第三部分

寫作專題突破讀后續(xù)寫第二節(jié)

熱點突破第5講續(xù)寫熱點話題熱心助人(2022·浙江卷改編)閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社區(qū))inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool．Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen，soIdid，too．Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo．Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed，butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner．Webeganpreparingthefood，frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat．Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved，butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering．Itwasn'tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner．Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme，Igotalittlescared．I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly，someofthemlookedsodangerous．Ididn'thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit．Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome．ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp，she'dberightthere，whichIfoundquitecomforting．Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood．Theywereofallagesandnationalities．Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty．Somelookedliketheyhadtotallygivenuponlife，whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation，smilingandjoking．Somewerebetteroffthanothers，buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat．Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn'thaveaplacetocallhomeandthattheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen．注意：續(xù)寫詞數應為150個左右。Astheycameinmydirection，Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ⅰ．梳理原文細節(jié)，厘清篇章結構。Ⅱ．依據首句提示，構思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述我如何為無家可歸的人提供食物，過程是令人滿意的，但也會出現小的困難。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述我對這次社區(qū)服務的感悟，最后可以進行適當的升華。As

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smile．Butseeingsomanyhomelesshungrypeopleswarmingendlessly，eventhemostbrilliantsmilecouldn'tconcealthefearandpanicinmyheart．Asifnoticingmyemotion，theladysmilinglycameoverandpatientlytoldmethatIshouldfirstmakethesepeoplequeueupandthenhandoutsaladonebyone．Thankfully，Inoddedandimmediatelysprangintoaction．Thenthingswentsmoothly．Eventhosewholookedverydangeroussurprisinglyfollowedmyinstructions．Theyevensaid“Thankyou”tomewhilereceivingthefood，lookingsofriendly．Thepreviousfeelingsofworryandscarehadalreadymeltedaway．I

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way．NotonlydidIclearmypreviousprejudiceagainstthosewhoseemedtobedangerousandunamiable，butalsoIextendedahelpinghandtothosewhowantedfood．Isuddenlycametorealizethatnoteveryonewasblessedwithfortuneandborntobewealthy；therefore，weshouldalwaysbegratefulforwhatlifeblesseduswith．However，wedidhavethepowertoshareourhappinesswithothers，thatis，spreadinglove．Loveiseverything，liketheclearmoonhanginghighinthesky，spreadingitsmildmoonlightselflesslytoeveryone．1．Withwindsblowingharder，thefirewentoutofcontrol．隨著風越刮越猛，火失去了控制。2．Athickburningsmellfilledtheair．WhenTomopenedthefrontdoorofhisflattocheck，athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim．空氣中彌漫著濃濃的燒焦的氣味。當湯姆打開他公寓的前門查看時，一股濃煙迎面撲來。3．Hedivedintothewater．Inafewseconds，hewasnexttothestrugglinggirl．他跳入水中。幾秒鐘后，他就到了那個苦苦掙扎的女孩旁邊。4．Thewaterwasuptoherlap，butMarywasverystrongandshestruggledthroughthewaveswithmeonherback．水漲到了她的大腿處，但瑪麗非常堅強，她背著我穿過海浪艱難前行。5．Someonecameandpulledbothkidsawayfromt