ContinuationWriting--2024年新高考Ⅰ卷讀后續(xù)寫Learningobjectives:Bytheendofthelesson,studentswillbeableto:1.analyzeplot,character,andthemeincontinuationwritingtextsaccurately;2.masterwritingtechniqueslikeactionchainsandadvancedsentencepatterns;3.experiencepositiveemotionsandvaluesinstories,andapplythemtoreallife.Elementsofnarrativewriting

conflicts/problems沖突/問題narration敘述characters人物theme主題plots情節(jié)emotions情緒PlotSettingCharacterTime:ona…eveninginSeptemberPlace:fromtheairporttothebusstation

I(thewriter)Gunter(thedriver)ReadforelementsPlotmountainThemeKindnessBeginningDevelopmentClimaxResolutionEndingIwasinahurrytocatchthe

lastbustoPraguebecauseof

the

delayoftheflight.ImetalotoftroublesonthewayIhadnocashtopaythetaxifare.IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.......Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised....troublesBeginningDevelopmentResolution

ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."Readforconflicts/problems（沖突）Conflict1:ItriedtocatchthelastbustoPraguesolution1:jumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankConflict2:Gunterdidn’thearmydestinationclearly.solution2:Guntergothelpfromhisfriendandstartedhiscar.Conflict3:Ihadnocashtopaythetaxifare.solution3:Iusedmybankcard.Conflict4:Thecardmachineandthecashmachinewentwrong.

Thebuswasabouttosetoff.solution4:?①ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.②ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafiiend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.③Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gumterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.④JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileaslpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.⑤Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”EmotionalchangeI:anxiousdisappointedhopefulembarrassedhelpless...①ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.②ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafiiend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.③Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gumterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.④JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileaslpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.⑤Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”EmotionalchangeGunter:confusedrelievedpeaceful...Discussandinfertheplot.Paragraph1Para1IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Point1(connection1)Point2(transition)Point3(connection2)Paragraph2Para2Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Point1(connection3)Point2(transition)Point3(theme)Discussandinfertheplot.Paragraph1Para1IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Point1(connection1)Point2(transition)Point3(connection2)WhatwasGunter’sreactiontothenews?WhatdidGunterdo?HowtoendPara.ltoensurethecoherencewithPara.2?doubtful&hesitatedsympathetic&uderstanding.HowdidIfeel?Hecomfortedmeandshowedhiskindness.gratefulandtouched.IpromisedtopayhimbacklaterwhenIwasbackinViennaandGuntertrusted.me.Paragraph2Para2Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Point1(connection3)Point2(transition)Point3(theme)WhatdidIsay?Whathappenedafterwemet?HowdidIfeelafterallthis?Iwantedtomeethimtopayhimthefare.HowdidGunterreacttotheextramoney?Ikeptmypromiseandpaidhimthefareandmaybeextramoney.GunterrefusedtheextramoneyandappreciatedmyhonestyIshowedmygratitudeandappreciatehiskindness.Discussandinfertheplot.Howcanweusedescriptionofactionstomakeourwritingvivid?

①Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.②Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin.sb.didA,didBanddidC.Skill1ActionChainsHowcanweusedescriptionofactionstomakeourwritingvivid?

①ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.environment②AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.emotions③ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation."Wemadeit,"hesaid.dialogues④IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.facialexpressions

environment,emotions,dialogues,facialexpressions,Skill2ActionScenesAdddescriptionofComposeyourwritingcomprehensionandforeshadowing伏筆，鋪墊)plotlogiclanguageanddetailimplicitthemePresentationandEvaluationAssignmentPolishupyourwriting.

2024高考全國一卷二卷·讀后續(xù)寫:官方范文Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I'llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan'taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusi