第三部分

寫作專題突破讀后續(xù)寫第二節(jié)

熱點(diǎn)突破第1講續(xù)寫熱點(diǎn)話題

個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)(2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool，mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest．Isaidnowithoutthinking．Ididnotlovewriting．MyfamilycamefromBrazil，soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage．WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay，whereIplayedalltheparts．Noonelaughedharderthanhedid．So，whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply：“BecauseIloveyourstories．Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself，Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis．”Encouragedbyhiswords，Iagreedtogiveitatry．IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject．PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18，1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming．Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse'smouth．Notabrilliantidea，butfunny；andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice．Whatdidthehorsethink，ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately．Igottired．Ihaddoubts．Iwantedtoquit．But，likeRevere'shorse，Ikeptgoing．Iworkedhard．Icheckedmyspelling．Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar．Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary．Ievenreadafewofthem．WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher，hereadit，laughedoutloud，andsaid，“Great．Now，writeitagain．”Iwroteitagain，andagainandagain．WhenIfinallyfinishedit，thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting．IfIdidn'twin，Iwouldn'tcare．注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右。Afewweekslater，whenIalmostforgotthecontest，therecamethenews．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，厘清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，第一段可寫我得知獲獎(jiǎng)后的激動(dòng)心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也為我感到高興，并回顧參賽的心路歷程。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，第二段可寫我表達(dá)對(duì)老師的感謝。老師會(huì)再次給予認(rèn)可和鼓勵(lì)。最后，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行升華，不要輕易說(shuō)“不可能”。A

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presentation．Gigglinginstantlywithabroadsmilespreadingonhisface，hetoldmethathewasproudofmywonderfulperformance．Itwasatthatmomentthatawarmsurgeofstreamswashedthroughmybody，andtheimageofthehorseemergedinmymind，encouragingmetocontinuewriting．Indeed，Igotatasteofvictoryandlearnedtopursuemydreamwithperseverance，whateverdifficultiesmightarise．1．Hardthoughitis，thereisnothingmorevaluablethanthesenseofachievementyougetfromchallengingyourself．雖然它是艱難的，但沒(méi)有什么比你挑戰(zhàn)自己獲得的成就感更有價(jià)值的了。2．Takingadeepbreathtocollectmyself，IdecidedtorisefromwhereIfell．深吸一口氣讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來(lái)，我決定從我跌倒的地方站起來(lái)。3．Agreatweightoffhismind，Tonyhadneverfeltsorelieved．內(nèi)心卸下了沉重的負(fù)擔(dān)，托尼從沒(méi)有像現(xiàn)在這樣如釋重負(fù)。4．Lifeisfullofsmilesandtears．Onlybyacceptingthembothcanweenjoyourlife．生活充滿了微笑和淚水。只有通過(guò)接受它們兩者，我們才能享受我們的生活。5．Thismadememoved，andIwouldtrymybesttohelpmorepeopleinthefutureandb