讀后續(xù)寫旅行探險＋環(huán)境描寫篇閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwasbornandgrewupinthenorthofScotland,whichwasnotfarfromthesea.WhenIwaslittle,Ienjoyedtheseasidesceneryverymuch.Ioftensatontherockbytheseaandwatchedtheviewofthesea.Iwasfondofplayingwiththesandonthebeachandchasedthewaveswithmyeldersister,Alastair.Acrossthebeachtherewasatidal(潮汐)island,whichmeansthatwhenthetidegoesout,youcanwalktoit,butwhenthetideesinagain,youcan’tgettoit.MumandDadneverletusgothere.Theytoldusthatitwasdangerous.However,thetidalislandwasfullofmysterytome.Isaidtomyself,“Theremustbesomefascinatingsceneryworthexploring.HowIwishIhadachancetolandonit！”O(jiān)nalittlecolddayinOctober,whilemyparentswereawayforafriend’swedding,mysisterwasdeterminedtotakemetothebeachnearourhouse,wherewewouldhaveagoodtime.Iwantedtobuildsandcastles.Whenwearrivedatthebeach,thetidewasout.Weranonthebeachbackandforthandenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Withthehelpofmysister,Imadeseveralsandcastlesofdifferentshapes.Feelingalittletired,Isatonthebeachforabreak.Isawthetidalislandopposite,whichlookedveryniceintheautumnsunshine．“Let’sgotoexplorethetidalisland,Alastair,”Isaidtomysister.“That’sagoodidea.ButMumandDadsaidwecouldn’t.Maybewewon’treturnsafely!”Alastairsaid.“Don’tworry!We’lltrytoreturnbeforethetideesinagain.”IbeggedAlastair.Finally,sheagreed.Wereturnedhomeandbroughtsomepeanutbuttersandwichesandabottleofmilkwithus.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在以下位置作答。Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme.________________________________________________________________________________一、解題1.Readforthecharacters.Circleallthecharacters2.ReadfortheplotsUnderlinetheplotthatmayinfluencethedevelopmentofthestory3.Readfortheplot&emotionalchangesplotEmotions12345Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland.6Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme. 4.Readforlanguagefeatures5.Readthe2givensentences情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。Para1.Whatdidweseethen?Whatdidwefindontheisland?Howdidwefeel?Para2:Howdidtheyfeel?Howdidtheymanagetoreturntotheland?Howdidtheirparentsreact?二、遣詞造句。(1)自然環(huán)境細(xì)節(jié)描寫1.我們一踏上小島，就被周圍的一切迷住了：清澈的水，蔚藍(lán)的天空，海鷗的歌聲。Themomentwesetfootontheisland,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.我們迫不及待地沖進一座被灌木叢包圍的廢棄城堡，里面有各種各樣的奧秘等著我們?nèi)ヌ剿鳌＂賍_______________________________________________.Itwassurroundedbybusheswithvariousmysterieswaitingustoexplore.（副詞+具體動作）②___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(分詞做后置定語）3.海鷗在天空中飛翔，野花在路邊盛開。________________________________,andwildflowersbloomedbytheroadside.(2)人物的動作和情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫1.當(dāng)我們意識到天已經(jīng)又黑又冷時，我們匆忙地沖過島向海灘跑去。Whenwerealizedithadbeendarkandcold,we______________________________theislandtothebeach.(副詞+具體動作細(xì)節(jié)）2.“冷靜下來!快爬到我背上來。”Alan大聲鼓勵我。“Calmdown!Climbonmybackquickly.”_________________________________________.3.她拼命背著我趟過海浪，回到陸地，但我還沒有從恐懼中恢復(fù)過來。Shestruggledthroughthewavesand________________________________________butIhadnotgotoverthescare.4.我們雖然又怕又累，卻慶幸自己平安歸來。①Though______________________________________,wecongratulatedourselvesonreturningsafeandsound.②______________________________________________,wecongratulatedourselvesonreturningsafeandsound.（倒裝句）(3)滿分結(jié)尾句1.感悟式結(jié)尾這次經(jīng)歷給我們上了一課，我們應(yīng)該三思而后行，永遠(yuǎn)不要冒險。Theexperiencetaughtusalessonthat_______________________________________________.2.首尾呼應(yīng)式結(jié)尾我經(jīng)常坐在海邊的巖石上，看著潮汐島，回想起那天的探險。Ioften_______________________________________________________thetidalisland,recallingtheexplorationthatday.3.自然結(jié)尾由于受到他們的批評，我們答應(yīng)不再冒險了。Criticizedbythem,we___________________________________________________.三、連句成篇。Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________