第第頁人教版（2024）七年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語期末復(fù)習(xí)：作文專項(xiàng)練習(xí)題1.以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析(1)某英文雜志向中學(xué)生征稿（語篇類型：應(yīng)用文），請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以“MyFavouriteAnimal”為題，根據(jù)以下提示，介紹一下自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物。人稱：第三人稱為主(1)Whatanimal(人稱：第三人稱為主)doyoulikebest?(2)Whydoyou(時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí))likeit?(3)…要求：(1)詞數(shù)60左右；(2)短文意思連貫、符合邏輯；(3)所給提示詞僅供選用。提示詞:cute,clever,helpful,friendlyMyFavouriteAnimal______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step1謀篇布局指導(dǎo)開頭：介紹自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物①Of/Amongalltheanimals,the…ismyfavouriteanimal.②Ilike…best.③Asforme,myfavouriteanimalis…正文：介紹喜歡這種動(dòng)物的原因①Ilike…bestbecause…notonly…,butalso…②Theyareso…thattheycan…③Andsome…canhelp…,even…④Theirroundfacesmakethemlookcute/beautiful…⑤Ilovetheirbrighteyes…結(jié)尾：總結(jié)全文①Inaword,Ireallylike…②…arereallyourgoodfriends.③That?swhy…aremyfavourite.Step2高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用(1)Ilikedogsbestbecausetheycanhelpguardourhousesandtheyareourgoodfriends.(用“notonly…butalso…”升格)

(2)Theyareverycleverandtheycanunderstandyouwhenyoutalktothem.(用“so…that…”升格)

2.

為進(jìn)一步培養(yǎng)和提高學(xué)生保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí)，增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的責(zé)任感，學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)開展了“Myfavouriteanimal”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英文短文，描述你最喜歡的動(dòng)物。要求：(1)包含所給信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；(3)60詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。MyfavouriteanimalTheredpandaismyfavouriteanimal._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析(1)假設(shè)你是Susan，在家里（主題：人與自我）你的父母總是（時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）對(duì)你有很多要求，有時(shí)你是否感到厭煩？你是怎樣解決的？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇70詞左右的短文。提示：(1)父母的要求；（人稱：第一人稱）(2)你的看法；（人稱：第一人稱）(3)你的解決方式。(2)Step1謀篇布局指導(dǎo)開頭：開篇點(diǎn)明家里有很多家規(guī)①M(fèi)ynameis…②Therearetoomanyrulesinmyfamily.③Ihavetofollowmanyrulesinmyfamily.正文：具體介紹自己需要遵守的家規(guī)及自己的感受①Ihaveto/must…everyday.②Myparentsaskme(not)to…inmyfreetime.③Besides,Ican?t…④Ifeel…butI…⑤Ithinkmyparentsaretoostrictwithme.結(jié)尾：提出自己的解決辦法①Ioftentalkwithmyparentsabout…②AndIoftenhelpthemdohousework.③Thesearemygoodwaystogetonwellwiththem.Step2高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用(1)Myfamilyhastoomanyrules.(用therebe句型升格)

(2)Ioftentalkwithmyparents.(增加談?wù)摰膬?nèi)容，擴(kuò)寫句子)

4.校報(bào)新增英語版本。本月主題為“FollowandGrow(家規(guī)促成長)”。請(qǐng)你寫一篇70詞左右的英文稿件投稿。要點(diǎn)如下：(1)Talkaboutatleasttwofamilyrules.(2)Talkaboutyouropinionsonyourfamilyrules.(3)Talkaboutwhatyouwilldo._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析(1)

為全面增進(jìn)健康，初中生每天要至少鍛煉1個(gè)小時(shí)。那么，你是如何鍛煉身體的呢（人稱：第一人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文為校英文報(bào)“健康與體育（主題：人與自我）”欄目投稿（語篇類型：應(yīng)用文）。提示：(1)Howdoyoukeepfit?(2)Whatdoyouthinkofplayingsport?(3)Howoftendoyouplaysport?(4)Whatwillyoudotoimproveyourhealth?要求：(1)包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；(2)語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；(3)80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Asweallknow,healthisthegreatestwealthforeveryone._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)Step1謀篇布局指導(dǎo)第一段：總述保持健康的方式①Iusuallykeepfitthrough...②Ilikeplayingfootball/basketball/...③Myfavouritesportisfootball/basketball/...第二段：詳細(xì)介紹自己對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目的看法及自己運(yùn)動(dòng)的頻率①Ithinkplayingsportis...②Playingsportcanhelpuskeepfit/relax/...③Icanlearntheimportanceofteamwork/makenewfriends/...④Iusually/often/always/...play...atweekends/inthemorning/...⑤Ilikeplaying...withmyfriends/father/...第三段：總結(jié)自己將要保持健康的計(jì)劃①Iplantolearn/formthehabitof/...②Inthenearfuture...Iwanttolearn...③It?snecessaryformetolearn...④IhopeIcanbestronger/healthier/...Step2高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用(1)Irun.AndIfeellikeabirdflyingthroughtheair.(用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句升格)

(2)IthinkIshouldlearnthelongjump.(用“itisadj.+forsb.+todosth.”句式升格)

6.中國奧運(yùn)健兒在2024年巴黎奧運(yùn)會(huì)上的精彩表現(xiàn)，讓體育賽事再次成為今年的新聞熱點(diǎn)。學(xué)業(yè)繁忙的中學(xué)生更應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，學(xué)校公眾號(hào)計(jì)劃推出一期以“Myfavouritesport”為專題的英文介紹。請(qǐng)你向公眾號(hào)投稿，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及喜歡的原因。詞數(shù)70左右。提示詞語：basketball，relaxing，exciting，healthy提示問題：(1)Whatsportdoyoulikebest?(2)Howoftendoyoudothesport?(3)Whydoyoulikeit?Myfavouritesport_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析(1)“人間煙火氣，最撫凡人心?！睆氖值娇冢瑥目诘叫?，中國人延續(xù)著對(duì)世界和人生特有的感知方式。或地方特色，或家常便飯，只要端起碗筷，總有一道美食觸動(dòng)了你的味蕾。請(qǐng)以“MyFavouritefood（主題：人與自我）”為題分享一下你和美食之間（人稱：第一人稱_時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）的故事吧。要點(diǎn)提示：(1)介紹你最喜歡的食物；(2)談?wù)勏矚g這種食物的原因；(3)與這種食物相關(guān)的感受。注意：(1)詞數(shù)70左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)Step1謀篇布局指導(dǎo)第一部分：點(diǎn)明自己最喜歡的食物①Everyonehastheirownfavouritefood.②Myfavouritefoodis...③Somepeoplelike...,whileothers...第二部分：詳細(xì)介紹喜歡這種食物的原因①Ilikeitbecause...②Ilikeitnotonlybecause...butalsobecause...③Ilikeitnotbecause...butbecause...第三部分：分享這種食物帶來的感受①Ireallylike②Itisawonderfultimeto...Step2高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用(1)Somepeopleliketoeatmeat.Somepeopleliketoeatvegetables.(用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞合并成一句話)

(2)Ilikeitbecauseitissodelicious.Ilikeitbecauseitbringsmewonderfulmemories.(用notonly...butalso...連成一句話)

8.良好的飲食習(xí)慣是身體健康的保證。你的飲食習(xí)慣是怎樣的？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求，以“Myeatinghabits”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕娘嬍沉?xí)慣。要點(diǎn)：(1)你的一日三餐經(jīng)常吃些什么？(2)你最喜歡的食物和飲料是什么？(3)你認(rèn)為你的飲食習(xí)慣健康嗎？你應(yīng)該怎么做？要求：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；(2)詞數(shù)70左右。Myeatinghabits_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.(1)一、寫作話題分析本單元的主題是“與他人分享自己的生活”,要求學(xué)生能用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)描述正在發(fā)生的事情或正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作。與此相關(guān)的寫作通常有:①

②

(2)二、寫作訓(xùn)練假設(shè)你是李華,受某報(bào)紙的邀約要寫一篇新聞報(bào)道。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下方表格提供的信息,向大家介紹此時(shí)此刻世界各地的人們都在做什么。PlacesTimeActivitiesBeijing3o?clockintheafternoonworkhard;havelessons;readbooksSydney5o?clockintheafternoonwaitforbuses;shop

Paris8o?clockinthemorningsleep;havebreakfast;doexercise

要求:(1)語句通順,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮活動(dòng)(2)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I.思路導(dǎo)引

II.你來審題主題：

體裁：

???????時(shí)態(tài)：

???????人稱：

III.句子翻譯開頭句:(1)此時(shí)此刻,世界各地的人們正在做著不同的事情。

(2)不同地方的人們正在做什么?

中間句:(1)現(xiàn)在是北京的下午3點(diǎn),大多數(shù)人都在努力工作。

(2)一些學(xué)生正在學(xué)校上課,另一些正在圖書館讀書。

(3)一些人正在公園里散步,享受著這美好的一天。

(4)在澳大利亞悉尼,現(xiàn)在是下午5點(diǎn)。

(5)許多人在等公交車回家。

(6)一些人在購買食物,例如面包和肉餡餅。

(7)在法國巴黎,現(xiàn)在是早上8點(diǎn)。一些人還在睡覺。許多人正在家里吃早餐或者在公園里鍛煉。

結(jié)尾句:(1)真是天壤之別!

(2)了解世界各地的人們的不同生活很有趣。

(3)三、佳作展示Atthemoment,indifferentplacesoftheworld,peoplearedoingdifferentthings.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析(1)假如你是李華，春節(jié)就要到了，你和家人正在（人稱：第一人稱、第三人稱_時(shí)態(tài)：現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)）為春節(jié)做準(zhǔn)備。你的英國筆友Annie此時(shí)發(fā)來郵件表示對(duì)中國的春節(jié)非常感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示回復(fù)一封郵件（語篇類型：應(yīng)用文），向她介紹一下吧。

myfather

mymother

myuncleandmygrandmother

mysister

makelanterns(燈籠)要求：(1)

要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)70左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearAnnie,I?mgladthatyou?reinterestedinSpringFestival.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouwanttoknowmore,pleasetellme.Yours,LiHua(2)Step1

謀篇布局指導(dǎo)第一部分：介紹春節(jié)①...iscoming.②It?soneof...festivalsinChina.第二部分：描述活動(dòng)①M(fèi)yfamilyarebusy...②...am/is/arebuying...inthesupermarket.③...am/is/aremakingdelicious...inthekitchen.④...am/is/arelearningtomakelanternsfrom...第三部分：表達(dá)情感①Weareenjoyingourselves/havingfun/havingagreattime.②Howbusyweare!Step2高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用(1)SpringFestivalisanimportantfestivalinChina.(用oneof結(jié)構(gòu)升格)

(2)Wearereallyhappy.(用enjoyoneself升格)

答案和解析1.【答案】【小題1】MyFavouriteAnimalOfalltheanimals,thedogismyfavouriteanimal.Ilikedogsbestbecause①theycannotonlyhelpguardourhouses,butalso②beourgoodfriends.Theyaresocleverthat③theycanunderstandyouwhenyoutalktothem.Andsomedogscanhelpblindpeopleinmanyways,andevensavetheirliveswhentheyareindanger.Inaword④,dogsaremyfavouriteanimals,andtheyareourfriendsinmyheart.①because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，貼合本單元所學(xué)新知，提升句子檔次。②“notonly…butalso…”用于連接兩個(gè)并列成分,可避免文章出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句，使文章語言簡(jiǎn)潔流暢。③“so…that…”結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，凸顯了文章高級(jí)句式的使用，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。④Inaword總結(jié)全文，使文章脈絡(luò)清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。本篇范文語言流暢、句式高級(jí)，多處使用狀語從句，提高了文章的可讀性?！拘☆}2】Ilikedogsbestbecausetheycannotonlyhelpguardourhouses,butalsobeourgoodfriends.Theyaresocleverthattheycanunderstandyouwhenyoutalktothem.2.【答案】MyfavouriteanimalTheredpandaismyfavouriteanimal.Iloveredpandasbecausethey?resocuteandkind,justlikecats.Differentfromgiantpandas,redpandasaresmall.Theirbeautifulfurhelpsthemkeepwarmincoldplaces.Theyhavebigearsandlongtails.Theyeatbamboo,fruit,insectsandbirdeggs.Theyaregoodatclimbingtrees.However,redpandasareindanger.Theyliveintheforests,butpeoplecutdowntoomanytrees.Weshouldtryourbesttosavethem.Let?ssavetheforestsandnotcutdowntrees.Everyredpandacounts.3.【答案】【小題1】MynameisSusan.Thereare①toomanyrulesinmyfamily.Ihaveto②cleantheroomeveryday.Myparentsaskmenotto③playcomputergamesinmyfreetime.Besides④,Ican?tgoout⑤onschoolnights.Imust⑥gotobedby10pm.Ithinkmyparentsaretoostrictwith⑦me.SometimesIfeelbored.ButIunderstandtheyreallyloveme.Ioftentalkwithmyparentsaboutmyhappinessandsadness.AndIoftenhelpthemdohousework.Thesearemygoodwaystogetonwellwith⑧them.①處使用了存現(xiàn)句，使文章表達(dá)豐富，句式高級(jí)。②⑤⑥⑦為本單元所學(xué)語法知識(shí)及固定短語，學(xué)以致用，在范文中的使用可加深對(duì)所學(xué)知識(shí)的印象。③⑧為高級(jí)表達(dá)，可提升范文的檔次。④處銜接得當(dāng)，使文章內(nèi)容緊密，條理清晰。本篇范文要點(diǎn)齊全、句式豐富、表達(dá)高級(jí)，在解決方法方面提出了很好的建議，可供讀者參考。【小題2】(1)Therearetoomanyrulesinmyfamily.(2)Ioftentalkwithmyparentsaboutmyhappinessandsadness/myfriendsandstudies/mylifeandmydreams...4.【答案】Mostfamilieshavesomerulesforchildrentofollow.Goodfamilyrulesaregoodforourgrowth.NowIwilltalkaboutmyfamilyrules.First,Ishouldhelpmyparentsdothehouseworksuchascleaningthehouse,washingtheclothesandwateringtheflowers.Second,openingabookisalwaysgood.Asastudent,don?tspendmuchtimewatchingTVorplayingcomputergamesinsteadofreading.Agoodbookisagoodfriend.What?smore,weshouldbehonest.Inmyopinion,myfamilyrulesmakemeabetterperson.Iwillfollowtherulesstrictly.5.【答案】【小題1】Asweallknow,healthisthegreatestwealthforeveryone.Iusuallykeepfitthroughhealthyoutdoorexercise.Ithinkplayingsport?isameaningfulactivity.Ithelpsuskeepfit?,learntoworkwithothersandbetterunderstandothers.Irunwithmyfathereverymorninginthepark.WhenIrun?,Ifeellikeabirdflyingthroughtheair.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesonceaweek.Inmyopinion?,everyoneshouldlearntoplayit.Itisreallyenjoyableandrelaxing.Inthenearfuture,Ithinkit?snecessaryformetolearn?thelongjump.That?sbecause?wewillhavealongjumptestinGrade9.Allinall,onlybykeepingfitcanwe?studybetterandliveahappierlife.?動(dòng)名詞作主語的使用，體現(xiàn)了學(xué)以致用。??keepfit，inone?sopinion等固定短語的使用使文章更精練。?用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，比喻的手法表達(dá)了跑步時(shí)的愉快心情。?用含有Ithink的賓語從句表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，委婉親切，富有號(hào)召力。?That?sbecause句型引出原因，使范文更有說服力。?利用only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句回扣主題，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，體現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的語言功底。本文要點(diǎn)齊全，語言高級(jí)，語句通順，句式豐富。是一篇佳作?！拘☆}2】WhenIrun,Ifeellikeabirdflyingthroughtheair.

Ithinkit?snecessaryformetolearnthelongjump.6.【答案】MyfavouritesportMyfavouritesportisbasketball.Ilikeitbecauseitisbothexcitingandhealthy.Playingbasketballhelpsmerelaxafteralongdayofstudying.Itisagreatwaytokeepfitandimprovemyteamworkskills.Iplayitwithmyfriendsthreetimesaweekafterschool.Andwealsoplaymatcheswithotherschools.Ienjoythethrillofthegameandthechallengeofscoringpoints.Inaddition,playingbasketballwithfriendsisalotoffunandhelpsmebuildstrongrelationships.Allinall,basketballisaperfectbalanceofexerciseandenjoymentforme.【解析】【思路點(diǎn)撥】

???????7.【答案】【小題1】MyfavouritefoodEveryonehastheirownfavouritefood.Somepeopleliketoeatmeat,whileothers?liketoeatvegetables.Butmyfavouritefoodisthesteamedegg.Ilikeitnotonlybecauseitissodelicious,butalso?becauseitbringsmewonderfulmemories.WhenIseeitonthetable?,itscolourandsmellmakemefeelgood.Mymumlikesmakingsteamedeggsformeeverymorning.Itisawonderfulthingto?havebreakfasttogetherwithmyfamily.?Some...,whileothers...“一些……，其他人……”，先引出其他人愛吃的美食，再過渡到作者，銜接順暢。?并列連詞的使用，引出喜歡蒸蛋的原因，語意銜接得當(dāng)，理由充分。?When引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，引出對(duì)蒸蛋的喜愛。?“Itis+n.+todosth.”句型的使用，豐富了文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)表達(dá)了作者對(duì)家人的愛。本文要點(diǎn)齊全，句式結(jié)構(gòu)豐富。作者通過描述自己喜愛的食物升華為對(duì)自己家人的愛。情感細(xì)膩，生動(dòng)?！拘☆}2】Somepeopleliketoeatmeat,whileothersliketoeatvegetables.Ilikeitnotonlybecauseitissodelicious,butalsobecauseitbringsmewonderfulmemories.8.【答案】MyeatinghabitsGoodeatinghabitsaregoodforourbodies.Ihavebread,eggsandmilkforbreakfast.AndIhavericeandchickenforlunch.Ihavenoodles,vegetablesandsoupfordinner.Eatingmorevegetablescanmakeourbodiesstronger.Ialsoeatsomemeatandsomefruit.Myfavouritefoodisthehamburger.Myfavouritedrinkiscola.Buttheyarebadformyhealth.Iseldomhavethem.Healthyeatinghabitsareimportanttous.Sowe?dbetterkeepawayfromjunkfood.Ithinkmyeatinghabitsarehealthy.Istillneedtoeatmorefruitandvegetablestokeephealthy.【解析】【思路點(diǎn)撥】

???????9.【答案】【小題1】描述自己和家人、朋友等在某個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作描述某個(gè)場(chǎng)景下正在發(fā)生的事情及人們的活動(dòng)【小題2】介紹此時(shí)此刻世界各地的人們都在做什么記敘文現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)第一人稱和第三人稱Atthemoment,indifferentplacesoftheworld,peoplearedoingdifferentthings.Whatarepeopledoingindifferentplaces?It?s3o?clockintheafternooninBeijing,andmostpeopleareworkinghard.Somestudentsareh