1、How to correct a How to correct a compositioncomposition 短文改錯(cuò)短文改錯(cuò)1.We all had a good time yesterday.2. Ill return back to school now.3. I like playing piano.4. I majored at English in college.theWrong wordMissing wordinUnnecessary wordright lineback高考短文改錯(cuò)的短文通常只有高考短文改錯(cuò)的短文通常只有120120個(gè)詞個(gè)詞左右，分成左右，分成1010行

2、，短文的難度也與考生行，短文的難度也與考生的習(xí)作相當(dāng)，的習(xí)作相當(dāng)，9 9行中都行中都存在錯(cuò)誤。各種存在錯(cuò)誤。各種錯(cuò)誤所占比例為錯(cuò)誤所占比例為 2：1：6或者或者 1：1：7：多多 缺缺 錯(cuò)錯(cuò)得法者，事半功倍得法者，事半功倍 3 steps1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）找錯(cuò)）3. Read the passage

3、for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)注意的問題短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)注意的問題 1.1. 在有錯(cuò)行改動(dòng)一詞。在有錯(cuò)行改動(dòng)一詞。2.2. 改變實(shí)詞形式，不能將一個(gè)實(shí)詞換成改變實(shí)詞形式，不能將一個(gè)實(shí)詞換成另一個(gè)實(shí)詞另一個(gè)實(shí)詞. .3.3. 最小限度地改變單詞形式最小限度地改變單詞形式 . .4.4. 添加或刪除虛詞添加或刪除虛詞( (如冠詞，介詞等如冠詞，介詞等).).5.5. 多改正，少添加或刪除多改正，少添加或刪除. .6.6. 最大限度地保持句子和短

4、文原意最大限度地保持句子和短文原意. .Four points that you should pay attention to標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改. .大小寫不改大小寫不改. .詞序錯(cuò)誤不改詞序錯(cuò)誤不改. .在綱外生詞不改在綱外生詞不改 ( (帶漢語注釋的詞帶漢語注釋的詞).).動(dòng)詞形，動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意形和副還要注意形和副代詞代詞格格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞常光顧冠詞連詞常光顧 A Limerick非謂語，細(xì)辨別非謂語，細(xì)辨別句子成分多分析句子成分多分析邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注一、動(dòng)詞形一、動(dòng)詞形 主要包括兩類錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞的主要包括兩類錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞的

5、時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，以及錯(cuò)誤，以及主、謂不一致主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。的錯(cuò)誤。2010四川卷：四川卷： And after many attempts, she past her driving test and told her husband that2010重慶卷：重慶卷： In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.passedspend2010遼寧遼寧 Her hair was black and purple, a

6、nd she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater wore2010全國全國 What were better , I had useful help. was二、名詞數(shù)二、名詞數(shù) 指指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯(cuò)誤。的用法錯(cuò)誤。2010全國全國：Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 2008浙江卷：浙江卷：A nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses

7、 on evenlope .The pay was 10 cents per envelope. friends evenlopes 2006福建卷福建卷： If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 2010四川卷：四川卷： In fact, Ive nearly killed three peoples . 2006重慶卷：重慶卷： In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. interestpeoplesky三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副 注意注意形

8、容詞和副詞形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯(cuò)題的常考點(diǎn)。法。這也是高考短文改錯(cuò)題的常考點(diǎn)。2010遼寧：遼寧：she was, in fact, rather attractively. 2006福建卷：福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around. attractivehappily修飾修飾名詞名詞，bebe動(dòng)詞，系動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞，系動(dòng)詞要用要用形容詞形容詞修飾修飾動(dòng)詞，形容詞，整個(gè)句子動(dòng)詞，形容詞，整個(gè)句子用用副詞副詞比較級(jí)比較級(jí)和和最高級(jí)最高級(jí)的使用的使用 2008全國卷全國卷： I will lear

9、n more about the history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic games. 2006遼寧卷：遼寧卷： She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed. usuallywell四、非謂語，細(xì)辨別四、非謂語，細(xì)辨別 這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞，動(dòng)名詞在分詞、過去分詞，動(dòng)名詞和和不定式不定式錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤。2007浙江卷：浙江卷： I could not to run v

10、ery fast and fell behind.2007寧夏卷：寧夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day. to2008重慶卷：重慶卷： And there were many meaningful things2008遼寧卷：遼寧卷： We all enjoyed this precious day greatly , remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with.rememberingthat were worth think of.thinking五五、 代

11、詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟高考鏈接高考鏈接6： I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term.us1.1.人稱代詞人稱代詞主格主格和和賓格賓格，物主代詞物主代詞的使用的使用反身代詞反身代詞oneselfoneself 的使用的使用3 3不定代詞不定代詞的使用的使用4 4Both,all,either,neither,noneBoth,all,either,neither,none的使用的使用. .5 5. . WhoseWhose 和和whoswhos，itsits和和 itsits的區(qū)別的區(qū)別五五、 代詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)

12、悟2007全國全國I I was only about six when he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.mine2007陜西：陜西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!myself 主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，其主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭多詞、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。配錯(cuò)誤。 catch a sight of lose my heart in hurry in Sunda

13、y afternoon such many people in a shortaonso六、習(xí)慣用法要記住六、習(xí)慣用法要記住1.Dont approach to a work of art in such a spirit.2. The boy was absorbed building a dam in the brook.3. I was impressed at the zeal（熱情）（熱情） with which he spoke of the plan.4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.5. At last we

14、 reached to the village at the foot of the hill. inwithon七、句子成分多分析七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類；不同的語境要不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類；不同的語境要選擇不同的詞語。只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分選擇不同的詞語。只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。2008年安徽卷年安徽卷 : She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are you laughing?” I asked.2010全國全國：So if they ha

15、d said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize . whatWhy1. My roommate lives in a small town in central Missouri, a quiet town which I would like to live myself.2. The United States is composed of fifty states, two of those are separated from the others by land or water.3. These photos

16、will show you how our village looks like .4.I cannot make sense of that he said at the meeting.wherewhichwhatwhat2010全國全國 Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best whishes to him. her2010四川卷四川卷 She passed her driving test and told her husband that，to release，he was going to drive him ove

17、r to France for a holiday. she八、邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注八、邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注 與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤，如稱謂上的于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤，如稱謂上的張冠李戴張冠李戴。常考的錯(cuò)誤形式有：常考的錯(cuò)誤形式有：連詞連詞but， and， or和和so的用的用法錯(cuò)誤，以及法錯(cuò)誤，以及冠詞冠詞的用法錯(cuò)誤等。的用法錯(cuò)誤等。2oo7全國全國II：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school2007四川卷：四川卷：An Aus

18、tralian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms. a a九、冠詞、連詞常光顧九、冠詞、連詞常光顧 2010遼寧卷：遼寧卷： Her hair was black and purple, and she wore black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. 2010全國全國：All I had to do was to write a story or present it. 2007四川卷：四川卷： He though

19、t the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. evenandso 冗詞的多用冗詞的多用1.Last summer ,I went to Beijing, my first time trip to the city. 2.Two years later, he returned back home.3. It is about 200 miles far away from London.At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his1._father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!3._They put them in the corner of the sitting4._On_chose_tall_it動(dòng)詞形動(dòng)詞形介詞短語常常考，習(xí)慣用法要記住介詞短語常常考，習(xí)慣用法要記住還要注意形和副還要注意形和副邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注2011高