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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段.使之構成一篇完整的短文。WhenIstartedkarate(空手道)classafewyearsago,1didn'tknowasingleperson.1feltashamedofhavingnoideahowtodoanyofthemoves:EventhoughIlikedthelearningpart,Ididnotlikethefeeling-worse-thaneveryonepart!ButonedayafterclasswhileIwasputtingmyshoeson,agirlnamedAbigailsaid,“Thatlastkickwepracticedissohardforme,andyou'resogoodatit”“Youmusthaveconfusedmewithsomeoneelse,"Ireplied.“I'mnotgoodatanyofit.”“Inthatcase,I'mintrouble,”shejoked,“becauseyou'retheone1standbehindandcopyinclass.”Ilaughed.“Seriously?”“Seriously!”shelaughed,too.Afterthat,webecamegreatfriends.However,afewmonthslaterwhenAbigail'smomgotajobinadifferentstateandshehadtomoveaway,Iwasrathersad.IhadatoughtimedraggingmyselftokarateforawhileafterthatImissedAbigailsomuch.Then,agirlnamedAvajoinedmyclass.Shewasalwaysquiet.Untilonedaywefinallyhadaconversation.“Itmustbeweird(怪異的)beingthenewoneinclass."Isaid.“Soweird!”saidAva.“Youdothingsreallydifferentlythanwedidatmyolddojo(柔道館).”Isuddenlyrealizedshe'dbeensilentonlybecauseshewasnew.Westartedtalkingmoreandwegotalongsowellthatwestartedhangingoutafterclass.Thenalmostayearlater.guesswhoshowedupatkarate.“Thisissocool.”Isaid.givingAbigailahugehug.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”“Mymom'sjobinNewYorkdidn'tworkout,"sheexplained.“Sowegottomoveback.“Thal'sthebestnewsever!”Isaid.“YouhavetomeetmydearfriendAva.AndAvameetmydearfriendAbigail.”Iputmyarmsaroundtheirshoulders.Feelingveryexcited,1toldthemIhopedwecouldgetalongwellandbeclosefriends,whileAbigailandAvastaredateachotherwithsomehesitationandanuncertainsmile.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150詞左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。第一段:Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.第二段:Oneday.1simplycouldnottakeitanymore.一、文章大意幾年前“我”初入空手道班,因動作生疏而深感自卑,后因Abigail夸贊自己踢腿好,兩人結緣成為好友,然而Abigail隨媽媽工作變動搬走,“我”消沉一陣后與新同學Ava因交流熟悉起來。近一年后Abigail歸來,“我”興奮介紹她與Ava相識,起初三人一同訓練、課后交流看似融洽,實則Abigail與Ava相處有些拘謹,之后矛盾顯現,“我”出面調解,最終化解矛盾,三人友誼升溫,展現出友誼建立、波折與修復的過程。二、故事山分析開端:“我”初入空手道班時孤獨、技藝不精,心情低落,為故事營造壓抑起始氛圍,引出后續交友情節。發展:Abigail主動搭話,以夸贊化解“我”的自卑,兩人友誼建立,后她搬走,Ava出現與“我”交好,情節起伏推動故事。高潮:Abigail回歸,三人相處暗流涌動,矛盾爆發,緊張氛圍達到頂點,引發讀者對友誼走向的好奇。結局:“我”介入調解,Abigail和Ava和解,友誼加固,以溫馨畫面收尾,回歸友誼珍貴主題。三、五處伏筆及續寫中的回應伏筆:“我”初入班對空手道動作一竅不通而自卑。續寫回應:在調解矛盾時,以此經歷勸說兩人要相互包容,共同進步,不要因小問題破壞友誼。伏筆:Abigail曾因“我”踢腿好而主動搭話。續寫回應:后續訓練中,安排兩人一組練習踢腿動作,讓她們在協作中增進了解,化解隔閡。伏筆:Abigail搬走讓“我”消沉許久。續寫回應:面對兩人矛盾,“我”害怕重蹈覆轍,失去朋友,所以急切調解,守護友誼。伏筆:Ava初入班安靜。續寫回應:矛盾爆發是因為Abigail誤解Ava的安靜性格,調解后她明白Ava只是慢熱,并非冷漠。伏筆:三人起初課后一起去吃東西、交流。續寫回應:矛盾化解后,常去的小吃店成為慶祝友誼修復的地方,每次相聚都歡聲笑語,情誼更濃。四、續寫要點第一段:一次空手道表演臨近,班級要選拔代表。我提議三人組隊參加,起初Abigail和Ava不太情愿,但在練習過程中,為了配合默契,她們不得不深入交流,逐漸發現彼此對空手道動作的獨特理解,交流增多,關系悄然緩和。第二段:表演當天,一人出現失誤,另外兩人沒有絲毫抱怨,迅速補救,完美完成表演。下臺后,她們激動相擁,為彼此的成長與默契開心。從此,她們成為無話不談的摯友,還一起幫助新同學融入班級,將友誼的溫暖傳遞下去。五、情感線起初,“我”在空手道班因技藝不佳孤獨自卑,Abigail出現帶來溫暖友誼,讓“我”重燃快樂,她的離去使“我”陷入失落悲傷。Ava出現填補空缺,新友誼滋生。Abigail回歸后,“我”滿心期待三人美好情誼,察覺矛盾時焦慮揪心,調解成功后釋然欣慰,見證朋友和解成長,情誼升華,深感友情珍貴,也愿將溫暖傳遞。六、故事線“我”初入空手道班,因動作生疏自卑。與Abigail相識、相交,后她搬走。結識Ava,相處融洽。Abigail搬回,三人相聚,暗流涌動。矛盾爆發,“我”調解。和解后友誼加固,共同成長。七、主旨升華句英文Truefriendshipisnotaboutbeingalike,butaboutacceptingandcherishingeachother'sdifferences.(真正的友誼不在于彼此相似,而在于接納并珍惜彼此的差異。)Inthejourneyoffriendship,challengesaretheteststhatmakeourbondsunbreakable.(在友誼的旅程中,挑戰是使我們情誼牢不可破的考驗。)Thebeautyoffriendshipliesinourabilitytoforgive,understand,andgrowtogether.(友誼的美妙在于我們有能力相互原諒、理解并共同成長。)Friendshipislikeakaratetechnique;itrequirespractice,patience,andperseverancetomaster.(友誼就像空手道技巧;它需要練習、耐心和毅力才能掌握。)Throughthetrialsoffriendship,welearnthatunityandkindnesscanovercomeanyobstacle.(通過友誼的考驗,我們明白團結和善良可以克服任何障礙。)兩篇寫作示范第一篇第一段:Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.Thethreeofuswouldpracticekaratemovestogether,sharingtipsandtricks.Afterclass,we'dheadtothelocalpark,chattingandlaughingaswewalked.Abigailwouldtellusaboutheradventuresintheotherstate,andAvawouldlistenintently,occasionallychiminginwithherownexperiences.Iwashappytoseethemgettingalong,thinkingourfriendshipwasofftoasmoothstart.ButIcouldn'thelpnoticingtheoccasionalawkwardsilencewhentheconversationlulled,andtheforcedsmilestheysometimesgaveeachother.第二段:Oneday,Isimplycouldnottakeitanymore.Asweweregettingreadyforasparringsession,IsawAbigaildeliberatelychooseapartnerotherthanAva,andAvadidthesame.WhenIaskedthemaboutitlater,theybothjustmumbledsomethingaboutwantingtotrynewcombinations.ButIknewbetter.Thatnight,Icalledthembothandsaid,“Webecamefriendsbecausewealllovekarateandweunderstandeachother.Idon'twanttoloseeitherofyou.Let'stalkaboutwhat'sreallygoingon.”Therewasalongsilence,andthentheybothstartedtalkingatonce,airingouttheirsmallgrievances.Bytheendofthecall,theywerelaughingandpromisingtobemoreopenwitheachother.Fromthatmomenton,ourfriendshiptrulybegantoblossom.第二篇第一段:Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.Thethreeofuswouldpracticekaratemovestogether,sharingtipsandtricks.Afterclass,we'dheadtothelocalpark,chattingandlaughingaswewalked.Abigailwouldtellusaboutheradventuresintheotherstate,andAvawouldlistenintently,occasionallychiminginwithherownexperiences.Iwashappytoseethemgettingalong,thinkingourfriendshipwasofftoasmoothstart.ButIcouldn'thelpnoticingtheoccasionalawkwardsilencewhentheconversationlulled,andtheforcedsmilestheysometimesgaveeachother.第二段:Oneday,Isimplycouldnottakeitanymore.Asweweregettingreadyforasparringsession,IsawAbigaildeliberatelychooseapartnerotherthanAva,andAvadidthesame.WhenIaskedthemaboutitlater,theybothjustmumbledsomethingaboutwantingtotrynewcombinations.ButIknewbetter.Thatnight,Icalledthembothandsaid,“Webecamefriendsbecausewealllovekarateandweunderstandeachother.Idon'twanttoloseeitherofyou.Let'stalkaboutwhat'sreallygoingon.”Therewasalongsilence,andthentheybothstartedtalkingatonce,airingouttheirsmallgrievances.Bytheendofthecall,theywerelaughingandpromisingtobemoreopenwitheachother.Fromthatmomenton,ourfriendshiptrulybegantoblossom.參考范文Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.However,withtimegoingby,conflictsemerged.AbigailalwayscomplainedthateverytimeIhungoutwithAva,shewasleftalone,whileAvasaidthatIpaidmoreattentiontoAbigail,whichdrovehercrazy,believingthatourfrie
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