Module5Lookafteryourself模塊主題寫作一、主題分析本模塊寫作情境為“健康生活”，屬于“人與自我”主題范疇中的“生活與學習”這一主題群，涉及子主題“身心健康、抗挫能力、珍愛生命的意識”。常見的寫作任務是如何保持健康、健康的重要性、良好的生活習慣、面對突發(fā)事故的急救等。二、素材積累(1)主題詞匯healthylife//necessary//should//vegetable//fruit//takeexercise//keepfit/healthy//stayup//junkfood//keepabalanceddiet//havebreakfast//haveenoughsleep//begood/badfor//stayawayfrom//makeyoustrongandhealthy(2)重點句式1.____________________(對我們來說是重要的)studentstokeephealthy.2.Doingphysicalexercise___________________________(使我強壯和健康).3.__________________(……是必要的)eatmorefruitandvegetables.It’simportantforusmakesmestrongandhealthyIt’snecessaryto4.__________________________(通過做體育運動)everydayIcankeepmymindalert.5.Followmyadviceand____________________(養(yǎng)成良好習慣).6._______________(用這樣的方式),wecanhaveahealthybodyandliveabetterlife.BydoingphysicalexercisedevelopagoodhabitInthisway三、寫作示例體育與健康測試已經(jīng)納入初中生中考范圍，體育越來越受到人們的重視。假如你是校英語報的記者李輝，為了鼓勵大家積極參加體育鍛煉，請你給全校同學寫一封倡議書。內(nèi)容包括：1.體育鍛煉的重要性；2.體育鍛煉的好處(身體、精神、學業(yè)、社交等方面)；3.發(fā)出倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80—100(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容信息，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關人物的真實校名和姓名。Dearfellowstudents,Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________謀篇布局1.審題立意①主題：體育鍛煉的重要性；②人稱：第一人稱；③時態(tài)：主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，也可用一般將來時。2.寫作提綱健康運動類話題引出話題Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.具體闡述First,doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongandhealthy...Second,bydoingphysicalexerciseeverydayIcankeepmymindsoalert...Finally,doingexercisewillhelppeople...發(fā)出倡議Let’sdoexerciseeveryday...ahealthybodyandliveabetterlife.基礎篇Dearfellowstudents,Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.Itisimportantforustotakeexerciseanditisgoodforbothourbodyandmind.Inmyopinion,doingphysicalexercisehaslotsofadvantages.First,doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongandhealthy.Forexample,takingexerciseinthemorningwillrefreshmybody.Second,bydoingphysicalexerciseeverydayIcankeepmymindsoalertthatIcanfinishmytasksintime.Finally,doingexercisewillhelppeopletoformabetterpersonality.WheneverIwanttogiveup,myfriendswillencouragemetocarryon.Let’sdoexerciseeveryday.Inthisway,wecanhaveahealthybodyandliveabetterlife.名師點評本文內(nèi)容全面，邏輯清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。第一步，寫出體育鍛煉的重要性；第二步，說明體育鍛煉的好處；第三步，呼吁大家參加體育鍛煉。本文運用了合適的連接詞進行銜接，并用例子佐證了觀點，在連接詞和句型的選用方面還可以再豐富一些。提升篇Dearfellowstudents,Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.Takingexerciseisveryimportanttoeverybodybecauseitcanofferpeoplehealthandpleasure①③.AsfarasIamconcerned①,doingphysicalexercisehaslotsofadvantages.Firstofall②,doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongerandhealthier.Forexample,takingexerciseinthemorningwillrefreshmybody.What’smore②,bydoingphysicalexerciseeverydayIcankeepmymindsoalertthatIcanfinishmytasksintime.Finally,doingexercisewillhelppeopletoformabetterpersonality.WheneverIwanttogiveup,myfriendswillencouragemetocarryon.Let’spickupourfavouritesportanddoiteveryday.Onlyinthiswaycanwehavebothpleasureandahealthybody③.名師點評本文要點齊全，且對細節(jié)進行了必要的補充。①offersb.sth.；asfarasIamconcerned的使用使文章可讀性更強。②firstofall；what’smore等比單純的first,second等更高級一些。③此外，還使用了一些復雜的句式為文章增添了亮點，如原因狀語從句Takingexerciseisveryimportanttoeverybodybecauseitcanofferpeoplehealthandpleasure.和倒裝句Onlyinthiswaycanwehavebothpleasureandahealthybody.等。四、寫作練筆最近你們班要舉辦以“HowtoKeepHealthy”為主題的班會,請從保持健康的重要性、方法和結(jié)論等方面談談你對健康的看法(如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持飲食平衡,多鍛煉以強身健體,減少不良習慣)。要求：1.內(nèi)容包含所給信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)：80—100。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dearboysandgirls,Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.Hereismyadviceabouthowtokeephealthy.Asamiddleschoolstudent,first,you’dbetterdomoreexercisesuchasplayingballgames,running,swimmingandropeskipping.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormeals.Don’teattoomuchmeatorsugarbuteatmorevegetabl