1、廣州卓越教育機構一對一(教師版高三專題讀寫任務學案第4講敘述經歷【診查】（一）基礎篇：相關短語1. 讀了這個故事后，我情不自禁地想起After reading the story, I _ _ remembering2. 這個故事讓我想起一次類似的經歷。The story _ me _ a similar experience.3. 這個故事讓我想到了另一個發生在九月的故事。This story reminds me of another story _ _ _ _4. 這篇文章/故事讓我想起自己的一次經歷。兩年前，我但是當結果The passage reminds me of my own

2、experience of Two years ago, I But when_ _ _ 5. 我確實有的經歷。有一次，當我但是在那個時候I _ _ my own experience of doingOnce when I HoweverAt that time6. 我永遠也不會忘記我的經歷。我記得當我I will _ _my own experience of I remember when I was7. 我曾有難以忘懷的/相似的經歷去年夏天直到那時我才意識到I once had an unforgettable/similar experience thatLast summer_ _

3、 _ did I realize8. 我朋友的一次經歷很有說服力。一天然后最后直到那時，我才意識到One of my friends experience is _ _ _. One day Then FinallyNot until then did I realize 9. 我突然想起我朋友的一次相似的經歷。這個故事始于然后.最后It _ _ me/It struck me _ my friend had a similar experience. The story began whenLaterIn the end10. 從這次經歷中，我學到了/知道了/意識到合作的重要。From th

4、is experience, I _/_/_ _cooperation is of importance.語篇模板敘述一次想家的經歷（時間、地點、原因）。（2011廣東高考）The passage _ me _ my own experience of feeling homesick. _ I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. _, they once sent me to my uncles home in another city because they were too busy to take ca

5、re of me. _ _ _, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.(2）提高篇：Sentence l: 上述故事讓我想起一個類似的經歷，在這段經歷里我學會了如何關愛他人。Sentence 2: 直到那時，我才意識到老師對我產生了積極影響。Sentence 3: 讀了關于在中國發生的事故的報告后，我想到十年前發生在我身上的事情。Sentence 4: 我記得當我讀高中的時候，我認為父母為我做任何事情是理所應當的。Sentence 5: 我朋友的一次經歷非常有說服力，從他的經歷我看到了愛的偉大。Sentence 6: 是她的幫助讓我很快地恢復和在數學上迅

6、速提高，因此我真的非常感激她所做的事情。Sentence 7: 驚喜的是，我被告知打掃垃圾是這次訓練營的最后一項考驗，而我是唯一一個人被宣布合符資格。【導學】（一）技巧點撥這類要點中常含”以你或你朋友的經歷說明” “講述一次你或你朋友的經歷”等. 敘述經歷一般包括記敘文的基本要素, 即某人在何時何地因何原因做了何事結果如何, 或者說, 一般包括時間, 地點, 起因, 經過和結果. 這個故事往往與閱讀材料中的故事相類似, 值得注意的是, 所述經歷一定要緊扣你要說明的主題。（二）初級篇例題導寫1. 敘述你因做了對不起父母的事而后悔的經歷.首先, 引出經歷: 我曾有過一次難以忘懷的經歷, 那次確實傷

7、害到了我的父母.然后, 敘述經歷: was addicted to playing computer / asked me to do homework / shouted rudely at / regretted that I was wrong _ _ _2. 敘述一次你或你的朋友助人的經歷. (包括時間, 地點和起因首先，引出經歷：我自己確實有過幫助別人的經歷。然后，敘述經歷：took a bus/tried to drive an old lady off for having no money to buy a ticket/paid for her/thanked me and

8、praised me_ _ _3敘述一次冒險的經歷。（時間、地點、起因、經過和結果）首先，引出經歷：我永遠也不會忘記我自己的冒險經歷。然后，敘述經歷：walked through the woods/a snake was shacked and tried to attack us/dont move and- keep silent/the snake crawled away_例題導寫讀寫任務：閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左有的英語短文。Millions of students take examinations every year. A small part of th

9、e students decide that the best thing would be to cheat as they take those examinations. Cheating is something: that is not uncommon at school and thus it has become a serious problem. Why do students cheat? The reasons for this are rather complex. The main reason is that examination is believed to-

10、 be the best measure of one's intellectual capacity, so students cheat to prove it to others.Secondly, when students are not prepared for the examination they may think they are forced to , so they can pass or get a better grade.Also, if you are in an environment where everybody's cheating a

11、nd teachers turn a deaf ear to this. You don't want to stay behind.There are some schools where the teachers are simply not active in spotting out cheaters, which encourages students to cheat. Finally, some students simply surrender to（屈服于）peer pressure for they cannot bear standing out in the c

12、rowd.寫作內容：l以約30詞概括短文的內容要點；2. 以約120個詞就“考試作弊”的主題發表看法，內容包括：(1考試時你最好的朋友要抄你的答案，你會如何做？(2你對考試作弊的看法；(3敘述你的一次難忘的考試經歷。Part 1：30個詞概括_ _ _ Part 2: 根據提示詞填空_(我曾經有一次難忘的經歷when I took an English examination in my junior high school. Thats a final examination, for which I didnt prepare well. _(然而, my desk-mate was go

13、od at English, and moved her paper to my side, letting me copy her answers. _(在那時, I hesitated, “Should I be honest or get a high grade?” _(在之后a long struggle, I made up my mind not to cheat.（三）中級篇閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy

14、. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents

15、to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家 and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He coul

16、d not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.寫作內容1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

17、2. 以約120個詞講述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的經歷，內容包括：時間、地點和起因；想家給學習和生活帶來的影響；你（或你朋友）是如何應對的。寫作要求1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。評分標準概括準確，語言規范，內容何時，語句連貫。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【展示】（一）初級篇根據括號給出的中文提示填空。Getting back what you have lost would be _(一次難忘的經歷. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on

18、which my name was stamped. Fortunately, it was returned._(那天早上, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. _(當我一到達 school, I headed for my classroom quickly, _（只發現）I had left my cellphone on the back seat. _（當的時候）the exam ended, to my great surpri

19、se, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, _（臉上帶著微笑）. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. _, _ (從這個故事，我確信the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society. As a famous saying goes, honesty is the best p

20、olicy.（二）中級篇運用所學句型改寫下文1. 難忘的一節英語課I think of my first English class. When I was in Senior One, one day, our English teacher Miss Liu came in the classroom. Though she spoke English during the whole lesson, I could understand she talked. And I was interested in learning English. At the end of the clas

21、s, she asked me to retell the text. I was nervous and my voice shaked. After I retold it in broken English, I felt ashamed of myself. However, she praised me. She said, my pronunciation was good._ _ _ _ _ _ 2. 一次過生日的經歷Last year I had a very special birthday. Last year, I spent my birthday in the cou

22、ntryside with my cousins. We got up early, went out to climb the mountain behind my cousins house. I saw beautiful plants and lovely birds. We went fishing, caught lots of fish for supper._ _ _ _ _ _ （三）高級篇 閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who ha

23、d been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank him for having a great influence on her life.In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had

24、never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up m

25、y mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”What a wonderful gift to a relief teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrive

26、d at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.【寫作內容】1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。2. 以約120個詞就老師影響學生的話題談談你的想法，內容包括：(1 上文使你想起哪位對你幫助最大的老師；(2 舉例說明該老師對你學習或成長的影響；(3 你怎樣看待老師對學生的影響。【寫作要求】1. 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。【評分標準】概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _閱讀下面的短文，然

27、后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Around twenty years ago I was living in Seattle and going through hard times. With rich experience and a Masters degree, to my shame, I could only drive a school bus to make ends meet.Later that afternoon, I dropped off a little girl in a quiet suburban neighborhood. As she passe

28、d she handed me an earring, saying I should keep it in case somebody claimed it. The earring was painted black and said 'BE HAPPY'. It hit me. I had been putting all of my energies into what was wrong with my life rather than what was right! I decided then and there to make a list of 50 thin

29、gs I was grateful for. At first it was hard, then it got easier. One day I decided to up it to 75. My life was completely changed. I know that it was because I changed my attitude to gratitude, which is the key to happiness. I spent the next year conducting training workshops all around the Seattle

30、area and then decided to risk everything and go back to Scotland where I had lived previously. I closed my one man business, bought a plane ticket and got a six month visa. One month later I met my wonderful English wife and best friend of 15 years now. We live in a small beautiful cottage, two mile

31、s from a paved road in the highlands of Scotland. 【寫作內容】1. 以約30個詞概括以上短文的主要內容；2. 然后以約120個詞就“幸福”話題寫一篇短文，內容包括：(1 請講述一件你經歷過的幸福的事情；(2 簡述你對幸福的理解。【寫作要求】1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。【評分標準】概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _參考答案：【診查】（一）基礎篇常用句式1. After reading the s

32、tory, I cant help remembering讀了這個故事后，我情不自禁地想起2.The story reminds me of a similar experience.這個故事讓我想起一次類似的經歷。3. This story reminds me of another story that happened in September這個故事讓我想到了另一個發生在九月的故事。4. The passage reminds me of my own experience of Two years ago, I But whenAs a result 這篇文章/故事讓我想起自己的一次

33、經歷。兩年前，我但是當結果5. I did have my own experience of doingOnce when I HoweverAt that time我確實有的經歷。有一次，當我但是在那個時候6. I will never forget my own experience of I remember when I was我永遠也不會忘記我的經歷。我記得當我7.I once had an unforgettable experience thatLast summerNot until then did I 我曾有難以忘懷的/相似的經歷去年夏天直到那時我才8. One of m

34、y friends experience is a convincing example. One day Then FinallyNot until then did I realize 我朋友的一次經歷很有說服力。一天然后最后直到那時，我才意識到9.It occurred to me/It struck me that my friend had a similar experience. The story began whenLaterIn the end我突然想起我朋友的一次相似的經歷。這個故事始于然后.最后10. From this experience, I learn/know

35、/realize that cooperation is of importance.從這次經歷中，我學到了/知道了/意識到合作的重要。p 語篇模板敘述一次想家的經歷（時間、地點、原因）。（2011廣東高考）The passage reminds me of my own experience of feeling homesick. When I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. However, they once sent me to my uncles home in another city beca

36、use they were too busy to take care of me. At that time, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.（二）提高篇1. The story above reminds me of my similar experience, in which I have learnt how to take care of others.2. Until then did I realize that my teacher has a positive influence on me.3. Having read the

37、 report about accidents happened in China, I think of the accident which occurred to me ten years ago.4. I remember when I was in high school, I took it for granted that parents should do everything for me.5. One of my friends experience is a convincing example, from which I can see the greatness of

38、 true love.6. It was with her aid that I recovered soon and improved myself in maths rapidly, so I felt grateful for what she had done.7.To my great surprise, I was told that cleaning the rubbish is the last test of the training camp, and I was the only one who was announced qualified.【導學】（二）初級篇1. 敘

39、述你因做了對不起父母的事而后悔的經歷（引出經歷） I once had an unforgettable experience that I did hurt my parents. (敘述經歷 I remember when I was fifteen years old and I was addicted to playing computer. One day, I chatted with my friend about some interesting things on the Internet. Then, my mum had asked me to do my homewo

40、rk many times, so I felt annoyed and finally shouted rudely at her. After that, I realized that I was wrong and regretted having done that. I shouldnt have treated my parents that way.2. 敘述一次你或你的朋友助人的經歷。（引出經歷）I did have my own experience of helping others. (敘述經歷 On an extremely hot day two years ago

41、, I was taking a bus home. But when I was thankful that I could take the bus so soon, an old lady in rags came into my sight. The conductor tried to drive her off for having no money to buy a ticket, and then I paid for her without hesitation. As a result, the old lady thanked me a lot and everybody in the bus praised me too.3. 敘述一次冒險的經歷。（引出經歷）I will never forget my own experience of taking the adventure. (敘述經歷The story began when I was walking through the woods with my classmates on a summer day. We really enjoyed the beautiful sight, talking and laughing all the way. Suddenly, one of th