1、永州市東安縣川巖學校-蔣崢嶸Welcome to visit my lesson七年級下冊 Unit 9 英語寫作指導執教者：永州市東安縣川巖學校-蔣崢嶸將草稿謄（tng）抄到試卷上。全面檢查，修改錯誤。寫作指導一審主題，二審體裁，三審時態，四審人稱,五審內容要點。抓要點，打草稿，羅列文章需要談論到的內容，寫出關鍵的短語成句子。給要點加上主語和修飾語,豐富要點。連句成文，從空間、時間、細節、連貫、前后呼應各方面考慮。 654321審改抓擴連抄blonde hairbig eyeswears glassesa long faceblack haira small moutha round fac

2、ea big nose very tall and handsome straight brown hair not wear glasses wear jeans , a T-shirt and sports shoes be of medium height and young long straight brown hair and big eyes be tall and thin curly blonde hair about thirty years old be a short and heavy old man short black hair 尼格買提tall and han

3、dsomeround face and big eyesshort curly black hairwears a suit 朱迅tall ,thin and beautifullong curly blonde hairblue dress 劉歡round facelong straight hairwear red scarf and glassesheavy He/She is tall/short/ heavy/thin. 他/她個子高/矮，長得胖/瘦。He/She is of medium hight/build. 他/她中等身高/中等身材。He/She has straight /

4、curly /blonde/brown hair. 他/她留著直發/卷發/金發/棕發。He/She wears glasses /earrings/rings/necklace/jeans/T-shirt/sports shoes. 他/她戴眼鏡/耳環/戒指/項鏈/穿著流仔褲/T恤衫/運動鞋。He is very tall and hansome. 他非常高而且英俊。卡片積累She is a very pretty/beautiful girl. 她是一個非常漂亮的女孩。She is a beautiful girl with big eyes and a small mouth. 她是一個長

5、著一雙大眼睛小嘴巴的漂亮女孩。She is friendly to everyone. 她對每個人都很友好。She is kind to everyone. 她對每個人都很支持。We all want to make friends with her. 我們都想和她交朋友。范文引路假設你的朋友叫俞靜（Yu Jing），她是一個漂亮的女孩兒。她的外貌特征和性格特征如下：請根據以上提示寫一篇短文介紹一下俞靜。要求：（1）字數60左右。 （2）可適當發揮想象。外貌特征瘦；中等身高；短短的直發；大眼睛小嘴巴；從不戴耳環（earrings）喜歡穿牛仔褲。性格特征對任何人都友好，助人。思路點撥（1）點明要

6、介紹的人物，即“我的朋友-俞靜”。用第三人稱寫。（2）描述外貌。根據題目中的提示信息，她的外貌特征可表達為：She is thin .She is of medium height（3）描述性格。根據題目中的提示信息，他的性格特點是友善助人，可以使用nice,kind,hepful,friendly等詞。（4）總述。在介紹了俞靜的外貌特征和性格特點之后，可以再寫一些總述的話，談論一下大家對她的印象，如”My classmates and I like her very much.”等。寫作提綱 總 述 My classmates and I like her very much.點明要介紹的人

7、物 My friend ,Yu Jing,is a beautiful girl. 描述外貌 She is thin of medium height She has straight hair,big eyes and a small mouth. She never wears earrings. She likes wearing jeans and sports shoes.描述性格 She is friendly and helpful to everyone參考范文very happy to be with her.My friend , Yu Jing , is a beauti

8、ful girl. She isthin and of medium height. She has short straighthair,big eyes and a small mouth. She never wearsearrings. She likes wearing jeans and sportsShoes. She is friendly and helpful to everyone. My classmates and I like her very much. We are all本節課小結本節課我們要學習描述人物外貌特征的句型練習： 問句 : What does he

9、/she look like? He/She is +形容詞 答句： He/She has +名詞 He/She wears +名詞寫作指導1、審。一審主題，二審體裁，三審時態，四審人稱，五審內容要點。2、抓。抓要點，打草稿，羅列文章需要談論到的內容，寫出關鍵的短語成句。3、擴。給要點加上主語和修飾詞，豐富要點。4、連。連句成文，從空間、時間、細節、連貫、前后呼應各方面考慮。5、改。全面檢查，修改錯誤。6、抄。將草稿謄抄到試卷上。Homework假若你的英語老師是來自英國的Mr Smith,根據下列提示詞語，以“My English teacher”為題寫一篇英語短文。要求：1、所給提示詞盡可能都用上，順序可以打亂； 2、60詞左右，可以適當發揮想象。提示詞：tall，thin，han