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北京卷2024年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】【2024北京卷】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的外國好友Jim準備給其校報的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國成立75周年,他打算重點介紹中國的發展成就,發來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復,內容包括:(1)建議投稿內容;(2)就以上建議簡要說明理由。注意:(1)詞數100左右;(2)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】2024年是中華人民共和國成立75周年,是實現“十四五”規劃目標任務的關鍵一年,也是全面落實教育強國戰略部署的重要一年。2024年高考英語(北京卷)試題(以下簡稱“2024年高考英語試題”)及時回應時代新呼喚,對標建設教育強國新要求,試題命制堅持“四個突出,四個考出來”的命題理念,以《普通高中英語課程標準(2017年版2020年修訂)》和高校人才選拔要求為依據,結合中學英語教學實際,守正創新,穩中求進,全面落實立德樹人根本任務,凸顯價值引領,強化試題“培根鑄魂”的育人功能;充分發揮試題的教學導向作用,彰顯新課程理念,堅持“素養立意”,促進學生的全面發展。此試題以情境為載體,依托人與自然、人與社會、人與自我三大主題,創設了學習情境、生活情境、社會情境和學術情境,在突顯時代感的情境中考查學生理解和表達意義、情感、觀點的能力。同時,試題突出語用,考查學生在真實場景中使用語言與交際對象進行交流的能力,實現在情境中認識問題、分析問題和解決問題的核心要求。試題凸顯真實性和任務性。試題在選材上把語言在現實生活中的使用情況作為一個重要質量控制指標,試卷中所用素材均來自外文期刊,語言地道,題材豐富,體裁多樣。同時,試題設計依托情景和任務,盡可能接近現實生活中語言使用的實際情況。【思路點撥】本次高考英語北京卷的書面表達題目要求考生以紅星中學高三學生李華的身份,給外國好友Jim提供關于向校報AsiaToday欄目投稿的建議。具體背景是,得知今年新中國成立75周年,Jim打算重點介紹中國的發展成就,并向李華詢問相關建議。第一步:審題本題要求考生以李華的身份,針對Jim的投稿需求,給出關于介紹中國發展成就的建議,并解釋為何選擇這些內容。第二步:寫作提綱開頭:簡短問候并感謝Jim的詢問。主體:建議投稿內容:中國的經濟增長,特別是近幾十年的快速發展。科技進步,如高鐵、移動支付、電子商務等領域的創新。環保成就,比如綠化工程、減少污染等。理由闡述:經濟增長顯示了中國的強大活力和市場潛力。科技進步反映了中國的創新能力和對未來的投資。環保成就是中國對全球環境責任的體現。結尾:表達對Jim投稿的期待,并希望他的文章能夠引起廣泛關注。第三步:選詞組句可能用到的詞語及中文解釋:Economicgrowth:經濟增長Technologicaladvancements:科技進步Environmentalprotectionachievements:環保成就Rapiddevelopment:快速發展Innovation:創新Globalenvironmentalresponsibility:全球環境責任【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,

Gladtohearfromyou.Asyoumentionedintheletter,it'sagoodchoicewritingthegreatachievementsofChinaforthecolumn,theAsiaToday,ofyourschoolnewspaper.

Thepast75yearshavewitnessedthedevelopmentofChina.Insteadofinvolvingalltheaspects,you'dbetterfocusontheonesrelatedtopeople'slife.Transportationandtechnologyarethesuitabletopicsthatyourteachersandschoolmatesmaybeconcernedabout.High-speedtrainsarethemostpersuadingproof,combiningthetransportationandtechnology.Notonlyhavetheyshortenedtheexacttimebetweenplaceswhenpeopletravel,buttheygetpeopleclosertooneanother.That'sreallyworthintroducing.

HopeyourarticlewillbeamarvelouswindowforpeoplearoundyoutogetinsightsintoChina.(127words)

Yours,

LiHua范文二DearJim,Ihopeyouaredoingwell.DelightedtohearthatyouarewritinganarticleforAsiaTodayaboutthe75thanniversaryofNewChina,Iamwritingtosharemysuggestions.ItisagoodoptiontowriteaboutChina'sfasteconomicgrowth.Overthepast75years,Chinahaschangedfromafarmingcountrytotheworld'ssecond-largesteconomy,showinghowquicklyChinahasdeveloped.AnotherhelpfulstrategyisfocusingonChina'samazingnewtechnology,suchashigh-speedtrains,spaceexploration,andrenewableenergy,allofwhichshowthatChinaisnowaleaderintechnologyandinnovation.IfIwereyou,IwoulddiscussChina'seffortstoreducepoverty,whichhaveliftedmillionsofpeopleoutofpovertyandimprovedthelivesofmanypeople.ThesepointsnotonlyhighlightimportantachievementsbutalsohelpreadersunderstandhowChinahasbecomesuchanimportantcountry.Ihopethesesuggestionshelp!Ifyouneedmoreinformation,feelfreetoask.Bestregards,LiHua范文三DearJim,Iamgladtolearnthatyou

arescheduled

to

contributetoyourschoolnewspaperonthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina.IsuggestyourfocusingonChina'seconomicgrowth,povertyalleviationandprosperity,andtechnologicaladvancements

to

introduceChina'sdevelopmentachievements.Withthehistoricleapineconomicpower,

thepasttwodecadeshaveseen

China'sriseand

transformationinto

aglobaleconomicpowerhouse.China'scomprehensivevictoryinprecise

povertyalleviationhas

contributedChinesewisdomandChinesesolutionsto

theglobalpovertyreduction,writingabrilliantchapterinthehistoryofhumananti-poverty.China's

remarkableachievementsin

scientificandtechnologicalinnovation,suchasAI

andspaceexploration,havewonworldwideattention.Ihopemyadvice

isofsomehelpto

you.Lookingforwardtoyourarticle!

(131words)Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,HardlycouldIhidemyexcitementwhenhearingthatyourintendtocontributeto"AsiaToday"andshowcaseChina'sachievements.Ican’twaittosharemymysuggestionforyoursubmission.Firstandforemost,focusingontheeconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancementsChinahasacquiredoverthepast75yearsisamust.Additionally,itisalsoafabulousideatohighlighttheBeltandRoadInitiative,whichhasfosteredglobaltradeandcooperation.Lastbutnotleast,don'tmissoutonthegreendevelopmentandpovertyalleviationeffortsChinahasmadetosignificantlyimprovethelivesofmillionsofChinesepeople.NotonlyarethesetopicscentraltoChina'sdevelopmentbuttheyalsoresonatewithglobalthemesofsustainabilityandprogress.IamfirmlyconvincedthattheywillprovideacomprehensiveviewofChina'sjourneyanditsimpactontheworldstage.Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,

ThanksforreachingoutaboutyourAsiaTodayarticle.

Incelebrationofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina,IrecommendhighlightingChina'srapideconomicdevelopment,technologicalinnovationssuchase-commerceandmobilepayments,andournotableenvironmentalconservationefforts.ThesetopicsnotonlyreflectChina'sgrowthbutalsodemonstrateourglobalenvironmentalresponsibility.

Yourarticleissuretocaptivatereaders.Goodluckwithyourwriting!

Warmregards,

LiHua2023年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團活動,他發來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復,內容包括:(1)活動形式;(2)活動內容。注意:(1)詞數100左右;(2)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】立足北京,講好“中國故事”。2023年高考英語試題立足北京、放眼中國、展望全球,有利于把學生培養成具有中國情懷和國際視野的社會主義建設者和接班人。例如,書面表達第二節以“綠色北京”為主題創設情境,引導考生關注北京的綠色發展,關注中國的生態文明建設,認同“綠水青山就是金山銀山”的發展理念,激發考生熱愛首都、熱愛祖國的真摯情懷,幫助考生堅定“四個自信”,用英語講好“美麗中國”的故事。“綠色北京”的活動可以選擇節能家電、重復利用紙箱、堅持綠色出行……這些綠色生活新選擇正在成為潮流新風尚。之前為促進綠色消費,引導首都市民踐行綠色低碳生活方式,北京市節能環保中心主辦了“2022北京綠色生活季”活動。活動以“綠色消費,低碳生活”為主題,包含綠享生活、綠動京城、綠暢出行、綠喚未來、綠游山水、綠助光盤、綠色金融和綠碳積分等八個板塊。這要求我們時刻關注北京當地的重大時事活動,對于我們擴展綠色北京的社團活動提供素材。【思路點撥】1、首先,我們需要考慮活動形式。可以建議組織一次綠色環保主題的社區清潔活動,邀請志愿者一起清理公園、街道或者河流等公共場所。可以提供相關的清潔工具和垃圾袋,讓參與者親身體驗環保的重要性。2、其次,關于活動內容,可以提議進行一次綠色生活講座或者展覽,邀請專家學者或者環保組織代表來分享綠色生活的理念和實踐。可以涵蓋節能減排、垃圾分類、植樹造林等方面的內容,讓參與者了解和學習如何在日常生活中實踐綠色環保。3、此外,還可以建議組織一次綠色旅游活動,帶領參與者去參觀北京的自然景點或者生態農場,讓他們親身感受大自然的美麗與脆弱,增強環保意識。【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.It’sgreattohearaboutyourplanfora“GreenBeijing”themedclubactivity.I’dbehappytogiveyousomesuggestions.Fortheactivityformat,Irecommendorganizinga“GreenBeijing”campaign.Thiscanincludeaseriesofeventssuchastreeplanting,clean-updrives,andeducationalsessionsonenvironmentalconservation.Additionally,youcouldconsiderorganizinga“GreenFair”wherelocalbusinessesandorganizationscanshowcaseeco-friendlyproductsandservices.Intermsoftheactivitycontent,itwouldbebeneficialto

collaboratewith

localenvironmentalorganizationsandexpertstodeliverinformativepresentationsontopicslikerecycling,sustainableenergy,andreducingcarbonfootprint.Youcouldalsoarrangevisitstoeco-friendlysitesinBeijing,suchasparksandgardens,toraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofpreservinggreenspaces.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfulforyourclubactivity.Bestofluckwithyourplanning!Yours,

LiHua范文二DearJim,

I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’reorganizingthe“GreenBeijing”event,andI’dliketooffersomesuggestionsfortheactivitycontent,whichincludespromotinggreentraveland

garbageclassification.

Tohighlighttheimportanceofgreentravel,youcanorganizeaneventofridingsharedbikestogether.Withthesameclothesandbanners“GreenBeijing”,theeventissuretoattractcitizens’attentionandraisetheirawarenessofgreentravel.Regardinggarbageclassification,IfIwereyou,Iwouldorganizeaneducationalworkshop,whererelevantexpertscanbeinvitedtodiscusstheimpactofimproperwastedisposalontheenvironmentandenlightenushowtobetterclassifygarbage.

IhopethesesuggestionshelpyoutoplanyoureventmoreeffectivelyandincreaseenvironmentalawarenessinBeijing.Pleasefeelfreetoletmeknowifyouneedanyfurthersupport.Bestregards,LiHua范文三DearJim,Your"GreenBeijing"eventisanexcitingprospect!Iapplaudyourendeavortopromoteenvironmentalconsciousness.AsaBeijinger,I'veobservedourcity'scommitmenttosustainability,particularlywithinoureducationalinstitutions.Thecruxofmysuggestionisa'GreenCampusVisit'atarenownedBeijinguniversity,suchasTsinghuaorPekingUniversity.Participantscouldengageinaneducationaltouraroundthecampus,learningabouttheirongoinggreenprojectssuchasenergy-efficientbuildingsandsolarpowersystems.Thiscanbefollowedbyaninteractivesessionwithstudentswholeadtheseinitiatives,providinginsightsandsparkingintellectualconversationsonsustainability.Lookingforwardtowitnessingourcombinedeffortinpromoting"GreenBeijing".Yours,

LiHua范文四DearJim,Iamgladtolearnthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemedwith"GreenBeijing".Herearemysuggestions.Italwayscomesfirsttoinviteacelebratedexpertforalectureonenvironmentalprotection.Toact,afterall,weshouldthinkfirst.ActivitieslikegarbagepickingandwasteclassificationinfamousscenicspotsinBeijingarealsopreferable,whichwillpromotetheecologicalconceptofhealthandenvironmentalprotectiontotouristswithpracticalactions.PluswhynotchoosegreentravelsothatyoucancontributetoBeijing'senvironmentalprotection?Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.(98words)Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,Iamverydelightedtolearnthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemed“GreenBeijing”andseekingsomeadvicefromme.Iamwritinginresponsetoyourinquiry.Asweallknow,greenlifestyleshavedeeplyrootedinBeijingrecently,soincampus,Iwouldliketosuggestagreenwayof“clearyourplatecampaign”incanteentosavefood.Outsidecampus,itishighlyrecommendedthatgreentransportationtoandfromcampusbywalkingorbybikeorbypublictransportationinsteadofdriving.Besides,somecampaignslikeadoptingrecyclingbags,plantingmoretreestoleadalowcarbonlife,choosingthemoreenergysavingelectricfacilitiesarealsopartofthiscommunityactivity.Ibelieveyoucansuccessfullyhostthisactivityandachieveyourintendedpurposeofpromotinggreenwayoflife.Iwouldliketooffermytipsatanytimeifneeded.AndhopeonedayyoucandropinBeijingagaintoexperiencethegreenlifeinperson.Yours,LiHua2022年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】【2022年北京卷】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你打算邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次關于英語寫作的線上經驗交流。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件,內容包括:1.建議交流的具體內容及其原因;2.交流時間和其他相關事項。注意:1.詞數100左右;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】主題語境:人與社會---人際溝通(良好的人際關系)話題選擇:邀請朋友在線分享英語寫作經驗語篇類型:邀請信邀請信是邀請對方參與某種活動或邀請對方做某事。邀請信最重要的就是自然流暢,對象不同,信中的表達方式也不同。比如你邀請某位老師組織活動,如果是不認識的老師,就要說下自己是誰,有什么事情,要顯得很尊敬對方。再比如你邀請朋友參加某個活動,你已經知道對方是誰了,那自然沒必要自我介紹,語氣可以顯得活潑一些。【思路點撥】(1)首段:開門見山說明寫作目的。(2)主體:a.具體交代邀請原因;b.邀請內容:活動性質、時間、地點、日期;c.有關要求和希望。(3)尾段:a.再次盛情邀請;b.希望盡快答復。【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,Ihopeyou'rewell.

I'dliketoinviteyoufor

anonlineEnglishwritingexchangewithmyhighschoolclassmates.

We'reeagerto

improveourEnglishwritingskills,andyournativeEnglish

perspective

wouldbe

invaluable.The

specificcontent

ofthisexchangewould

involve

twoaspects.

Inthefirstplace,

youcould

shareinsightson

effectivewritingtechniques,grammar,andstyle,

whichwouldbeincrediblyenriching

andbeneficialforus.

Besides,

we'dloveforyoutoreviewouressaysandgive

constructivefeedback,whichwill

enableustolearnfrom

ourmistakesand

make

necessaryimprovements,

helpingusbecome

more

proficient

writersinEnglish.Theexchange

isscheduledfor

nextWednesdayat8:00PMviavideo.I'mlookingforwardtoyourresponseandtheopportunitytolearnfromyour

expertise.Thankyouforconsideringthisinvitation!Yours

LiHua范文二DearJim,Knowingthatyouhavegotagoodgradeinthewriting,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutodoaonlineexperiencesharingabouttheEnglishcomposition.TheexperiencesharingistobeheldontheMondaymorninganditwilllastforanhour.Inthesharingprocedure,youcanintroducehowtoorganizethestructureofacompositionbetter,becausesomeofuscan’tdoitwell.Besides,youcanalsogivesomesuggestionsabouthowtoconnectthesentenceslogically,whichwillleadstudentstoexpresstheirthoughtsbetter.Atlast,youshouldtellmewhichplatformyouwillchoosetogivethesharingaheadoftimeandweshouldleavesometimetoanswerthequestionsfrommyclassmates.Sincerelyhopeyoucanaccepttheinvitationandgiveusaimpressiveexperiencesharing.Yours

LiHua范文三DearJim,How'sitgoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyouto

giveusanonlinetalkon

Englishwritingbecauseourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.Wouldyouplease

giveussomesuggestionson

howtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwilllastaboutanhour,

andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou’lluse.Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoaninternet-basedtalkabouthowtoimproveEnglishwriting.ThetalkisthoughtimportantforusChinesestudents,ofwhommostarepoorinwritingacompositioninEnglish.Therefore,wehopeyou,anativespeaker,wouldliketogiveussomeadviceonwhatwecandowellwithourEnglishcompositions.Theonlinetalkisscheduledtotakeplacebetween5:00pmand6:30pmthisSaturday,andifyouwill,IwillsendyouthelinktoTencentMeeting,anvideoappcomparabletoZoom.Iwouldappreciateitsomuchifwecouldhaveyouinthetalk.Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,IamwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinelectureonEnglishwriting.Sincethefinalexaminationiscoming,somestudentsarestillstrugglingwithwritinganEnglishessay.Thingsexpectedtobecoveredareasfollows.First,youmaygivesomegeneralguidanceonhowtowriteEnglishessays.Then,youcouldusesomerealexamplestogivesomespecificguidanceonorganizingstructuresaswellaswordingandphrasing.Additionally,itwouldbegreatifyoucouldgiveussomepracticaltipsonhowtoimprovewritinginourday-to-daylearning.Asforthetime,I'mwonderingifyouareavailableat3pmthisFridayafternoon.Ifso,Iwillsendthelinktotheonlinemeetingtoyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua2021年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件,內容包括:1.表達歉意并說明原因;2.提出建議并給出理由。注意:1.詞數100左右;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】這封電子郵件屬于個人道歉及建議類書信文體。在這類文體中,作者需要以一種真誠、禮貌且直接的方式向收件人表達歉意,并由于某種原因無法履行先前的約定。同時,為了維護雙方的關系和計劃的延續性,作者還需要提出一個或多個合理的替代方案,并解釋這些方案為何是可行的或更合適的。【思路點撥】【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,IamwritingtomakeasincereapologytoyouthatIwillnotbeabletoattendthephotographicexhibitionwhichisscheduledtotakeplacethisSaturday.Idofeelbadaboutinformingyouonsuchashortnotice,butIneedtohaveaphysicalcheckupthisSaturdayafternoonandIalmostforgot.Tovisittheexhibition,firstyouneedtotakethebusandthenchangesubwaylinestwice.Itiskindofcomplicated.ConsideringthatyouhaveonlybeeninBeijingforaweekandarelikelytohaveaproblemgettingaround,Icouldaskmycousin,whowasbornandbredinBeijing,togowithyoutotheexhibitionvenue.NotonlyishefamiliarwithBeijing,heisfluentinEnglishaswell.Inotherwords,hecouldbeyourperfecttourguide.IfmycousinisnotavailableonSaturday,asalastresort,wemightgotothephotographicexhibitionsomeothertime.Ihearthatitwillbeheldagainnextmonth.Anyway,Iamsorryagainfornotbeingabletogowithyouthistime,butdonothesitateto1contactmeifIcanbeofanyfurtherhelp.Yours,LiHua范文二DearJim,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mwritingto

expressmysincereapologiesfor

notbeingabletojoinyouthisweekend

asplanned.Unfortunately,I've

encountered

an

unexpectedfamilymatter

duetomygrandfatherfallingill,whichrequiresmy

immediatepresence

athome.Ihopeyoucanunderstandthesituation.Asanalternative,

Isuggestthatwe

rescheduleouroutingto

thefollowingweekend.Thisway,I'llbeableto

fulfillmycommitments

andensurewehaveamoreenjoyabletimetogether

withoutanydistractions.

Ivalueourfriendshipandwould

reallyappreciateyourunderstanding.

Lookingforwardtoyourresponse,and

onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Yours,LiHua范文三DearJim,I’mwritingthelettertoshowmysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingabletogooutwithyoutogetheratthisweekend.Iknewthatwe’vemadetheplanbutunfortunately,therearesomethingunexpectedhappenedandIhadtochangetheplan.Ibegantocoughyesterdaymorning,andIwenttoseeadoctor.ShetoldmethatitwasasobadcoldthatIwouldhavetostayathomeforafewdays.Hopeyouwillacceptmyapologyandwecanmakeanotherappointment.HowaboutgoshoppingnextweekendbecauseIreallyliketospendsometimewithyou.I’msorryabouttheinconvenienceagain.Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,IamterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIwillfailtogooutwithyouasscheduledthisweekendbecauseIsprainedmyanklewhileplayingbasketballyesterday.Thedoctoradvisedmenottowalkasmuchaspossibletoavoidswellingandpaininmyinjury.NowIhavetoattendtheclasswiththehelpofmyfatherorclassmates,andcannotbutrestinbedonweekends.Myapologiesagain,Ipromisetogooutingwithyouaftermyrecovery,preferablydoingsomethingwithlittlephysicalactivity.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(96words)Yours,LiHua2020年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】【2020年北京卷】第一節應用文假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你們學校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍指導教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復學在即,作為俱樂部負責人,你給Jim寫一封電子郵件,請他推薦一名外籍指導教師,內容包括:1.條件及要求;2.表示感謝并提醒注意防護。注意:1.詞數不少于50;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】書面表達繼續保持選擇性和開放性的特點,為考生展示個性、思維的多樣性提供了廣闊空間。應用文題目要求中涉及外籍指導教師的條件和要求,但是具體的內容并未羅列,這需要考生展開積極的、合理的、有邏輯的思考完成寫作任務,為考生提供了展示自我能力的機會。情景作文需要考生不僅具備較扎實的語言功底和表達能力,也需要考生展開想象,提供合理的細節內容。【思路點撥】應用文首段,需要我們做到:打招呼+描述題干+寫信目的。這樣寫的話,才能將寫信的背景和目的交待清楚,有助于下一步的展開。次段:進入正文,開門見山地,客氣地提出條件,并盡量表明為什么提這樣的條件,這是細節補充,是很有必要的安排,這種方法會在后面的學習中反復提到的。第三段:提醒對方注意防護,并提出一些建議,這也是交際的一個具體體現,可以結合我們的實際情況,結出一些中肯的建議。結尾:提出感謝(對方是外教老師身份,一定要更客氣,有禮貌)【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,Howiseverythinggoingwithyouthesedays?We’reveryworriedaboutyouduetothesevereepidemicsituation,forwhichyouaretrappedintheUKandcouldn’treturntoChinaasplanned.Consideringthatourschoolisgoingtoresumesoon,I,onbehalfofourEnglishPlayClub,sincerelyaskyoutorecommendanexcellentforeigninstructorlikeyou.Herearesomebasicqualifications.Ifpossible,anEnglishnativespeakerwouldbebetter,whichmakessureofamorestandardpronunciationintheplay.Besides,weareexpectingateacherwhoisasprofessionalasyou,withrichexperienceinEnglishplay.Atlast,whatmattersisthatheorshemustberesponsibleandpatientsothatwecanmakesmoothcommunication,makingsureofahealthydevelopmentforourclub.Duringsuchaspecialperiod,nothingismoreimportantthanahealthbody.Pleasetakecareofyourselfanddosomeprecautionstokeepawayfromthevirus,likewearingmaskswhenyouhavetogoout,washingyourhandsfrequently,workingoutregularlytokeepfitandsoon.Allofourclubmembersarelookingforwardtoyourreturn.Atlast,pleaseallowmetosaythanksagain.Ihopeourrequirementwouldnotcauseyouanytrouble.Lookforwardtoyourgoodnews.yours,LiHua范文二DearJim,Howareyoudoing?I’msorrytohearthatyoucan’tmakeitbacktoChinaduetothepandemicinyourcountry.However,westillneedaforeignteacherforourclub.Consequently,Iamwritingtoturntoyouforhelp.Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatheorshemustcomefromanEnglish-spokencountry,sothatheorshecanspeakEnglishwithaperfectaccent,consideringthatpronunciationhasalwaysbeenaheadacheforusChinesestudents.Additionally,heorshemusthaveacertificateasanEnglishteacher,whichisrequiredinourcountry.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,needlesstosay,heorshemustbeavailableandcurrentlyinBeijing.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanfindsuchapersonforus.Ifso,Iwonderifit’sconvenientforyoutotellmehisorhernameandEmail.Thankyouforreadingmyletteranddoingmesuchafavor.Pleasetakegoodcareofyourselfagainstthevirus.Bestwishes!LiHua范文三DearJim,Ihopeyouaredoingwell.Duetotheongoingpandemic,weunderstandthatyoucannotreturntoguidetheEnglishDramaClubinthenewschoolyear.Therefore,wekindlyrequestyourassistanceinrecommendingaqualifiedforeignteacher.Wearelookingforanidealcandidatewhopossessesarobustbackgroundindramaeducationandsharesagenuinepassionforworkingwithstudents.Additionally,proficiencyinEnglishisessential.Weappreciateyourcontinuoussupportandguidance.Pleasetakeprecautionsagainstthevirusandtakecareofyourhealth.Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,IamverysorrytohearthatyouhavetostayinBritainbecauseofthecoronavirus.Asweareabouttoreturntoschool,ourEnglishdramaclubneedsateachertodirectustemporarily.WeneedateacherwhoisanativeEnglishspeakerandhasexperienceinEnglishdrama.Couldyourecommendateachertous?I’dappreciateitifyoucandomethisfavor.Atlast,pleasedoremembertotakeprotectivemeasurestakecareofyourselfduringthecoronavirus.Yours,Lihua范文五Dear.Jim,Howareyoudoing?Ihopeeverything'sOKwithyou.Ourschool'sdramachubplanstostartpractising.Sinceyou'reawayinBritain,weneedadramateachertobeinyourplace,wouldyoupleaserecommendoneforus?HeorsheshouldbeanativeEnglishspeaker,currentlyinBeijing,andexperiencedinbothdirectingandteaching.Thankyouforyourhelp.Pleasetakecareofyourself,Remembertowearamaskwhennecessary.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua第二節假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班班長李華。居家學習期間,你們班開展了一次以“自律”為主題的調研活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫一篇英文稿件,給你們學校英文網站投稿,記述你在本次活動中發現問題并解決問題的過程。注意:詞數不少于60。提示詞:自律self-discipline___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解讀】此試題緊扣時代脈搏,與疫情有關,講述的是在家上課期間,李華的班上做了一個學生調研,調查結果表明學生自律情況堪憂,李華向父母征求建議,父母建議他征求大家意見。李華召開了一個在線班會,大家出謀劃策,想提高自律的辦法。三個月后自律情況明顯改善,李華向老師做了匯報,老師很欣慰,李華也很有成就感。情景作文對人物情感心理的把握及細節的拓展,是作文高下的關鍵。詞匯積累儲備是平時備考的關鍵。【思路點撥】描題干+議論看圖作文,最重要的幾個要點:要點齊全,細節到位,也就是圖片中的細節要處理好。比如每幅圖片中,李華的表情,文字敘述等。圖片與圖片之間的過渡要通順,要有合理的連接詞或連接句。圖片描述時,要注意高級寫作句型的運用,比如定語從句,非謂語動詞,強調句型等。詞匯也要注意豐富和多樣性,比如寫了chance,下一個就要用oppotunity來替換。happy也不要再過多使用,可以用delighted,joyful等詞來替換。如果有必要,需要有一個積極向上的結尾,像語文作文一樣,升華主題。【滿分范文】范文一Duetothesevereepidemicsituation,allofourstudentshadtofinishourschoolworkathome,duringwhichourclassheldaonlineresearchonthethemeofself-disciplinetoenhanceourself-learningability.時間狀語入圖+

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議論(細節:表格現狀,李華的心情和變化)WhenIgottheresultsofthestatistics,Iwastotallyastonishedbythe

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grades.Noneofmyclassmatesshowedaqualifiedself-learningabilityinallsortsofaspects,whicharousedmygreatconcern.Asamonitor,Ihadthecompleteresponsibilitytosolvethisworryingsituation,especiallywhentheCollegeEntranceExaminationwasjustaroundthecorner.Obviously,itwastimetodosomethingtochangethisterriblesituation.時間狀語入圖+長短句描圖+

議論(細節:可以用非謂語做狀語來入圖,用which引導的非限制性定語從句來議論結尾)Ha

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