mother told me to insist on studying and

26、 never give up, She_ said. No pains, no gains” I was encouraged by her. At last, I overcame the difficulties and got a good mark. From her, I Learn we should never give up even though there are lots of difficulties. Mum, I admire you most.Mother is the most important person in everyone s life. Since

27、 I was born, my mother has cared for me for 15 years. Though I was very naughty when I was a child. my mother always forgave me. But the also told me what could be done and what couldn t be done. As the time goes, I ngirioinythought longer. With the help of my mother. I become an excellent student i

28、n school and a kind daughter in the family, I love my mother who gives me life and a warm home to live in. I love my mother who leads me to a bright and right way in my life. She isn t pretty, wise or rich, bueres no doubt she is the most important person in my life.The person I admire most is my fa

29、ther. He is a strong and healthy man because he often does some exercise to become more and more healthy. He always shows great respect to his parents, strong love to his wife and enough care to me. He works hard and tries hard to make oilrfe better. He doesn t often get hor until nine o lockc He is

30、 really a hard-working person. He has set a good example to me. From him I know that I must study harder so that I can have a good life in the future.In my life, the person I admire most is my dad. He is an officer of a big company. He is about forty and of average height, Theres always a smile on h

31、is face.He often teaches me how lo be a happy person. A lot o good suggestions in my study are given by him. My dad is a self-disciplined person. He rarely breaks rules. I remember he told me that being honest is the most important thing.I think he is not only a good father but also a good teacher i

32、n my life. Thats why I admire him most.【范文鏈接】My favourite teacherEveryone has his or her favourite teacher, so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss Li, our English teacher.Miss Li is beautiful. She has big eyes and curly hair. She wears glasses. Most of all. I like her because she is very kind to us.

33、Three years ago, when I started at my school, I found English very difficult. At first, Miss Li seemed very strict. But she asked students having difficulties in English to go to her of ice where she helped them in person. Little by little, I began to see she is very kind and patient. She explains e

34、verything to us until we understand it. She never gives up on students like me who have trouble with English. She tells us not to worry and never to give up. She inspiresme and makes me try my best to study English. I have made great progress over the last three years.Time flies ! Im going to gradua

35、te soon and I really want to say, “Thanyou, my beloved teacher.”My deskmateI cant go through these three years Without her help. She is my deskmate, Mary. She is a really kind girl who often helps me with my lessons. At first, I was not very glad of sitting beside her because she was so excellent, a

36、nd that would bring me too much pressure. However, one thing changed my opinion and we became close friends.On a cold winter morning,I got a bad cold. Nobody noticed that and I felt very bad. When my deskmate knew that, she ran to the school clinic and bought some medicine for me. Then she gave me s

37、ome fruit and prepared hot water for me.Seeing what she did for me,I was moved entirely. Thanks to her help,I spent the terrible day happily.That is my deskmate. She gives me help and warmth: I feel lucky that I have such a good deskmate. She is the sunshine in my world!The most important friend in

38、my lifeAs the saying goes,There is a golden house in the books. The book is the most important friend in my life.First of all,when I am reading,I am just like talking to a knowledgeable friend. He gives me a lot of information. Second, when I am in trouble, the friend often gives me suggestions,whic

39、h are very useful. Last but not at lea st, Mr Book is the light to my soul. He teaches me if life gives you lemons,then make lemonade.Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles. Book is the most important friend in my life.An unusual personThere is a boy whose name is Andy in our class. H

40、e is an unusual person. When we have an English class,he often does some homework.When we have a PE lesson, he sometimes stays in the classroom to read some books.Because of it,nobody in our class wan ts to make friends with him.So he is often seen alone to do something he likes. I wonder what makes

41、 him be like that. Can you give me some advice?One day, our math teacher announced, Andy got 150 marks in recent math exam.” Wewere very surprised to hear that.Andy was really somewhat strange, but we should learn from him in hard working.5.Friends make the differenceIt was an unlucky day.I failed t

42、he math exam again!My efforts were for nothing. Tears ran down my face.“ Hey, whats up? I heard a familiar voice, It was my best friend,Daniel.meh exam. I was too sad to say any more.“Come）n! Life is full of ups and downs. You have to face them bravely.Its just a small failure（失 敗）,but a good esson

43、too. Try harder next time.”I felt much better but couldnt stop crying. Daniel then got a book and gave it to me. It was full of funny pictures and jokes. It made me laugh.On the last page,there was a picture of a rainbow（ 彩虹）.Daniel said,Be brave,Shirley!Im sure you will see a beautiful rainbow soon

44、.”Than k you,Daniel!” I said,He said,That is what friends are for! ”When you are in trouble, a helping hand from a friend makes you feel so much better. A friend in need is a friend indeed（M正的）.6.The person I hate mostMy neighbour Ken is the person I hate most. He is above average height and he is thin.He has short black hair. He is rude that he usually smokes outside in the corridor and plays the piano at midnight. He likes playing the piano but he cant play it well.Because of