1、高二英語任務型寫作指導- How to Write a Summary (1命題:謝榮嬋Tips for writing a summary1. Read the passage for overall content and underline the key words.2. Group the reading into sections according to the au thors topic divisions.3. Write a one-sentence summary of each section, focusing on the main point. Do not i

2、nclude examples and minor details.4. Do not use your own opinion, but be sure to use your own words. Write it in the third person(第三人稱.5. In your final draft, insert transitional words and phrases where necessary, combine sentences for a smooth, logical flow of ideas.各種文體分析記敘文:who,what,result(結果,why

3、(條件或原因,meaning(不一定要有,視文章內容而定說明文:phenomenon/problem,feature(特點,process(過程,function(功能,tendency(發展趨勢議論文:theme(論題,opinion(作者的觀點,supporting sentences(論據,conclusion(結論新聞報道: the first sentence / paragraph; contents (examples or figures; conclusion / prediction (the last sentence書信類:可參照記敘文的做法(特別注意題目要求的寫作格式

4、常用模版According to the passage, we knowThis passage tells us about + 賓語/賓語從句, + 定語從句This passage tells us + 從句This article is mainly about + 賓語/賓語從句The writer argues by presenting the example ofIt can be easily concluded from the passage thatThe author states/narrates/explains/illustrates/describes/di

5、scusses/compares + 賓語/賓語從句參考范例記敘文On arriving home early in the morning, the writer failed to wake up his wife by ringing the door bell. He tried to climb towards the bedroom windows with a ladder, but was found / spotted by a policeman. Fortunately his shouting woke up his wife.議論文Some people think

6、/ consider the spirit of Lei Feng no longer suitable in our commodity society. However, others value the importance of the spirit, which has influenced many people on their sense of value and way of life.說明文The passage illustrates the reason for water pollution and its effect on wildlife. People pol

7、lute water on the earth for better life. Consequently, this is very bad for wildlife and many of them die from dirty water.概括部分評分標準滿分5分1. 完全不理解,照抄原文(0分2. 死板機械地抄,不改變原文順序(1分3. 改變主語或賓語的抄為主(2分(靈活地抄4. 稍作改動總體的抄(3分5. 改變句子、用詞,重新排列組織(45分Example閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。(2009廣東 Jackie is perhaps the most e

8、asily annoyed koala(考拉at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. Thats right sleep it off. The average ko

9、ala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.The reason why Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists, who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number

10、of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round, furry cre

11、ature smelling of grass kept waking you? 【寫作內容】1.以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容;2.然后以約120詞就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”進行討論,內容包括:(1 人們在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照?(2 假如你處在那些動物的處境,你會有什么反應?(3 你認為是否應該禁止游客和動物拍照?記敘文要點:1. Who? Koalas.2. What happened to them? Someone kept waking them.3. Result? They are unhappy and complaining.4. Why(條件或原因? The

12、y are hugged /and photographed by tourists.5. Meaning or purpose? (意義 Think and do as animals.整合所有信息:Koalas are unhappy and complaining because someone kept waking them, hoping to hug them or photograph with them. The author asks us to take animals into more consideration.單句改寫:(1.同義替換;2.語態互換;3.非謂語動詞

13、短語與從句的互換1. Someone kept waking them. (被動 They are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep.2. hoping to hug them or photograph with them(同義替換 due to/because of / for touriststaking photos3. asks us to think and do as animals (同義替換 be friendly to animals / take animals into more consideration整體概括及正文寫作

14、:The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.In order to be hugged or photographed by tourists, koalas do not have enough sleeping, which makes them angry.

15、 And now the government forbids the tourists to take photo with the koalas.The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people. Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun

16、to have. but anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed. No having peaceful surrounding s to sleep, dont you suffer restless and fidgets. no doubt we do and s

17、o do the animals.I think it necessary to ban tourists taking pictures with animals making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to establish harmonious relations with animals.Practice (2008年高考廣東卷讀寫任務試題第二節讀寫任務(共1小題,滿分25分 閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Hi, I

18、 am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a

19、 checkbook, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved itgood facilities, helpful instructors. and a good

20、library. The Students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ··&

21、#183; it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.寫作內容學校最近組織了一次中美學生交流活動,你參加其中的“大學校園生活”討論。聽完Mike的發言之后,你準備寫一份發言稿,題目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”,內容要點包括:1. 以約30個詞概括Mike的發言要點;2. 然后以約120個詞談談你理想的大學生活,內容包括:(1 對中學生活的感受;(2 理想的大學生活;(3 中學生活和大學生活的差別,以及你打算如何適應。寫作要求1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷

22、或虛構的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。評分標準概括準確,語言規范,內容合適,篇章連貫。_ _ _ _閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。A few months ago, Peter worked for a short time as a cashier at a restaurant. He also helped clear the tables when it was especially busy. One night, just before Christmas, he found a large black wallet on the floor near one of the tables. He guessed he should have checked it for the owners identification, but he was very busy at the time. Also, he figured that if the wallet contained anything valuable, the owner would be back. Sure enough, an hour later