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高一上學期11月期中英語試題.閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之成為一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。EverytimeJimcrossedthestreetonhiswaytowork,hewouldseealittlegirlsellingflowersonthestreet.Shesatbyalargegreenboardwiththenamesoftheflowersandtheirpricesonit.Unfortunately,noonepaidattentiontoher,andsherarelysoldanything.Jimwantedtohelpher,andonedayhegothischance.Hisauntwouldretire,andhethoughtabouquet(花束)wouldbeagreatgift.“Hello,couldyoupleasemakemeabouquetofroses?”Jimsaidasheapproachedthegirl.Thegirldidn’traiseherheadandjuststaredatthesamespotontheground.“I’mCassy.Thankyouforbuyingflowersfromme,”shesaid.“Couldyoupleaseselecttheflowersbyyourselfandgivethemtome?Iwilltiethemtogetherforyou.Ican’tsee.”“Oh,I’msorry,”Jimsaidashepickedtheflowersandhandedthemtoher.Withinseveralseconds,thegirlmadealovelybouquetforJim.“Here,”shesaid,holdingthebouquet.“That’llbe$5.”“Thanks.They’rebeautiful,”JimsaidandwalkedawayafterplacingthemoneyinthehatbesideCassy.Thenextday,JimwenttoworkandhedecidedtohaveaquicktalkwithCassyontheway.However,hedidn’tseeCassywheresheusedtobethatmorning.Hethoughtshemightbelateanddecidedtomeetherthenextday,butshedidn’tshowupforthenextfewdaysinarow(連續地).JimwasconcernedaboutCassy,wonderingifsomethingbadhadhappenedtoCassy.Surprisingly,hefinallymetCassyagainonthestreetwithherflowers.Paragraph1:JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:JimthendroveCassytoherhome,wherehemethersickmother,Jade.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:吉姆每天上班路上都會看到賣花的小女孩卡西,她因失明只能讓顧客自選花朵然后幫忙扎成花束。吉姆為退休的阿姨買花后,連續幾天沒看到卡西,很是擔心。再次見到卡西后,故事有了新的發展。文章通過吉姆與卡西的交集展開,展現了吉姆的善良以及對卡西的關懷。伏筆與回應:伏筆:卡西失明,讓吉姆自己選花。回應:后文吉姆帶卡西回家,能更好地理解卡西的不易并給予幫助。伏筆:卡西賣花生意不好,很少有人買。回應:這使得吉姆的購買行為對卡西意義重大,也為后文吉姆進一步關心卡西家庭狀況做鋪墊。伏筆:吉姆沒看到卡西后很擔心。回應:所以再次見到卡西時他立刻跑去,情感反應合理。伏筆:卡西獨自在街邊賣花。回應:暗示她可能家庭有困難,后文引出她生病的母親。伏筆:吉姆決定與卡西快速交談。回應:雖未成功交談,但體現吉姆對卡西的關注,后續發展順理成章。續寫要點:情感線:第一段從吉姆見到卡西的欣喜,到得知她之前未出現原因后的同情與關心;第二段從到卡西家見到其生病母親的震驚與憐憫,到想要進一步幫助她們的堅定。故事線:第一段吉姆詢問卡西之前未出現的原因,卡西解釋是母親生病照顧母親;第二段吉姆了解卡西家庭困境,決定幫助她們,如聯系慈善機構或提供一些物資援助等。主旨升華句:Alittlekindnesscanbeagreatlightinthedarknessofothers'lives.(一點小小的善意能成為他人黑暗生活中的巨大光亮。)Inthejourneyoflife,reachingoutahelpinghandisthemostbeautifulscenery.(在人生旅途中,伸出援助之手是最美的風景。)Truecompassionliesnotinwordsbutindeedsthatwarmtheheart.(真正的同情不在于言語,而在于溫暖人心的行動。)Thepowerofcareisthatitcantransformlonelinessanddespairintohope.(關愛的力量在于它能將孤獨與絕望轉化為希望。)Kindnessisthekeythatunlocksthedoortoamoreharmoniousandlovingworld.(善良是開啟更和諧友愛世界大門的鑰匙。)寫作示范一:Paragraph1:

JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.“Cassy,wherehaveyoubeen?Iwasreallyworriedaboutyou,”Jimsaid.Cassyexplainedthathermotherhadfallenillandshehadtostayathometotakecareofher.Jimfeltapangofsympathy.Heaskediftherewasanythinghecoulddotohelp.Cassyjustshookherheadandsaidshewasmanaging.ButJimcouldseethetirednessandworryinherface.Hedecidedhecouldn'tjuststandby.

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JimthendroveCassytoherhome,wherehemethersickmother,Jade.Thesmallandshabbyhouseshowedthefamily'spoverty.Jadewaslyinginbed,lookingweak.Jim'sheartsank.HetoldCassythathewouldtrytogetsomehelp.Hecontactedalocalcharityandtoldthemaboutthefamily'ssituation.Thecharitypromisedtoprovidesomemedicalsuppliesandfood.Jimalsosaidhewouldcometovisitthemregularly.Cassywasdeeplygrateful,andJimknewthathissmallactofkindnesscouldmakeabigdifferenceintheirdifficultlives.寫作示范二:Paragraph1:

JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.“Cassy,you'reback!Imissedseeingyouhere.Whathappened?”Jimaskedwithconcern.Cassysaidhermothergotsickandshehadtobewithher.Jim'sfacefilledwithworry.Heaskedabouthermother'scondition.Cassysaiditwasaseriousillnessandtheywerehavingahardtime.Jimtookherhandandsaid,“You'renotalone.I'lldowhateverIcan.”

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JimthendroveCassytoherhome,wherehemethersickmother,Jade.Thehousewasinadilapidatedstate.Jadewaspaleandfrail.Jimwasshocked.Heimmediatelythoughtofwaystohelp.Heaskedhisfriendsandcolleaguestodonatesomemoneyandnecessities.HealsohelpedCassyfindapart-timejobthatshecoulddoathome.CassyandJadewerebothtouchedbyJim'skindness.Jimrealizedthatinhelpingothers,hefoundadeepermeaningandjoyinhisownlife.【答案】JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.However,tohisshock,Cassyseemedtiredandpale.Heapproachedherworriedly.“Cassy,whathappenedtoyou?Doyoustillrememberme?”“Theonewhoboughtroses?”“Yes,that’sme.I’mworriedaboutyou.Youhaven’tbeenherefordays.”“Well,Iamokay,”shesaid.“Momsufferedfromanillness,andI

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