第1頁(yè)/共1頁(yè)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIgaveagifttomymomforthefirsttime,shetoldmea“custom”.Therewasacountrywhereifyouvisitedahouseandpraisedsomesmallitems,theownerswouldfeelobligated(有義務(wù)的)togiveittoyouasagift.Ididn’trememberthenameofthecountry;However,whatIdidrememberwasthattheonlyotherplaceIwitnessedasimilarpracticewasinmyownmother’shome.RecentlyIhadbeenworryingforweeksaboutaMother’sDaygiftformymom,astherewasalwaysthedangerthatagiftgiventomomwouldquicklycomebacktome.IfIboughthersomethingwearable,sheimmediatelyfounditfitmeperfectly.IfIgaveheraplant,shecutoffthetopformetotakehomeandrootedinaglassofwater.IfIgavehersomefood,shewantedmetostayforlunchandeatit.Mydad,amanofgreatwisdom,hadgivenupontraditionalshoppingformymomlongago.Instead,hehaddevelopedabeautifultraditionofwritingshortpoems.Oneveryimportantoccasionhewroteashortpoeminwhichhetoldoftheirmeeting,wedding,andlatermarriagelife.Afternearly30yearsofpoems,Dadbegantoworrythathispoeticinspirationhaddriedup.WhenIcameintotheroom,hewastroubledaboutwritingapoemasagift.Oureyesmet,andthenwedecidedtoasksomeoneforhelp,preparingagifttogether.Sowereachedouttomygrandma________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WefinallypreparedanidealgiftonMother’sDay,waitingformymom’sreturning._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。續(xù)寫需要回答的問(wèn)題?Whohelpedthempreparethegift??Mygrandmahelpedthempreparethegiftbysuggestingusingtheoldphotoalbumsintheattic.?Whatwasthegifttheyfinallyprepared??Theypreparedaspecialphotobookwithselectedphotosfromoldalbumsandhandwrittennotesbesideeachphoto.?Howdidmomreacttothegift??Momwasdeeplytouched.Hereyeswidened,atearrolleddownhercheek,andshesaiditwasthemostwonderfulgiftshehadeverreceived.?Whatdidtheauthorlearnfromthisexperience??Theauthorlearnedthatthebestgiftsarenotaboutmaterialthingsbutabouttheloveandthoughtweputintothem.?Whywasthephotobookagoodgift??Thephotobookwasagoodgiftbecauseitcontainedpreciousmemoriesofmom’schildhoodandfamilygatherings,andthehandwrittennotesaddedpersonalfeelings,makingitaheartfeltpresent.?故事主旨?Thestoryshowsthatthemostvaluablegiftsarethosefilledwithlove,thought,andcherishedmemoriesratherthanexpensiveorfancyitems.Itemphasizestheimportanceofunderstandingwhattrulymatterstoourlovedonesandusingthatknowledgetocreatemeaningfulgifts.?故事山?Beginning：TheauthorhastroublefindingasuitableMother'sDaygiftformomduetoher"custom"ofgivingbackgifts.Dadalsofacesaproblemwithhispoeticinspirationforagift.?RisingAction：Theauthoranddaddecidetoasksomeoneforhelpandreachouttograndma.?Climax：Theycreateaspecialphotobookasagift,filledwithcarefullyselectedphotosandhandwrittennotes.?FallingAction：Momreturnsandreceivesthegift.?End：Momisdeeplymovedbythegift,andtheauthorrealizesthetruemeaningofgivinggifts.?故事發(fā)展線索?ThestorystartswiththedifficultyofchoosingaMother'sDaygift.Then,thefatherandtheauthorseekhelpfromgrandma.Aftergettingtheidea,theycreateaphotobook.Finally,momreceivesthegiftandistouched.?情感線索?Atfirst,thereisanxietyandworryaboutfindingagift.Aftergettingtheideafromgrandma,thereisexcitementandanticipationwhilecreatingthegift.Whenmomreceivesthegift,thereisdeepemotionandasenseofrealizationfortheauthor.?續(xù)寫布局與框架?Thefirstparagraphfocusesonhowtheygottheideaforthegiftfromgrandmaandwhattheydidtocreateit.Thesecondparagraphdescribesmom'sreactiontothegiftandtheauthor'srealization.?續(xù)寫注意事項(xiàng)?承接原文：The續(xù)寫startswiththeactionofreachingouttograndma,whichdirectlyfollowsthepreviousparagraph.Theelementsofthegift-givingproblemandthesearchforasolutionarecarriedforward.?整體設(shè)計(jì)：Theoverallstoryisdesignedtoleadtoameaningfulgift-givingmoment.Thechoiceofaphotobookasagifttiesinwiththefamily-centeredthemeofthestory.?巧妙設(shè)計(jì)：Theuseofgrandma'ssuggestionisacleverwaytosolvethegift-givingproblem.Thehandwrittennotesinthephotobookaddapersonaltouch.?高分語(yǔ)句?呼應(yīng)原文：“Therewasalwaysthedangerthatagiftgiventomomwouldquicklycomebacktome.”Thislineatthebeginningsetsuptheproblem,andthesolutionofcreatinganon-material,memory-filledgiftlaterinthestoryrespondstothisinitialissue.?高級(jí)句型：“Whensheopenedthedoor,wepresentedthephotobooktoherwithexcitement.”Theuseofthe“when”clauseatthebeginningofthesentencemakesthedescriptionmorevivid.“Hereyeswidenedassheflippedthroughthepages,andatearrolleddownhercheek.”Theuseof“as”toshowthesimultaneousactionsandtheparallelstructureofthetwoclausesaddcomplexitytothesentence.?主題表達(dá)&意義延伸?直接引語(yǔ)點(diǎn)明主旨：“ThisisthemostwonderfulgiftI’veeverreceived,”momsaid,emphasizingthevalueofthegiftnotinitsmaterialworthbutinthesentimentbehindit.?促成轉(zhuǎn)變，引發(fā)感悟：Theprocessofcreatingthegiftandmom'sreactioncausetheauthortorealizethat“thebestgiftsarenotaboutmaterialthingsbutabouttheloveandthoughtweputintothem,”showingapersonalgrowthandadeeperunderstandingofgift-giving.?借象征物點(diǎn)明主旨：Thephotobook,filledwithmemories,symbolizestheintangibleyetpreciousthingsinlife.Itrepresentstheloveandconnectionwithinthefamily,highlightingthethemethatmeaningfulgiftsarethosethattouchtheheart.?學(xué)生寫作示范?第一段?Sowereachedouttomygrandma.Shesatusdownandlistenedpatientlyaswepouredoutourconcerns.“Yourmotherhasalwayshadasoftspotforthefamilyrecipespasseddownthroughgenerations,”grandmasaidwithatwinkleinhereye.“Whynotcompilethoserecipesintoabeautifulbook?Addsomephotosofhercookingorfamilymeals.”MydadandIlookedateachother,excitementbuilding.Weimmediatelygottowork.Wegatheredalltherecipeswecouldfind,somescribbledonoldpiecesofpaper,otherstypedneatly.Wescannedoldphotosofmominthekitchen,herfacebeamingassheprepareddeliciousmeals.Wearrangedeverythinginabinder,decoratedthecoverwithadrawingofacookingpot,andaddedlittlenotesaboutourfavoritememoriesrelatedtoeachdish.?第二段?WefinallypreparedanidealgiftonMother’sDay,waitingformymom’sreturning.Whenmomwalkedthroughthedoor,werushedtoher,presentingtherecipebook.Herhandstrembledassheopenedit,hereyesscanningthepagesfilledwithmemories.“Oh,mydears,”shesaid,hervoicecracking.“ThisismorethanIcouldhaveeverdreamedof.”Inthatinstant,Iunderstoodthatthemostpreciousgiftsaretheonesthatarecraftedwithloveandmemories.ThisMother’sDaywasnotjustaboutgivingapresent;itwasaboutshowingmomhowmuchwevaluedthetraditionsandloveshehadsharedwithusthroughhercooking.Itwasadaythatwouldbeetchedinourheartsforever,teachingmethetrueessenceofgift-giving.?【答案】范文Sowereachedouttomygrandma.Havingbeenaskedhowtochooseagiftformymom,grandmaletoutasoftchuckle,withaknowinggaze,andrevealedthatthe“custom”mymotherhadtoldmewasimaginary.“Shefirmlybelievesyoudeserveallthewonderfulthings.Thisisherwayofexpressingloveforyouwithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.”shesaidtomemeaningfully.TearsbrokefreewhenIrecalledcountlesssacrificesmomhadmadeformeandmyfather.“Apictureisworthathousand