第三講銜接字句語意高度契合原文一篇好的文章不僅需要豐富的內容、巧妙的構思和規(guī)范的表達，還需要把這些內容聯(lián)系起來的語篇銜接手段。那么銜接包括兩個方面：字句連貫性(Coherence)和語意連貫性(Cohesion)。1．字句連貫性(Coherence)是指順暢、合理地把文章里的單詞、短語和句子連貫起來的技巧。首先要確保每個段落只表達一個信息或意念，然后將多個段落有序地排列起來。在續(xù)寫中，尤其是指續(xù)寫的兩個段落結構緊湊、內容有序；兩個段落和原文一起構成邏輯性排列。2．語意連貫性(Cohesion)是指句子之間前后連貫、互相呼應的程度。語意連貫性越強，越容易展示文本內容及想要傳遞的信息。最佳的選擇就是善用連接詞，用連接詞連接句子并引出下文信息。讀后續(xù)寫需要關注的銜接有四個方面：①續(xù)寫內容和原文的銜接②續(xù)寫第一段和段首句的銜接③續(xù)寫第一段段末和第二段段首句的銜接④續(xù)寫第二段和段首句的銜接eq\a\vs4\al([典題示例])閱讀下面的材料，完成以下任務。Mostyoungkidsareveryself-centeredmostofthetime.It'sliketheirbrainmetersarestuckon“selfish”.ThiscertainlyhaddescribedmeuntilImetmydeargrandmother.MyfatherhadbeenborninJapan,andhehadmanyoldphotographsofthepalatial(宮殿般的)estatethathadbelongedtohisfamilythroughmanygenerations.Hetoldmestoriesofgorgeousroomsfullofgoldenfurnitureandsilkwallpapers.Healsodescribedmagnificentgardens,fullofthesweetscentsofexoticflowersandthegentlethinstreamofgracefulfountains.Fromallthese,Ifiguredmygrandmothermustberich.IhadnevermetherbeforeshecamefromJapan,butateight,IreasonedthatifIwerenicetoher,shewouldtakemebacktoJapantoliveinluxury.Itwasagoodplan,Ithought,andIvowedtospendtimewithmygrandmothersoshewouldgrowtolovemeandwantmetoacpanyheruponherreturn.Wewenttopickherupattheairport.“Theresheis！”myfathercalled.Iexpectedtoseesomeroyalkimono-clad(穿著和服的)creaturelikeI'dseeninpictures.Instead,Isawatinywomanwithsilverhair,wearinganordinarybluesuit.Shedidnotlookwealthytome.Still,Ivowedtobeattentive,tomakemyselfindispensabletoherduringherstay.Togetclosertoher,IflatteredherintotellingmestoriesaboutoldJapan.Sheenjoyedmakingneedlecraftwithdelicatedesigns,andassheworked,shewovetalesofJapaneselegendsandhistoryasdelicateandbeautifulasthedesignsshecreated.Ilistened,fascinated.Herwordswereamixofthetwolanguages,soIdidn'tpletelyunderstandeverythingatfirst.Interestingly,however,asherEnglishimproved,sodidmyunderstandingofJapanese.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右。Noonespokeofhergoingback,andIwaslikeanantonahotpot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mydreamsofaluxuriouslifehadbeenbroken.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________eq\a\vs4\al([解題技法])1．通讀全文本文文體為：2．一審——審要素時態(tài)一般過去時六要素WhenUntilI__met__my__dear__grandmother;__ateightWheremyhomeoutsideJapanWhoI;myfather;__mygrandmotherWhatMyfathertoldmestoriesofgorgeousroomsanddescribedmagnificentgardens.Ifiguredmy__grandmother__must__be__rich.Ivowedto__spend__timewithmygrandmothersoshewouldgrow__to__love__meandwantmeto__acpany__her__upon__her__return.Togetclosertoher,IflatteredherintotellingmestoriesaboutoldJapan.Interestingly,however,asherEnglishimproved,so__did__my__understanding__of__Japanese.WhyNoonespokeofhergoingback,andIwaslikeanantonahotpot.Why__didn't__my__grandmother__return__to__Japan？HowMydreamsofaluxuriouslifehadbeenbroken.HowdidIlearnthelesson？3.二定——定主題主題：Ilearnedthetruemeaningofwealth—notthegorgeousroomsormagnificentgardensbuttheloveamongfamilymembersandtheunderstandingofone'srootculture.4．三推測——關注銜接，尤其是段首句定基調(1)續(xù)寫內容和原文的銜接原文段首：Mostyoungkidsareveryself-centeredmostofthetime.It'sliketheirbrainmetersarestuckon“selfish”.ThiscertainlyhaddescribedmeuntilImetmydeargrandmother.由此可知“我”是self-centered、selfish(形容詞),但是祖母的到來改變了“我”。所以續(xù)寫的內容應該集中于“我”改變的過程。(2)續(xù)寫第一段和段首句的銜接標出第一段段首句的關鍵詞：No__onespokeofhergoingback,andIwaslikean__ant__on__a__hot__pot.anantonahotpot意為“熱鍋上的螞蟻”。根據此處可知，“我”非常迫切想去日本過奢侈的生活。因此，“我”會主動問祖母的歸期，并得到祖母的回應。(3)續(xù)寫第一段段末和第二段段首句的銜接標出第二段段首句的關鍵詞：Mydreamsofaluxuriouslifehadbeenbroken．根據此句可知，“我”的夢想破滅了。由此可知，第一段的段末將會提及夢想破滅的原因。結合預測出的第一段的內容，可知應該是祖母的回應使“我”的夢想破滅，此處就是第一段段末和第二段段首句的銜接之處。(4)續(xù)寫第二段和段首句的銜接根據第二段段首句可知，“我”夢想破滅了之后，作為一個小孩，“我”的反應是感到失望和痛苦，甚至用行為表現(xiàn)出來。但是結合文章中心，“我”的態(tài)度應該發(fā)生了積極的改變。“我”的價值觀也從關注wealth轉變?yōu)殛P注love。高效演練閱讀下面的材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。(2022·廣州高三年級階段訓練)Therewasonceawonderfuloldmanwholovedeverything:animals,spiders,insectsandallsortsoflivingthings.Onedaywhilewalkingthroughthewoods,theoldmanfoundacocoon(繭).Hedecidedtotakethecocoonhometowatchitsbeautifultransformationfromalittlecocoontoabeautifulbutterfly.Afewdayslater,thecocoonstartedtomove.Itmovedfrantically!Hesatandwatcheditstruggleandstruggleforseveralhours.Butitseemednottomakeanyprogress.Thentheoldmanfeltsorryforthelittlebutterflyinside,aid.Withedtoitsaid.Withapairofscissors,gently,hecutalittleopeninginthecocoonsothebutterflycouldeout.Andthenthebutterflycameoutofitscocoon.Ithadaswollenbodyandsmall,fragilewings,butitneverwasabletofly.Hewasquitepuzzled.Hadheaccidentallykilledthelittlebutterfly?No,itwasstillmovingalittlebit.Maybeitwassick.Thenhedecidedthatthebestthinghecoulddoforthebutterflywastoplaceitgentlybackintoitscocoon.Hedidso,andplacedadropofhoneyonittosealthecocoon,leavingthebutterflytonestle(棲息)initsnaturalstate.Thenextdayhenoticedthatthecocoonwasmovingagain.Itstruggledandstruggled.Finallythebutterflybrokefreefromitscocoonandstretcheditswingsout.Itsbeautifulwingswerefilledwithwonderfulcolors!Ittookoff!Itwasflying!Thewonderfulbutterflyflewandflewtillitwasalmostoutoftheoldman'ssight.“Whatajoy，”heexclaimed!Butthenhestartedtothink:whatdidIdowrongbytryingtohelpthatbeautifullittlebutterflyoutatfirst?注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右。Finallytheanswercameout._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sometimesstrugglesareexactlywhatweneedinourlife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Finallytheanswercameout.Thebutterflyhastostruggleandstrugglewhileinsidethecocoon.That'showitgetsitsst