1、2018年01月25日試用3的高中英語組卷一書面表達(dá)（共20小題）1假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為"父母是否以子女為榮"通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：1描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因2學(xué)校即將舉辦"讀書節(jié)"，目前正廣泛征集"讀書節(jié)"宣傳冊圖片假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括以下內(nèi)容：1簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；2闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳"

2、讀書節(jié)"的理由3學(xué)校英語報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：1你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；2你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由4請描述如圖所示的圖片，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?Directions：Write an English composition in 120150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese描寫一件你珍藏的物品文章要具體說明何時(shí)、何

3、地、怎樣得到這件物品以及為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在6你叫Jenny，你的網(wǎng)友Peter（高一學(xué)生）即將面臨期末考試，近日，他就是否要請家教來幫他復(fù)習(xí)迎考向你求教，請給Peter回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件必須包括以下內(nèi)容：結(jié)合你自身的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷就是否請家教表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)及理由；就復(fù)習(xí)迎考給出2條主要建議7以下是三座城市在就業(yè)、娛樂、環(huán)境方面的滿意度假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，請從你和家庭的情況考慮選擇一座比較滿意的城市，并簡要談?wù)勥x擇這座城市的理由提示：不必對圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)做詳細(xì)描寫 8你班將召開一次主題班會，探討高中生在成長過程中遇到的煩惱請根據(jù)自己實(shí)際生活中遇到的學(xué)習(xí)、交友、代溝、同齡人攀比等現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行

4、思考，寫一篇發(fā)言稿文章需包括：1你在實(shí)際生活中遇到的至少兩種煩惱及其簡要介紹；2你應(yīng)對這些煩惱所采取的舉措和建議9Directions：Write an English composition in 120150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese假設(shè)你班班長打算在寒假組織一次班級活動，有三種方案：一、慈善義賣幫助家庭有困難的同學(xué)；二、聘請英語專家介紹有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法；三、組織一次班級新年派對作為班級的一員，請你根據(jù)你的實(shí)際情況，在三項(xiàng)方案中選擇其一，提出對該項(xiàng)活動的建議并談?wù)劺碛赡愕膶懽髦斜仨毎ǎ涸谌?xiàng)方案中選擇

5、其一；對該方案提出建議；談?wù)勀闾岢鼋ㄗh的理由10假如你是某中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李明，寫一封信給學(xué)校圖書館負(fù)責(zé)老師，因?yàn)槟阈D書館將選擇招募課余學(xué)生圖書管理員信必須包括以下內(nèi)容：簡要介紹個(gè)人特長表達(dá)希望成為課余學(xué)生圖書管理員的愿望談?wù)勀阕鳛檎n余學(xué)生圖書管理員，對學(xué)校圖書館管理提出一些建議注意：文中請勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校Dear Sir/Madam11Directions：Writing an English composition in 120150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese請根據(jù)下面的圖片，結(jié)合你個(gè)人的經(jīng)歷，

6、談?wù)勀愕南敕?2某英文網(wǎng)站正舉辦征文活動，題目是The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned，請以此寫一篇征文你的文章比須包括：這項(xiàng)技能是什么？你是通過什么方式學(xué)會的？舉例說明為什么你覺得它最有用（注：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及學(xué)校名稱）13假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校有四個(gè)社團(tuán)正招募新人（如圖所示），你希望加入其中一個(gè)請你寫一篇日記，談?wù)勀愕南敕▋?nèi)容必須包括：你希望加入的社團(tuán)選擇該社團(tuán)的原因你可以為該社團(tuán)做些什么注意：請勿透露本人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱14如圖反映了一種常見的現(xiàn)象：拖延癥（procrastination）請寫一篇作文，內(nèi)容包括：1給procrastina

7、tion下定義；2用生活中的例子談?wù)勀銓Υ爽F(xiàn)象的看法15最近，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上針對學(xué)習(xí)有兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，一種是"興趣是最好的老師"，另一種是"興趣不是最好的老師"請你結(jié)合自己的體會，選擇你支持的觀點(diǎn)，表達(dá)自己的看法，并闡述理由注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)你本人的姓名、班級及學(xué)校等真實(shí)信息16現(xiàn)有一個(gè)中學(xué)生志愿者服務(wù)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺，這是該平臺上顯示學(xué)生參與活動的流程圖：請你據(jù)此寫一篇短文，你的文章必須包括：簡要介紹參與活動的流程談?wù)勀銓νㄟ^網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺參與志愿者服務(wù)活動的看法17學(xué)生會正在評選新一屆學(xué)生會主席，假設(shè)你是該校的學(xué)生李青，有意參加競選寫一份自薦材料，材料必須包括以下內(nèi)容

8、：簡述個(gè)人信息及你所具備的競選條件（能力、性格、愛好等）如果當(dāng)選，請你用具體事例闡述你將會為本校學(xué)生做些什么？注意：自薦材料中不得使用你所在學(xué)校和你的真實(shí)名字18Directions：Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese下面兩幅圖反映的是部分城鄉(xiāng)孩子所面臨的窘境請就此圖談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ愕奈恼聭?yīng)包括：具體描述兩幅圖；簡要分析造成這兩種現(xiàn)象的原因；提出解決問題的建議（注：請勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）19Directions：Write an En

9、glish composition in 120150words according to the instructions你是李華，為解決你所在的學(xué)校公益社團(tuán)（public welfare society）的資金短缺問題，請給全校學(xué)生寫一封募捐信，募集5000元善款信中必須包括：1向全校的捐款號召2你發(fā)起這一活動的理由3你準(zhǔn)備怎樣使用善款的計(jì)劃（文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等任何真實(shí)信息）20下面兩幅圖反映的是部分城鄉(xiāng)孩子所面臨的窘境請就此圖談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ愕奈恼聭?yīng)包括：具體描述兩幅圖；簡要分析造成這兩種現(xiàn)象的原因；提出解決問題的建議（注：請勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）2018年01月25日試用3的

10、高中英語組卷參考答案與試題解析一書面表達(dá)（共20小題）1假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為"父母是否以子女為榮"通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：1描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因【分析】本文為圖表作文，考生需要根據(jù)數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析，從數(shù)據(jù)分析原因，得出結(jié)論時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱為主寫作要點(diǎn)為：1描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因重要的詞匯及短語：make a survey 做調(diào)查hold the same opinion 持相同的觀

11、點(diǎn)according to根據(jù)approve 同意，認(rèn)可cause 起因，原因figure out 找出lead to 導(dǎo)致subtle 細(xì)微的conservative 保守的accustom to 習(xí)慣于convey 傳遞（信息）tendency 趨勢conceal 隱藏the current education system 常規(guī)的教育體系bias 偏愛，偏見excessively 過分地高分句型：句型一：There seems to betwo causes aswe tried to figure out whatled to this subtle differencethere s

12、eems to be 句型，表示"看上去似乎有"；as 引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，表示伴隨，主句和從句的兩個(gè)動作同時(shí)發(fā)生；what 引導(dǎo)賓語從句句型二：The current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud常規(guī)的教育體系過分強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)業(yè)表

13、現(xiàn)/價(jià)值，導(dǎo)致孩子們過度認(rèn)為只有取得優(yōu)異的成績，才能讓父母為自己驕傲句型三：This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves這種偏見不公正地低估了藝術(shù)和體育特長的意義，很容易打擊到孩子（的信心），因而他們更可能降低對自我的認(rèn)同【解答】Recently，we made a survey about whether t

14、he parents agree that they are proud of their childrenThe result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinionAccording to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children（描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)）There se

15、ems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference【高分句型一】First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their childrenThis tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of selfconfide

16、nce（原因一）Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud【高分句型二】This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and spor

17、ts，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves【高分句型三】（原因二）Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of examoriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grownup（結(jié)論）【點(diǎn)評】數(shù)據(jù)分析類的作文，需要考生認(rèn)真觀察數(shù)據(jù)，透過現(xiàn)象看本質(zhì)，從數(shù)據(jù)中分析原因，得出結(jié)

18、論2學(xué)校即將舉辦"讀書節(jié)"，目前正廣泛征集"讀書節(jié)"宣傳冊圖片假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括以下內(nèi)容：1簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；2闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳"讀書節(jié)"的理由【分析】本文采用了"圖表+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅圖片，描述圖片同時(shí)闡述推薦理由，既是提綱作文又是圖畫類作文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱用第二和第三人稱重要短語：around the corner（即將到來），recommend sth t

19、o（推薦什么給），remind sb of sth （提醒某人），as far as I'm concerned （就我所知道的而言），turn out to be（結(jié)果是），not only，but also（不僅，而且），enhance understanding of.（增強(qiáng).的理解），take sth into consideration（把.考慮在內(nèi)）【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，Since the Reading Festival is around the corner，I'm writing to recommend a picture which ca

20、n be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of readingIn the picture，three students are sitting at the table，discussing heatedly what they have just read【高分句型】It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion（描述圖片）Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a pers

21、onal activity which needs quietness and concentration，as far as I'm concerned，it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciatedJust imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plotsYou are so amazed by the genius of the writer an

22、d you can't help sharing it with your classmates or best friends，who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well【高分句型】The moment you mention the book，the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own【高分句型】My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like

23、that，through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself，but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers，which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book【高分句型】To sum up，the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading，ins

24、tead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and common interest（闡述推薦該圖片的理由）I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early replyYours sincerely，Pan Yang【點(diǎn)評】寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍

25、繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等3學(xué)校英語報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：1你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；2你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由【分析】本文是一篇提綱作文根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，就學(xué)校英語報(bào)改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健

26、康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)事宜發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主寫作要點(diǎn)：1表示對客人的歡迎；2介紹此項(xiàng)活動（如活動目的、內(nèi)容等）3表達(dá)對客人的祝愿；重要短語：reform sth（代表），be replaced by（被代替），share sth with sb（與某人分享某物），needless to say （更不用說），according to （根據(jù)），have positive effects on（對有影響），be of great significance（非常有意義），loss o

27、f （損失），keep fit（保持健康），contributes to（促成），broaden one's horizons（拓寬某人的視野），in turn （反過來又），be beneficial to （對有益）【高分句型一】1Compared to the entertainment，I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important此處是過去分詞作狀語，主句為"I hold the view that the value of t

28、he columns concerning health and culture is more important"，主句的主語為"I"與所給動詞存在邏輯上的被動關(guān)系此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語從句解釋說明"view"的具體內(nèi)容【高分句型二】2The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye t

29、o life此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的表語從句，主語為"The main factor"，謂語動詞為"is"【高分句型三】3the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從

30、句，"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容【高分句型四】4Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，連接詞"that"解釋說明名詞"hope"的具體內(nèi)容【解答】Dear Editor，I've learned that our English Post is bein

31、g reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new oneI'm writing this email to share with you my opinionsNeedless to say，the columns will definitely be designed according to students'interest and have positive effects on their study and life（寫信的目的）Compared to the entertainme

32、nt，I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important【高分句型一】The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life【高分句型二】Consequently，more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality o

33、f lifeIn addition，the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life【高分句型三】（建議去除的欄目及去除的理由）Furthermore，the career planning should be taken into account in the school English PostOn

34、the one hand，it covers one's career development a great dealOn the other hand，it makes a great difference to one's career success in the future（建議增加的欄目及去除的理由）What has been mentioned above is my personal ideasHere I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved vers

35、ion of our school English Post【高分句型四】（希望）Yours sincerely，Cheng Fei【點(diǎn)評】提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型4請描述如圖所示的圖片，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋痉治觥勘疚臑榭磮D作文，主題是"要用積極樂觀的心態(tài)面對生活"寫作時(shí)可按"三段式"來寫，首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，然后分析概述其含義，發(fā)表感想基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為

36、主重要短語：do some actions （做一些動作），look like（看上去像），be faced with （面臨，面對），manage to do （成功地做某事），have a positive attitude toward（對有積極的態(tài)度），have great influence on（有很大影響），keep peace（保持平靜）【解答】As is vividly shown in the picture，an old granny who looks ugly in a wheelchair does some actionsThe actions reflect o

37、n the wall，which makes her look like a young beautiful girl（描述圖片）【高分句型】The picture conveys that some people are positive when they are faced with lifeThey are always so energetic and enterprising that they manage to finish most of tasks wellLife returns color to those people who have positive and op

38、timistic attitudes toward life（聯(lián)系實(shí)際，反映問題）【高分句型】Now that a positive attitude can lead us a better life，how can we develop a positive attitude？For one thing，we should hold a dream about future to provide our life a clear directionFor another，it is necessary for us to be confident which is the energy o

39、f life，perhaps the beauty of life【高分句型】Whether we can find it have a great influence on our attitude towards life，so we should keep peace in our heart to find the beauty of lifeIn my opinion，if we can do like that mentioned above，better life will hug us tightly（觀點(diǎn)）【點(diǎn)評】寫作看圖作文時(shí)，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主

40、題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，合理想象，對譯出的要點(diǎn)通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型5Directions：Write an English composition in 120150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese描寫一件你珍藏的物品文章要具體說明何時(shí)、何地、怎樣得到這件物品以及為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在【分析】高分句型：句型一：The reason why I still keep it in my memory is t

41、hat it reminds me of an old saying：there must be a use for one's talentThe reason why是以reason為先行詞，關(guān)系副詞why引導(dǎo)的定語從句在that引導(dǎo)的表語從句中含有短語remind sbof sth使某人想起某物句型二：When I was ten years old，there was an old man living in my neighborhoodwhen引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，在從句中作狀語living是現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語，與其邏輯主語man是主動關(guān)系【解答】In my drawer，th

42、ere is a deliberate wooden toy horse（開門見山，指出珍藏的物品）It was a gift from an old man in my neighborhood when I was still veryyoungThe reason why I still keep it in my memory is that it reminds me of anold saying：there must be a use for one's talent【高分句型一】When I was ten years old，therewas an old man l

43、iving in my neighborhood【高分句型一】He didn't have theopportunity to study in school，but he learned how to make wood furnitureEverytime people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture，he waswilling to help themTo my surprise，in his spare time，he would make some toys with small piece s of w

44、oodSome ofthem were sold to the toy store and others were given to us（具體說明何時(shí)、何地、怎樣得到這件物品）The moment I see the lovely toy horse made by this old man，I wouldremember the happy childhoodThe old man impressed me deeply with his talent andkindnessFrom the little horse toy，we can see whatever kind of tale

45、nt you have，you canfind your own method to display your talent and bring love to others（這件物品為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在的原因）【點(diǎn)評】本文要求描寫一件你珍藏的物品，要具體說明何時(shí)、何地、怎樣得到這件物品以及為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在所以在寫作時(shí)必須審好題，不能遺漏任何一條在準(zhǔn)確表述內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上，爭取多用些從句，非謂語和短語使文章生動，上檔次6你叫Jenny，你的網(wǎng)友Peter（高一學(xué)生）即將面臨期末考試，近日，他就是否要請家教來幫他復(fù)習(xí)迎考向你求教，請給Peter回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件必須包括以下內(nèi)容：結(jié)合你自身的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷

46、就是否請家教表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)及理由；就復(fù)習(xí)迎考給出2條主要建議Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to affordBesi

47、des，having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and

48、 review what is on your notebook carefully after classWhat's more，a tutor may make you depend fully onhim and lose your selfmotivation on study，which is exactly the truth of studyWithout it，you may never learn betterAnd that's why I say there's no need for you to invite a home tutorWhen

49、it comes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestionsFirst，review the points which you're poor atYou will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particular exercisesSecond，check all the notes and make sure that you'

50、ve captured all the detailsTry hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam【分析】本文是一篇提綱作文根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封電子郵件，就即將面臨期末考試的高一學(xué)生Peter是否要請家教來幫他來復(fù)習(xí)迎考表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)并提供建議寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)及理由； 2就復(fù)習(xí)迎考提出主要建議寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主重要短語：invitesb to do （邀請某人做某事），prepare for （為作準(zhǔn)備），be able to do（能夠做某事），b

51、e similar to （與相似），dependon （取決于，依賴），be of no use （沒有用處），When it comes to（當(dāng)談到，涉及到），bepoor at （在薄弱），be accompanied with（帶有，兼有），captureall the details（掌握所有細(xì)節(jié)），achievea good score（取得好成績）【高分句型】1Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final e

52、xamination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'這里是由現(xiàn)在分詞hearing作狀語，主句為I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'，主句的主語為I與所給動詞hear存在邏輯上的主動關(guān)系2A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作賓語，指

53、代前面的名詞150 yuan or more per hour3I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after

54、class這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容這里是代詞that可指代前面的名詞the information，that=the+名詞這里是由連詞so引導(dǎo)的句子，與前面的句子I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials構(gòu)成因果關(guān)系【解答】Hearing thatyou're wondering whether you should inv

55、ite a tutor to help you prepare for thecoming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'【高分句型】（表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)）A tutor costshigh，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford【高分句型】Besides，having studied that detailed informationof tutor classes from my

56、classmates，I find that most of the information issimilar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extendedmaterials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with fullattention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully afterclass【高分句型】What's mor

57、e，a tutor may make you dependfully on him and lose your selfmotivation on study，which isexactly the truth of study【高分句型】Withoutit，you may never learn betterAnd that's why I say there's no need for you toinvite a home tutor（理由） When itcomes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you t

58、wo suggestionsFirst，review the points which you're poor atYou will achieve twice the result withhalf the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particularexercisesSecond，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all thedetails【高分句型】（建議） Try hard and I believe you

59、 can achieve agood score in the exam（結(jié)尾總結(jié)概括）【點(diǎn)評】提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型7以下是三座城市在就業(yè)、娛樂、環(huán)境方面的滿意度假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，請從你和家庭的情況考慮選擇一座比較滿意的城市，并簡要談?wù)勥x擇這座城市的理由提示：不必對圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)做詳細(xì)描寫 【分析】本文是圖表作文，根據(jù)文章圖表和所給提示信息寫一篇短文，闡述你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，考慮在就業(yè)、娛樂、環(huán)境等方面選擇一座比較滿意的城市并說明理由寫作要點(diǎn)：1概述圖表；2選擇城市B的理由；3結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主人稱以第一和第