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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasalittleboy,Ididn’tseemtobegoodatanythingsothatIfeltinferior(較差的).IlongedtoachievesomethingtoprovetomyselfthatIamacapableperson.So,Itookpartinvariouscompetitions,hopingtoexperiencethethrillofvictoryandboostmyself-esteem(自尊).Unfortunately,Ineversucceededinanyofthesecompetitions.Thisconstantfailureledmetofeeldiscouraged.Feelingupset,Iwantedtogiveuptryingaltogether.Whenmyfathernoticedmydisheartenedspirit,hedecidedtostepinandhelpme.OnesunnySaturdayafternoon,hetookmetoacarnivalheldbyourlocalcommunitycenter.Everyyear,ourtowneagerlyawaitedthiscarnival,whichwasorganizedtoraisefundsforlocalcharities.Thecarnivalfeaturedawiderangeofdeliciousfoods,excitingrides,games,music,andotherattractions.Mydadledmetoacolorfultentatthecarnival.Inside,agamewassetupspecificallyforchildren.Thegameinvolvedthrowingringsontobottlestowinprizes.Anelderlymanwithakindfacewasinchargeofthegame.Itwasstillearly,andnootherkidswerearoundyet.Mydadpushedmeforwardandencouragedmetogiveitatry.Iapproachedtheoldmannervouslyandasked,“HowdoIplaythisgame?”Hesmiledwarmlyandexplained,“It’ssimpleandfun.Justthrowtheseringsandtrytogetthemoverthebottles.Ifyoumanagetogetevenoneringonabottle,you’llwinaprizeofyourchoice.”Ithenaskedaboutthecostofthegame.Theoldmanreplied,“It’sfivedollarsfortenrings.”Mydadhandedmethemoneyquickly,andIpassedittotheoldman,whothengavemeabundleoftenrings.Itookadeepbreathandthrewoutmyfirstring.Itmissedthebottlecompletely,landingonthegroundwithasoftsound.Ringafterring,Imissedeachattempt.Sweatbegantoformonmyforehead,andmyhandstrembled.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.Iheldtheprizetightlyinmyhands,withahugesmilespreadingacrossmyface.嘉年華游戲獲勝故事續寫續寫要點第一段:重點刻畫“我”在扔最后一個圈時的緊張心理,包括心跳加速、手抖等細節,以及父親的鼓勵動作和言語,詳細描述扔圈的動作和圈在空中飛行的過程,制造緊張氛圍。第二段:著重描寫“我”獲獎后的激動心情,如笑容、與父親的互動,以及老人的祝賀,深入闡述這次經歷對“我”心態的改變,如不再害怕失敗、勇于面對挑戰,體現成長與感悟。情感線起初,“我”因多次失敗而極度沮喪,想要放棄。在嘉年華玩游戲時,一次次扔圈失敗讓“我”愈發緊張、焦慮,擔心再次失敗。當只剩最后一個圈時,“我”的緊張達到頂點。成功套中瓶子獲獎后,“我”從緊張轉為激動、喜悅,最后收獲自信,內心充滿力量,完成從自卑到自信的情感轉變。故事線“我”站在游戲場地前,緊張地拿起最后一個圈,父親在旁鼓勵。“我”深呼吸,試圖穩住顫抖的手,將最后一個圈用力扔出。圈在空中飛行,“我”緊緊盯著,心中充滿期待和緊張。圈成功套中瓶子,“我”興奮地跳起來,不敢相信自己成功了。老人微笑著祝賀“我”,父親滿臉驕傲,“我”開心地挑選獎品。“我”拿著獎品,內心感悟到努力的意義,不再懼怕失敗。主旨升華句Thisexperiencetaughtmethattruesuccessliesnotinthemagnitudeoftheachievementbutinthecouragetokeeptrying,andeverysmallvictorycanbeastepping-stonetogreaterconfidence.(這次經歷讓我明白,真正的成功不在于成就的大小,而在于不斷嘗試的勇氣,每一次小小的勝利都可以成為通往更大自信的墊腳石。)Itshowsthateveninthefaceofrepeatedfailures,asinglemomentofperseverancecanturnthetablesandbringnotonlyvictorybutalsoaprofoundtransformationinone'smindset.(這表明,即使面對多次失敗,堅持的一瞬間也能扭轉局面,不僅帶來勝利,還能深刻改變一個人的心態。)Throughthisincident,Irealizedthatself-esteemisnotbuiltovernightbutthroughaseriesofsmallstepsoffacingchallengesandovercomingfears,nomatterhowtrivialtheymayseem.(通過這件事,我意識到自尊不是一蹴而就的,而是通過一系列面對挑戰和克服恐懼的小步驟建立起來的,無論這些步驟看起來多么微不足道。)Thisstoryremindsusthatthesmallestactsofencouragementfromlovedones,combinedwithourowndetermination,cancreateaturningpointinourlivesandleadustodiscoverourhiddenpotential.(這個故事提醒我們,親人的小小鼓勵,加上我們自己的決心,能成為我們生活的轉折點,讓我們發現自己隱藏的潛力。)Thevictoryatthecarnivalgamewasnotjustaboutwinningaprize;itwasapowerfulreminderthatweallhavetheabilitytoovercomeself-doubtandachieveourgoals,aslongaswenevergiveup.(在嘉年華游戲中的勝利不僅僅是贏得一個獎品,它有力地提醒我們,只要我們永不放棄,我們都有能力克服自我懷疑,實現目標。)寫作示范示范一Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.MyheartwasthumpingsoloudlythatIwassureeveryonearoundcouldhearit.Myhandswereshakinguncontrollably,andIfeltacoldsweattricklingdownmyback.Myfather,sensingmydistress,puthisarmaroundmeandsaidsoftly,“Son,justrelaxandgiveityourbestshot.Itdoesn'tmatterifyouwinorlose;theimportantthingisthatyoutry.”Hiswordsgavemeaglimmerofcourage.Itookadeepbreath,closedmyeyesforasecond,andthenwithallmystrength,Ithrewthering.Iheldtheprizetightlyinmyhands,withahugesmilespreadingacrossmyface.Itwasacutelittletoycar,butitfeltlikethemostprecioustreasureintheworldtome.Ilookedupatmyfather,andhewasbeamingwithpride.“Youdidit,son!Iknewyoucould,”hesaid,givingmeabighug.Theoldmanrunningthegamealsocameovertocongratulateme.Thissimplewinatthecarnivalgamewasalife-changingmomentforme.ItmademerealizethatIwascapableofachievingthingsIhadoncethoughtwerebeyondmyreach.Fromthenon,Ifacedlife'schallengeswithanew-foundconfidence,alwaysrememberingthateveryeffortwasworthit.示范二Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.Mykneeswereknockingtogether,andmythroatfeltdry.Istaredatthebottles,myvisionblurringslightlyduetotheintensefocus.Icouldhearmyfather'sgentlevoiceinmyear,“You'vegotthis,myboy.Justbelieveinyourself.”Summoningallmywillpower,Iaimedcarefullyandreleasedthering.Itspunthroughtheair,andforamoment,timeseemedtostandstill.Iheldtheprizetightlyinmyhands,withahugesmilespreadingacrossmyface.Itwasasmall,colorfulkeychain,butitrepresentedsomuchmore.Theoldmanpattedmeonthebackandsaid,“Welldone,youngman!You'vegotsomerealdetermination.”Myfather'seyeswereshiningwithjoy.Thisexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelesson.Iunderstoodthatfailurewasnottheendbutanopportunitytolearnandgrow.Inolongersawmyselfasafailure.Instead,Iwasafighterwhohadovercomeself-doubtandachievedasmallbutsignificantvictory.Thisnew-foundmindsetwouldstaywithmethroughoutmylife,inspiringmetotakeonbiggerchallengeswithcourageanddetermination.參考答案Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.Sensingmyanxiety,mydadcameoverandpattedmyshoulder.“It’sokay,son,”hesaidgently.“Takeadeepbreath,focusonyouraim,anddon’trush.”Heguidedmeonhowtoadjustmystanceandaimmorecarefully.Encouraged,Itookadeepbreathandthrewthefinalring.Tomyasto
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