05.建議信——2025年高考備考英語應用文寫作快速突破

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【最新真題、模擬題、聯考試題】

1.DearChris,

PmLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.Ifsourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivea

lectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.

Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliver

thelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroaden

ourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweare

overcomingdifficulties.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthe

lecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Thankyouforyourtime.

Yours,

LiJin

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英方教師Chris寫信，就一個有關西方藝術的講座內容給出意見。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

做演講：givealecture一makeaspeech

提供：providesb.withsth.—refbrsb.sth.

機會：opportunity—chance

采納建議：takeone'sadvice一fbllowone'sadvice

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsand

haveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.

拓展句：Westernmusic,whichisservedasabridge,providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenour

horizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucould

deliverthelectureonthistopic.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（運用了when引導的時間

狀語從句）

2.DearMike,

Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,I'm

writingtosharemyideaswithyou.

IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina'ssmartagriculture.Nowadays,youcan

seemodernfarmersusingcutting-edgetechnologiesanddevicesforagriculturalproduction,monitoringand

management.Thankstothis,theefficiencyisgreatlyimprovedandthecountry'sgrainsecurityisguaranteed.

Therefore,I'mconvincedthatshowingtheenormouschangesinChineseagriculturewillholdmuchappealforthe

viewers.

Mayyourentrystandoutinthecompetition!

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給準備參加“厲害了，中國”（AmazingChina）短視頻大賽的交換生Mike

回一封郵件，就視頻創意提出建議并闡明理由。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

想法：idea—opinion

安全：security-^-safety

因此：therefore一thus

確信：convinced一sure

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,I'mwriting

tosharemyideaswithyou.

拓展句：BecauseIlearnyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,

I'mwritingtosharemyideaswithyou.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina'ssmartagriculture.（運用了

虛擬語氣）

【高分句型2]Therefore,TmconvincedthatshowingtheenormouschangesinChineseagriculturewillholdmuch

appealfortheviewers.（運用了that引導的賓語從句和動名詞短語作主語）

3.DearJohn,

HearingthatyouareinchargeofholdingtheChineseCultureFestivalatschool,I'mwritingtogiveyou

someadvice.

Tobeginwith,it'shighlyrecommendedthatthefestivalshouldconsistofpaper-cutting,calligraphyand

Chineseartpaintings,whichindicateChinesetraditionalcultureandconveythebeautyofChineseart.Additionally,

someChineseactivities,LionDancingforexample,canbeincludedtomotivatestudents5loveforChineseculture.

Tosumup,theprogrammenotonlygivesyourpeersdeepinsightintoChineseculturebutbuildsupinteraction

betweenBritishandChinesepeople.

IhopemyadvicewillbeofhelptoyouandI'mlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】

本篇書面表達是應用文。要求考生給英國朋友John回信，給出關于如何策劃中國文化節的建議。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

首先：Tobeginwith—Firstly

表達，傳遞：convey一express

止匕夕卜：Additionally—Moreover

總之：Tosumup一Inaword

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Additionally,someChineseactivities,LionDancingforexample,canbeincludedtomotivatestudents5love

forChineseculture.

拓展句：Additionally,whatmotivatesstudents5loveforChineseculture,LionDancingforexample,shouldbe

takenintoaccount.

【點睛】

【高分句型11HearingthatyouareinchargeofholdingtheChineseCultureFestivalatschool,I'mwritingtogive

yousomeadvice.（運用了現在分詞Hearing作原因狀語以及that引導的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]Tobeginwith,ifshighlyrecommendedthatthefestivalshouldconsistofpaper-cutting,calligraphy

andChineseartpaintings,whichindicateChinesetraditionalcultureandconveythebeautyofChineseart.（運用

了固定句型it'shighlyrecommendedthat…以及which引導的非限制性定語從句）

4.

Schoolclubsplayanimportantroleinenrichingstudents5campuslife,promotingstudents9abilitiesand

developingstudents5interests.

Inmyopinion,itisbesttofollowsomeprinciplestojoinclubs.Firstofall,theclubyouchoosemustbe

relevanttoyourinterestsandstrengths.Secondly,don'ttrytoattendeveryclub,whichwillaffectyournormal

study.Finally,itisbettertojointheclubundertheguidanceoftheteacher,sothatyoucanavoidblindlyfollowing

thetrend.

Ihopeallstudentscandeveloptheirownspecialtiesandhobbieswhilestudyingwell.

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。學校校刊英語角正在征集有關新生如何加入社團的建議，要求考生按照要求用

英語寫一篇短文并投稿。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

重要的：important—>significant

提升：promote一improve

相關的：relevant一related

參力口：attend一participatein

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Finally,itisbettertojointheclubundertheguidanceoftheteacher,sothatyoucanavoidblindlyfollowing

thetrend.

拓展句：Finally,toavoidblindlyfollowingthetrend,youhadbetterjointheclubundertheguidanceoftheteacher.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]Inmyopinion,itisbesttofollowsomeprinciplestojoinclubs.（運用了it作形式主語、不定式

tofollow作真正的主語）

【高分句型2】Secondly,don'ttrytoattendeveryclub,whichwillaffectyournormalstudy.（運用了which弓|

導的非限制性定語從句）

5.DearWilliam,

HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasures

oftheForbiddenCityortheExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecond

optionmightbemoresuitableforyou.

Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.Tobeginwith,asis

universallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.Inthisprogramme,

youwillbeintroducedtheprocessofmakingChinesetraditionalfood,whichisalsoapartoftheChineseculture.

Inaddition,itwon'tcostyoumuchtimesinceitispresentedbyshortvideo,sothatyoucanchooseyourtimefreely.

Lastbutnotleast,althoughtheprogrammeisspokeninChinese,thereareEnglishsubtitlesforyoutohaveafull

understandingofthecontent.

Tosumup,itisadvisablethatyouchoosethesecondone.Hopetheabovemightbeofanyhelptoyou.Thank

youforyourtimeandwishyouagreatsuccessinlearningabouttheChineseculture.

Yours,