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寫作專題突破應(yīng)用文寫作類型一書信體應(yīng)用文第4講道歉信&祝賀信(1)道歉信通常是在因自己的過失或疏忽給別人帶來了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺的情況下，為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮懙男偶＞唧w寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：(2)祝賀信是對親朋好友畢業(yè)、晉升、獲獎等值得紀(jì)念的場合表示祝賀的信件。應(yīng)表達(dá)為對方感到高興，語氣要充滿真誠。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：(2021·北京卷改編)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表達(dá)歉意并說明原因；2．提出建議并給出理由。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。一、找全要點(diǎn)(一)題干要求1．表達(dá)歉意：①I'msorrythatIwon'tbeabletogohikingwithyouthisSaturdayasplanned．2．說明原因：②Ibegantocoughyesterdaymorning．③Iwenttoseeadoctor．④Shetoldmeitwasabadcold．⑤Iwouldhavetostayathomeforafewdays．3．提出建議并給出理由：⑥IsitOKwithyouifwetakeatriptoZhangjiakounextSaturday?⑦It'soneofthemostsuccessfulcitiesinHebeiProvince．4．再次道歉：⑧Onceagain，I'msorryaboutthetroublecausedbyme．(二)邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)想和好友Jim共度美好時(shí)光：⑨I'dreallyliketospendsometimewithyou．二、塑造亮點(diǎn)(一)高級詞匯(升格⑦⑧句中的加黑詞匯)1．successful→__________2．trouble→_____________prosperousinconvenience(二)高級句式1．用表示因果關(guān)系的并列句合并②③句__________________________________________________________2．用賓語從句合并④⑤句______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibegantocoughyesterdaymorning，soIwenttoseeadoctor．Shetoldmeitwasabadcold，andthatIwouldhavetostayathomeforafewdays．(謄寫成文，注意邏輯銜接和行文規(guī)范)DearJim，I'msorrythatIwon'tbeabletogohikingwithyouthisSaturdayasplanned．Ibegantocoughyesterdaymorning，soIwenttoseeadoctor．Shetoldmeitwasabadcold，andthatIwouldhavetostayathomeforafewdays．I'dreallyliketospendsometimewithyou．IsitOKwithyouifwetakeatriptoZhangjiakounextSaturday？It'soneofthemostprosperouscitiesinHebeiProvince．Pleaseletmeknowwhatyouthink．Onceagain，I'msorryabouttheinconveniencecausedbyme．Hopetohearfromyousoon．Yours，LiHua(一)道歉信1．開頭句(1)Iamwritingtoapologize/saysorryfor...我寫信是為……向你致歉。(2)IamreallysorrybutIhavenochoicebutto...我真的很抱歉，但我別無選擇，只能……(3)IapologizesincerelyforwhatIsaidthatday．Ididn'tmeantohurtyou．我誠摯地為那天我說的話向你道歉。我不是有意傷害你的。2．主體句(1)ThereasonwhyIfailto...isthat...我未能……的原因是……(2)Iamnotableto...duetothefactthat...我不能……是由于……(3)It'sbecauseof...thatI...正是因?yàn)椤也拧?4)Anyhow，Isincerelyhopethatwecanfixanothertimefor...WillyoubeavailablethisSundaymorning？無論如何，我真誠地希望我們可以為……再定一個時(shí)間。請問你這個星期天上午有空嗎？3．結(jié)尾句(1)Onceagain，I'msorryforanyinconvenienceIcaused．對于我造成的不便我再次表示歉意。(2)Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenience/troublecausedbyme/mycarelessness．Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain．再次為我/我的粗心帶來的不便/麻煩表示歉意，我承諾這樣的事情不會再發(fā)生。(3)Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapology．我真心希望你能理解我的處境/站在我的立場考慮，并接受我的道歉。(二)祝賀信1．開頭句(1)Iamwritingtotellyouthethrillingnewsthatyouhavewonfirstprizeinthe...contest．我寫信告訴你這個激動人心的消息，你獲得了……比賽的一等獎。(2)Youdon'tknowhowexcitedandhappywefeltatthenewsof...Weareproudofyourachievement．得知……的消息，你不知道我們有多么激動和開心。我們?yōu)槟闳〉玫某删投院溃?3)I'mdelighted/pleased/gladtohear/learn/knowthatyouhavewonfirstprizeinthecontest，soI'mwritingtoexpress/conveymycongratulations．我很開心得知你在比賽中獲得了一等獎，因此我寫信向你表達(dá)祝賀。2．主體句(1)Iamdelightedthatyourefforthasbeenrewardedinthisway．我很高興你的努力以這樣的方式得到了回報(bào)。(2)Itisobviousthatyouwillhaveapromisingfuture．顯然，你將會有一個充滿希望的未來。(3)Thereisnodenying/doubtthatyoursuccesspartlyliesinyourtalentfor...毫無疑問，你的成功部分應(yīng)歸功于你在……的天賦。(4)Asyourclosefriend，IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyoursuccess．作為你的密友，我只想讓你知道能分享你的驕傲我有多幸運(yùn)，我對你的成功有多高興。3．結(jié)尾句(1)Wishyougoodluckands