書面表達專期中復習

unit8-unit14書面表達專期中復習匯報人：話題分析本單元以“Mysteries”為話題，此類寫作命題通常采用“GuidedWriting”形式，根據中文或英文內容提示寫作；也有根據圖畫內容，發揮合理想象，描繪細節，連接成一個故事。

早上，同學們發現Jack兩眼通紅。于是大家紛紛猜測Jack發生了什么事情，有的同學認為他昨天晚上一直在玩手機游戲，有的同學認為他昨晚做作業做到很晚，也有的同學認為……，而真正的原因是他感冒了，沒有睡好。請以“WhathappenedtoJack?”為題，寫一篇短文。實例分析

WhathappenedtoJack?引出話題各種猜想最終結果Jack’seyeswereredplayedmobilegamesallnightdidhishomeworkverylatewatchedTVthewholenightcaughtabadcold

連句成篇Thismorning,wefoundthatJack’seyeswerered.Whathappenedtohim?Weguessed.Someoftheboysthoughtthathemusthaveplayedmobilegamesallnight,becausehealwaysspentalongtimedoingthat.Butsomegirlsdidn’tagree.Theybelievedthathemusthavedonehishomeworkverylate.

OthersthoughtthathewaswatchingTVthewholenight,becausetherewasanNBAgamelastnight.ButIdidn’tagreewiththem.Hisparentswereverystrictwithhim,sohecouldn’thaveplayedgamesorwatchedTV.Then,weaskedhimduringthebreak,andhesaidhecoughtabadcold.PoorJack!

抓要點KeypointsMyfavoriteMusickindsofmusic（音樂類型）why

（推薦的理由）importanceofmusic

（音樂的重要性）

MyFavoriteSongMyfavoritesongchangesdependingonhowIfeelthatday.UsuallyIlikesongsthathavegreatlyricsorrhythm.WhenI’mdownandtired,Iprefersongswhichcancheermeup,songslikeBigBigWorldaremyfirstchoicebecausetheyaredelightfulandeasytofollow.Thelyricsmaybesimple,butverycheerful,andtherhythm,too.開篇點題展開表述【妙筆成篇1】WhenIsingalongwiththem,Ifeelrefreshedandrelaxed.IfI’mstressedoutoruneasy,Ilovetolistentosongsthataregentleandquiet,OurCanoninDismyfavorite,whichisperformedbytwopeople,aguitaristandasinger.Theguitarplayerisgreat,thelyricsarecomfortingandthesingersingsperfectly.Afterlisteningtoit,I’llcalmdownandgainmystrengthagain.Lifewithoutsongswillbeemptyandmeaningless.Ifyoufeellikelisteningtosomething,chooseasongthatyoulikebest.結尾綜述Mind-mappingSimplewritingDearTony,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Whenyouareeatingatthetable,it’simpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Youarenotsupposedtopointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.Inourhouse,you’resupposedtoshakehandswithmyfatherforthefirsttime.Youarenotsupposedtokisswhenyoumeetmymother.Youcansay“nihao”toherwithabigsmile.Whenyougooutwithpeople,youareexpectedtocallfirst.It’simportanttomakeplanstodosomethinginterestingorgosomewheretogether.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeet-ingyousoon!Bestwishes,LinJie明天英語課上的dutyreport該你發言了。請你以“AnUnforgettableExperience”為題寫一篇英語短文，給大家講述你的一次難忘的經歷。寫作指導

本文根據要求是一篇記敘文。它主要是說明事件的時間、地點、人物、起因、經過及結果，即我們通常所說的五個“W”（what,who,when,where,why）和一個“H”(how)。

人稱應是__________，時態應是_______。第一人稱過去時寫作指導

MydayWhatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?Wheredidithappen?Why?Howdiditmakeyoufeel?Whathappened?Whendidithappen?AnunforgettableexperienceEveryonehastheirownunforgettableexperiences.SodoI.Atabout9:00a.m.

lastSaturday,Iwastakingawalkintheparknearmyhome.SuddenlyIsawabackpacklyingonabench.Ipickeditupandopenedit.Ifoundsomecash,anIDcardandanotebookwiththeowner’snameWangGangandhismobilephonenumberonit.

Then

Icalledtheownerrightaway.HewasverygladthatIhadfoundhisbackpackandaskedmetowaitforhimforawhile.

About20minuteslater,hearrived.Igavethebackpackbacktohimandhethankedmeagainandagain.

Helpingothersmakesmehappyandproud.Ithinkeveryoneshouldhelpothers.寫作訓練Writeastoryaboutyourluckyorunluckydayandtellyourstorytoapartnerortheclass.

MyUnluckyDayIwillalwaysrememberthedate.ItwasJune7th,Sunday.Itwassunny.Itwastheunluckiestdayofmylife.

WhenIwokeupthatmorning,itwas10:00.Ihadtogetupquicklyandeatbreakfast.AfterbreakfastIdecidedtogotoanothercitytobuyacomputer.WhenIarrivedatthebusstop,IfoundIhadleftmywalletathome,soIhadtogobacktogetit.參考范文Finally,Igotonthebus.Unluckily,thebusbrokedown

ontheway.Icouldn’tbelieveIhadtowaitforfivehours.BythetimeIgottothecity,allthecomputershopshadclosed.Therefore,Ihadtogetbacktothebusstation,butthelastbushadalreadyleft.Intheend,Ihadtostayatahotelforonenight.

Whatanunluckyday!文章結構開頭句中間段落結尾句提出問題+描述現象What'stheproblem?分析原因Whatcausedtheproblem?提出解決方法

Whatshouldwedo?呼吁大家共同努力解決問題Let'stakeaction!

略寫略寫詳寫開頭句

Thesedays，(withtherapiddevelopmentofthesociety，)air/waterpollutionisbecomingaseriousproblem.提出問題+描述現象What'stheproblem?通過對比描述現象

Inthepast,thereusedtobeblueskies/freshair/cleanrivers/manybeautifulwildanimals...

Butnow,skiesaregrey/airisfilledwithhaze(霧霾)/riversarefullofrubbish/thenumberofwildanimalsisgettingsmallerandsmaller...中間段落分析原因Whatcausedtheproblem?空氣污染＊Therearemoreandmorecarsontheroad.＊Manyfactoriesthatburncoalpollutairwithalotofblacksmoke.段首：段落中心句水污染＊Manypeoplethrowlitterintotheriversindailylives.＊Manyfactoriesputwasteintotherivers.中間段落分析原因Whatcausedtheproblem?食物浪費＊Manypeoplehaven'trealizedthatthefoodisvaluable.＊Someofusalwaysordertoomanydisheswhenweeatinrestaurants.＊Manypeoplenevertakeawaytherestfoodaftereatinginreataurantsbecausetheyareafraidtolosetheirfaces.段首：段落中心句動物瀕危＊Moreandmoreanimalsgethomelessbecauseofbadenvironmentconditions.＊Manypeopletakeriskstokillanimalsformoney.中間段落提出解決方法Howcanwesolvetheproblem?空氣污染＊Tocutdownairpollution,weshouldtakethebusorsubwayinsteadofdriving.＊Wecanreduceairpollutionbyplantingmoretrees.段首：段落中心句水污染＊Everyoneshouldhelptocleanuptherivers.＊Weshouldwritetothegovernmenttoclosedownthefactories.中間段落節約能源＊Weshouldremembertoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.＊It'sagoodhabittousebothsidesofpaper.段首：段落中心句動物瀕危＊Weshouldimprovetheenvironmenttoprovidehomesforthem.＊Weshouldaskthegovernmenttodeveloplawstostoppeoplefromkillingwildanimals.提出解決方法Howcanwesolvetheproblem?1.Let’stakeactionfromnowontomaketheenvironmentmoreandmorebeautiful！2.Weshouldworkhardertoprotectourworld.3.Sotogether，ouractionscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.結尾句呼吁大家共同努力解決問題

改善人居環境，提高生活質量，是人們共同的愿望和應盡的責任。請以“Howtokeepourcityclean”為題，寫一篇英語短文并給出你的建議。寫作練兵 Howtokeepourcityclean____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ourcityusedtobeagreencity.Butnowsomepollutiongetsintotheenvironment.Soitisverynecessarytoprotecttheenvironmentnow.Buthowtokeepourcitygreen? Firstly,weshouldn’tpollutetheenvironment.Weshouldstoplitteringaround.Andweshouldseparatethewastebeforewethrowitintothebins.Secondly,it’sbettertoplantmoretreestomaketheaircleaner.Besides,weshouldsavewaterandelectricity. Inaword,ifeveryonemakesacontributiontobuildingagreencity,ourcitywill