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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Alisonwasaverydeterminedfour-year-oldgirl.Shewasinterestedineverything,butdrawingespeciallywasherexpertise(專長(zhǎng)).HermotherAnnboughtherpapers,colors,brushesandpencilsanditseemedthatAlisonusedthemupallinadayortwo.Alisonshowedherdrawingstoeveryone.Sheespeciallywantedtoimpressherfather.Thereisatimewhendaughtersanddadsbondstrongly,andAlisonsurelylovedherdadandwantedtobond.Shewantedtobondverymuch—butDadalwaysseemedtobetoobusy.AnnwatchedwithaheavyhearthowDaughterandDadveryseldomplayedtogetherandhowthefatherreactedtoAlison’sattemptstoshowherdrawingstohim.“Yes,honey,thatislovely,”hewouldbarelyglimpse(瞥)atAlison’sdrawings,andthenanswerhiscellphoneorgotohisstudy.Oneday,Alisonusedmanyhourstodrawareallydetailedhouse.Itwasmagnificent(壯麗的).Shehaddrawnindividualtiles(磚)andcoloredthemonebyone,carefullyleavingsomespacebetweenthetiles.Shehaddrawncurtainsinthewindows,andherself,MomandDadlookingoutofthem.Onthelawnwasthepuppyshesomuchwantedtohave.“Look,Mom!”sherantoshowherdrawingtohermother.“Oh,Alison,thisissobeautiful!Yourbestever!”hermomsaidwithasmile.Alisonwashappy.“I’llshowthistoDadnow!”shesaid.Sherandownthehalltothecloseddoorofherfather’sstudy.“Dad!Dad!”Shetriedtoopenthedoor.Itwaslocked.Alison’smomsawtheexpressionofdisappointmentonherdaughter’sface.Shereachedforthedoorknobonceagain.Theycouldhearhimtalkingonthephonewithsomeone.Thenthetalkingstopped.“DAD!”Alisonknockedonthedoor,“IwantyoutoseethehouseImade!”“I’msorry,Alison.Iambusy,”camethevoicebehindthedoor.“Can’tyoushowittosomeoneelse?”注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:四歲的艾莉森對(duì)一切都充滿好奇,尤其熱愛(ài)繪畫(huà),媽媽總是全力支持她的愛(ài)好,為她購(gòu)置各種繪畫(huà)工具。然而,她格外渴望得到父親的關(guān)注,父女間本應(yīng)在這一階段建立親密紐帶,可父親卻總是忙碌,每次艾莉森滿心歡喜拿著畫(huà)作想展示給他時(shí),父親都只是匆匆一瞥,便接著接電話或回書(shū)房,讓艾莉森屢屢受挫。有一回,艾莉森耗費(fèi)數(shù)小時(shí)精心繪制了一座細(xì)節(jié)滿滿的房子,屋內(nèi)有家人,屋外有渴望的小狗,滿心期待能得到父親認(rèn)可,可父親依舊以忙碌為由將她拒之門(mén)外,這讓艾莉森極度失望,母女倆的心情也隨之沉重。伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng):伏筆:艾莉森尤其想給父親留下深刻印象,總是急切地向父親展示畫(huà)作?;貞?yīng):為后文父親多次忽視她的作品,導(dǎo)致她極度失落,以及最終父親意識(shí)到錯(cuò)誤后態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變,兩人關(guān)系修復(fù)做鋪墊。續(xù)寫(xiě)中父親看到女兒傷心欲絕的模樣,深感愧疚,開(kāi)始重視她的畫(huà)作,實(shí)現(xiàn)情感轉(zhuǎn)折。伏筆:父親總是很忙,對(duì)艾莉森展示畫(huà)作的舉動(dòng)反應(yīng)冷淡,常瞥一眼就去忙自己的事?;貞?yīng):突出父親前期對(duì)女兒情感需求的忽視,使艾莉森的失望順理成章,也引發(fā)讀者對(duì)父女關(guān)系走向的好奇。續(xù)寫(xiě)里父親因愧疚改變行為模式,主動(dòng)花時(shí)間陪伴女兒,與前文形成對(duì)比。伏筆:艾莉森精心繪制包含家人與夢(mèng)想小狗的房子畫(huà)作,投入大量心血?;貞?yīng):解釋艾莉森期望得到父親認(rèn)可的急切心情,畫(huà)作越用心,被拒絕后的傷害越大。續(xù)寫(xiě)中父親看到畫(huà)作的精美,震驚之余懊悔不已,進(jìn)一步推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆:母親心疼地看著父女相處狀況,目睹艾莉森的失落。回應(yīng):側(cè)面烘托父親行為的不妥,也為母親后續(xù)可能的安慰、引導(dǎo)作用埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫(xiě)中母親給予艾莉森擁抱安慰,在父親轉(zhuǎn)變后,家庭氛圍更加溫馨。伏筆:父親在書(shū)房?jī)?nèi)鎖門(mén)打電話,拒絕艾莉森進(jìn)門(mén)?;貞?yīng):強(qiáng)化父親的忙碌形象,讓艾莉森的受阻顯得更加無(wú)奈,凸顯矛盾。續(xù)寫(xiě)中父親打開(kāi)門(mén),走出封閉空間面對(duì)女兒,象征著打破隔閡,走向和解。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn):第一段情感線:艾莉森從極度失望、傷心,到陷入自我封閉,對(duì)繪畫(huà)失去熱情;故事線:艾莉森被父親拒絕后,默默回到母親身邊,暗自落淚,之后幾天都不再觸碰繪畫(huà)工具,沉浸在難過(guò)之中。第二段情感線:父親從愧疚、懊悔,到?jīng)Q心彌補(bǔ),艾莉森則由起初的猶豫、不信任,逐漸重燃希望,最終恢復(fù)快樂(lè);故事線:父親聽(tīng)到哭聲,心懷愧疚地開(kāi)門(mén),誠(chéng)懇道歉并認(rèn)真欣賞畫(huà)作,此后每天特意留出時(shí)間陪伴艾莉森,父女關(guān)系升溫。主旨升華句:Loveisnotjustaboutbeingpresentphysically,buttrulytuningintotheheartsofourlovedones.(愛(ài)不僅僅是身體在場(chǎng),更要真正關(guān)注所愛(ài)之人的內(nèi)心。)Inthehustleandbustleoflife,don'tletthemostpreciousbondsfadeaway;cherisheverymomentwithfamily.(在忙碌的生活中,別讓最珍貴的親情紐帶消逝;珍惜與家人相處的每一刻。)Sometimes,asincereapologyandachangeofheartcanhealthedeepestwoundsandreignitethesparkoflove.(有時(shí)候,一個(gè)真誠(chéng)的道歉和心意的改變,能治愈最深的創(chuàng)傷,重燃愛(ài)的火花。)Thetruemeasureofaparent'sloveliesnotinprovidingmaterially,butinnurturingachild'sspiritwithtimeandattention.(衡量父母之愛(ài)的真正標(biāo)準(zhǔn),不在于物質(zhì)給予,而在于用時(shí)間和關(guān)注滋養(yǎng)孩子的心靈。)Achild'sworldissimple:alltheyneedisalittlerecognitiontomaketheirsunshineagain.(孩子的世界很簡(jiǎn)單:他們只需要一點(diǎn)認(rèn)可,就能讓心中的太陽(yáng)再次閃耀。)寫(xiě)作示范一:Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.

Tearsstreameddownhercheeksuncontrollablyasshetrudgedbacktohermother.Thedrawingthathadoncebeenasourceofpridenowfeltlikeaheavyburden.Sheshoveditunderherpillowandclimbedintobed,pullingthecoversoverherhead.Fordays,shemopedaroundthehouse,ignoringtheinvitingblankpapersandbrightcolors.Hermothertriedtocoaxheroutofherfunk,butitwasasifalighthadgoneoutinsideAlison.Sheevenstoppedaskingaboutthepuppyshehadsolongedfor,herdreamsseeminglycrushedalongwithherspirit.ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.

Hisfacewasetchedwithremorseashebeheldhisdaughter'sforlornstate.Hequietlysatontheedgeofthebedandgentlypulledbackthecovers.“Alison,I'vebeenafool.Iforgotwhattrulymattered.”Reachingunderthepillow,heretrievedthewrinkleddrawing.Ashestudiedit,hiseyesgrewmisty.“Thisisamasterpiece,baby.You'vegotagift.”Heheldouthisarms,andafteramoment'shesitation,Alisonflungherselfintothem.Fromthenon,hecarvedoutspecialtimeeachday,whetheritwaspaintingwithherintheparkorframingherdrawingsathome.Thehousewasonceagainfilledwithlaughter,andAlison'shearthealed,onebrushstrokeatatime.寫(xiě)作示范二:Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.

Asenseofdesolationwashedoverher.Shelookedatthedrawinginherhand,nowseemingsoworthless.Slowly,shewalkedtoherroom,closedthedoor,andleanedagainstit,sobbingsoftly.Thecolorsonthepaperblurredashertearsfell.Inthefollowingdays,sheavoidedtheartcornerinthelivingroom.Whenherfriendscameoverandaskedtodraw,sheshookherhead.Thejoythatarthadoncebroughtherwasgone,replacedbyacoldemptiness.ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.

Hesteppedintothehallway,guiltgnawingathim.SpottingAlison'sdoorajar,hepeekedin.Seeinghersmall,tremblingform,herushedtoherside.“Alison,I'msosorry.Iwaswrong.”Kneeling,hetookthedrawing,smoothingoutthecreases.“Lookatthis!It'samazing.Ishouldhavebeenhereforyou.”Hisvoicecracked.Alisonliftedhertear-stainedface,andastheireyesmet,aglimmerofhopereturned.Afterthat,hemadeaschedule,dedicatingeveningstoartprojectswithAlison.Theirrelationshipblossomedanew,provingthatlovecanalwaysfinditswayback,evenafterthedarkestmoments.【答案】 Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.Shelookeddownonherbeautifuldrawingandherlowerlipstartedtotremble.“Idon’twantt

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