1、人物介紹寫作方法基礎(chǔ)寫作之一Basic writing1基礎(chǔ)寫作: 眾所周知, 劉翔以世界飛人而出名, 在男子110米欄方面, 他是我們中國, 甚至是亞洲的驕傲.寫作內(nèi)容: 請根據(jù)表格, 向世界介紹劉翔.寫作要求: 用5個句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容.2姓名：劉翔出生年月：年月日性別；男出生地：上海身高：米教練：孫海平偶像：Jordon專項：欄成就：年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄年月日在瑞士洛桑以秒破世 界記錄愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信樂觀 瑞士洛桑: Lausanne, Switzerland3審題列要點依要點, 擬草綱, 組織成句.構(gòu)篇章,擴句成文

2、.檢查潤色書寫基礎(chǔ)寫作解題步驟：4一、審題:(四確定)確定類型2. 確定體裁 3. 確定主體時態(tài) 4. 確定主體人稱第三人稱人物介紹記敘文一般現(xiàn)在時5二 列要點1. 概況age, sex, birth-place, background姓名：劉翔出生年月：年月日性別；男出生地：上海身高：米 偶像：Jordon劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.教練：孫海平專項：欄62. 外貌性格/ 愛好appearance ,character, hobby身高：米自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信樂觀3. 教育/ 專長/ 事業(yè)：education, speciality 3)他的身高1.89米, 為人誠懇, 隨

3、和, 自信樂觀.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.專項：欄教練：孫海平愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書偶像：Jordon4) 他擅長110米欄, 他的教練是孫海平74. 生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )成就：年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄年月日在瑞士洛桑以秒破世 界記錄4) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄5. 評估evaluation8三 依要點, 擬草綱, 組織成句.1) 劉翔, 出生在198

4、3年7月13日上海.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.3)他的身高1.89米, 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀.4) 他擅長110米欄, 他的教練是孫海平5) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,6) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄92) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.3) 擁有身高1.89米的他擅長110米欄, 在他的教練孫海平的幫助下他取得了傲人的成績.4) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄1) 為人誠懇, 隨和

5、, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.101) 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.Liuxiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening tomusic, playing games and reading books.3) 擁有身高1.

6、89米的他擅長110米欄, 在他的教練孫海平的幫助下他取得了很多傲人的成績.With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 Meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has many gained wonderful achievements.114) he broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the ch

7、ampionship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. 5) He broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. 4) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄12四 構(gòu)篇章,擴句成文. Liuxiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 19

8、83 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. he broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 200

9、2 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. He broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. he has many gained wonderful achievements.13五 檢查潤色時態(tài)是否正確人稱是否一致是否用5個句子是否漏掉必要信息是否語句連貫14五 檢查潤色 Liuxiang,

10、an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained man

11、y wonderful achievements. he broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. He broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. he has many gained wonder

12、ful achievements.15六 書寫 Liuxiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the traini

13、ng of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. For example, he broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. Most excitingly, he broke the record by 1288 on Jul

14、y 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. he has many gained wonderful achievements.161.例文：假如你叫李明，你的美國朋友布魯斯開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文學(xué)，來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹魯迅，內(nèi)容如下（1）魯迅，原名周樹人，浙江紹興人（2）為了國家，棄醫(yī)從文。（3）著名的作家，思想家，而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。（4）小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如阿Q正傳、祝福這兩部影片。（5）一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。參考詞匯：阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q 祝福：The New Years Sacrifice注意：1）介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，但不要逐條譯成英語。寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。文章首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性。實戰(zhàn)演練17Dear Bruce, I was glad to