第三部分

寫作專題突破讀后續寫第二節

熱點突破第7講續寫熱點話題遇險救援(2020·浙江卷改編)閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Onefall，mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears．Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba，Canada．Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous．Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance．WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear，Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens．Butsometimes，thatiseasiersaidthandone．Thiswasoneofthosetimes．AsElliandIcookeddinner，ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed，andsmelledourgarlicbread．Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp，whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence．Hepulledandbitthewire．Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts．Terrified，ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew．Weyelledatthebear，hitpotshard，andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair．Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff．Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子)．Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp．Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway，butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived．Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇)，Itooksomepicturesofthebear．ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment．ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray．Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes，butdoesn'thurtthem．SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand，throughthefence，sprayedhimintheface．Withanangryroar(吼叫)，thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes．注意：續寫詞數應為150個左右。Afewminuteslater，thebearheadedbacktoourcamp．___________________________________________________________________Atthatverymoment，thehelicopterarrived．____________________________________________________________________________Ⅰ．梳理原文細節，厘清篇章結構。Ⅱ．依據首句提示，構思后續情節。第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可寫當時讓人戰栗驚恐的畫面，不失時機拍攝寶貴的北極熊照片，但北極熊向我們步步緊逼。第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，第二段可寫看到直升機，我們感到絕處逢生的喜悅，用胡椒噴霧為逃生爭取寶貴的時間，最終成功脫險。A

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camp．Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness．ThenoisesturnedElliandmepalewithhorror．Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwholefence．Heroaredrepeatedly，shatteringwhatwasleftofthesilence．Elliseizedthisopportunitytotakesomepicturesofthebear．Theanimal'snoisesechoedallaroundus．Webetrayedourfeelingsbyhuddlingtogether，shiveringwithfear．Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea，hetrottedforwardafewsteps．At

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arrived．MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved．Elliusedpeppersprayagaintobuyusenoughtime．Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert．Heregardeduswiththemercilessnecessityofhunger，sowethrewallthefoodwehad．Hethenturnedawayandstarteddevouring．Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder，Elliprayedlikethousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeingsafeandsound．1．Theybothspentaminutecatchingtheirbreathsandcalmedthemselvesdown．他們兩人都花了一分鐘時間喘了口氣，讓自己冷靜下來。2．Hebegantoshakeoffthesnow，movedsnowawaywithbarehands，andmanagedtopullhimselfout．他開始抖落積雪，徒手把雪移開，并設法把自己拉了出來。3．Gatheringallhisstrength，carefully，bitbybit，Simpsonclimbedoutofthesnowhole．辛普森用盡全身力氣，一點一點地，小心翼翼地從雪洞里爬了出來。4．Hefeltweakbutotherwisefine．Hewasgladtobeoutofdangerandreunitedwithhisfamily．他感到虛弱無力，但其他方面還好。他很高興脫離了危險，與家人團聚了。5．MomremindedmeofhowfortunateIwasfromthejawsofthealligator．