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專題14學校生活

【題型分析】

分析全國中考真題可知此類話題通常考查：①介紹學校的環境、設施；②介紹校園活動安排及個人建議或

感受等；③介紹校園生活中難忘的經歷及感受等。

【寫作要點】

1介紹學校概況

校園環境

1.Myschoolisverybeautiful,andtherearesomeshopsaroundit

2.Myschoolislocatedinthecenterofourtown.

3.Itlookslikeagardenwithmanyflowersallyearround.

4.Therearemanytreesstandingaroundourschool.

5.Thereisabiglibraryinourschoolwheremanystudentswouldliketostudy.

6.Therearesixsciencelabsandfivecomputerroomsinthesciencebuilding.

7.Inthemiddleoftheschoolisabigplayground.

8.Infrontofourteachingbuildingisabeautifulgardenwithlotsofflowers.

9.Abeautifullakeliesinthecenterofourschool.

10.Theplaygroundcoversanareaof20,000squaremeters.

11.1likethelibrarybestbecausewecanspendourfreetimereadingbooksthere.

12.Thegymisverypopularwithstudentsbecausetheycanplaymanykindsofsportsthereevenonrainydays.

13.Wehavealargesportsgroundforfootballandtennis,wherewecanplaybothduringandafter

schoolhours.

14.ThethingIlikebestaboutourschoolisthesportsgroundbecauseIreallylikeplayingsoccer.

老師與同學

1.Thereareoverninehundredstudentsandeightyteachersinourschool.

2.MymusicteacherisMiss.Li.Sheisgreatfun.

3.Myteachersareyoungandactive.Theirclassesarelivelyandinteresting.

4.Ourteachersteachusnotonlyhowtolearnbutalsohowtobeausefulperson.

5.Teachersinmyschoolarefriendlyandknowledgeable.Wecanaskthemforhelpwheneverwemeetdifficultiesin

study.

6.Studentsinourschoolarefriendlyandweallworkhard.

7.Myclassmatesalwayshelpeachotherandplayhappilytogether.

8.1getonwellwithmyclassmatesandteachersinmyschool.

9.Ourteachersarekindtousandthestudentsgetalongverywell.

學校科目

1.1havealotofsubjectsatschool,suchasChinese,maths,English,music,P.E.andart.Ofallthesubjects,Ilike

Englishbestbecauseit'ssousefulandinteresting.

2.1havesevenclassesonweekdays,fourinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon.

3.Wehaveninesubjects.Amongthem,IlikeEnglishbest.

4.1likemathbecauseit*skindofdifficultbutfun/interesting.

5.At8:00Ihavemathclass.It'snotfun.Myteachersaysitisuseful,butIthinkit'sdifficult.

6.Afterlunch,IhaveChineseclass.It'smyfavoritesubject.OurChineseteacherisgreatfun.

7.Myclassesfinishat3:50.I'mverybusyonschooldays.

8.Ateleveno'clock,wehaveabreakintheplaygroundandItalktomyfriends.

9-Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.

》學校規則

1.Don'tarrivelateforclass.Youmustbeontime.

2.Don'teatintheclassroom.Youmusteatinthedininghall.

3.Wealwayshavetoweartheschooluniform.

4.Parentsandschoolsaresometimesstrict,butremember,theymakerulestohelpus.

5.1thinkIshouldbeallowedtomakethischoicemyself.OnlythenwillIhaveachancetoachievemydream.

6.Ifwedon'tfollowtheschoolrules,it'slikelythatwe'llbepunished.

7.Somestudentsmaythinktheschoolrulesaretoostrict,buttheyreallydogoodtous.

8.Followingtheschoolrulesishelpfulforustobemoreself-disciplined（自律的）.

》總結學校生活

1.OurschoollifeissorichandcolorfulthatIenjoyitverymuch.

2.Allinall,mymiddleschoollifeisbusyandcolorful.

3.Whatanenjoyableschoollifewehave!

》回顧過去

1.Howtimeflies!It'stimetosaygoodbyetomymiddleschoollife.

2.Myjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.ThereissomuchthatIwon'tforget.

3.1lovemyschoolandallmyteachers.Iwillneverforgetmythreeyears'schoollife.

4.I'msurethatyouallhaveyourownmemoriesaboutthehappinessofthelastthreeyears.

5.Pvenotonlydevelopedgoodlearninghabitsbutalsomadegreatprogressinstudy.

6.Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavelearnedhowtogetalongwithothersandmademanyfriends.We'vemuchinthe

pastthreeyears.

7.IremembermeetingallofmyclassmatesinGrade7.Andwe'vebeengoodfriendseversince.

8.MybestmemoryisthatIjoinedtheschooldancingclub.Ihavemadesomanyfriends.IrememberIusedtobe

scaredofMr.Brown.Hewassostrict.Ialwaysdidmyhomeworkcarefullytomeethisstandard.Thankstohim,I

gotgoodgrades.

9.1rememberMs.Chenalwaysencouragedmetoovercomedifficultiesandholdontomydreams.Withherhelp,I

putinmoreeffortandmadegreatprogress.

》展望未來及感恩祝福

l.Wearesettingoutonournewjourney.

2.1'mlookingforwardtoenteringintoagooduniversity.

3.Thelifeinseniorhighschoolwillbeharder,butI'llhavemorechancestolearnnewthings.

4.Iwillchoosewiselyandberesponsibleformydecisionsandactions.

5.1t*shardtosaygoodbye.Iwillmissmykindandcaringteachersandclassmates.I'msothankful/gratefultothem.

6.Iwishourteachersallthebest.Ihopeallmyclassmateswillachievetheirdreamsandhaveabrightfuture.

與學校生活有關的建議

1.Agoodrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentscanhelpyouimproveyourstudy.

2.Nomatterwhatkindofactivitiesyoutakepartin,remembernottospendtoomuchtimeonthem.

3.Youshouldtakeanactivepartindifferentkindsofclubactivitiestomakeyourschoollifemorecolorful.

4.Youshouldenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.Therearealsomanyotherwaystorealizeyourdreams.

5.Inyourfreetime,youcandevelopinterestswhichcanmakeyourschoollifewonderful.

6.Youshouldbepolitetowhoeveryoumeet,whichwillmakeyougetonwellwithothers.

7.It'sourdutytodovolunteerworktomakeourschoolmorebeautiful.

介紹校園活動

校園活動簡介

1.Wehavelotsofclubsandafter-schoolactivities.Everymonth,wegoonaschooltrip.

2.Joinourchessclub!Chesschallengesyouandmakesyouthinkhard.Youwilllearnandhavefunatthesame

time.

3.SportsDaywasagreatsuccessthisyear!AllthestudentsandteachersfromGrades7,8and9tookpartinthe

sportsevents.

4.Duringtheschoolyearthereareusuallyvisitstomuseumsandtocampsforactivitiessuchasclimbingand

walkinginthecountry.LastyearagroupofusevenwenttoJapan.

5.AssoonasIgottothejuniorhighschool,Ijoinedtheschoolswimmingteam.

6.Theartfestivalissoattractiveandinterestingthatlotsofstudentspreparetojoininit.

7.Thefestivalisheldtoimprovestudents5interestinlearningEnglish.

8.Thisactivityaimstoimprovestudents*Englishabilities.

9.ThereisgoingtobeaChineseCornerwhereyou'llhaveachancetolistentolecturesabouttraditionalChinese

culture.

10.1tookprideintheprizeIgotintherunningmatchatschool.

》活動邀請

1.1reallyhopethatyoucantakepartintheactivity.

2.1'mwritingtoinviteyoutoworkasajudgeforthecompetition.

3.Wewillbegreatlyhonoredifyoucanattendthecompetition.

4.1wouldliketoinviteyoutojoinintheartfestival.

活動時間、地點、內容

1.TherewillbeawelcomepartyforMissYang.

2.ThereisgoingtobeaChinesespeechabouttraditionalChineseculture.

3.Theactivitywillbeginat2:00andlastfortwohours.

4.Thecompetitionisgoingtotakeplaceatthestudents'activitycenternextFridayafternoon.

5.Lastmonth,myclasswentforaschooltriptoForestPark.

6.Ourschoolorganizestheschooltripregularlyeveryyear.

7.1tookpartinthetree-plantingactivityonApril22nd.

8.OurschoolisgoingtoorganizeatraditionalChineseskillfairthisweekend.

9.ToencouragestudentstolearnEnglishactively,wewillholdanEnglishspeechcompetition.

10.Wecleanedtheplaygroundcarefullyandpaintedthetreesinordertoprotectthemfrombeinghurtbysome

insects.

活動目的、意義、感受

l.Inshort,Ilearnedalotfromthisactivity.

2.1thinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.

3.Throughthiscompetition,Ilearnedthebenefitsofreadingmorebooks.

4.1hopetherewillbemoresuchactivitiesinthefuture.

5.1reallylookforwardtotakingpartinthesingingcompetition.

6.Throughtheseactivities,I'msureyouwillbeattractedbyChinesemusicandChinesecultureaswell.

7.WespeakhighlyoftheEnglishDay,andwehavelearntalotthroughpractice.ltalsomakesusrealizethe

importanceofteamwork.Wehopetherewillbemorecolourfulactivitiesinourschool.

8.Practicingwushuisagoodwaytoimproveourhealth.

9.Whatmakesmeinterestedisthatwecancookfoodbyourselvesandsellittoourschoolmatestoraisemoneyfor

charity.

10.Asingingcompetitionoffersagreatchancetoshowourtalentsandhelpsustolearnsomethingnew.

11.Studentsmayjoinasmanyclubsastheylike,buttheymustjoinatleastone.

12.ltisagoodtimeforustosharehappiness,loveandteamspirit.

13.It'sagoodchanceforyoutogetthepleasureofhardworkandlearntovalueeachother.

14.Thankstothesingingcompetition,Irealizedtheimportanceofteamwork.

【話題范文】

1.（2025?河北邯鄲?一模）為了豐富學生的校園生活，李華的學校增加了“最美大課間”。請你以李華的

名義，根據下面四幅圖片及文字提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一下李華學校的“最美大課間”的活動，并談談

你的看法。

playchrs*singenddance

提示：

(1)Introducetheclassbreakactivities.

(2)Expressyourideasaboutthebigclassbreak.

注意：

(1)短文須包括每幅圖片的主要信息及提示中的所有內容，可適當發揮。

(2)文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名。

(3)詞數80個左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)。

Ourschoolhasabigclassbreakthisterm.Ifsanhourlongintheafternoon.

【答案】例文

Ourschoolhasabigclassbreakthisterm.It'sanhourlongintheafternoon.Wehavemanyactivities.

Boysusuallyplaybasketballorfootballduringthebreak.Studentscanalsorunandcheerforeachother.

Sometimes,ourteachersplayandrunwithus.WecanalsoplaychessintheclassroomandIoftenplayitwithmy

classmates.Whafsmore,studentswholovemusiccansinganddanceduringthebreak.Thafsagoodchanceto

developourhobbiesandmakenewfriends.

Allinall,thebigclassbreaknotonlymakesourschoollifecolorful,butalsohelpsusstayhealthyinboth

mindandbody.Iloveitverymuch.

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。

②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”。

③提示：寫作要點已明確給出，包括介紹大課間的活動內容和個人對大課間的看法。考生應確保這些要點

都得到涵蓋，并可以適當添加細節，使描述更加生動。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，介紹大課間的基本情況。可以通過"Ourschoolhasabigclassbreakthisterm.Ifsanhourlonginthe

afternoon”等表述來引出接下來要介紹的內容；

第二步，具體描述大課間的活動。首先介紹男生通常進行的體育活動，如打籃球或踢足球；然后提到學生

可以跑步和互相加油；接著提到老師也會參與其中；再介紹在教室里下棋的活動；最后提到喜歡音樂的學

生可以唱歌跳舞；

第三步，表達個人看法。可以提到大課間不僅豐富了校園生活，還有助于身心健康，并表達對大課間的喜

愛。

［亮點詞匯］

①playbasketball打籃球

②cheerforeachother互相加油

③playchess下棋

?developourhobbies發展我們的愛好

⑤stayhealthy保持健康

［高分句型］

①What'smore,studentswholovemusiccansinganddanceduringthebreak.(定語從句)

②Allinall,thebigclassbreaknotonlymakesourschoollifecolorful,butalsohelpsusstayhealthyinbothmind

andbody.(并列句)

2.(24-25九年級下?浙江溫州?開學考試)學校為初三學生提供了特色減壓課程。假如你是交換生Henry,

請根據下表的提示，給負責選課活動的李老師寫一封電子郵件，闡述你所選擇的一門課程以及選擇該課程

的理由，并提出你對該課程的期待。

注意：

(1)郵件需包含表格中所選課程的所有信息，可適當發揮；

(2)文中不得出現真實姓名、學校等信息；

(3)詞數80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Specialcourses

?improveourhealth

冰彩受Basketball?encourageustoworkingroups

*2

?…

?beinterestedinChineseculture

ChinesePainting?learnstoriesoffamouspainters

?…

?learntobepatient

等Baking?becreative

?…

DearMr.Li,

IamHenryfromClassTwo,GradeNine.Asforthespecialcourse,I'dliketochoose

Yours,

Henry

【答案】DearMr.Li,

IamHenryfromClassTwo,GradeNine.Asforthespecialcourse,I'dliketochoosebasketball.Doyouknow

why?Nowletmetellyouthereason.

First,Ilikeplayingbasketballbecauseplayingbasketballisgoodforourhealth.Second,whenweworkasa

team,wecanknowmoreprofessionalknowledgeaboutteamwork.Third,itwillmakeourlifecolorful.Finally,I

hopetheschoolcanhavemorePEteacherstoguidestudents.AndIhopewecanstartwiththebasics,because

maybetherearealotofstudentswhocan'tplaybasketball.

Lookforwardtoyourreplay.

Yours,

Henry

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文為一封電子郵件；

②時態：時態為一般現在時；

③提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當添加細節，考生應注意不要遺漏“提出你對該課程的希望”這一要求。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，寫出所選課程；

第二步，闡述選該課程的原因；

第三步，表達對該課程有何希望；

第四步，書寫結語。

［亮點詞匯］

①likedoing喜歡做某事

②begoodfor對...有益

③lookforwardto期待

［高分句型】

①Second,whenweworkasateam,wecanknowmoreprofessionalknowledgeaboutteamwork,（when弓|導的時

間狀語從句）

②AndIhopewecanstartwiththebasics,becausemaybetherearealotofstudentswhocan'tplaybasketball.（省

略that的賓語從句）

3.假如你是李華，你的筆友湯姆（Tom）想了解你的數學老師張老師。根據下面的信息寫一篇英語短文，

可以適當添加一些信息。詞數不少于70。

Name:MrZhang

Age:about40Appearance:

yearsold^:一tallandthin,....

Characteristics:/\

{Others:…J

patient,friendly,“

hclpfUl…

DearTom,

Thanksforyourlastletter.Youwanttoknowaboutmymathsteacher.NowI'lltellyousomethingabout

him.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】例文

DearTom,

Thanksforyourlastletter.Youwanttoknowaboutmymathsteacher.NowI'lltellyousomethingabout

him.

MrZhangismymathsteacher.Heisaboutfortyyearsold.Heistallandthin.Hehasshort,blackhair.He

alwayswearsglasses.Heishard-working.Heisreallypatientwithstudents.Heoftenhelpsuswithourmaths.He

isfriendlytoeveryone.Heisnotonlyourmathsteacherbutalsoourfriend.Hisclassesareveryinteresting.Allof

uslikehisclasses.Butheisstrictaboutourstudies.Heisalsostrictwithhimself.Iwanttobeateacherlikehimin

thefuture.Whatdoyouthinkofhim?

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇書信作文。

②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”。

③提示：寫作句式已給出，考生應注意可適當增加一些介紹人物的細節。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，表明寫作意圖。用“現在我告訴你一些關于他的事情”引出下文。

第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“姓名、年齡、外貌、性格、其他”幾個方面介紹MrZhang。

第三步，書寫結語。用“最好的祝福”，表示禮貌問候。

［亮點詞匯］

①patient耐心的

②friendly友好的

③strict嚴格的

［高分句型］

①Heisnotonlyourmathsteacherbutalsoourfriend,（notonly...butalso…不但...而且....）

4.（2025?江西?一模）國際數學日就要到了，校報英語版塊正在就“我與數學的故事”進行征文。請你

寫一篇英語短文去投稿，先說說你是否喜歡數學及其原因，再描述你學習數學的一段難忘經歷，最后談談

你將如何學習數學。

寫作要點：

1.Doyoulikemath?Whyorwhynot?

2.Whatwastheunforgettableexperienceoflearningmath?

3.Howareyougoingtolearnmath?

要求：

1.短文應包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當發揮；

2.短文中不能出現真實的人名和地名；

3.詞數80—120,短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Teachersalwayssaythatmathisveryimportant.

【答案】例文

Teachersalwayssaythatmathisveryimportant.AndIcouldn,tagreemore.Ilikemathbecauseit'slike

solvingpuzzles.Everyproblemisachallenge,andfindingthesolutiongivesmeagreatsenseofachievement.

Anunforgettableexperiencewasinjuniorhigh.Wehadanextremelydifficultmathprobleminclass.Atfirst,

itseemedinsolvable.Ispenthourstryingdifferentwaysandfinallysolveditonmyown.Iwassoexcited!

Tolearnmathbetter,I'lldomoreexercises.Also,r11joinastudygrouptodiscussproblemswithothers.

Thisway,Icanimprovemymathskills.

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時態：時態為“一般現在時”與“一般過去時”；

③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，承接上文，說明自己喜歡數學引出下文；

第二步，具體介紹喜歡數學的原因以及學習數學的一段難忘經歷；

第三步，書寫結語，說明學習數學的計劃。

［亮點詞匯］

①solution解決辦法

?extremely極其地

③insolvable不能解決的

［高分句型］

?Ilikemathbecauseifslikesolvingpuzzles.（because引導的原因狀語從句）

②Tolearnmathbetter,Tildomoreexercises.（不定式表目的）

5.（2024?湖北武漢.模擬預測）習近平總書記在全國教育大會上強調，”要努力構建德智體美勞全面

培養的教育體系”。勞動教育貫通大中小學各學段，納入人才培養全過程。假如你是李華，你校英文報社發

起了“AHelperofMyClass”的主題征文活動。請你根據以下內容提示寫一篇短文，介紹你常做的事情，并談

一談你的心得和建議。

寫作要點：

1.Whatdoyouoftendoforyourclass?

2.Whendoyoudothat?

3.Doyouthinkifsnecessary?Whyorwhynot?

4.Somesuggestionsforyourschoolmates.

注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數100詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總次數。

AHelperofMyClass

Iamagoodhelperofmyclass.

【答案】例文

AHelperofMyClass

Iamagoodhelperofmyclass.

IoftenhelphandoutexampapersandcleantheblackboardformyteacherswheneverIamfree.Sometimes

myclassmatesmeetsomeproblemsthattheycan'tsolve.Iamalwaysreadytohelpthemoutduringthebreaks

betweenclassesorinmysparetime.

"Helpingothersishelpingourselves.^^Certainlyitisnecessaryforustodosomethinghelpfulforourclass.

Itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgrades,buthelpingothersisalsoimportant.SoIthinkweshouldgivethem

ahandintimewithoutthinkingtwicewheneverourclassmateshavedifficulties.Besidesweshouldalsocareabout

theirmentalhealth.Lefstakeactionnow.

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時態：一般現在時；

③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生需要把所有要點都寫進去，但是不能逐條翻譯，注意內容的連貫性和邏

輯性。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，描述自己經常在什么時候為班級做哪些事情；

第二步，談論自己做這些事情的必要性；

第三步，給出建議并號召其他同學為班級做事情。

［亮點詞匯］

①handout分發

②whenever無論何時

③bereadytodo準備好做某事

④sparetime空余時間

［高分句型］

①Sometimesmyclassmatesmeetsomeproblemsthattheycan'tsolve,（that弓I導的定語從句）

②Helpingothersishelpingourselves.（動名詞作主語）

6.（2024.湖北武漢.模擬預測）即將告別初中校園，內心依依不舍。學校校刊以“MySchool”為題向

全體初三學生開展征文活動。請根據以下內容提示，用英文從目的、內容、意義等方面寫一篇短文投稿。

內容提示：

Whatisyourschoollike?

Whatdoyoulikeaboutyourschool?

Howdoyoufeelaboutyourschoollife?

Somethingmoreaboutyourschool.

注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數100詞左右；標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

MySchool

AsastudentofGrade9,I'mgoingtosaygoodbyetomyschool,whereIhavestudiedfornearly3years.

【答案】例文

MySchool

AsastudentofGrade9,Fmgoingtosaygoodbyetomyschool,whereIhavestudiedfornearly3years.

Inmyopinion,myschoolisgreatandverybeautifulwithmanymodernbuildings.Ispendmostofmy

schooltimeinmybigandcleanclassroomintheclassroombuilding.Westarteverydaybyreadingaloudwhile

standingstraight,whichisveryinterestingandhelpfultoourstudy.Myfavoriteplaceisthedininghallbecause

therearemanykindsofdeliciousfoodtofeedmyhungrystomachatnoon.Intheafternoon,Iusuallygotothe

largesportsfieldtodoexercisestogetherwithmyclassmates,whichhelpsuskeephealthy.

Allinall,myschoolistheveryplacetostartmydream!

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；

③提示：根據提示內容介紹自己的學校，可適當發揮，注意行文連貫，表述完整。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，引出主題；

第二步，具體介紹學校的情況，包括學校環境、學校生活等內容；

第三步，書寫結語，進行總結。

［亮點詞匯］

①inmyopinion在我看來

②manykindsof許多種

③keephealthy保持健康

?allinall總之

［高分句型］

?Westarteverydaybyreadingaloudwhilestandingstraight,whichisveryinterestingandhelpfultoourstudy,

（which引導非限制性定語從句）

②Myfavoriteplaceisthedininghallbecausetherearemanykindsofdeliciousfoodtofeedmyhungrystomachat

noon.（because引導原因狀語從句）

7.（2024?湖北武漢.模擬預測）你校英語社團計劃近期舉辦一次戶外活動，社團外教Tony正在向學

生征集活動的內容和意義等有關意見。假設你是李明，請根據以下內容提示寫一封郵件向Tony闡述你的想

法。內容提示：

Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?

Whydoyoulikeit?

Howwillyouorganizethisoutdooractivity?（when,where,whattodo...）

Somethingmoreaboutit.

注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數100詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

DearSir,

I'mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivity.Tmwritingtotellyousomeofmyopinions.

Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

LiMing

【答案】例文：

Dearsir,

I'mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivity.I'mwritingtotellyousomeofmyopinions.Ilike

climbingmountainswithmyclassmates.Wecanenjoythebeautyofnature.Wecanalsomakefriendsandhelp

eachotherontheway.

Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.Sinceifsalittlefar,we'd

bettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthe

famousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether.Ifllbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.In

theafternoon,wecanpickuptherubbishtoprotecttheenvironment.Thenwecangohomeat4:30p.m.We're

suretohavegreatfun.Iproposewewillschedulethehikeverysuccessfully.

Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

LiMing

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一封郵件；

②時態：本文以“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”為主；

③提示：題目要求根據提示向外教Tony闡述自己對舉辦戶外活動的具體內容和意義的看法，包括自己喜歡

什么樣的戶外活動、為什么喜歡、怎樣組織戶外活動，以及關于戶外活動的更多信息。寫作時注意適當增

加細節，不要遺漏要點。

［寫作步聚］

第一步，開篇點題（已給出）；

第二步，根據所給要點，依次介紹自己對這次戶外活動的具體內容、原因以及如何組織此次戶外活動；

第三步，最后表達希望。

［亮點詞匯］

①makefriends交朋友

②helpeachother互幫互助

③pickup撿起來

［高分句型］

①Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）

②Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthefamousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether,（sothat引導

的目的狀語從句）

8.（2024?浙江溫州?模擬預測）你校英文報以“MyGrowth”為題，面向全校學生開展征文活動。請參考

下面提示，從你對成長的理解出發，描述某一次跟成長相關的經歷，以及這次經歷對你的影響。

—-Whatdoesgrowthmeantoyou?"

My-Growth^—Whatwasyourexperienceaboutgrowth?，

_?<Howdidthisexperienceinfluenceyou?^

注意：

（i）文中不得出現真實的人名、校名等信息；

（2）詞數：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；

（3）可適當發揮，使內容充實、行文連貫。

MyGrowth

Everyonewantstogrowtobeabetterperson.

【答案】例文:

MyGrowth

Everyonewantstogrowtobeabetterperson.Forme,growthmeansfacingchallengesandlearningfrom

them.

Lastterm,Ihadahardtimewithmymath.Ialwaysfailedthetestsandfeltveryupset.Butmymathteacher

noticedthisandofferedtohelpme.IstartedtostudyharderandaskedmyteacherforhelpwheneverIhad

questions.Afterafewweeks,Igotagoodgradeinthemathexam.Iwassohappyandproudofmyself.

ThisexperiencetaughtmethatIcanovercomedifficultiesifItrymybest.Ialsolearnedtoaskforhelp

whenIneeditNowIammoreconfidentinmystudiesandbelieveIcangrowbettereveryday.

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時態：時態為一般過去時；

③提示：根據提示內容介紹自己的成長經歷，適當增加細節。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，介紹自己對成長的理解；

第二步，描述某一次跟成長相關的經歷；

第三步，介紹這次經歷對你的影響。

［亮點詞匯］

①offertodosth.主動提出做某事

②asksb.forhelp向某人尋求幫助

［高分句型］

①ThisexperiencetaughtmethatIcanovercomedifficultiesifItrymybest,（that引導的賓語從句，if引導的條

件狀語從句）

②IalsolearnedtoaskforhelpwhenIneedit.（when引導的時間狀語從句）

9.（2024.浙江?模擬預測）假設你是學校CulturalChina社團的成員李平，你將作為社團代表在校英

語文化節上介紹你所在的社團。請按照以下提示，撰寫一篇發言稿，介紹社團活動以及你的收獲。

注意：

(1)發言稿必須包括上表所有信息，可適當增加細節;

(2)活動至少三項；

(3)詞數：90-100o

【答案】例文

Hello,everyone!I'mLiPing,amemberofCulturalChinaClub.Tmheretointroducemyclubtoyou.

IfyouareaChineseculturelover,ourclubisagreatchoice.Manyinterestingactivitiesareofferedhere.You

canlearnhowtomakebeautifulpapercuttingthatisusuallyregardedasasymbolofgoodluck.Also,youcantry

makingtraditionalChinesefoodlikedumplings,zongziandsoon.Whafsmore,youcanexperiencethebeautyof

clayarthere.

Theclubactivitieshavehelpedmealot.Ihavenotonlylearnedlotsofskills,butalsomademanyfriends

here.

Ifyouareinterested,wearelookingforwardtohavingyouintheclub!

【詳解】［總體分析］

①題材：本文是一篇發言稿；

②時態：時態為“一般現在時”;

③提示：根據表格中所列要點進行寫作，不可遺漏，適當補充細節，突出寫作重點。

［寫作步驟］

第一步，自我介紹并引出下文；

第二步，詳細介紹俱樂部的活動，如學習剪紙、制作傳統美食等；

第三步，總結感受，表達對他人加入的期待。

［亮點詞匯］

①offer提供

②beregardedas被認為是

③what'smore而且

［高分句型］

①IfyouareaChineseculturelover,ourclubisagreatchoice.（if引導的條件狀語從句）

②Youcanlearnhowtomakebeautifulpapercuttingthatisusuallyregardedasasymbolofgoodluck,（that弓|導

的定語從句）

10.（2024.北京東城.模擬預測）假設你是李華，你們年級將組織露營活動。請你寫一封郵件，告訴

因事請假的交換生Peter露營的具體事宜，包括學校安排露營活動的目的、露營準備，以及集合時間和地

點。

提示詞語：improve,lifeskills,trainers,foodanddrink,Friday

提示問題：?Whydoesyourschoolorganizeacampingtrip?

?Whatdoyouneedtoprepareforit?

?Whenandwherewillyoumeet?

DearPeter,

Howseverythinggoing?

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】例文：

DearPeter,

How'severythinggoing?I'mwritingtoinformyouaboutourupcomingschoolcampingtripsinceyou're

currentlyonleave.

OurschoolhasorganizedacampingtripthisFridaytohelpusimproveourlifeskills.Webelievethatsuch

activitiesarenotonlyfunbutalsohelpuslearnhowtobemoreindependentandself-reliant.

Forthecampingtrip,you911needtopreparesomenecessarythings.Pleasebringalongtrainersforhiking,as

wellasfoodanddrinkforthedurationofthetrip.Ifsalsoagoodideatopacksomewarmclothes,asleepingbag,

andatentifyouhaveone.

Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat8:00a.m.onFriday.Pleasemakesuretobeontimeaswedon'twantto

keepeveryonewaiting.

Ihopeyoucanjoinusforthisexcitingadventure!Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorneedfurtherinformation,feel

freetoreplytothisemail.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,