2025年PETS一級考試試卷：2025年英語寫作技巧與范文分析考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______一、寫作技巧分析要求：根據所給話題，運用以下寫作技巧，完成一篇100-120詞的短文。1.題目：Howtoimproveourcommunicationskills?a.描述自己目前溝通技能的狀況；b.說明為什么需要提高溝通技能；c.列舉兩種方法提高溝通技能。2.題目：Whatisthemostimportantqualityforateacher?a.分析教師需要具備的幾種重要素質；b.說明為什么某種素質對教師來說至關重要；c.結合自己的經歷或看法，談談如何培養這種素質。二、范文分析要求：閱讀以下范文，分析其寫作技巧和優點。范文：Asweallknow,readingisawonderfulwaytorelaxourselves.Itnotonlyenrichesourminds,butalsoexpandsourhorizons.Forme,readinghasbecomeanindispensablepartofmydailylife.Firstly,readingcanhelpusrelaxourmindsafteralongday'swork.Byimmersingourselvesinabook,wecantemporarilyforgetaboutthestressandfatigueoflife.Secondly,readingbroadensourknowledge.Wecanlearnaboutdifferentcultures,history,andsciencethroughbooks.Lastbutnotleast,readingenhancesourcommunicationskills.Wecanbetterunderstandothersandexpressourselvesclearly.Tosumup,readingisavaluablehabitthateveryoneshouldcultivate.Byreading,wecanimproveourselvesandmakeourlivesmoremeaningful.分析：1.主題明確，圍繞閱讀的重要性展開；2.論點清晰，論述了閱讀的三點好處；3.結構完整，包括引言、正文和結尾；4.語法正確，句子通順；5.詞匯豐富，運用了各種從句和短語。四、寫作錯誤糾正要求：閱讀以下短文，找出并糾正其中的錯誤。1.Ithinkthatthemostimportantthinginlifeistobehappy.Weallwanttoliveahappylife,butsometimesit'shardtoachievethis.Manypeoplearenothappybecausetheyaretoobusyworkingandtheydon'thavetimetoenjoythemselves.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytofindabalancebetweenworkandleisure.Ifweworktoohard,wewillbetiredandwewon'tbeabletoenjoyourlives.Ontheotherhand,ifwedon'tworkhardenough,wewon'tbeabletoprovideforourfamilies.2.WhenIwasachild,myparentsalwaystoldmetobepoliteandrespectfultoothers.Theysaidthatthesewerethetwomostimportantqualitiesthatapersonshouldhave.Ihavealwaystriedtofollowtheiradvice,andIbelievethatithasmademeabetterperson.Politenessandrespectareimportantnotonlyinourpersonallives,butalsoinourprofessionallives.Theyhelpustobuildgoodrelationshipswithothersandtobesuccessfulinourcareers.五、段落改寫要求：將以下段落改寫成不同的句式，但要保持原意不變。OriginalParagraph:"Studyingabroadcanbeachallengingexperience.Itrequiresadaptabilityandopen-mindedness.However,thesechallengescanalsoleadtopersonalgrowthandabroaderperspectiveonlife.Forexample,livinginadifferentculturecanteachyouaboutdifferentwaysofthinkinganddoingthings.Itcanalsohelpyoudevelopindependenceandresilience."RevisedParagraphs:1.Adaptabilityandopen-mindednessareessentialforstudyingabroad,asthesequalitieshelpinpersonalgrowthandawiderviewoflife.2.Theexperienceofstudyingabroadisfraughtwithchallenges,butitisthroughthesetrialsthatonecanachievepersonaldevelopmentandamorecomprehensiveunderstandingoflife.3.Overcomingthedifficultiesofstudyingabroadcanfosterpersonaldevelopmentandabroaderperspectiveonlife,whichincludeslearningaboutdiverseculturesanddevelopingindependence.4.Livinginaforeignculturewhilestudyingabroadcanimpartknowledgeaboutvariedthoughtprocessesandactions,aswellasnurtureindependenceandtenacity.5.Studyingabroadpresentschallengesthatnecessitateadaptabilityandopen-mindedness,whichinturncontributetopersonalgrowthandamoreholisticappreciationoflife.六、作文構思要求：根據以下提示，構思一篇作文。Prompt:Youhaverecentlyreadabookthathashadaprofoundimpactonyou.Thebookexploresthemesoffriendship,love,andpersonalgrowth.Writeanessayinwhichyoudiscussthebook'smainthemesandhowtheyhaveinfluencedyourownthoughtsandfeelings.Besuretoprovidespecificexamplesfromthebooktosupportyourpoints.本次試卷答案如下：一、寫作技巧分析1.題目：Howtoimproveourcommunicationskills?a.描述自己目前溝通技能的狀況；b.說明為什么需要提高溝通技能；c.列舉兩種方法提高溝通技能。答案：a.Ibelievethatmycommunicationskillsaregenerallygood,butthereareareaswhereIcanimprove.Forinstance,Isometimesstruggletoexpressmythoughtsclearlyinaforeignlanguage,andIfinditchallengingtolistenactivelyduringgroupdiscussions.b.Improvingourcommunicationskillsiscrucialbecauseitisessentialinbothpersonalandprofessionalsettings.Effectivecommunicationhelpsusbuildstrongrelationships,resolveconflicts,andconveyourideasmoreeffectively.c.Toenhancemycommunicationskills,Iplantopracticespeakingandlisteningmoreactively.Iwilljoinalanguageexchangeprogramtoimprovemyconversationalskillsandattendworkshopsonactivelistening.解析思路：a.首先，描述自己的溝通技能狀況，可以從自己的語言表達、傾聽能力、溝通方式等方面進行描述。b.其次，說明提高溝通技能的原因，可以從個人發展、職業發展、人際關系等方面進行闡述。c.最后，列舉兩種提高溝通技能的方法，可以是參加語言交換、參加溝通技巧培訓等。2.題目：Whatisthemostimportantqualityforateacher?a.分析教師需要具備的幾種重要素質；b.說明為什么某種素質對教師來說至關重要；c.結合自己的經歷或看法，談談如何培養這種素質。答案：a.Ateachershouldpossessseveralimportantqualities,suchaspatience,empathy,andknowledge.Patienceiscrucialbecausestudentsmayhavedifferentlearningstylesandpaces.Empathyhelpsteachersunderstandandsupporttheirstudents'emotions.Knowledgeensuresthatteacherscanprovideaccurateandrelevantinformation.b.Amongthesequalities,empathyisthemostcrucialforateacher.Itallowsteacherstocreateasupportiveandnurturingenvironment,whichisessentialforstudents'emotionalandacademicgrowth.c.Tocultivateempathy,Ibelieveitisimportanttobeopen-mindedandwillingtolistentostudents'perspectives.Additionally,engaginginactivitiesthatpromoteself-awarenessandemotionalintelligencecanhelpdevelopempathy.解析思路：a.分析教師需要具備的素質，可以從耐心、同理心、知識等方面進行列舉。b.說明某種素質的重要性，可以從對學生的情感和學業發展的影響進行闡述。c.結合自己的經歷或看法，提出培養這種素質的方法，可以從開放心態、傾聽學生、自我意識等方面進行思考。二、范文分析1.題目：范文分析答案：1.主題明確，圍繞閱讀的重要性展開；2.論點清晰，論述了閱讀的三點好處；3.結構完整，包括引言、正文和結尾；4.語法正確，句子通順；5.詞匯豐富，運用了各種從句和短語。解析思路：1.分析范文的主題，看是否圍繞中心思想展開；2.分析范文的論點，看是否清晰明確；3.分析范文的結構，看是否完整有序；4.分析范文的語法，看是否正確無誤；5.分析范文的詞匯，看是否豐富多樣。三、寫作錯誤糾正1.題目：找出并糾正以下短文中的錯誤。答案：1.Ithinkthatthemostimportantthinginlifeistobehappy.Weallwanttoliveahappylife,butsometimesit'shardtoachievethis.Manypeoplearenothappybecausetheyaretoobusyworkingandtheydon'thavetimetoenjoythemselves.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytofindabalancebetweenworkandleisure.Ifweworktoohard,wewillbetiredandwewon'tbeabletoenjoyourlives.Ontheotherhand,ifwedon'tworkhardenough,wewon'tbeabletoprovideforourfamilies.解析思路：1.檢查主謂一致，時態和語態；2.檢查句子結構，看是否有語法錯誤；3.檢查詞匯用法，看是否有誤用或拼寫錯誤。2.題目：找出并糾正以下短文中的錯誤。答案：2.WhenIwasachild,myparentsalwaystoldmetobepoliteandrespectfultoothers.Theysaidthatthesewerethetwomostimportantqualitiesthatapersonshouldhave.Ihavealwaystriedtofollowtheiradvice,andIbelievethatithasmademeabetterperson.Politenessandrespectareimportantnotonlyinourpersonallives,butalsoinourprofessionallives.Theyhelpustobuildgoodrelationshipswithothersandtobesuccessfulinourcareers.解析思路：1.檢查主謂一致，時態和語態；2.檢查句子結構，看是否有語法錯誤；3.檢查詞匯用法，看是否有誤用或拼寫錯誤。四、段落改寫1.題目：將以下段落改寫成不同的句式。答案：1.Adaptabilityandopen-mindednessareessentialforstudyingabroad,asthesequalitieshelpinpersonalgrowthandawiderviewoflife.2.Theexperienceofstudyingabroadisfraughtwithchallenges,butitisthroughthesetrialsthatonecanachievepersonaldevelopmentandamorecomprehensiveunderstandingoflife.3.Overcomingthedifficultiesofstudyingabroadcanfosterpersonaldevelopmentandabroaderperspectiveonlife,whichincludeslearningaboutdiverseculturesanddevelopingindependence.4.Livinginaforeignculturewhilestudyingabroadcanimpartknowledgeaboutvariedthoughtprocessesandactions,aswellasnurtureindependenceandresilience.5.Studyingabroadpresentschallengesthatnecessitateadaptabilityandopen-mindedness,whichinturncontributetopersonalgrowthandamoreholisticappreciationoflife.解析思路：1.將原句中的主語和謂語進行調整，保持原意；2.使用不同的句式，如被動語態、非限制性定語從句等；3.保持原句的意思和結構，只進行句式上的改寫。五、段落改寫1.題目：將以下段落改寫成不同的句式。答案：1.Patienceiscrucialbecausestudentsmayhavedifferentlearningstylesandpaces.2.Ateacher'sempathyisessentialincreatingasupportiveandnurturingenvironmentforstudents.3.Knowledgeensuresthatteacherscanprovideaccurateandrelevantinformation.4.Tocultivateempathy,itisimportanttobeopen-mindedandwillingtolistentostudents'perspectives.5.Engaginginactivitiesthatpromoteself-awarenessandemotionalintelligencecanhelpdevelopempathy.解析思路：1.將原句中的主語和謂語進行調整，保持原意；2.使用不同的句式，如強調句型、倒裝句等；3.保持原句的意思和結構，只進行句式上的改寫。六、作文構思1.題目：根據以下提示，構思一篇作文。答案：Inthebook"ToKillaMockingbird,"HarperLeeexploresthemesoffriendship,love,andpersonalgrowth.ThestoryrevolvesaroundtheyoungScoutFinch,wholivesinthefictionaltownofMaycomb,Alabamaduringthe1930s.ThroughScout'seyes,wewitnesstheracialinjusticeandprejudicethatplaguedtheSouthatthattime.Thebook'smainthemesincludetheimportanceofstandingupforwhatisright,thepowerofloveandfriendship,andthejourneyofpersonalgrowth.Thethemeofstandingupforwhatisrightisevidentthroughoutthestory.AtticusFinch,Scout'sfather,servesasarolemodelformoralcourageandintegrity.HeteachesScoutandherbrotherJemtotreatotherswithkindnessandrespect,regardlessoftheirraceorsocialstatus.Thisthemeresonateswithmebecauseitremindsusthatwehavearesponsibilitytospeakoutagainstinjusticeandtofightforwhatisright.Thepowerofloveandfriendshipisalsoacentralthemeinthebook.ScoutandJemformastrongbondwith