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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。InasmallvillageinthePhilippines,therelivedafamilyoffive.Theparents,JuanandMaria,hadthreechildren:twoboysandagirl.Theylivedinasmallhousemadeofbamboo,surroundedbymanytreesandthesoundofthenearbyriver.JuanandMarialivedahappylifewiththeirthreechildren:Miguel,JoseandAna.Theeldestson,Miguel,wasahardworkingyoungmanwhohelpedhisfatherwiththefarmwork.Hewasresponsibleandalwaystookcareofhisyoungerbrotherandsister.Thecouplealwaystoldtheirchildrenthattheywerehappyaslongasthefamilywastogether.ThoughJoseandAnaweretooyoungtounderstandthat,Miguel,whotreasuredaphotoofhisfamily,borethatinmind.Oneday,whilethefamilywashavingdinner,theyheardaloudknockonthedoor.Itwasthevillagechief,whohadcometodeliversomebadnews:Thevillagewasindangerofbeingfloodedduetoheavyrain,andtheyneededtoevacuate(撤離)immediately.JuanandMariaquicklygatheredtheirchildrenandsomeessentials,andtheysetofftowardstheevacuationcenter.Beforeleavingforthecenter,Migueltookthepreciousfamilyphotoinahurry.Thejourneywaslongandfullofdanger,withtherainpouringdownheavilyandthewindbeatingthemviolently.Thechildrenwerescaredandtired,butJuanandMariaheldtheirhandstoreassurethem,tellingthemthateverythingwasgoingtobealright.Whentheyfinallyreachedtheevacuationcenter,theyweregreetedbyotherfamilieswhohadalsobeenforcedtoleavetheirhomes.Thecenterwascrowdedanduncomfortable,butthefamilywasgratefultohavearoofovertheirheadsandsomefoodtoeat.Daysturnedintoweeks,andJuanandMariagrewrestless.Theymissedtheirhomeandtheirfarm,andtheywereworriedaboutwhatwouldhappentotheircrops.Severalweekslater,thedaycamewhenthefloodwatersslowlyreceded(消退).注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。JuanandMariadecidedtotaketheirchildrenbackhome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“No!Westillhavesomethingprecious,”saidMiguel._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:菲律賓一個小村莊的五口之家原本生活幸福。因暴雨村莊面臨洪水威脅,他們匆忙撤離到疏散中心。數周后洪水退去,父母決定帶孩子回家,而疏散中心的生活讓他們歸心似箭,同時也擔心家中農場和莊稼狀況。伏筆及續寫回應:伏筆:Miguel珍視家庭照片并牢記父母關于家庭團聚就幸福的話。續寫回應:在回家途中遭遇危險時,Miguel想起照片所代表的家庭意義,堅定信念,帶領家人克服困難,體現了照片對他的激勵以及家庭觀念在他心中的重要性。伏筆:村莊因暴雨面臨洪水危險而撤離。續寫回應:回家路上橋梁被沖毀,這是洪水造成的后續影響,增加了回家的難度和危險性,使故事產生新的危機與挑戰。伏筆:疏散中心擁擠且不舒適。續寫回應:這促使父母急切想要回家,推動了回家這一情節發展,也為后文遇到危險時他們的情緒變化做了鋪墊。伏筆:孩子們在撤離途中又累又怕。續寫回應:回家路上再次面臨危險時,孩子們的恐懼被喚起,但也在家人相互鼓勵下逐漸勇敢起來,展現了家庭凝聚力在困難時刻的作用。伏筆:Juan和Maria擔心家中莊稼。續寫回應:他們急于回家查看莊稼情況,所以決定冒險踏上回家之路,引出后續在回家途中的一系列經歷。續寫要點:
第一段:描述回家途中的景象,如洪水過后的破敗、道路的難行等。講述他們遇到的困難,比如橋梁被沖毀等,以及家人的反應。第二段:說明Miguel所說的“珍貴的東西”是家庭照片,強調照片對家庭的意義。描述Miguel如何憑借對家庭的信念和照片的激勵,帶領家人克服困難繼續前行。情感線:
開始一家人在村莊生活時幸福美滿。面臨洪水撤離時,孩子們害怕、父母雖鎮定但也有擔憂。在疏散中心,父母因思念家和擔心莊稼而焦慮不安。決定回家后,起初是對家的渴望與期待,途中遇到危險時則充滿緊張與恐懼,在Miguel提及家庭照片后,大家又重新燃起希望與勇氣,情感隨著故事發展跌宕起伏,始終圍繞家庭這一核心,展現出家庭在困難時刻給予成員的力量與支撐。故事線:
JuanandMariadecidedtotaketheirchildrenbackhome.Thewaybackwasnoteasy.Theoncefamiliarpathwasnowmuddyandfullofdebrisleftbytheflood.Theywalkedslowly,carefullysteppingoverfallenbranchesandrocks.Whentheyreachedtheriver,theyfoundthatthebridgehadbeenwashedaway.JuanandMariaweredismayed.Thechildrenstartedtocry,fearingthattheywouldnevergethome.“No!Westillhavesomethingprecious,”saidMiguel.Hetookoutthefamilyphoto.“Aslongaswearetogether,likeinthisphoto,wecanovercomeanything.Thisphotoisareminderofourloveandunity.”Withnewfounddetermination,Miguelledtheway.Theyfoundashallowpartoftherivertocross.JuancarriedAnaonhisback,andMariaheldJose'shandtightly.Miguelhelpedthembalance.Stepbystep,theymadeitacrosstheriverandcontinuedtheirjourneyhome,withthephotogivingthemthestrengthtofaceanyobstacle.主旨升華句:“Inthetempestoflife,thefamilyisthelighthousethatguidesusthroughthedarkestwaters,itsloveanunyieldingbeacon.”(在生活的暴風雨中,家庭是指引我們穿越最黑暗水域的燈塔,其愛如永不熄滅的燈塔。)“Afamily'sbond,likeagoldenthread,weavesthroughthefabricofadversity,holdingitsmemberstogetheragainstallodds.”(家庭的紐帶,如金線般穿梭于逆境的織錦中,使成員們在重重困難下緊密相連。)“Whenthefloodsoftroublerise,itisthearkoffamilythatsheltersus,andthememorieswithinitthatgiveusthecouragetosailon.”(當煩惱的洪水涌起時,家庭是庇護我們的方舟,其中的回憶給予我們繼續航行的勇氣。)“Thefamilyphoto,asnapshotoflove,becomesatalismanintimesofdistress,empoweringustoreclaimourhomeandourhope.”(家庭照片,愛的快照,在困苦時刻成為護身符,賦予我們奪回家園與希望的力量。)“Inthejourneyoflife,thefamilyisthecompassthatpointsustowardshome,evenwhenthepathisobscuredbythestormsoffate.”(在人生旅途中,家庭是指向家的羅盤,即使道路被命運的風暴遮蔽。)寫作示范一:JuanandMariadecidedtotaketheirchildrenbackhome.Thejourneywasadesolateone.Thefieldswereflooded,andmanyhouseshadcollapsed.Astheywalked,theycouldseethesadremainsoftheirneighbors'lives.Theycameacrossahugetreethathadfallenacrosstheroad.Juantriedtomoveit,butitwastooheavy.Thechildrenlookedattheirfatherwithworry.“No!Westillhavesomethingprecious,”saidMiguel.Heshowedthemthefamilyphoto.“Thisisourstrength.Ourfamilyhasalwaysbeentogether,andwewillgetthroughthis.Wecanfindanotherway.”InspiredbyMiguel,theywalkedaroundthetreeandthroughthemuddyfields.Theyhelpedeachotheroverthedifficultparts.ThephotoinMiguel'shandseemedtogivethemanextraboostofenergy.Theyknewthataslongastheyhadeachotherandthememoryoftheirhappyfamily,theycouldfaceanyhardship.寫作示范二:JuanandMariadecidedtotaketheirchildrenbackhome.Alongtheway,thelandscapewasamess.Theroadswerealmostunrecognizable.Theyhadtoclimboverpilesofrubble.Whentheyreachedastream,theyrealizedithadbecomeasmallriverduetotheflood.Mariawashesitant,butJuansaidtheyhadtotry.“No!Westillhavesomethingprecious,”saidMiguel.Hepulledoutthefamilyphoto.“Ourfamilyisthemostimportantthing.Thisphotoshowsourlove.Wecan'tgiveup.”Migueltiedaropearoundhiswaistandtheotherendtoatree.Hethenhelpedhisfamilycrosstheriveronebyone.Thewaterwascoldandstrong,buttheyheldontoeachother.Withthefamilyphotoastheirmotivation,theycontinuedontheirwayhome,moredeterminedthanevertorebuildtheirlivesandcherishtheirfamily.Onepossibleversion:JuanandMariadecidedtotaketheirchildrenbackhome.Thereturnjourneywasfullofsilenceandworries.Whentheyfinallyarrivedatthevillage,theyweredepressedtoseeasceneofdevastation:Theircropshadb
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