1、英語書面表達指導英語書面表達指導 短話長說短話長說1 General structure1 General structure3 Advanced expressions3 Advanced expressionsVarious structuresVarious structuresGraceful wordsGraceful words2 Linking 2 Linking words words Elements of a passageTopic sentenceTopic sentence Supporting Supporting sentencessentences Conclu

2、ding sentence Concluding sentence一、文章總體模板一、文章總體模板1. 文章開頭的總體交待文章開頭的總體交待 起起 （ 引出主題）引出主題）A. Recently, we had a discussion about B. we carried out a survey of C. When it comes to the topic whether 2. 呈現不同觀點的句式呈現不同觀點的句式 轉承轉承 （陳述觀點）（陳述觀點） A. Some of them are in favor of the idea that However, others hold

3、a completely opposite opinion. B. Some people firmly believe that. Others argue that 呈現論據時常用的連接詞呈現論據時常用的連接詞in the first place, _(原因一). Furthermore, in the second place, _(原因二). So it goes without saying that _(觀點一). Some people hold the idea that_ (觀點二). In their point of view, on the one hand，_(原因一

4、) . On the other hand, _ (原因二). Therefore, there is no doubt that _(觀點二). 3. 結尾部分表達個人觀點和總結的用語結尾部分表達個人觀點和總結的用語 結結 （ 總結觀點）總結觀點）As far as Im concerned,/ From my point of view, / To sum up, 方法一方法一 : 使用多種句子結構使用多種句子結構1 If she is compared with other teachers , we find she pays more attention to her way of

5、teaching.(狀語)Compared with other teachers , she pays more attention to his Compared with other teachers , she pays more attention to his way of teaching.way of teaching.2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak. (連詞+分詞)Unless invited , you should keep silent at the meet

6、ing .Unless invited , you should keep silent at the meeting .3He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒裝/強調)Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessNot until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessIt was not until he returned home that he realized his It was

7、 not until he returned home that he realized his foolishness.foolishness.二、高分作文技巧二、高分作文技巧4 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study. (only倒裝). 5 How should we protect eyesight? It still remains a question among us.(主語從句)6 We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eye

8、sight.(cant too much)Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.satisfying grade.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.among us.We cant emphasize t

9、he importance of protecting our We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.eyesight too much.方法二方法二: 善用高級詞匯善用高級詞匯Which is better? 1 1 周末我們會有很多作業要做周末我們會有很多作業要做. .A We have endless homework to do at the weekend. A We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B We have a lot

10、 of homework to do at the weekend . B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 2 在我所有的老師里在我所有的老師里, ,毛老師給我留下了很毛老師給我留下了很深的印象深的印象. .A Of all my teachers, I still remember A Of all my teachers, I still remember MrMr Moore. Moore.B Of all my teachers, B Of all my teachers, MrMr Moore gave me th

11、e Moore gave me the deepest impression.deepest impression.3 3 高級培訓班結束后回到家，他的妻子高級培訓班結束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力盡。感到精疲力盡。A. His wife came back home after the advanced A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired.training class, feeling very tired.B. His wife came back home aft

12、er the advanced B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. training class, feeling very exhausted. 4. 4. 他沒聽我課上講的東西。他沒聽我課上講的東西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class. class. B He didnt listen to what

13、I said in the class. B He didnt listen to what I said in the class. When it comes to the issue of, the majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that However, attitudes towardsvary from person to person. some people firmly believe that, there are some factorscontributing to this attitude

14、 as follows, in the first place,in the second place,. On top of that, As a matter of fact, it is not often the case. Others have a preference of, there are several remarkable reasons. For one thing, for another On my part,. 1. 利用模板利用模板方法方法添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內容容2、附加成分作解釋說明、附加成

15、分作解釋說明例一：這樣更方便照顧父母。例一：這樣更方便照顧父母。 拓展：因為父母越來越年邁。拓展：因為父母越來越年邁。 原因原因 as they are getting older and older. Owing to / because例二：因廣告過多，例二：因廣告過多， 影片放映晚點影片放映晚點 。拓展：這導致觀眾不耐煩甚至惱火拓展：這導致觀眾不耐煩甚至惱火 。后果后果 which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even an

16、noyed.It will be much more convenient to look after your parentsThere were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, 方法方法添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內容容2、附加成分作解釋說明、附加成分作解釋說明條件條件 目的目的 例三：安全出口（例三：安全出口（exit）標志不明，）標志不明， 存在安全隱患存在安全隱患(potential hazard）。）。 拓展：萬一

17、遇到危險， 觀眾難以逃脫。 In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape.例四：對中學生假期通訊方式進行了一項調查 We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday拓展：為了了解對中學生假期通訊方式 In order to learn about how our high school students communicate with each other during

18、the holiday, we did a survey with the help of my classmates. The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard.方法方法添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內容容2、附加成分作解釋說明、附加成分作解釋說明(1)表達不同原因的概括語表達不同原因的概括語There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follows.The reason foris thatThe r

19、eason why is that(2)表示無需說明的事實的概括語：表示無需說明的事實的概括語：It goes without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say, Its obvious that3.加加諺語諺語(Proverb)鍛煉對學生有好處鍛煉對學生有好處 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us studen

20、ts to take exercise.3. 添加諺語添加諺語加加諺語諺語(Proverb)集中注意力于學習集中注意力于學習We should focus our mind on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should focus our mind on our studies.怎么添加諺語？怎么添加諺語？方法方法添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內容添加與所給信息有關的前因后果及條件，目的等內容常用常用諺語諺語(Proverb)Strike the iron while it is hot.趁熱打

21、鐵。趁熱打鐵。Think twice before you do.三思而后行。三思而后行。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鳥在手勝過雙鳥在林。一鳥在手勝過雙鳥在林。Do as the Romans do.入鄉隨俗。入鄉隨俗。 Do it now.機不可失，時不再來。機不可失，時不再來。Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。失敗是成功之母。 It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水難收

22、。覆水難收。 An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一個蘋果，一天一個蘋果， 醫生遠離我。醫生遠離我。All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。條條大路通羅馬。 青少年應盡我們所能保護環境拯救地球青少年應盡我們所能保護環境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save th

23、e earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy.4. 舉例說明舉例說明人口密集地區遭受許多自然災害（舉例說明）人口密集地區遭受許多自然災害（舉例說明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as flood, hurricanes, droughts or ot

24、her disasters.珍惜每一滴水珍惜每一滴水Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent about this. To protect our valuable water resources, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears. As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do

25、 remember: we are not saving water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference.5. 結尾提出倡議或號召結尾提出倡議或號召As students, we should start from ourselves . Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we c

26、an change the present situation. 參加俱樂部或活動參加俱樂部或活動Dont hesitate. It will be great fun!Dont wait. Join us now!Since it has so many benefits, what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!保護環境保護環境“短話長說短話長說”方法：方法：1. 利用模板利用模板 2. 附加成分作解釋說明附加成分作解釋說明 3. 加諺語加諺語(Proverb)4. 舉例說明舉例說明 5. 結尾提出倡議或號召結尾提出倡議或號召 寫作任務寫

27、作任務 現在，青少年肥胖越來越嚴重， 很讓父母擔心。請你根據以下提示寫一篇文章 參考詞匯：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1. 字數150左右 2. 對所有要點要適當發揮， 不要簡單翻譯。 3. 開頭已給出， 不計入總數Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._ 原因原因1. 缺少運動缺少運動2. 飲食結構不合理飲食結構不合理建議1. 多參加體育鍛煉2. 多吃健康食品， 遠離垃圾食品3. 要點分析要點分析如何起、轉、承、結如何起、轉、承、結On my par

28、t,1. 利用模板利用模板When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter?Some are , others areBecause of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than be

29、fore.1. 缺少運動缺少運動 Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework,Because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overw

30、eight.2. 飲食結構不合理飲食結構不合理 In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.建議1. 多參加體育鍛煉 As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food.2. 多吃健康食品， 遠離垃圾食品Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance our exercise and studies.3.制定合理的計劃， 時間表合成文章合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents