Unit3Environmental

ProtectionReducingwaterpollutioninthe

LiRiver

amazingawesomefascinatingbreathtakingspectaculardream-likepicturesqueofexceptionalbeauty...Guilin’slandscapeisthefinestunderheaven.桂林山水甲天下Eastorwest,Guilinlandscapeisthebest.HowdoyoudescribeGuilin’slandscape?WhathadhappenedtotheLiRiver?1.Texttype:2.MainlyideaReadfortexttypeandmainideaareportThewaterpollutionandmeasurestakentodealwithitintheLiRiver.ParagraphsMainideasParagraph1Paragraph2Paragraph3Paragraph4

Introducingthetopic

Describingtheproblem(causes)

Presentingthemeasures(solutions)

PresentingfurthersolutionsandresultMatchthemainideawitheachparagraph.problem-solutionpatternThebeautifulLiRiveranditsamazingsceneryisoneofthemostwell-knowntouristdestinationsinChina’sGuangxiZhuangAutonomousRegion.Itattractsmillionsofdomesticandforeignvisitorseachyear.Howeveritsreputationasatop

destinationhashadnegativeeffectsontheriver'swaterquality.Thisreportlooksattheproblemofwaterpollutionandsomeactionsthathavebeentakentodealwithit.Howtointroducethetopic.(Para.1)鋪墊共識轉折揭示問題通過“先揚后抑”“認知顛覆”制造反差，激發讀者反思，引出核心觀點引出主題Mind-map_________________________touristsTourboats_____________theproblem,too.Localpopulation_____rapidly,aswellasthenumberof___________.Touriststhrew_______intowater.Chemicals_______severewaterquality______.waterpollutionFindoutthefactorsthatcausedthepollution.(Para.2)anincreasingvolumeofgarbagecontributedtoroseenterprisesledtoissues_________________________touristsTourboats_____________theproblem,too.Localpopulation_____rapidly,aswellasthenumberof___________.Touriststhrew_______intowater.Chemicals_______severewaterquality______.waterpollution高級詞匯同義替換anincreasingvolumeofgarbagecontributedtoroseenterprisesledtoissues越來越多moreandmore垃圾rubbish導致leadto增長increase企業company?factory?問題problemsolutionthecollectionandtransportof_________wasteThelocalgovenmentsetupstrict__________&rules....carryout________and_____...for_____.____________ofwastewatertreatmentfacilities__________pollutingenterpriseswereclosedormoved.thelocal_________begantousemedia...Whatmeasureshavebeentakentoaddresstheissue?(Para.3)constructionhouseholdDozensofregulationsauthoritiesinspectionsfineabusessolutionthecollectionandtransportof_________wasteThelocalgovenmentsetupstrict__________&rules....carryout________and_____...for_____.____________ofwastewatertreatmentfacilities__________pollutingenterpriseswereclosedormoved.thelocal_________begantousemedia...Whatmeasures

havebeentakentoaddresstheissue?constructionhouseholdDozensofregulationsauthoritiesinspectionsfineabusesPa.1:takeactionsPa.2:takestepsPa.1:dealwithPa.4:tackle問題problem建設building生活life幾十tensof規定rule政府governmentPara.4:Whatcampaignsarebeingcarriedout?Withsuchcampaigns________,China’swaterwaysareheadingacleanand___________future.ineffectsustainable佳句欣賞(展望未來)Withsuchcampaignsineffect,China’swaterwaysareheadingacleanandsustainablefuture.Withthesemeasures,itisbelievedthatthebeautyoftheLiReverwillbepreservedforgenerationstocome.AreportaboutthewaterpollutionandmeasurestakentodealwithitintheLiRiver.

Introducingthetopic

Describingtheproblem(causes)

Presentingthemeasures(solutions)

Presentingfurthersolutionsandresult報告是一種常見的應用文體。報告征文通常包括問題描述、問題產生的成因分析、解決問題的具體措施以及成效。problem-solutionpattern框架：引言：介紹背景及問題。問題分析：分析原因。解決方案：正在或計劃的方案。結論：總結問題，展望未來。東湖曾經是一處旅游勝地，但近年來受到嚴重的污染。當地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情況有所減輕。假設你是李華，請根據以下要點寫一篇報道，呼吁社會關注此事。1．曾經的情景——景美、水清、魚兒嬉戲、游客多；2．后來的狀況——工廠廢水污染、游客亂扔垃圾；3．當地政府已經采取措施來拯救東湖，情況有所好轉。注意：1．詞數80左右；2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。東湖曾經是一處旅游勝地，但近年來受到嚴重的污染。當地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情況有所減輕。假設你是李華，請根據以下要點寫一篇報道，呼吁社會關注此事。1．曾經的情景——景美、水清、魚兒嬉戲、游客多；2．后來的狀況——工廠廢水污染、游客亂扔垃圾；3．當地政府已經采取措施來拯救東湖，情況有所好轉。Step1審題謀篇[審題]1．確定文體：這是一篇報告，寫作中應注意報告的特點。2．主體時態：文章應以一般現在時、過去時、完成時為主。3．主體人稱：以第三人稱為主。*語態：宜適當使用一些被動語態。東湖曾經是一處旅游勝地，但近年來受到嚴重的污染。當地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情況有所減輕。假設你是李華，請根據以下要點寫一篇報道，呼吁社會關注此事。1．曾經的情景——景美、水清、魚兒嬉戲、游客多；2．后來的狀況——工廠廢水污染、游客亂扔垃圾；3．當地政府已經采取措施來拯救東湖，情況有所好轉。Step1審題謀篇[謀篇]第一段：介紹東湖以前的情況。第二段：東湖的污染情況。第三段：采取措施，改善后的情況Step2詞匯運用1．曾經是_____________2．欣賞……的美麗__________________3．倒入_________4．夜以繼日_____________5．扔進_____________usedtobe...enjoyone'sbeautypourintodayandnightthrowinto...6．采取措施_____________7．禁止某人做某事_____________________8．被允許做某事_____________________takemeasuresforbidsb.todosth.beallowedtodosth.Step3句式表達1．完成句子①東湖過去是一個美麗的地方，水很清澈，魚兒在里面快樂地游著。EastLake_______________________,

andthewatertherewasclearandfishesswaminithappily.②游客們從全國各地來這里游覽，欣賞它的美。Travelerscamefromalloverthenation__________________________．usedtobeabeautifulplacetovisititandenjoyitsbeauty③而且，垃圾經常被游客扔到湖里，這已經嚴重污染了這個湖。Moreover,rubbishwasoftenthrownintoitbythevisitorsand________________________．itpollutedthelakeseriously2．句式升級④用定語從句改寫句①。EastLakeusedtobeabeautifulplace，____________________________andfishesswamhappily.⑤用非謂語動詞改寫句②。Travelerscamefromalloverthenationtovisitit，___________________.⑥用定語從句改寫句③。Moreover，garbagewasoftenthrownintoitbythevisitors，_____________________________．inwhichthewaterwasclearenjoyingitsexceptionalbeautywhichpollutedthelakeseriouslyAnincreasingvolumeofOnepossibleversion：EastLakeusedtobeabeautifulplace,inwhichthewaterwasclearandfishesswamhappily.Anincreasingvolumeofravelerscamefromalloverthenationtovisitit,enjoyingitsexceptionalbeauty.Unfortunately,largequantitiesofwastewaterfromfactoriesaroundkeptbeingpouredintoitdayandnight.Moreover,garbagewasoftenthrownintoitbythevisitors,whichpollutedthelakeseriously.Thelocalgovernmentrealizedthedangeroussituationandhastakensomeeffectivemeasurestoaddresstheissues.Thefactorieshavebeenforbiddentopourwastewaterintothelakeandthevisitorsarenotallowedtothrowrubbishintoit.Itisbelievedthatthemeasureswillrestorethelake'sformerbeauty.當今，我們周圍的空氣環境變得越來越差，為了加強學生們的環保意識，學校打算開展以“為家鄉空氣污染問題出謀獻策”為主題的征文活動，警示人們要保護環境。請你寫一篇報告，內容要點如下：1.空氣污染的原因；2.建議采取的措施；3.你的展望。其他要求：100詞左右；注意使用本單元所學的語言表達和寫作要點。Writing

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